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* WrongGenreSavvy: In the Tower Wars side-story, the third mage-king, Autumn, realizes his brother's ambassador is giving him the object of his downfall, just like the other ambassador gave the other mage-king a prophecy mirror that drove her into paranoid madness. The object? [[spoiler:It's a ''rock''. Just a simple humble castle rock as a sentimental reminder of the Old King's castle. Autumn obsesses over any hideous monsters or curses hidden in the rock for so long that he ignores the rest of his kingdom, which is promptly blown up by his idiot sons]].
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* WrongGenreSavvy: In the Tower Wars side-story, the third mage-king, Autumn, realizes his brother's ambassador is giving him the object of his downfall, just like the other ambassador gave the other mage-king a prophecy mirror that drove her into paranoid madness. The object? [[spoiler:It's a ''rock''. Just a simple humble castle rock as a sentimental reminder of the Old King's castle. Autumn obsesses over any hideous monsters or curses hidden in the rock for so long that he ignores the rest of his kingdom, which is promptly blown up by his idiot sons]].sons]].
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* ThinkNothingOfIt: In the first chapter, the customers feel guilty and so tip Trystan extra. They say "don't mention it" as they leave and it emphasizes Trystan's naivete that she doesn't notice how they said it. This also leads to the first time Phinny speaks with Trystan.
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* ThinkNothingOfIt: In the first chapter, the customers feel guilty and so tip Trystan extra. They say "don't mention it" as they leave and it emphasizes Trystan's naivete that she doesn't notice how they said it. This also leads to the first time Phinny speaks with Trystan.Trystan.
* WrongGenreSavvy: In the Tower Wars side-story, the third mage-king, Autumn, realizes his brother's ambassador is giving him the object of his downfall, just like the other ambassador gave the other mage-king a prophecy mirror that drove her into paranoid madness. The object? [[spoiler:It's a ''rock''. Just a simple humble castle rock as a sentimental reminder of the Old King's castle. Autumn obsesses over any hideous monsters or curses hidden in the rock for so long that he ignores the rest of his kingdom, which is promptly blown up by his idiot sons]].
* WrongGenreSavvy: In the Tower Wars side-story, the third mage-king, Autumn, realizes his brother's ambassador is giving him the object of his downfall, just like the other ambassador gave the other mage-king a prophecy mirror that drove her into paranoid madness. The object? [[spoiler:It's a ''rock''. Just a simple humble castle rock as a sentimental reminder of the Old King's castle. Autumn obsesses over any hideous monsters or curses hidden in the rock for so long that he ignores the rest of his kingdom, which is promptly blown up by his idiot sons]].
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The story follows a young woman, Trystan, and her cursed doll companion. She's a fauni witch but inexperienced in magic, and she was desperate and lonely enough to befriend said cursed doll. Throughout the story, they try to better themselves and to fight their respective fates.
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The story follows a young woman, Trystan, and her cursed doll companion.companion, Phinny. She's a fauni witch but inexperienced in magic, and she was desperate and lonely enough to befriend said cursed doll. Throughout the story, they try to better themselves and to fight their respective fates.
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* PuppetPermutation: known as [=BoneDolls=], they are a creature that has been cursed into a doll like form and must do the bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"
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* PuppetPermutation: known as [=BoneDolls=], they are a creature that has been cursed into a doll like form and must do the bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"Dreamer"
* ThinkNothingOfIt: In the first chapter, the customers feel guilty and so tip Trystan extra. They say "don't mention it" as they leave and it emphasizes Trystan's naivete that she doesn't notice how they said it. This also leads to the first time Phinny speaks with Trystan.
* ThinkNothingOfIt: In the first chapter, the customers feel guilty and so tip Trystan extra. They say "don't mention it" as they leave and it emphasizes Trystan's naivete that she doesn't notice how they said it. This also leads to the first time Phinny speaks with Trystan.
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''[[http://www.forgottenordercomic.com/ The Forgotten Order]]'' is a long format fantasy webcomic that began in December 2011.
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''[[http://www.forgottenordercomic.com/ The Forgotten Order]]'' is a long format fantasy webcomic {{fantasy webcomic|s}} that began in December 2011.
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"The Forgotten Order follows the adventures of a young fauni witch, Trystan, who struggles with her own magical abilities. Miserable and alone, she seeks the companionship of a cursed doll. Together they try to free themselves from their unfortunate fate."
This comic is currently updating.
This comic is currently updating.
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This comic is
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* [ArtShift]: When in the dream world the art shifts into a colorful and shape drawn style
* [HornedHumanoid]: The Fauni people all posses horns that vary in appearance and size.
* [IneptMage]: Trystan struggles with the simplest of spells and charms. Her poor skills have cost her an apprenticeship in the magical arts.
