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->''So it's actually not about seducing and nailing disabled girls. [[DisabledLoveInterest The girls happen to have disabilities]], but the more you get to know them, the more you come to realise that they are girls just like any other. They are humans with hopes and dreams, and messy, fucked up insecurities about being alive and happy. They are not strange people - they are regular ordinary human beings who feel the way they feel not because they are disabled, but because they are ordinary. They are the universal allegory for humanity; the archetypal human; the mess you become when you feel sad and alone and unworthy. They are the [[GirlNextDoor girl next door]], the prom queen, the [[{{Bookworm}} bookworm]], the [[{{TomBoy}} tomboy]], and all the baggage that comes with that - nothing [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged more]] or [[DisabledMeansHelpless less]].\\
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->''So it's actually not about seducing and nailing disabled girls. [[DisabledLoveInterest The girls happen to have disabilities]], disabilities but the more you get to know them, the more you come to realise that they are girls just like any other. They are humans with hopes and dreams, and messy, fucked up insecurities about being alive and happy. They are not strange people - they are regular ordinary human beings who feel the way they feel not because they are disabled, but because they are ordinary. They are the universal allegory for humanity; the archetypal human; the mess you become when you feel sad and alone and unworthy. They are the [[GirlNextDoor girl next door]], the prom queen, the [[{{Bookworm}} bookworm]], the [[{{TomBoy}} tomboy]], and all the baggage that comes with that - nothing [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged more]] or [[DisabledMeansHelpless less]].\\
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They resonate with you because you recognise your flaws and needs and desires and triumphs and victories, and those [[PowerOfLove of the loved ones you know and care about]]. [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre You want to make them happy, because you want them to be happy,]] [[PowerOfTrust because you know them and are them]], and in some way you believe everyone you love [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy deserves to be happy]].\\
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They resonate with you because you recognise your flaws and needs and desires and triumphs and victories, and those [[PowerOfLove of the loved ones you know and care about]]. [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre You want to make them happy, because you want them to be happy,]] [[PowerOfTrust because you know them and are them]], and in some way you believe everyone you love [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy [[ForHappiness deserves to be happy]].\\
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Quotes from or about ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''.
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->- '''[[http://i.imgur.com/9JeSr.jpg A message from The Anonymous of 4chan]]'''
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-->'''RAITA'''
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->''First, I would like to thank all the staff that participated in the production of this game.While I did not participate in the production, I was deeply moved at the spirit of dedication and the perseverance of those who were involved in this work. I have to admit that when I first heard of this project I was surprised and somewhat anxious, but my heart was filled with joy every time I could recognize via the nets how members of the team were so highly motivated and pressed on with the production, leading me to closely watch over the progress being made from the very early stages. I know how it is very difficult to maintain motivation in a project where the production timeframe becomes protracted, and thus I get deeply affected when I imagine all the difficulties the members of the team must have had to overcome. Again, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude and profess how I was profoundly touched by your efforts. Thank you very much!''
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->''First, I would like to thank all the staff that participated in the production of this game. While I did not participate in the production, I was deeply moved at the spirit of dedication and the perseverance of those who were involved in this work. I have to admit that when I first heard of this project I was surprised and somewhat anxious, but my heart was filled with joy every time I could recognize via the nets how members of the team were so highly motivated and pressed on with the production, leading me to closely watch over the progress being made from the very early stages. I know how it is very difficult to maintain motivation in a project where the production timeframe becomes protracted, and thus I get deeply affected when I imagine all the difficulties the members of the team must have had to overcome. Again, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude and profess how I was profoundly touched by your efforts. Thank you very much!''
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Must HAVE, not must of.
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->''First, I would like to thank all the staff that participated in the production of this game.While I did not participate in the production, I was deeply moved at the spirit of dedication and the perseverance of those who were involved in this work. I have to admit that when I first heard of this project I was surprised and somewhat anxious, but my heart was filled with joy every time I could recognize via the nets how members of the team were so highly motivated and pressed on with the production, leading me to closely watch over the progress being made from the very early stages. I know how it is very difficult to maintain motivation in a project where the production timeframe becomes protracted, and thus I get deeply affected when I imagine all the difficulties the members of the team must of have had to overcome. Again, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude and profess how I was profoundly touched by your efforts. Thank you very much!''
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->''First, I would like to thank all the staff that participated in the production of this game.While I did not participate in the production, I was deeply moved at the spirit of dedication and the perseverance of those who were involved in this work. I have to admit that when I first heard of this project I was surprised and somewhat anxious, but my heart was filled with joy every time I could recognize via the nets how members of the team were so highly motivated and pressed on with the production, leading me to closely watch over the progress being made from the very early stages. I know how it is very difficult to maintain motivation in a project where the production timeframe becomes protracted, and thus I get deeply affected when I imagine all the difficulties the members of the team must of have had to overcome. Again, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude and profess how I was profoundly touched by your efforts. Thank you very much!''
