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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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** This is taken UpToEleven in that it's tempting to believe that [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Ray is only bluffing about hurting Alice's parents]]. He's ''really'' not.
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** This is taken UpToEleven up to eleven in that it's tempting to believe that [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Ray is only bluffing about hurting Alice's parents]]. He's ''really'' not.
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** This is taken UpToEleven in that it's tempting to believe that [[WhyDidntYouJustShootHim Ray is only bluffing about hurting Alice's parents]]. He's ''really'' not.
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** This is taken UpToEleven in that it's tempting to believe that [[WhyDidntYouJustShootHim [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Ray is only bluffing about hurting Alice's parents]]. He's ''really'' not.
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** This is taken UpToEleven in that it's tempting to believe that [[WhyDidntYouJustShootHim Ray is only bluffing about hurting Alice's parents]]. He's ''really'' not.
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* Why is Alice even willing to entertain the idea of being "mother" to a "new" Alice (or rather, Anabelle), when she knows how evil that is? "At least it wouldn't be me." Yes, she's ''that'' broken.
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* Why is Alice even willing to entertain the idea of being "mother" to a "new" Alice (or rather, Anabelle), Annabelle), when she knows how evil that is? "At least it wouldn't be me." Yes, she's ''that'' broken.
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* The fact that people are actually aware of Alice's existence and do nothing to help her. Of course nobody knows that she's being held against her will, abused, and raped (she and Ray pose as father and daughter), but there's still something very clearly ''off'' about their relationship to the outside observer. This should be especially relevant to the neighbors, as Alice is barely ever allowed outside. However, people mind their business and overlook Alice and the myriad of red flags she puts out while Alice herself is far too terrified to ask for help (for reasons stated above). A cop actually ''does'' take notice, but that's mostly because Alice was hanging around a playground and acting weird. [[ParanoiaFuel It really makes you think]]; if, God forbid, '''you''' were in Alice's position, would there be anyone who would even ''notice?''
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* The fact that people are actually aware of Alice's existence and do nothing to help her. Of course nobody knows that she's being held against her will, abused, and raped (she and Ray pose as father and daughter), but there's still something very clearly ''off'' about their relationship to the outside observer. This should be especially relevant to the neighbors, as Alice is barely ever allowed outside. However, people mind their business and overlook Alice and the myriad of red flags she puts out while Alice herself is far too terrified to ask for help (for reasons stated above). A cop actually ''does'' take notice, but that's mostly because Alice was hanging around a playground and acting weird. [[ParanoiaFuel It really makes you think]]; if, God forbid, '''you''' were in Alice's position, would there be anyone who would even ''notice?''''notice?''
* Why is Alice even willing to entertain the idea of being "mother" to a "new" Alice (or rather, Anabelle), when she knows how evil that is? "At least it wouldn't be me." Yes, she's ''that'' broken.
* Why is Alice even willing to entertain the idea of being "mother" to a "new" Alice (or rather, Anabelle), when she knows how evil that is? "At least it wouldn't be me." Yes, she's ''that'' broken.
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** More NightmareFuel from this: imagine that not only has a sadistic pedophile kidnapped your daughter and abused her in the worst ways, but ''he knows where you live'', and the moment she escapes his power you're as good as dead.
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** More NightmareFuel from this: imagine that not only has a sadistic pedophile kidnapped your daughter and abused her in the worst ways, but ''he knows where you live'', and the moment she escapes his power you're as good as dead.dead.
* The fact that people are actually aware of Alice's existence and do nothing to help her. Of course nobody knows that she's being held against her will, abused, and raped (she and Ray pose as father and daughter), but there's still something very clearly ''off'' about their relationship to the outside observer. This should be especially relevant to the neighbors, as Alice is barely ever allowed outside. However, people mind their business and overlook Alice and the myriad of red flags she puts out while Alice herself is far too terrified to ask for help (for reasons stated above). A cop actually ''does'' take notice, but that's mostly because Alice was hanging around a playground and acting weird. [[ParanoiaFuel It really makes you think]]; if, God forbid, '''you''' were in Alice's position, would there be anyone who would even ''notice?''
