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Looney Toons: Andyzero, while I've neatened up some of the markup in your recent additions to this page, I have to say that I don't think that they add anything to it. In fact I think they disrupt the flow of the text and make it harder to read by essentially inserting unnecessary digressions at random points. I'm inclined to delete them, to be absolutely honest, but I'll give you some time to clean them up and try to improve things before I take any action.
Looney Toons: (Update) While I was writing the above, you added the new "James Bond Meets X-Men Meets Reading Rainbow" blurb at the top. That I like. The rest still feels unnecessary and distracting.
Andyzero: I'm working on it to get the flow right. You caught me in the middle, and it takes time to go from the rough draft of changes to final. I'm done now...feel free to change anything. I'd like the gist of the comments on Read or Dream/Die the TV Series to remain, though.
Ununnilium: Didn't see the earlier versions; this feels about right to me.
Looney Toons: Hmm. Maybe we ought to spin the TV series off into its own entry, referenced in Read Or Die.
Ununnilium: I'd be for that.
Dentaku: Me too, since it's basically a totally different show.
prescience: I've tried to separate out the TV series stuff into ROD The TV. The write-up still needs work, though, and it could probably do with a better image. Also, the use of spoiler tags is still a bit iffy.
Does anyone know how to get rid of the "alt title" thing on the top of the Read Or Die page?
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