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-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]'' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS '''''HAS TO EAT IT!!!''''' ''[Kilgrave rubs his hands over his face and paces around the room, trying to compose himself]'' Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I AM TRYING TO PROFESS ETERNAL LOVE HERE, PEOPLE!
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-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]'' [[SuddenlyShouting THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS '''''HAS RINGS]] '''''[[SuddenlyShouting HAS TO EAT IT!!!''''' IT!!!]]''''' ''[Kilgrave rubs his hands over his face and paces around the room, trying to compose himself]'' Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I AM TRYING TO PROFESS ETERNAL LOVE HERE, PEOPLE!
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* MexicanStandoff: Kilgrave orders Sgt. Brett Mahoney and his men to point guns at each other or their own heads while he talks alone with Jessica.
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* MexicanStandoff: Kilgrave orders Sgt. Brett Mahoney and his men the cops of the 15th Preecinct to point guns at each other or their own heads while he talks alone with Jessica.
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* NeverMyFault: Trish's mom.
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* NeverMyFault: Trish's mom.Dorothy Walker in a nutshell.
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'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count for something.\\
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'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? [[WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count for something.\\]]\\
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-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Jessica Jones, you're free to go.\\
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'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' [[BlatantLies Captain's orders]]. Go, now.\\
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'''Jessica Jones:''' HOGARTH! I told you to- ''[She freezes as she enters a work station, and sees that every single cop in the room is frozen still, and either [[MexicanStandoff pointing their gun at another cop]] [[RussianRoulette or at their own head]]. Clemons and Brett walk into the space a few moments later]''\\
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'''Jessica Jones:''' HOGARTH! I told you to- ''[She freezes as she enters a work station, and sees that every single cop in the room is frozen still, in place, and either [[MexicanStandoff pointing their gun at another cop]] [[RussianRoulette or at their own head]]. Clemons and Brett walk into the space a few moments later]''\\
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'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Shut up. Don't move.\\
'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the mood!
'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the mood!
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'''Kilgrave:'''
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* RingRingCrunch: While Kilgrave is trying to talk to Jessica at the precinct, someone's cell phone suddenly rings.
-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]'' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS HAS TO EAT IT! Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I am trying to profess eternal love here, people!
-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]'' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS HAS TO EAT IT! Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I am trying to profess eternal love here, people!
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* RingRingCrunch: While As Kilgrave is trying to talk to Jessica at the precinct, someone's cell phone suddenly rings.
-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]'' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGSHAS '''''HAS TO EAT IT! IT!!!''''' ''[Kilgrave rubs his hands over his face and paces around the room, trying to compose himself]'' Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I am trying to profess eternal love here, people!AM TRYING TO PROFESS ETERNAL LOVE HERE, PEOPLE!
-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]'' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS
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-->'''Hogarth:''' Supermax only houses the worst criminals: top shelf perverts, cannibals, serial killers who make mosaics with their victims' fingernails.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The first indication we get to Kilgrave showing up at the precinct is when Brett interrupts Clemons's interrogation of Jessica just as Jessica has broken the chair, and tells her that she's free to go, and has no reaction to the broken chair.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The first indication we get to Kilgrave showing up at the precinct is when Brett interrupts Clemons's interrogation of Jessica just as Jessica has broken the chair, and tells her that she's free to go, and has no reaction to the broken chair.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The first indication
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-->'''Jessica:''' I was just leaving. You didn't kick me out, I just left.
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* WasJustLeaving: Jessica gets unceremoniously tossed out of a bar. Once she's landed in a pile of trash, she tries to save face by yelling that they didn't kick her out, she left.
-->'''Jessica:''' I was just leaving. You didn't kick me out, I just left.
-->'''Jessica:''' I was just leaving. You didn't kick me out, I just left.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: "Next person whose phone rings has to eat it!"
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'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the mood!
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* OhCrap: Jessica walks into the main precinct and sees every officer frozen in place, pointing their weapons at each other or themselves.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Clemons is absolutely correct to be suspicious of Jessica showing up with a head and demanding to be put into supermax.
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* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Faced with Ruben's corpse in her bed, Jessica decides that the only way forward is to get herself confined in a Supermax prison. She's not thinking clearly; she's just running. She's lucking fost it.
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* DeathSeeker: Jessica tries to strongarm Hogarth's ex-wife into signing the divorce papers. She accidentally drops her onto the subway tracks. She jumps down, throws her back onto the platform, then stares at the oncoming train...
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-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Jessica Jones, you're free to go.
