Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Changed line(s) 38,40 (click to see context) from:
--> '''Linneus''': "What's... Why do you... so many..."
--> '''Gilder''': "I, uh, cut trees..."
* BuxomIsBetter: Claret's dress especially emphasizes her assets, and Axis does seem to prefer her for this very reason. Rhys also makes a point of stating that his fiancee has a lovely (massive) set.
--> '''Gilder''': "I, uh, cut trees..."
* BuxomIsBetter: Claret's dress especially emphasizes her assets, and Axis does seem to prefer her for this very reason. Rhys also makes a point of stating that his fiancee has a lovely (massive) set.
to:
'''Gilder''': "I, uh, cut trees..."
** Claret's dress especially emphasizes her assets, and Axis does seem to prefer her for this very reason. Rhys also makes a point of stating that his fiancee has a lovely (massive) set.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Belongs on Trivia
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* AltText: Starting in chapter 3, with a tendency to get more and more brutally [[MoodWiplash Mood Wiplash-y]] as the story progresses.
to:
* AltText: Starting in chapter 3, with a tendency to get more and more brutally [[MoodWiplash [[MoodWhiplash Mood Wiplash-y]] Whiplash-y]] as the story progresses.
Changed line(s) 42,43 (click to see context) from:
* CastFullOfGay: It ''is'' a yaoi webcomic, after all. Although WordOfGod has confirmed most of the major characters to be bi, with only two fully gay characters (both male).
** Once Upon a Time: [[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/teahouse_1.jpg Everyone was gay]]. (Redubbed/commented parody/MSTK/something.)
** Once Upon a Time: [[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/teahouse_1.jpg Everyone was gay]]. (Redubbed/commented parody/MSTK/something.)
to:
* CastFullOfGay: It ''is'' a yaoi webcomic, after all. Although WordOfGod has the artists have confirmed most of the major characters to be bi, with only two fully gay characters (both male).
** Once Upon a Time:male). [[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/teahouse_1.jpg Everyone was gay]]. (Redubbed/commented parody/MSTK/something.)They are willing to poke fun at it.]]
** Once Upon a Time:
Deleted line(s) 50 (click to see context) :
* DearNegativeReader: Two. After people complained about them not uploading often enough ([[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/bitchfit1.png here]]) and when they were accussed of being racist for not having any non-white characters except a background servant ([[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/lookidrewablackpersonimnotracist.png here]]).
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Word Of God says it's set in not-Victorian England and not-Earth, but Christianity is present (seen here [[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/prostitutesrus130.png]] on what is presumably a church and that Axis is seen multiple times [[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/prostitutesrus137.png see here]] wearing a cross) so...
to:
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Word Of God says it's set in not-Victorian England and not-Earth, but Christianity is present (seen here [[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/prostitutesrus130.png]] on what is presumably a church and that Axis is seen multiple times [[http://demon-sushi.com/cry-some-more/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/prostitutesrus137.png see here]] wearing a cross) so... cross).
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
The incident suggests neglect and recklessness more than abuse. This is virginity prised by people, not nature. No chained sinkholes.
Changed line(s) 19,20 (click to see context) from:
* AbusiveParents: It's implied during the flashback's that Xanthe's father was a cold, strict and ruthless parent who had no patience for normal childishness and once gave Xanthe a black eye. It also seems like his parenting tragically worked very well, because Xanthe grew up into a similar man. (And naturally, this backstory is a major factor as to why fangirls [[DracoInLeatherPants excuse Xanthe's actions]].)
** Not to mention Linneus's father, who sold him to the Teahouse at the age of five (''on his birthday'') to pay for a gambling debt.
** Not to mention Linneus's father, who sold him to the Teahouse at the age of five (''on his birthday'') to pay for a gambling debt.
to:
* AbusiveParents: It's implied during the flashback's that Xanthe's father was a cold, strict and ruthless parent who had no patience for normal childishness and once gave Xanthe a black eye. It also seems Xanthe ended up much like his parenting tragically worked very well, because Xanthe grew up into a similar man. (And naturally, this backstory is a major factor as to why fangirls [[DracoInLeatherPants excuse Xanthe's actions]].)
father, abusing people in turn.
%% ** Not to mention Linneus's father, who sold him to the Teahouse at the age of five (''on his birthday'') to pay for a gambling debt.
%% ** Not to mention Linneus's father, who sold him to the Teahouse at the age of five (''on his birthday'') to pay for a gambling debt.
Changed line(s) 22,23 (click to see context) from:
* AllThereInTheManual: Backstory is explained and teasers provided via separate galleries and image descriptions. For a list of WordOfGod info, see the Trivia tab.
** When the series ended, a summary of the endings was released online.
** When the series ended, a summary of the endings was released online.
to:
* AllThereInTheManual: Backstory is explained and teasers provided via separate galleries and image descriptions. For a list of WordOfGod info, see the Trivia tab.
