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Kilyle: Will finish up this page when I get a chance, though that may not be for a while if I don't make time for it tonight.
Kilyle: Ah, looks like someone upgraded the page. Online? Online?? Too bad the resolution is so bad (compared to reading the real thing, I mean)... I suppose that's a calculated decision to make sure not too many people give up buying issues. Lemme see, things to add. Guess the YKTTW for "elves don't kill elves" got lost or forgotten... or nuked, despite meeting the rule of three. I'll have to resubmit it. (If it's around, simple searches don't reveal it.) And as the other thoughts I had have flown my head in the space of hunting for "elves don't kill elves," I think I'll go submit it right now. Note: It's up!
Kilyle: Back in the second Trial, I got annoyed with Cutter's win because it got put to Rayek as "He didn't use magic - he didn't realize the rock was magic" - which therefore clearly states that he did not win the trial through wits at all. Had he had some clue about its powers to begin with, using it might have been a sign of wits (magic ban or no), but otherwise he won by luck. Although I suppose Rayek needed the test of "silence in the face of injustice" or something, I'm not discounting that. But I'm wondering (1) if we have a trope to address this quibble, and (2) if someone can point out to me in what way my conclusion might be incorrect. Don't know who struck the character's out, but those three kids are caricatures of Coleen Dolan (A Distant Soil), Phil Foglio (Myth Adventures) and Valentino (later Mythadventures and a couple other things). All were being published by Wa RP when Siege at Blue Mountain was first published. All are still active, they just don't go through Wa RP anymore (not an uncommon thing). Kilyle: As far as the Air Hugging being because Redlance is still hurt... I was gonna counter this with "Leetah healed him" but then, she does imply that she hasn't healed him completely. But the air hug does come at the end of the story, after several days or weeks have passed, so I really question whether this is a factor at the time. I'd have to re-read it. Lord Incompetent: Cut this because it reads like Complaining About Shows You Dont Like:
Neenee: Removed this from the mainpage because it’s really a discussion. (For what it’s worth, I agree with the objection.)
Lavode: Removed the Lady Of War entry as Kahvi hardly fits the trope, and Wendy Pini's comment has some pretty Unfortunate Implications. |