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-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Jessica Jones, you're free to go.\\
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'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].\\
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'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].\\
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-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' So! To what do I owe the pleasure?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It's about Trish.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Why? What's happened? Is she on drugs again?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' She hasn't touched drugs since I dragged her away from you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I had no idea that doctor was over-prescribing.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Still no responsibility or remorse. [[SarcasmMode I wish I could be like that.]]
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count for something.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You don't get credit for doing the right thing for the wrong reasons.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I cared about-
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' About publicity. I was a strategic play to further the Patsy Walker brand. Trish is fine. She has security like Fort Knox and she's savvy enough not to let anyone sneak up on her, except you. She has no defenses against you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' She doesn't need defenses. I'm her mother.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You're her ''pimp''!
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I haven't seen her in three years.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Except for when you "accidentally" ran into her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' It's a small city.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And leave long, drunken messages for her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' What is it you want from me?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' I want you to stick to the agreement. Because no matter where I am, even if I'm behind bars, if you try anything, I will find out. I will come for you, and it will hurt.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' People can change, Jessie.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It doesn't make the bad shit you did go away.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I just... had a problem. I got help.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And royalty checks.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I earned those!
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' If you want them to keep coming, you'll respect Trish's wishes... which I will enforce.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' "And it will hurt.” You need a better tagline.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Five hundred feet. Just like a real restraining order. Five hundred feet away from her. Do you understand?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Yes. Taking you in was the worst decision of my life.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It's about Trish.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Why? What's happened? Is she on drugs again?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' She hasn't touched drugs since I dragged her away from you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I had no idea that doctor was over-prescribing.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Still no responsibility or remorse. [[SarcasmMode I wish I could be like that.]]
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count for something.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You don't get credit for doing the right thing for the wrong reasons.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I cared about-
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' About publicity. I was a strategic play to further the Patsy Walker brand. Trish is fine. She has security like Fort Knox and she's savvy enough not to let anyone sneak up on her, except you. She has no defenses against you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' She doesn't need defenses. I'm her mother.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You're her ''pimp''!
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I haven't seen her in three years.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Except for when you "accidentally" ran into her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' It's a small city.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And leave long, drunken messages for her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' What is it you want from me?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' I want you to stick to the agreement. Because no matter where I am, even if I'm behind bars, if you try anything, I will find out. I will come for you, and it will hurt.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' People can change, Jessie.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It doesn't make the bad shit you did go away.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I just... had a problem. I got help.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And royalty checks.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I earned those!
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' If you want them to keep coming, you'll respect Trish's wishes... which I will enforce.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' "And it will hurt.” You need a better tagline.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Five hundred feet. Just like a real restraining order. Five hundred feet away from her. Do you understand?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Yes. Taking you in was the worst decision of my life.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].
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-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' So! To what do I owe the pleasure?
-->'''Jessicapleasure?\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' It's aboutTrish.
-->'''DorothyTrish.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' Why? What's happened? Is she on drugsagain?
-->'''Jessicaagain?\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' She hasn't touched drugs since I dragged her away fromyou.
-->'''Dorothyyou.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I had no idea that doctor wasover-prescribing.
-->'''Jessicaover-prescribing.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' Still no responsibility or remorse. [[SarcasmMode I wish I could be like that.]]
-->'''Dorothy]]\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count forsomething.
-->'''Jessicasomething.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' You don't get credit for doing the right thing for the wrongreasons.
-->'''Dorothyreasons.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I caredabout-
-->'''Jessicaabout-\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' About publicity. I was a strategic play to further the Patsy Walker brand. Trish is fine. She has security like Fort Knox and she's savvy enough not to let anyone sneak up on her, except you. She has no defenses againstyou.
-->'''Dorothyyou.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' She doesn't need defenses. I'm hermother.
-->'''Jessicamother.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' You're her''pimp''!
-->'''Dorothy''pimp''!\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I haven't seen her in threeyears.
-->'''Jessicayears.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' Except for when you "accidentally" ran intoher?
-->'''Dorothyher?\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' It's a smallcity.
-->'''Jessicacity.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' And leave long, drunken messages forher?
-->'''Dorothyher?\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' What is it you want fromme?
-->'''Jessicame?\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' I want you to stick to the agreement. Because no matter where I am, even if I'm behind bars, if you try anything, I will find out. I will come for you, and it willhurt.
-->'''Dorothyhurt.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' People can change,Jessie.
