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-->*[=VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!=]*
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-->*VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!*
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-->"''[[StuffBlowingUp MAX-I-MUM EX-TER-MIN-AT-ION!]]''"
-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams
-->*VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
* CompleteMonster: The Dalek Inquisitor General. Daleks are a race whose hat is "OmnicidalManiac", but this guy is nasty even by ''their'' standards. Having to work with him is considered a FateWorseThanDeath, and he's TheDreaded to the point that the Daleks arguably fear him more than they fear ''The Doctor''!
* CompleteMonster: The Dalek Inquisitor General. Daleks are a race whose hat is "OmnicidalManiac", but this guy is nasty even by ''their'' standards. Having to work with him is considered a FateWorseThanDeath, and he's TheDreaded to the point that the Daleks arguably fear him more than they fear ''The Doctor''!
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
* CompleteMonster: The Dalek Inquisitor General. Daleks are a race whose hat is "OmnicidalManiac", but this guy is nasty even by ''their'' standards. Having to work with him is considered a FateWorseThanDeath, and he's TheDreaded to the point that the Daleks arguably fear him more than they fear ''The Doctor''!VreeEBRROOM!]]*
* CompleteMonster: The Dalek Inquisitor General. Daleks are a race whose hat is "OmnicidalManiac", but this guy is nasty even by ''their'' standards. Having to work with him is considered a FateWorseThanDeath, and he's TheDreaded to the point that the Daleks arguably fear him more than they fear ''The Doctor''!
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*VreeEBRROOM!]]*
* CompleteMonster: The Dalek Inquisitor General. Daleks are a race whose hat is "OmnicidalManiac", but this guy is nasty even by ''their'' standards. Having to work with him is considered a FateWorseThanDeath, and he's TheDreaded to the point that the Daleks arguably fear him more than they fear ''The Doctor''!
* CompleteMonster: The Dalek Inquisitor General. Daleks are a race whose hat is "OmnicidalManiac", but this guy is nasty even by ''their'' standards. Having to work with him is considered a FateWorseThanDeath, and he's TheDreaded to the point that the Daleks arguably fear him more than they fear ''The Doctor''!
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!!Subjective Tropes included with Fanfic/AHero include:
* AngstWhatAngst: Dalek Sec, mostly because he replaces "angst," with "''RAGE.''"
* AngstWhatAngst: Dalek Sec, mostly because he replaces "angst," with "''RAGE.''"
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
* TakeThatScrappy: In chapter four, Sec delivers a BadassBoast as to why the Daleks are the supreme beings, and then ''vaporizes Kyubey.''
** In a much more minor case, in [[http://sithking-zero.deviantart.com/favourites/4200874#/d4fdazl this fanart,]] Dalek Sec is [[PokeThePoodle running over Kyubey's tail.]]
* {{Wangst}}: Played with, but subverted in one of the omake chapters. Dalek Sec feels lots of despair, but instead of whining about it, decides to go and ''exterminate everything.''
** Granted, that ''was'' rather flimsy SayonaraZetsubouSensei parody...
** Also granted that the Dalek response to ANY strong emotion is to exterminate everything...
* TakeThatScrappy: In chapter four, Sec delivers a BadassBoast as to why the Daleks are the supreme beings, and then ''vaporizes Kyubey.''
** In a much more minor case, in [[http://sithking-zero.deviantart.com/favourites/4200874#/d4fdazl this fanart,]] Dalek Sec is [[PokeThePoodle running over Kyubey's tail.]]
* {{Wangst}}: Played with, but subverted in one of the omake chapters. Dalek Sec feels lots of despair, but instead of whining about it, decides to go and ''exterminate everything.''
** Granted, that ''was'' rather flimsy SayonaraZetsubouSensei parody...
** Also granted that the Dalek response to ANY strong emotion is to exterminate everything...
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
* TakeThatScrappy: In chapter four, Sec delivers a BadassBoast as to why the Daleks are the supreme beings, and then ''vaporizes Kyubey.''
** In a much more minor case, in [[http://sithking-zero.deviantart.com/favourites/4200874#/d4fdazl this fanart,]] Dalek Sec is [[PokeThePoodle running over Kyubey's tail.]]
* {{Wangst}}: Played with, but subverted in one of the omake chapters. Dalek Sec feels lots of despair, but instead of whining about it, decides to go and ''exterminate everything.''
** Granted, that ''was'' rather flimsy SayonaraZetsubouSensei parody...
** Also granted that the Dalek response to ANY strong emotion is to exterminate everything...VreeEBRROOM!]]*
* TakeThatScrappy: In chapter four, Sec delivers a BadassBoast as to why the Daleks are the supreme beings, and then ''vaporizes Kyubey.''
** In a much more minor case, in [[http://sithking-zero.deviantart.com/favourites/4200874#/d4fdazl this fanart,]] Dalek Sec is [[PokeThePoodle running over Kyubey's tail.]]
* {{Wangst}}: Played with, but subverted in one of the omake chapters. Dalek Sec feels lots of despair, but instead of whining about it, decides to go and ''exterminate everything.''
** Granted, that ''was'' rather flimsy SayonaraZetsubouSensei parody...
** Also granted that the Dalek response to ANY strong emotion is to exterminate everything...
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* {{Wangst}}: Played with, but subverted ''HARD'' in one of the omake chapters. Dalek Sec feels lots of despair, but instead of whining about it, decides to go and ''exterminate everything.''
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* {{Wangst}}: Played with, but subverted ''HARD'' in one of the omake chapters. Dalek Sec feels lots of despair, but instead of whining about it, decides to go and ''exterminate everything.''
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** Granted, that ''was'' rather flimsy SayonaraZetsubouSensei parody...