**When the series ended, a summary of the endings was released online.
**
Deleted line(s) 29 (click to see context) :
* AnachronismStew: ''AND HOW''. Even barring the unusual to the downright surreal mixings of victorian and modern clothing (Axis being a major offender) the comic also features cigarettes with filters, crossbows with infrared scopes, and ''plastic bags''.
Changed line(s) 32 (click to see context) from:
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Remy and Rory are identical twins even though one is a boy and one is a girl, so it's impossible to have the same biological make-up. [[http://s23.postimg.org/fnin1zdij/image.png So they have the same make-up while not.]]
to:
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Remy and Rory are identical twins even though one is a boy and one is a girl, so it's making it impossible to have the same biological make-up.chromosomes. [[http://s23.postimg.org/fnin1zdij/image.png So they have the same make-up while not.]]
Changed line(s) 73,75 (click to see context) from:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Xanthe. Perhaps.
* LipstickLesbian: Claret (with Argent).
* LoveHurts: So very much. Especially for Linneus.
* LipstickLesbian: Claret (with Argent).
* LoveHurts: So very much. Especially for Linneus.
to:
%% * JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Xanthe. Perhaps.
%% * LipstickLesbian: Claret (with Argent).
%% * LoveHurts: So very much. Especially for Linneus.
%% * LipstickLesbian: Claret (with Argent).
%% * LoveHurts: So very much. Especially for Linneus.
Changed line(s) 80,81 (click to see context) from:
** [[NamesToRunAwayFrom/DemonsOrAngels Lilith]]: A temptress who opposes and sabotages one of the main couples? [[Literature/TheBible Hm]][[WordOfDante mm]]...
** Mercutio: A [[AlwaysCamp flamboyant]] [[CloudCuckooLander goofball]] [[EnsembleDarkhorse that everyone loves]]? [[Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet Hmmm]]...
** Mercutio: A [[AlwaysCamp flamboyant]] [[CloudCuckooLander goofball]] [[EnsembleDarkhorse that everyone loves]]? [[Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet Hmmm]]...
to:
** [[NamesToRunAwayFrom/DemonsOrAngels Lilith]]: A temptress who opposes and sabotages one of the main couples? [[Literature/TheBible Hm]][[WordOfDante mm]]...
couples, from Biblical tradition.
** Mercutio: A[[AlwaysCamp flamboyant]] [[CloudCuckooLander goofball]] [[EnsembleDarkhorse flamboyant goofball that everyone loves]]? [[Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet Hmmm]]...loves, from ''Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet''.
** Mercutio: A
Changed line(s) 84 (click to see context) from:
* NatureAdoresAVirgin: Rory's virginity is, quoth, "a huge asset to the house". Indeed, [[spoiler: a gentleman ends up reserving him all for himself.]]
to:
%% * NatureAdoresAVirgin: Rory's virginity is, quoth, "a huge asset to the house". Indeed, [[spoiler: a [[spoiler:a gentleman ends up reserving him all for himself.]]
Changed line(s) 89 (click to see context) from:
* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler: In Chapter 5 Atros tries to sell Linneus's contract to Liard, Linneus's longtime client. When Linneus yells at him for treating him like property and not like a person, Atros levels him with an accusation that Linneus chose to become a courtesan eight years prior instead of being with Atros, when Atros's father gave him the ultimatum. Whether or not this accusation is true or not is still unclear, as Linneus ran away from the argument without refuting it, and then is shown in Chapter 6 still entertaining clients and still not have resolved this issue with Atros.]]
to:
* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In Chapter 5 Atros tries to sell Linneus's contract to Liard, Linneus's longtime client. When Linneus yells at him for treating him like property and not like a person, Atros levels him with an accusation that Linneus chose to become a courtesan eight years prior instead of being with Atros, when Atros's father gave him the ultimatum. Whether or not this accusation is true or not is still unclear, as Linneus ran away from the argument without refuting it, and then is shown in Chapter 6 still entertaining clients and still not have resolved this issue with Atros.]]
Added DiffLines:
* SchizoTech: Even barring the mixing of Victorian and modern clothing (Axis being a major case) the comic also features cigarettes with filters, crossbows with infrared scopes, and ''plastic bags''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
cut trope
Deleted line(s) 120 (click to see context) :
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Rhys and Evelyn have blue, Atros and Mercutio, both young men, grey; Claret green, Linneus soft pink, Rory bright flaming red. Axis, another redhead, seems to have naturally dark hair judging from his eyebrows and roots (confirmed by [[WordOfGod the authors]]). All in all the cast is very colourful in the hair department.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 4,6 (click to see context) from:
->''Who can remember faces when they're buried in pillows the entire time?''
->-- '''Rhys'''
->-- '''Rhys'''
to:
->--
-->-- '''Rhys'''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 57 (click to see context) from:
* MrFanservice: Pick a character, ''any'' character. One could imagine this comic is written by women for a female audience or something.
to:
* MrFanservice: [[PickACard Pick a character, ''any'' character. character.]] One could imagine this comic is written by women for a female audience or something.
