- "Please, child, give it back. It's a gift from my husband.""But it's beautiful. I want it. Give it to me."
This story provides examples of:
- Author Avatar: Capote said multiple times in interviews that Miriam is supposed to be him paying his parents (who abandoned him) back.
- Creepy Child: Miriam, though it is implied that she might not be quite human...
- Creepy Doll: Miriam has one of these by the story's end.
- It Was Here, I Swear: After Miriam shows up to move into her apartment, Mrs. Miller has a minor breakdown and runs to her neighbors to beg them to get the girl to leave. Miriam, her box full of clothing, and her Creepy Doll are nowhere to be found when someone goes to look.
- Little Professor Dialogue: Specifically pointed out and played for creep-factor.
- Mind Screw: No one is quite sure what Miriam is and how she is related to Miss Miller, or what her job on earth is.
- Mrs. Robinson: Mrs. Miller is described as being strongly attracted to the titular character, despite the face that she is a little girl who scares her to death.
- Name's the Same / Averted One Steve Limit: Mrs. Miller's first name is also Miriam.
- Psychological Horror
- Snow Means Death: Snow in general is a major symbol in the story, especially in association with Miriam.
- Through the Eyes of Madness: Is Miriam real, or a figment of Mrs. Miller's imagination?
- The Stinger:Mrs. Miller stiffened and opened her eyes to a dull, direct stare. "Hello," said Miriam.
- White Hair, Black Heart: Miriam is a little girl with white hair.