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* [[http://z11.invisionfree.com/WOAM/index.php?showforum=30 These Webcomics Are Bad]] are...well...[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin yeah.]] ''Bark Bark Dog and Yell Cat'' parodies [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible pretentious foreign art]] [[MindScrew (we think)]], while ''Garphuck'' and ''Oakfable'' [[StealthParody try to outdo]] [[RefugeInAudacity the absurdly offensive,]] as well as [[SelfDeprecation mildly exaggerate the creator's own lack of talent.]]
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* [[http://z11.invisionfree.com/WOAM/index.php?showforum=30 These Webcomics Are Bad]] are...well...[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin yeah.]] ''Bark Bark Dog and Yell Cat'' parodies [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible pretentious foreign art]] art [[MindScrew (we think)]], while ''Garphuck'' and ''Oakfable'' [[StealthParody try to outdo]] [[RefugeInAudacity the absurdly offensive,]] as well as [[SelfDeprecation mildly exaggerate the creator's own lack of talent.]]
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Further, gaming webcomics take MostWritersAreMale to its logical extreme: virtually all [[MostGamersAreMale gaming webcomic writers are male]], and usually fairly young, affluent and nerdy at that. Combined with the [[{{GIFT}} Great Internet Fuckwad Theory]], many webcomics sink to RefugeInAudacity BlackComedy fast. Scatological humour, gratuitous bloody violence and blatant sexism are unfortunately much too common.
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Further, gaming webcomics take MostWritersAreMale to its logical extreme: virtually all [[MostGamersAreMale gaming webcomic writers are male]], and usually fairly young, affluent and nerdy at that. Combined with the [[{{GIFT}} [[ForumSpeak Great Internet Fuckwad Theory]], many webcomics sink to RefugeInAudacity BlackComedy fast. Scatological humour, gratuitous bloody violence and blatant sexism are unfortunately much too common.
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I'm assuming this is what the rest of the sentence was going to say.
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Many gaming comics take place on WorldOfWeirdness. The real world is not nearly as exciting as videogames, where anything goes and DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist. As a result, you are more likely than not going to have to jazz things up a bit to make
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Many gaming comics take place on in a WorldOfWeirdness. The real world is not nearly as exciting as videogames, where anything goes and DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist. As a result, you are more likely than not going to have to jazz things up a bit to make
make yours stand out from the crowd.
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Also, what sort of games do your characters play? Do they play anything that catches their eye, or are they drawn to a particular genre? Are they RPG fans, always joking about inventory limits or wondering why [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Link]] doesn't just buy his bottles at the shop, rather than going on epic side-quests for them. Or maybe they play {{First Person Shooter}}s, and decorate their home with [[CrateExpectations dozens of plain wooden crates]]. Perhaps they're into retro gaming, ranting about why the 8-bit era was the best or bemoaning that [[WebAnimation/HomestarRunner freakin' duck]]. Or are they into two different genres, which can make for a lot of conflict?
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Also, what sort of games do your characters play? Do they play anything that catches their eye, or are they drawn to a particular genre? Are they RPG fans, always joking about inventory limits or wondering why [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Link]] doesn't just buy his bottles at the shop, rather than going on epic side-quests for them. them? Or maybe they play {{First Person Shooter}}s, and decorate their home with [[CrateExpectations dozens of plain wooden crates]]. Perhaps they're into retro gaming, ranting about why the 8-bit era was the best or bemoaning that [[WebAnimation/HomestarRunner freakin' duck]]. Or are they into two different genres, which can make for a lot of conflict?
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* Most gaming comics are primarially about video games. There are far fewer gaming comics about board games, [[ComicStrip/KnightsOfTheDinnerTable tabletop role-playing-games]], wargames, LARPs, trading card games, standard card games, or [[Manga/HikaruNoGo classic games]].
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* Most gaming comics are primarially primarily about video games. There are far fewer gaming comics about board games, [[ComicStrip/KnightsOfTheDinnerTable tabletop role-playing-games]], wargames, LARPs, trading card games, standard card games, or [[Manga/HikaruNoGo classic games]].
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* ''[[http://www.drunkduck.com/Powerup_Comics/index.php Powerup Comics]]'' - [[StealthParody A deliberate attempt]] to make the [[DarthWiki/PowerUpComics worst gaming webcomic ever]], with shoddy art, flagrant sexism, racism and homophobia, no plot or jokes, and the most intolerably smug MartyStu ever. It works.
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* ''[[http://www.drunkduck.com/Powerup_Comics/index.php Powerup Comics]]'' - [[StealthParody A deliberate attempt]] to make the [[DarthWiki/PowerUpComics [[Webcomic/PowerUpComics worst gaming webcomic ever]], with shoddy art, flagrant sexism, racism and homophobia, no plot or jokes, and the most intolerably smug MartyStu ever. It works.