-->'''JessicaJessie.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' It doesn't make the bad shit you did goaway.
-->'''Dorothyaway.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I just... had a problem. I gothelp.
-->'''Jessicahelp.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' And royaltychecks.
-->'''Dorothychecks.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I earnedthose!
-->'''Jessicathose!\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' If you want them to keep coming, you'll respect Trish's wishes... which I willenforce.
-->'''Dorothyenforce.\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' "And it will hurt.” You need a bettertagline.
-->'''Jessicatagline.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' Five hundred feet. Just like a real restraining order. Five hundred feet away from her. Do youunderstand?
-->'''Dorothyunderstand?\\
'''Dorothy Walker:''' Yes. Taking you in was the worst decision of mylife.
-->'''Jessicalife.\\
'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].\\
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' It's about
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' Why? What's happened? Is she on drugs
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' She hasn't touched drugs since I dragged her away from
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I had no idea that doctor was
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' Still no responsibility or remorse. [[SarcasmMode I wish I could be like that.
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count for
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' You don't get credit for doing the right thing for the wrong
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I cared
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' About publicity. I was a strategic play to further the Patsy Walker brand. Trish is fine. She has security like Fort Knox and she's savvy enough not to let anyone sneak up on her, except you. She has no defenses against
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' She doesn't need defenses. I'm her
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' You're her
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I haven't seen her in three
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' Except for when you "accidentally" ran into
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' It's a small
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' And leave long, drunken messages for
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' What is it you want from
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' I want you to stick to the agreement. Because no matter where I am, even if I'm behind bars, if you try anything, I will find out. I will come for you, and it will
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' People can change,
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' It doesn't make the bad shit you did go
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I just... had a problem. I got
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' And royalty
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' I earned
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' If you want them to keep coming, you'll respect Trish's wishes... which I will
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' "And it will hurt.” You need a better
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' Five hundred feet. Just like a real restraining order. Five hundred feet away from her. Do you
-->'''Dorothy
'''Dorothy Walker:''' Yes. Taking you in was the worst decision of my
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].\\
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-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' Mahoney, what are you doing?
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' [[BlatantLies Captain's orders]]. Go, now.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' ''[to Brett and Clemons]'' I told you, Hogarth does not represent me. I'm gonna kick her Armani covered ass!
-->''[She storms out of the interrogation room and marches down the hall]''
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' HOGARTH! I told you to- ''[She freezes as she enters a work station, and sees that every single cop in the room is frozen still, and either [[MexicanStandoff pointing their gun at another cop]] [[RussianRoulette or at their own head]]. Clemons and Brett walk into the space a few moments later]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' What the hell is going on here? ''[no response]'' Drop your weapons!
-->''[Brett suddenly pulls out his gun and trains it on Clemons]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' ''[alarmed]'' Brett?!
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Shut up. Don't move.
-->'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the mood!
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' [[BlatantLies Captain's orders]]. Go, now.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' ''[to Brett and Clemons]'' I told you, Hogarth does not represent me. I'm gonna kick her Armani covered ass!
-->''[She storms out of the interrogation room and marches down the hall]''
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' HOGARTH! I told you to- ''[She freezes as she enters a work station, and sees that every single cop in the room is frozen still, and either [[MexicanStandoff pointing their gun at another cop]] [[RussianRoulette or at their own head]]. Clemons and Brett walk into the space a few moments later]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' What the hell is going on here? ''[no response]'' Drop your weapons!
-->''[Brett suddenly pulls out his gun and trains it on Clemons]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' ''[alarmed]'' Brett?!
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Shut up. Don't move.
-->'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the mood!
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'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' [[BlatantLies Captain's orders]]. Go,
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' ''[to Brett and Clemons]'' I told you, Hogarth does not represent me. I'm gonna kick her Armani covered
-->''[She
''[She storms out of the interrogation room and marches down the
-->'''Jessica
'''Jessica Jones:''' HOGARTH! I told you to- ''[She freezes as she enters a work station, and sees that every single cop in the room is frozen still, and either [[MexicanStandoff pointing their gun at another cop]] [[RussianRoulette or at their own head]]. Clemons and Brett walk into the space a few moments
-->'''Oscar
'''Oscar Clemons:''' What the hell is going on here? ''[no response]'' Drop your
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''[Brett suddenly pulls out his gun and trains it on
-->'''Oscar
'''Oscar Clemons:''' ''[alarmed]''
-->'''Sgt.