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Dewicking Not So Different as it is now a disambig.
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They resonate with you because you recognise your flaws and needs and desires and triumphs and victories, and those [[PowerOfLove of the loved ones you know and care about]]. [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre You want to make them happy, because you want them to be happy,]] [[PowerOfTrust because you know them]] [[NotSoDifferent and are them]], and in some way you believe everyone you love [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy deserves to be happy]].\\
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They resonate with you because you recognise your flaws and needs and desires and triumphs and victories, and those [[PowerOfLove of the loved ones you know and care about]]. [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre You want to make them happy, because you want them to be happy,]] [[PowerOfTrust because you know them]] [[NotSoDifferent them and are them]], and in some way you believe everyone you love [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy deserves to be happy]].\\
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Don't pothole in quotes.
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->'''Shizune''': [I forgot that the whole time, [[spoiler: Misha was there, opening up to me, and giving a hundred percent everyday. I missed what I was looking for, because it was in plain sight.]]]
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->'''Shizune''': [I forgot that the whole time, [[spoiler: Misha [[spoiler:Misha was there, opening up to me, and giving a hundred percent everyday. I missed what I was looking for, because it was in plain sight.]]]
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]]]\\
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove I [[spoiler:I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]]]\\!]]\\
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'''Hisao:''' [[spoiler: [[InsultOfEndearment You idiot.]]]]
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'''Hisao:''' [[spoiler: [[InsultOfEndearment You idiot.]]]]]]
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->'''Hisao''': (hearing that Lilly [[spoiler:[[CovertPervert anticipated and welcomed the possibility of having sex in the bath]]]]) I knew it. [[spoiler:You're just as dirty-minded as I am.]]\\
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->'''Hisao''': (hearing that Lilly [[spoiler:[[CovertPervert anticipated [[spoiler:anticipated and welcomed the possibility of having sex in the bath]]]]) bath]]) I knew it. [[spoiler:You're just as dirty-minded as I am.]]\\
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'''Lilly''': [[spoiler:[[InsistentTerminology I merely have a healthy adolescent sex drive.]]]]\\
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'''Lilly''': [[spoiler:[[InsistentTerminology I [[spoiler:I merely have a healthy adolescent sex drive.]]]]\\]]\\
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-->''"The World Only You Can See"'', Rin's [[spoiler:Neutral Ending, thought of by most as a second Bad Ending]].
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-->''"The World Only You Can See"'', Rin's [[spoiler:Neutral Ending, thought of by most as a second an even worse Bad Ending]].
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too many potholes
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->''So it's actually not about [[{{Squick}} seducing and]] [[UnfortunateImplications nailing disabled girls]]. [[DisabledLoveInterest The girls happen to have disabilities]], but the more you get to know them, the more you come to realise that they are girls just like any other. They are humans with hopes and dreams, and messy, fucked up insecurities about being alive and happy. They are not strange people - they are regular ordinary human beings who feel the way they feel not because they are disabled, but because they are ordinary. They are the universal allegory for humanity; the archetypal human; the mess you become when you feel sad and alone and unworthy. They are the [[GirlNextDoor girl next door]], the [[AlphaBitch prom]] [[SpoiledSweet queen]], the [[{{Bookworm}} bookworm]], the [[{{TomBoy}} tomboy]], and all the baggage that comes with that - nothing [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged more]] or [[DisabledMeansHelpless less]].\\
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->''So it's actually not about [[{{Squick}} seducing and]] [[UnfortunateImplications and nailing disabled girls]].girls. [[DisabledLoveInterest The girls happen to have disabilities]], but the more you get to know them, the more you come to realise that they are girls just like any other. They are humans with hopes and dreams, and messy, fucked up insecurities about being alive and happy. They are not strange people - they are regular ordinary human beings who feel the way they feel not because they are disabled, but because they are ordinary. They are the universal allegory for humanity; the archetypal human; the mess you become when you feel sad and alone and unworthy. They are the [[GirlNextDoor girl next door]], the [[AlphaBitch prom]] [[SpoiledSweet queen]], prom queen, the [[{{Bookworm}} bookworm]], the [[{{TomBoy}} tomboy]], and all the baggage that comes with that - nothing [[InspirationallyDisadvantaged more]] or [[DisabledMeansHelpless less]].\\
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: [[AnguishedDeclartationOfLove I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]]]\\
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: [[AnguishedDeclartationOfLove [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]]]\\
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->''As much as I try to put a positive spin on this, it's very difficult.''
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->'''Hisao:''' [[spoiler: I know that there's a girl so determined to take care of a total stranger that she'd steal his food at a festival. I know that there's a girl so determined to help me with my own problems that she'd draw up a complete dietary and exercise plan, and that she'd not only draw up the plans but she'd follow them with me even when she couldn't run. Determined enough to keep me at arms length that she'd put herself through emotional pain if she thought it was the right thing to do. Although, there's one thing this determined girl didn't quite plan for, which was that I might feel the same kind of determination to keep her from being hurt. I fell in love with you and I refuse to let that be thrown away because you're afraid of losing me.]]
