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* After beating Gym Leader Stein, Atticus thanks Dragonthing for helping him and [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1758716/chapter-6-page-92/ then gives her a hug]].
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* After beating Gym Leader Stein, Atticus thanks Dragonthing for helping him and [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1758716/chapter-6-page-92/ then gives her a hug]].hug]].
* In [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/2003438/chapter-8-page-22/ this page]], Atty goes through his balls in search of DT and then smiles at her. One page later, he ''apologises'' for accidently leaving her behind, then pets her! He's really grown to love the little thing.
* In [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/2003438/chapter-8-page-22/ this page]], Atty goes through his balls in search of DT and then smiles at her. One page later, he ''apologises'' for accidently leaving her behind, then pets her! He's really grown to love the little thing.
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* Kahn stealing a Bulbasaur from Professor Oak to give to his sister so she wouldn't feel left out after not getting a starter.
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* Kahn stealing a Bulbasaur from Professor Oak to give to his sister so she wouldn't feel left out after not getting a starter. Especially since Oak was just going to send it to the waste disposal center...
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* During the night spent in Viridian Forest, Atty gets cold sitting away from the fire while he draws. DT helpfully lends him her tail flame for warmth.
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* During the night spent in Viridian Forest, Atty gets cold sitting away from the fire while he draws. DT helpfully lends him her tail flame for warmth.warmth.
* After beating Gym Leader Stein, Atticus thanks Dragonthing for helping him and [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1758716/chapter-6-page-92/ then gives her a hug]].
* After beating Gym Leader Stein, Atticus thanks Dragonthing for helping him and [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1758716/chapter-6-page-92/ then gives her a hug]].
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* After getting healed up from the "adventure" in Veridian Forest, [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1398066/chapter-5-page-2/ DT jumps up to her spot on Atty's back, and gets a genuine smile back in return.]] It's a small moment, but shows just how much Atty's starting to grow.
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* After getting healed up from the "adventure" in Veridian Viridian Forest, [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1398066/chapter-5-page-2/ DT jumps up to her spot on Atty's back, and gets a genuine smile back in return.]] It's a small moment, but shows just how much Atty's starting to grow.grow.
* During the night spent in Viridian Forest, Atty gets cold sitting away from the fire while he draws. DT helpfully lends him her tail flame for warmth.
* During the night spent in Viridian Forest, Atty gets cold sitting away from the fire while he draws. DT helpfully lends him her tail flame for warmth.
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* After the Masked Man and Kahn leave afterwards, [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Atty]] says to [[TheWoobie DT]] that he did a good job and gives him some chocolate. [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1108016/chapter-3-page-46/ Cue smiling on both sides.]]
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* After the Masked Man and Kahn leave afterwards, [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Atty]] says to [[TheWoobie DT]] that he she did a good job and gives him her some chocolate. [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1108016/chapter-3-page-46/ Cue smiling on both sides.]]
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* After getting healed up from the "adventure" in Veridian Forest, [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1398066/chapter-5-page-2/ DT jumps up to his spot on Atty's back, and gets a genuine smile back in return.]] It's a small moment, but shows just how much Atty's starting to grow.
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* After getting healed up from the "adventure" in Veridian Forest, [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1398066/chapter-5-page-2/ DT jumps up to his her spot on Atty's back, and gets a genuine smile back in return.]] It's a small moment, but shows just how much Atty's starting to grow.
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** [[spoiler: Although immediately subverted when Atty recalls DT before he gets to eat it.]]
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** [[spoiler: Although immediately subverted when Atty recalls DT before he she gets to eat it.]]
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* Kahn stealing a Bulbasaur from Professor Oak to give to his sister so she wouldn't feel left out after not getting a starter.
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* Kahn stealing a Bulbasaur from Professor Oak to give to his sister so she wouldn't feel left out after not getting a starter.starter.
* After getting healed up from the "adventure" in Veridian Forest, [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1398066/chapter-5-page-2/ DT jumps up to his spot on Atty's back, and gets a genuine smile back in return.]] It's a small moment, but shows just how much Atty's starting to grow.
* After getting healed up from the "adventure" in Veridian Forest, [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1398066/chapter-5-page-2/ DT jumps up to his spot on Atty's back, and gets a genuine smile back in return.]] It's a small moment, but shows just how much Atty's starting to grow.
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** [[spoiler: Although immediately subverted when Atty recalls DT before he gets to eat it.]]
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** [[spoiler: Although immediately subverted when Atty recalls DT before he gets to eat it.]]]]
* Kahn stealing a Bulbasaur from Professor Oak to give to his sister so she wouldn't feel left out after not getting a starter.
* Kahn stealing a Bulbasaur from Professor Oak to give to his sister so she wouldn't feel left out after not getting a starter.