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** Granted, that ''was'' rather flimsy SayonaraZetsubouSensei parody...parody...
** Also granted that the Dalek response to ANY strong emotion is to exterminate everything...
** Also granted that the Dalek response to ANY strong emotion is to exterminate everything...
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* AndTheFandomRejoiced: Sec telling Kuybey [[EvenEvilHasStandards that his methods are repulsive]] and then shooting the crap out of him.
** Which is immediately eclipsed, [[HolyShitQuotient within the same chapter]], by the following:
--> ''[[spoiler: *[[MostWonderfulSound VWORP!]] [[BiggerOnTheInside VWORP!]] [[TimeyWimeyBall VWORP!]] [[BadassBookworm VWORP!]] [[OhCrap THUNK!]]*]]
** Which is immediately eclipsed, [[HolyShitQuotient within the same chapter]], by the following:
--> ''[[spoiler: *[[MostWonderfulSound VWORP!]] [[BiggerOnTheInside VWORP!]] [[TimeyWimeyBall VWORP!]] [[BadassBookworm VWORP!]] [[OhCrap THUNK!]]*]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Mind (AKA, the Incubators) is a/are being(s) entirely devoid of emotion and totally dedicated to its/their logical goal of surviving [[spoiler: so of course the freaking Cybermen, a species dedicated to survival at all costs (in the classic series, at least), would ally themselves with them]].
** The People, an intergalactic {{Dystopia}} based on NineteenEightyFour are allied with The Mind, who wish to extend the life of the universe. Think about it.
* FridgeHorror: WordOfGod has it that [[spoiler: the event that brought Dalek Sec here has also brought other things from the Whoniverse.]] [[OhCrap Think about it.]]
** WordOfGod has it that The Coalition holds a meeting every six hours. This means that something aproximate to the figures they give happen every six hours. So, every six hours, The People "Liberate" five ''species'', [[spoiler: The Cybermen]] convert 48 ''planets'', and The Mind spread their cultural meddling to ''40''. Think about just how ''huge'' these factions have to be to give those figures ''every six freaking hours''.
** The People, an intergalactic {{Dystopia}} based on NineteenEightyFour are allied with The Mind, who wish to extend the life of the universe. Think about it.
* FridgeHorror: WordOfGod has it that [[spoiler: the event that brought Dalek Sec here has also brought other things from the Whoniverse.]] [[OhCrap Think about it.]]
** WordOfGod has it that The Coalition holds a meeting every six hours. This means that something aproximate to the figures they give happen every six hours. So, every six hours, The People "Liberate" five ''species'', [[spoiler: The Cybermen]] convert 48 ''planets'', and The Mind spread their cultural meddling to ''40''. Think about just how ''huge'' these factions have to be to give those figures ''every six freaking hours''.
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Mind (AKA, the Incubators) is a/are being(s) entirely devoid of emotion and totally dedicated to its/their logical goal of surviving [[spoiler: so of course the freaking Cybermen would ally themselves with them]].
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Mind (AKA, the Incubators) is a/are being(s) entirely devoid of emotion and totally dedicated to its/their logical goal of surviving [[spoiler: so of course the freaking Cybermen Cybermen, a species dedicated to survival at all costs (in the classic series, at least), would ally themselves with them]].
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
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-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[BeamSpam VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[MoreDakka VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]] [[FrickinLaserBeams VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!]]*
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-->"''MAX-I-MUM EX-TER-MIN-AT-ION!''"
-->*VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!*
-->*VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!*
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-->*VreeEBRROOM!
-->*[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!
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* AngstWhatAngst: Dalek Sec, mostly because he replaces "angst," with "''RAGE.''"
** Also, this little exchange:
-->Dalek Sec boiled in an anger that could not be directed at anyone-
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-->"''MAX-I-MUM EX-TER-MIN-AT-ION!''"
-->*VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!*
** Also, this little exchange:
-->Dalek Sec boiled in an anger that could not be directed at anyone-
-->... Wait a second...
-->"''MAX-I-MUM EX-TER-MIN-AT-ION!''"
-->*VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM! VreeEBRROOM!*
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* FridgeHorror: WordOfGod has it that [[spoiler: the event that brought Dalek Sec here has also brought other things from the Whoniverse.]] [[OhCrap Think about it.]]
** WordOfGod has it that The Coalition holds a meeting every six hours. This means that something aproximate to the figures they give happen every six hours. So, every six hours, The People "Liberate" five ''species'', [[spoiler: The Cybermen]] convert 48 ''planets'', and The Mind spread their cultural meddling to ''40''. Think about just how ''huge'' these factions have to be to give those figures ''every six freaking hours''.
** WordOfGod has it that The Coalition holds a meeting every six hours. This means that something aproximate to the figures they give happen every six hours. So, every six hours, The People "Liberate" five ''species'', [[spoiler: The Cybermen]] convert 48 ''planets'', and The Mind spread their cultural meddling to ''40''. Think about just how ''huge'' these factions have to be to give those figures ''every six freaking hours''.
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** In a much more minor case, in [[http://sithking-zero.deviantart.com/favourites/4200874#/d4fdazl this fanart,]] Dalek Sec is [[PokeThePoodle running over Kyubey's tail.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Mind (AKA, the Incubators) is a/are being(s) entirely devoid of emotion and totally dedicated to its/their logical goal of surviving [[spoiler: so of course the freaking Cybermen would ally themselves with them]].
** The People, an intergalactic {{Dystopia}} based on NineteenEightyFour are allied with The Mind, who wish to extend the life of the universe. Think about it.
** The People, an intergalactic {{Dystopia}} based on NineteenEightyFour are allied with The Mind, who wish to extend the life of the universe. Think about it.