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* Jade [[HeroicBSOD begins to realize that she may be more evil than she thought]] when she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone recalls the time she killed Shendu]]. However, not only Raythor takes this idea out of her mind, explaining her that sometimes there are no options but to kill your enemy, but he also says that Jade is [[TokenGoodTeammate much more noble and nicer than the rest of the Knights]], including himself. This makes Jade to feel MUCH better (and the Queen much worse, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain as it’s a major setback for the Queen in her quest to gain control of Jade]]).
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* Jade [[HeroicBSOD begins to realize that she may be more evil than she thought]] when she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone recalls the time she killed Shendu]]. However, not only Raythor takes this idea out of her mind, explaining [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre explaining]] her that sometimes there are no options but to kill your enemy, but he also says that Jade is [[TokenGoodTeammate much more noble and nicer than the rest of the Knights]], including himself. This makes Jade to feel MUCH better (and the Queen much worse, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain as it’s a major setback for the Queen in her quest to gain control of Jade]]).
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* When Elyon realizes that she nearly killed Jade, [[MyGodWhatIHaveDone she feels sorry about it]] and orders her wounds to be treated before getting a confirmation from the "Mage" about her identity. Too bad [[BlackAndWhiteMorality Caleb]] defies her orders behind her back.
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* When Elyon realizes that she nearly killed Jade, [[MyGodWhatIHaveDone [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone she feels sorry about it]] and [[MustMakeAmends orders her wounds to be treated treated]] before getting a confirmation from the "Mage" about her identity. Too bad [[BlackAndWhiteMorality Caleb]] defies her orders behind her back.
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* Jade [[HeroicBSOD begins to realize that she may be more evil than she thought]] when she [[MyGodWhatIHaveDone [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone recalls the time she killed Shendu]]. However, not only Raythor takes this idea out of her mind, explaining her that sometimes there are no options but to kill your enemy, but he also says that Jade is [[TokenGoodTeammate much more noble and nicer than the rest of the Knights]], including himself. This makes Jade to feel MUCH better (and the Queen much worse, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain as it’s a major setback for the Queen in her quest to gain control of Jade]]).
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* Jade [[HeroicBSOD begins to realize that she may be more evil than she thinks thought]] when she [[MyGodWhatIHaveDone recalls the time she killed Shendu.Shendu]]. However, not only Raythor takes this idea out of her mind, explaining her that sometimes there are no options but to kill your enemy, but he also says that Jade is [[TokenGoodTeammate much more noble and nicer than the rest of the Knights]], including himself. This makes Jade to feel MUCH better (and the Queen much worse, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain as it’s a major setback for the Queen in her quest to gain control of Jade]]).
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* Jade's unexpected PetTheDog moment with Sniffer [[HellHound Sniffer]] and Tracker.
[[HumanoidAbomination Tracker]].
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* Jade [[HeroicSacrifice choosing]] to let herself be sucked in so her family wouldn’t be.
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* ''Everyone'', even Hak Foo and the Enforcers, trying try to stop Jade from being dragged away by her own shadow.
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** In the next chapter, Jade spending spends time with Sniffer without objection from the Tracker.
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** And the fact it was [[AlphaBitch Cornelia]], of all people, who stopped Elyon from killing Jade.
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* Jade begins to realize that she may be more evil than she thinks when she recalls the time she killed Shendu. However, not only Raythor takes this idea out of her mind, explaining her that sometimes there are no options but to kill your enemy, but he also says that Jade is [[TokenGoodTeammate much more noble and nicer than the rest of the Knights.Knights]], including himself. This makes Jade to feel MUCH better (and the Queen much worse, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain as it’s a major setback for the Queen in her quest to gain control of Jade]]).
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* Jade begins to realize that she may be more evil than she thinks when she recalls the time she killed Shendu. However, not only Raythor takes this idea out of her mind explaining her that sometimes there are no options but to kill your enemy, but he also says that Jade is much more noble and nicer than the rest of the Knights. This makes Jade to feel MUCH better (and the Queen much worse).
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* Jade begins to realize that she may be more evil than she thinks when she recalls the time she killed Shendu. However, not only Raythor takes this idea out of her mind mind, explaining her that sometimes there are no options but to kill your enemy, but he also says that Jade is much more noble and nicer than the rest of the Knights. This makes Jade to feel MUCH better (and the Queen much worse).worse, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain as it’s a major setback for the Queen in her quest to gain control of Jade]]).
** In fact, the Queen says that Jade likes Raythor enough that it’s comparable to the regard she has for her family, and the Queen can’t twist Jade’s feelings toward them into hate because of that.
** Heck, that entire scene was one big CMOH.
* Jade's PetTheDog moment with Sniffer and Tracker.
* Jade volunteering to watch over Miranda while the girl recovers from the battle.
** In fact, the Queen says that Jade likes Raythor enough that it’s comparable to the regard she has for her family, and the Queen can’t twist Jade’s feelings toward them into hate because of that.
** Heck, that entire scene was one big CMOH.
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* When Elyon realizes that she nealrty killed Jade, she feels sorry about it.
* Jade choosing to let herself be sucked in so her family wouldn’t be.
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* ''Everyone'', even Hak Foo and the Enforcers, trying to stop Jade from being dragged away ny by her own shadow.
* Jadechoosing [[HeroicSacrifice choosing]] to let herself be sucked in so her family wouldn’t be.
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* Miranda’s love for Cedric.
* jade showing honest concern for Miranda when Nerissa zaps her.
* Raythor initially refusing to allow Jade to join the Knights.
* Jade choosing to let herself be sucked in so her family wouldn’t be.
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