'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Shut up. Don't
-->'''Kilgrave:'''
'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the
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-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]''\\
'''Kilgrave:''' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS HAS TO EAT IT! Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I am trying to profess eternal love here, people!
'''Kilgrave:''' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS HAS TO EAT IT! Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I am trying to profess eternal love here, people!
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-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]''\\
'''Kilgrave:'''pieces]'' THE NEXT PERSON WHOSE PHONE RINGS HAS TO EAT IT! Crappy fluorescent lights and cockroaches and loud cell phones and the smell of piss! I am trying to profess eternal love here, people!
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* ActorAllusion: Kilgrave popping up from someone's desk may be a reference to a famous picture of [[DoctorWho the Tenth Doctor]] grinning from over a cubicle wall, though with Kilgrave there's more of a predatory leer in it.
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* ActorAllusion: Kilgrave popping up from someone's desk may be a reference to a famous picture of [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho the Tenth Doctor]] grinning from over a cubicle wall, though with Kilgrave there's more of a predatory leer in it.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The first indication we get to Kilgrave showing up at the precinct is when Brett interrupts Clemons' interrogation of Jessica just as Jessica has broken the chair, and tells her that she's free to go, and has no reaction to the broken chair.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The first indication we get to Kilgrave showing up at the precinct is when Brett interrupts Clemons' Clemons's interrogation of Jessica just as Jessica has broken the chair, and tells her that she's free to go, and has no reaction to the broken chair.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Jessica's plan feels very much like a suicide attempt. It's sparked when Jessica has been subjected to a great deal of trauma after a short period of time. Her plan overall has little chance of success (Kilgrave really could just mind-control one of the guards when they're about to go on duty if he wants to get to her). She tidies up her affairs beforehand, issuing a threat that not even prison will keep her from stopping Trish's mother if she tries to get back with her. She even takes a last look at the New York skyline before initiating the plan.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Kilgrave issues a command that everyone should regard the whole guns-to-other-peoples'-heads situation as the greatest prank they ever experienced. Kilgrave is clearly addressing the cops, but by his phrasing, his command probably should have affected Jessica as well. She doesn't laugh…
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** Sergeant Brett Mahoney from ''Series/{{Daredevil|2015}}'' tells Jessica that she's free to go.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the Police station, Kilgrave issues a command that everyone should regard the whole guns-to-other-peoples'-heads situation as the greatest prank they ever experience. Kilgrave only cares about the officers, but by his phrasing, his command should have affected Jessica as well. She doesn't laugh…
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the Police station, Kilgrave issues a command that everyone should regard the whole guns-to-other-peoples'-heads situation as the greatest prank they ever experience. experienced. Kilgrave only cares about is clearly addressing the officers, cops, but by his phrasing, his command should have affected Jessica as well. She doesn't laugh…
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* MexicanStandoff: Kilgrave manipulates the cops into pointing guns at each other or their own heads while he talks alone with Jessica.
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* MexicanStandoff: Kilgrave manipulates the cops into pointing orders Sgt. Brett Mahoney and his men to point guns at each other or their own heads while he talks alone with Jessica.
* NeverMyFault: Trish's mom.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' So! To what do I owe the pleasure?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It's about Trish.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Why? What's happened? Is she on drugs again?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' She hasn't touched drugs since I dragged her away from you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I had no idea that doctor was over-prescribing.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Still no responsibility or remorse. [[SarcasmMode I wish I could be like that.]]
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count for something.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You don't get credit for doing the right thing for the wrong reasons.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I cared about-
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' About publicity. I was a strategic play to further the Patsy Walker brand. Trish is fine. She has security like Fort Knox and she's savvy enough not to let anyone sneak up on her, except you. She has no defenses against you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' She doesn't need defenses. I'm her mother.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You're her ''pimp''!
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I haven't seen her in three years.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Except for when you "accidentally" ran into her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' It's a small city.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And leave long, drunken messages for her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' What is it you want from me?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' I want you to stick to the agreement. Because no matter where I am, even if I'm behind bars, if you try anything, I will find out. I will come for you, and it will hurt.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' People can change, Jessie.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It doesn't make the bad shit you did go away.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I just... had a problem. I got help.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And royalty checks.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I earned those!
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' If you want them to keep coming, you'll respect Trish's wishes... which I will enforce.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' "And it will hurt.” You need a better tagline.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Five hundred feet. Just like a real restraining order. Five hundred feet away from her. Do you understand?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Yes. Taking you in was the worst decision of my life.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The first indication that something is wrong for Jessica and Clemons is when Sgt. Brett Mahoney walks in just as Jessica breaks the interrogation room chair.
