The Bechdel Test: Amusingly enough, it passes it. The only time a girl + girl conversation involves boys is the one instance in the first chapter where Willow remarks on Enoby's crush. Through the rest of the fanfic, not only female characters talk about other things (usually "goffik" crap), but also any conversation about romance involves the guys participating as well.
Creator Breakdown: The spelling mistakes get more frequent and more blatant as the story goes on. This could be because she threatens to slit her wrists every time someone flames her story. Speaking of which, her author's notes between chapters become increasingly angry and incoherent at time goes on... The effects of blood loss?
Word of God: Authors' notes pop up in most chapters, mostly to criticize reviewers as "preps" and excuse her spelling problems and mischaracteriation. One note in Chapter 6 reveals that Dumbledore's swearing is the result of him having a headache.