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->'''Hisao:''' [[spoiler: [[HowWeGotHere I know that there's a girl so determined to take care of a total stranger that she'd steal his food at a festival. I know that there's a girl so determined to help me with my own problems that she'd draw up a complete dietary and exercise plan, and that she'd not only draw up the plans but she'd follow them with me even when she couldn't run. Determined enough to keep me at arms length that she'd put herself through emotional pain if she thought it was the right thing to do. ]] Although, there's one thing this determined girl didn't quite plan for, which was that I might feel the same kind of determination to keep her from being hurt. I fell in love with you and I refuse to let that be thrown away because you're afraid of losing me.]]
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: [[AnguishedDeclartationOfLove I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you!]] Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]\\
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: [[AnguishedDeclartationOfLove I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you!]] you! Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]\\!]]]]\\
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->'''Lilly:''' [[Understatement Adolescence is a funny time.]]\\
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->'''Lilly:''' [[Understatement Adolescence is a funny time.]]\\
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->'''Hisao''' [[spoiler: The wall between us is going away, even if it hurts so badly to bring it down.]]
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->'''Hisao:''' Try as I might to picture this mystery sister, all I can think of is Lilly in a suit. And I can't imagine that not being attractive. Not at all.
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->'''Hisao:''' Aren't you blind?\\
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->'''Hisao:''' Aren't you blind?\\also <blind>?\\
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->'''Rin:''' I'm having my period and I need some help regarding that. However, I don't feel that our relationship is yet on the level where I could allow you to pull my underwear down in the girls' toilet even if you offer to.
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->'''Rin:''' [[AvertedTrope I'm having having]] [[NoPeriodsPeriod my period period]] and I need some help regarding that. However, I don't feel that our relationship is yet on the level where I could allow you to pull my underwear down in the girls' toilet even if you offer to.
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'''Rin:''' [[spoiler: '''I have no idea what's wrong with me!''']]
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'''Rin:''' [[spoiler: '''I '''[[DespairEventHorizon I have no idea what's wrong with me!''']]
me!]]''']]
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->'''Rin''': [[spoiler:I can't hug anyone, Hisao. [[TearJerker/KatawaShoujo I'm a bad person like that.]]]]
-->''"The World Only You Can See"'', Rin's [[spoiler:second Bad Ending]].
-->''"The World Only You Can See"'', Rin's [[spoiler:second Bad Ending]].
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->'''Rin''': [[spoiler:I can't hug anyone, Hisao. [[TearJerker/KatawaShoujo I'm a bad person like that.]]]]
]] That's why I have to go.]]
-->''"The World Only You Can See"'', Rin's[[spoiler:second [[spoiler:Neutral Ending, thought of by most as a second Bad Ending]].
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]\\
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->'''Lilly:''' [[spoiler: [[AnguishedDeclartationOfLove I love you, Hisao. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! you!]] Don't go away, I beg of you. Never ever, go away. I love you, so please...!]]\\
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'''Hisao:''' [[spoiler: You idiot.]]
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'''Hisao:''' [[spoiler: [[InsultOfEndearment You idiot.]]]]]]
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->'''Lilly:''' [[Understatement Adolescence is a funny time.\\
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'''Lilly''': [[spoiler:I merely have a healthy adolescent sex drive.]]\\
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'''Lilly''': [[spoiler:I [[spoiler:[[InsistentTerminology I merely have a healthy adolescent sex drive.]]\\]]]]\\
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->'''Hanako''': [[spoiler: [[RageBreakingPoint I know I need help! I know I'm broken! I don't need you telling me that!]]]] \\
'''Hisao''': [[spoiler: I never said you were broken, or anything like that!]] \\
'''Hanako''': [[spoiler: It's written on your face, it's written on Lilly's face, it's written on everybody's faces! I see a therapist every week, Lilly [[CondescendingCompassion dotes on me as if I were her child]], and now.....even you! [[AllForNothing Nothing's changed, nothing at all!]] I hate Lilly, and I....[[PlayerPunch I hate you more than anyone...!]]]]
--> [[spoiler:"Misstep"]], Hanako's Bad Ending
'''Hisao''': [[spoiler: I never said you were broken, or anything like that!]] \\
'''Hanako''': [[spoiler: It's written on your face, it's written on Lilly's face, it's written on everybody's faces! I see a therapist every week, Lilly [[CondescendingCompassion dotes on me as if I were her child]], and now.....even you! [[AllForNothing Nothing's changed, nothing at all!]] I hate Lilly, and I....[[PlayerPunch I hate you more than anyone...!]]]]
--> [[spoiler:"Misstep"]], Hanako's Bad Ending