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Jessica Jones, you're free to go.
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' Mahoney, what are you doing?
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' [[BlatantLies Captain's orders]]. Go, now.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' ''[to Brett and Clemons]'' I told you, Hogarth does not represent me. I'm gonna kick her Armani covered ass!
-->''[She storms out of the interrogation room and marches down the hall]''
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' HOGARTH! I told you to- ''[She freezes as she enters a work station, and sees that every single cop in the room is frozen still, and either [[MexicanStandoff pointing their gun at another cop]] [[RussianRoulette or at their own head]]. Clemons and Brett walk into the space a few moments later]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' What the hell is going on here? ''[no response]'' Drop your weapons!
-->''[Brett suddenly pulls out his gun and trains it on Clemons]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' ''[alarmed]'' Brett?!
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Shut up. Don't move.
-->'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the mood!
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' So! To what do I owe the pleasure?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It's about Trish.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Why? What's happened? Is she on drugs again?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' She hasn't touched drugs since I dragged her away from you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I had no idea that doctor was over-prescribing.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Still no responsibility or remorse. [[SarcasmMode I wish I could be like that.]]
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' “No responsibility,” hmm? I took you in. You were an orphan. That's gotta count for something.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You don't get credit for doing the right thing for the wrong reasons.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I cared about-
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' About publicity. I was a strategic play to further the Patsy Walker brand. Trish is fine. She has security like Fort Knox and she's savvy enough not to let anyone sneak up on her, except you. She has no defenses against you.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' She doesn't need defenses. I'm her mother.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' You're her ''pimp''!
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I haven't seen her in three years.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Except for when you "accidentally" ran into her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' It's a small city.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And leave long, drunken messages for her?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' What is it you want from me?
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' I want you to stick to the agreement. Because no matter where I am, even if I'm behind bars, if you try anything, I will find out. I will come for you, and it will hurt.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' People can change, Jessie.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' It doesn't make the bad shit you did go away.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I just... had a problem. I got help.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' And royalty checks.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' I earned those!
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' If you want them to keep coming, you'll respect Trish's wishes... which I will enforce.
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' "And it will hurt.” You need a better tagline.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' Five hundred feet. Just like a real restraining order. Five hundred feet away from her. Do you understand?
-->'''Dorothy Walker:''' Yes. Taking you in was the worst decision of my life.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' [[SarcasmMode Thanks, Mom]].
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The first indication that something is wrong for Jessica and Clemons is when Sgt. Brett Mahoney walks in just as Jessica breaks the interrogation room chair.
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Jessica Jones, you're free to go.
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' Mahoney, what are you doing?
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' [[BlatantLies Captain's orders]]. Go, now.
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' ''[to Brett and Clemons]'' I told you, Hogarth does not represent me. I'm gonna kick her Armani covered ass!
-->''[She storms out of the interrogation room and marches down the hall]''
-->'''Jessica Jones:''' HOGARTH! I told you to- ''[She freezes as she enters a work station, and sees that every single cop in the room is frozen still, and either [[MexicanStandoff pointing their gun at another cop]] [[RussianRoulette or at their own head]]. Clemons and Brett walk into the space a few moments later]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' What the hell is going on here? ''[no response]'' Drop your weapons!
-->''[Brett suddenly pulls out his gun and trains it on Clemons]''
-->'''Oscar Clemons:''' ''[alarmed]'' Brett?!
-->'''Sgt. Brett Mahoney:''' Shut up. Don't move.
-->'''Kilgrave:''' ''[suddenly pops up from behind another desk]'' Oh, everyone, calm down! You're killing the mood!
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-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemmons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemmons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemmons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]''\\
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-->'''Kilgrave:''' Whose is that? ''[cell phone continues to ring]'' Whose phone is that?! ''[Kilgrave stalks around the room, looking for whoever is too distracted to answer their phone. Eventually, he approaches Clemmons, Clemons, the source of the ringing. After a couple seconds of silent DeathGlare, Clemmons Clemons hesitates. Kilgrave takes Clemmons' Clemons' phone and suddenly throws it at a wall, shattering it into pieces]''\\
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the Police station, Kilgrave issues a command that everyone should regard the whole guns-to-other-peoples'-heads situation as the greatest prank they ever experience. Kilgrave only cares about the officers, but by his phrasing, his command should have affected Jessica as well. She doesn't laugh…