* [PuppetPermutation]: known as BoneDolls, they are a creature that has been cursed into a doll like form and must do the bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"
* [HornedHumanoid]: The Fauni people all posses horns that vary in appearance and size.
* [IneptMage]: Trystan struggles with the simplest of spells and charms. Her poor skills have cost her an apprenticeship in the magical arts.
* [PuppetPermutation]: known as BoneDolls, they are a creature that has been cursed into a doll like form and must do the bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"
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* [ArtShift]: ArtShift: When in the dream world the art shifts into a colorful and shape drawn style
*[HornedHumanoid]: HornedHumanoid: The Fauni people all posses horns that vary in appearance and size.
*[IneptMage]: IneptMage: Trystan struggles with the simplest of spells and charms. Her poor skills have cost her an apprenticeship in the magical arts.
*[PuppetPermutation]: PuppetPermutation: known as BoneDolls, [=BoneDolls=], they are a creature that has been cursed into a doll like form and must do the bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"
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'''''[[http://www.forgottenordercomic.com/ The Forgotten Order]]''''' is a long format fantasy webcomic that began in December 2011.
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* [PuppetPermutation]: known as BoneDolls, they are a creature that has been cursed into a doll like form and must do the bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"
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* [HornedHumanoid]: The Fauni people all posses horns that vary in appearance and size.
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* [HornedHumanoid]: The Fauni people all posses horns [PuppetPermutation]: known as BoneDolls, they are a creature that vary in appearance and size.
* [ArtShift]: When in the dream world the art shiftshas been cursed into a colorful doll like form and shape drawn stylemust do the bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"
* [ArtShift]: When in the dream world the art shifts
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Updates Mondays.
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* [IneptMage]: Trystan struggles with the simplest of
of spells and charms. Her poor skills have cost her an apprenticeship in the magical arts.
* [HornedHumanoid]: The Fauni people all posses horns that vary in appearance and size.
* [ArtShift]: When in the dream world the art shifts into a colorful and shape drawn style
* [HornedHumanoid]: The Fauni people all posses horns that vary in appearance and size.
* [ArtShift]: When in the dream world the art shifts into a colorful and shape drawn style
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* [=TropeTitle=]: List of tropes that are fixtures of the series.
* [=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
* [=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
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* [=TropeTitle=]: List of tropes [PuppetPermutation]: known as BoneDolls, they are a creature that are fixtures of has been cursed into a doll like form and must do the series.
bidding of witches and wizards. Examples "Phinny" and "The Dreamer"
*[=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which [IneptMage]: Trystan struggles with the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
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'''''[[http://www.forgottenordercomic.com/ The Forgotten Order]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic
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'''''[[http://www.forgottenordercomic.com/ The Forgotten Order]]''''' is a long format fantasy webcomic
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* The guidelines for listing show-level tropes apply to this list, too. Alphabetical by trope title.
* List of tropes that are only seen in a single episode or a small handful of episodes.
* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
* This list may also include tropes relating to a secondary or tertiary character or location.
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[[caption-width-right:300:Trystan and her creepy dolls]]
'''''[[http://www.forgottenordercomic.com/ The Forgotten Order]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic
"The Forgotten Order follows the adventures of a young fauni witch, Trystan, who struggles with her own magical abilities. Miserable and alone, she seeks the companionship of a cursed doll. Together they try to free themselves from their unfortunate fate."
Updates Mondays.
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!! This show provides examples of:
* [=TropeTitle=]: List of tropes that are fixtures of the series.
* [=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
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!! Episodes of this series provide examples of:
* The guidelines for listing show-level tropes apply to this list, too. Alphabetical by trope title.
* List of tropes that are only seen in a single episode or a small handful of episodes.
* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
* This list may also include tropes relating to a secondary or tertiary character or location.
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[[caption-width-right:300:Trystan and her creepy dolls]]
'''''[[http://www.forgottenordercomic.com/ The Forgotten Order]]''''' is a fantasy webcomic
"The Forgotten Order follows the adventures of a young fauni witch, Trystan, who struggles with her own magical abilities. Miserable and alone, she seeks the companionship of a cursed doll. Together they try to free themselves from their unfortunate fate."
Updates Mondays.
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!! This show provides examples of:
* [=TropeTitle=]: List of tropes that are fixtures of the series.
* [=TropeTitle=]: Any tropes in which the show is already cited can be retrieved from the Wiki if you text-search in a separate window on the program name.
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!! Episodes of this series provide examples of:
* The guidelines for listing show-level tropes apply to this list, too. Alphabetical by trope title.
* List of tropes that are only seen in a single episode or a small handful of episodes.
* Tropes ''about'' episodes, like BottleEpisode, are prime examples.
* This list may also include tropes relating to a secondary or tertiary character or location.
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