* The fact that people are actually aware of Alice's existence and do nothing to help her. Of course nobody knows that she's being held against her will, abused, and raped (she and Ray pose as father and daughter), but there's still something very clearly ''off'' about their relationship to the outside observer. This should be especially relevant to the neighbors, as Alice is barely ever allowed outside. However, people mind their business and overlook Alice and the myriad of red flags she puts out while Alice herself is far too terrified to ask for help (for reasons stated above). A cop actually ''does'' take notice, but that's mostly because Alice was hanging around a playground and acting weird. [[ParanoiaFuel It really makes you think]]; if, God forbid, '''you''' were in Alice's position, would there be anyone who would even ''notice?''
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* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[FromBadToWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.
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* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[FromBadToWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.crime.
** More NightmareFuel from this: imagine that not only has a sadistic pedophile kidnapped your daughter and abused her in the worst ways, but ''he knows where you live'', and the moment she escapes his power you're as good as dead.
** More NightmareFuel from this: imagine that not only has a sadistic pedophile kidnapped your daughter and abused her in the worst ways, but ''he knows where you live'', and the moment she escapes his power you're as good as dead.
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It Got Worse rename
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* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[ItGotWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.
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* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[ItGotWorse [[FromBadToWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.
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* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[ItGotWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, [[CompleteMonster it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.]]
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* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[ItGotWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, [[CompleteMonster it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.]]
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Elizabeth Scott's ''Living Dead Girl'' is one of those wonderful reminders that YA books can and do play with the big girls.
Plenty of NightmareFuel and spoilers ahead.
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*"Alice" has been kidnapped and held for five years by the pedophile Ray. It chillingly depicts not only Ray's systematic and thorough destruction, emotionally and physically, of his victims, but it also quietly reminds the reader of the completely random nature of such a crime: why you over anyone else? Something that can be seen as very disturbing is the lack of information; several times it's implied that Ray is forcing "Alice" to preform sexual favors for him or even rapes her, but it's never actually stated that he is doing those things. This forces your mind to fill in the blanks as to what exactly Ray is doing to Alice and it's not pretty.
* Another example is the lengths Ray goes to make sure that "Alice" remains "his little girl." She is 15 and is developing into a young woman, something that Ray is not pleased with, seeing as he's a pedophile. He starves her so she remains under 100 pounds, forces her to take medication that stops her menstruation, and forces her to wear clothes that are made for someone half her age. When he decides that "Alice" is now too old, he does the only rational thing: make plans to abduct another little girl and make her into another one of his "little girls."
* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[ItGotWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, [[CompleteMonster it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.]]
Plenty of NightmareFuel and spoilers ahead.
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*"Alice" has been kidnapped and held for five years by the pedophile Ray. It chillingly depicts not only Ray's systematic and thorough destruction, emotionally and physically, of his victims, but it also quietly reminds the reader of the completely random nature of such a crime: why you over anyone else? Something that can be seen as very disturbing is the lack of information; several times it's implied that Ray is forcing "Alice" to preform sexual favors for him or even rapes her, but it's never actually stated that he is doing those things. This forces your mind to fill in the blanks as to what exactly Ray is doing to Alice and it's not pretty.
* Another example is the lengths Ray goes to make sure that "Alice" remains "his little girl." She is 15 and is developing into a young woman, something that Ray is not pleased with, seeing as he's a pedophile. He starves her so she remains under 100 pounds, forces her to take medication that stops her menstruation, and forces her to wear clothes that are made for someone half her age. When he decides that "Alice" is now too old, he does the only rational thing: make plans to abduct another little girl and make her into another one of his "little girls."
* Something that is brought to light later in the novel is bone chilling: "Alice" is not the first girl Ray has done this to. There was another "Alice" before the current one who was subjected to Ray's treatment. When she turned 15, Ray killed her and her body was found and returned to her parents for burial. [[ItGotWorse But it doesn't stop there.]] After returning home from their daughter's funeral, the parents were killed by a "burglar," who, oddly enough, did not steal anything. Given the threats Ray makes against the current "Alice's" family if she were to disobey, [[CompleteMonster it's obvious that Ray was the perpetrator and got away with the crime.]]
