While it might be tempting to just scratch one's head at the very existence of this fic, 'tis always better to have some specific examples, such as:
- How in the nine hells did Fluttershy have an adult scale nursery, an adult scale baby chair, and a nursery themed dungeon constructed without Dash noticing that something was going on her best friend's house?
- The prequel partially explains the nursery, at least: Fluttershy made it for herself before the events of part one, and kept the room locked so that no one would know about her fetish.
- So... Everypony in town has the exact same Age Play fetish and are willing to take it beyond just being a fetish and made into a borderline cult (assuming it hasn't already crossed the line into actually being one)? Alright, then...
- So, The Stare Master + Fluttershy's internal clock = Mind raping adult ponies into infantile mindsets. Pop!
- Okay, I can see (sort of) how Rarity, AJ, Pinkie, and Zecora might be in on Fluttershy's little "secret", but how and why Twilight? She wasn't even a resident of Ponyville until relatively recently! How did she get inducted into this creepy cult? Or are Celestia and Luna in on it too? And pardon me for saying this, but with this creepy local cult that seemingly everypony is in on save for one or two unfortunate victims, am I alone in getting a The Wicker Man vibe from this? Or should that be The Whicker Mare?