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*** There are actually ''several'' fairly heavy conversations happening as Alex plays, first with Alex and Otis, then Alex and Maggie. Alex is ''barely'' paying attention to the game, he's not even ''looking at the screen'' roughly a quarter of the time, and still gets farther than he ever has before (and it's implied, father than '''anyone''' on Earth ever has before).
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-->'''Alex''': How many [Starfighters] are left?\\
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-->'''Alex''': How many [Starfighters] (Starfighters) are left?\\
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** It didn't end [[spoiler: with Beta's death, either]]. When Alex returns, the neighbors express confusion as to who had been with them the whole time, citing astounding failure to fix things Alex regularly had to maintain for them. Somehow, it never occurred to ''most of the trailor park'' that there was something wrong with Alex the whole time Beta was in his place.
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** It didn't end [[spoiler: with Beta's death, either]]. When Alex returns, the neighbors neighbor's express confusion as to who had been with them the whole time, citing astounding failure to fix things Alex regularly had to maintain for them. Somehow, it never occurred to ''most of the trailor trailer park'' that there was something wrong with Alex the whole time Beta was in his place.
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* In a FunnyBackgroundEvent, as Alex is annihlating the Ko-Dan fleet in the video game, going for the record, and the whole trailer park comes out to watch. The Command Ship looms into view on the screen, and everyone is in awe that he's reached the command ship and is preparing to attack. One little old lady in the crowd gasps "Ooh, Command Ship! What's a command ship?" Even funnier is an old man describing it as "Air Force One for the aliens."
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--> '''Beta''' (''fails to realize what a horrible mistake he just made'') Should I talk dirty to you?
* In a FunnyBackgroundEvent, as Alex isannihlating annihilating the Ko-Dan fleet in the video game, going for the record, and the whole trailer park comes out to watch. The Command Ship looms into view on the screen, and everyone is in awe that he's reached the command ship and is preparing to attack. One little old lady in the crowd gasps "Ooh, Command Ship! What's a command ship?" Even funnier is an old man describing it as "Air Force One for the aliens."
* In a FunnyBackgroundEvent, as Alex is
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** Though the whole situation is also oddly [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments heartwarming]]. What with the entire community coming together to cheer Alex on.
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* "Back to sleep Louis or I'm telling mom about your Playboys!" ...and ''(repeat)''.
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* "Back Louis catches Alex arguing with Beta!Alex.
-->'''Alex:''' ''(angrily to Louis as he storms out)'' Back to sleep Louis or I'm telling mom about yourPlayboys!" ...Playboys!\\
'''Beta:''' ''(from the lower bunk)'' You're blowin' it, Alex!\\
'''Louis:''' ''(peering down from the upper bunk)'' What the ''shit''?!\\
'''Beta:''' I ''said'', back to sleep, Louis... or I'm tellin' Ma about your Playboys!\\
'''Louis:''' ''(frightened, nods and''(repeat)''.goes back to sleep)''
-->'''Alex:''' ''(angrily to Louis as he storms out)'' Back to sleep Louis or I'm telling mom about your
'''Beta:''' ''(from the lower bunk)'' You're blowin' it, Alex!\\
'''Louis:''' ''(peering down from the upper bunk)'' What the ''shit''?!\\
'''Beta:''' I ''said'', back to sleep, Louis... or I'm tellin' Ma about your Playboys!\\
'''Louis:''' ''(frightened, nods and
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** Even funnier is that for a good portion of the time before the trailer park shows up, Alex and Otis are conversing about his future. It's not until Centauri's voice pops up congratulating Alex on his progress that Otis glances and says, "You're gonna BUST THE RECORD!" Yes, Alex is so badass he was creaming a NintendoHard game while his attention was divided.
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** Even funnier is that for a good portion of the time before the trailer park shows up, Alex and Otis are conversing about his future. It's not until Centauri's voice pops up congratulating Alex on his progress that Otis glances and says, "You're gonna BUST THE RECORD!" Yes, Alex is so badass he was creaming a NintendoHard game while his attention was divided.divided.
* The trailer park folks see Grig for the first time.
-->'''Granny:''' A MONSTER!\\
'''Grig:''' ''(muttering to himself)'' "Monster", ''hmph''.
* The trailer park folks see Grig for the first time.
-->'''Granny:''' A MONSTER!\\
'''Grig:''' ''(muttering to himself)'' "Monster", ''hmph''.
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''(Alex just sits there, looking absolutely incredulous)''
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''(Alex [[OhCrap just sits there, there,]] [[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe looking absolutely incredulous)''incredulous)]]''
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** It didn't end [[spoiler: with Beta's death, either]]. When Alex returns, the neighbors express confusion as to who had been with them the whole time, citing astounding failure to fix things Alex regularly had to maintain for them. Somehow, it never occurred to ''most of the trailor park'' that there was something wrong with Alex the whole time Beta was in his place.
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--> ''''Louis''': ''Diarrhea!''
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--> ''''Louis''': '''Louis''': ''Diarrhea!''
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--> "Diarrhea!"
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--> "Diarrhea!" ''''Louis''': ''Diarrhea!''
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* Louis' disgusted reaction to Alex and Maggie snogging: "Diarrhea!"
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* Louis' disgusted reaction to Alex and Maggie snogging: snogging:
--> "Diarrhea!"
--> "Diarrhea!"
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** The implication that life in the trailer park is so boring that watching Alex playing the game is literally the most exciting thing any of these people have going on.
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** The implication that life in the trailer park is so boring that watching Alex playing the game is literally the most exciting thing any of these people have going on.on.
** Even funnier is that for a good portion of the time before the trailer park shows up, Alex and Otis are conversing about his future. It's not until Centauri's voice pops up congratulating Alex on his progress that Otis glances and says, "You're gonna BUST THE RECORD!" Yes, Alex is so badass he was creaming a NintendoHard game while his attention was divided.
** Even funnier is that for a good portion of the time before the trailer park shows up, Alex and Otis are conversing about his future. It's not until Centauri's voice pops up congratulating Alex on his progress that Otis glances and says, "You're gonna BUST THE RECORD!" Yes, Alex is so badass he was creaming a NintendoHard game while his attention was divided.
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* The moment when Alex realizes he's trapped in a fast-moving car with a man he thinks is ''completely insane.'' ([[AlienAmongUs he doesn't know the half of it]]).
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* The moment when Alex realizes he's trapped locked in the back of a fast-moving car with being driven way too fast by a man he thinks is ''completely insane.'' ([[AlienAmongUs he doesn't know the half of it]]).
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-->'''Centauri''': He reduces me to poverty and he thinks I'm giving him a present! What a world this is!
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-->'''Centauri''': He reduces me to poverty again and he thinks I'm giving him a present! What a world this is!
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-->'''Centauri''': He reduces me to poverty and he thinks I'm giving him a present! What a species!
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-->'''Centauri''': He reduces me to poverty and he thinks I'm giving him a present! What a species!world this is!
