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** At least in the English dub, she goes by the title: Civilian Helper. Which is a ''slight'' improvement.
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* According to the Movie a la Carte manga, the Book of Darkness doesn't actually float. Rather, Reinforce is holding up while invisible. And she trips, leaving Hayate to wonder how a flying magical tome of untold power manages to fall down.
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* According to the Movie a la Carte manga, the Book of Darkness doesn't actually float. Rather, Reinforce is holding it up while invisible. And she trips, leaving Hayate to wonder how a flying magical tome of untold power manages to fall down.
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'''Zafira:''' "[[GrumpyBear Hm...]] ''[[LargeHam I'm Zafira]]''."
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'''Zafira:''' "[[GrumpyBear Hm...]] "Hm... ''[[LargeHam I'm Zafira]]''."
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* The male members of the cast are commentating just before the second major battle between the Wolkenritter and the heroes... and then abruptly decide they need to be someplace else when they realise Nanoha and Fate [[{{Fanservice}} are about to have a]] TransformationSequence.
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** Zafira insisting he's not a familiar but rather a "guardian beast". Arf points out that the two terms basically mean the exact same thing.
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** Zafira insisting he's not a familiar but rather a "guardian beast". Irritated, Arf points out that the two terms basically mean the exact same thing.
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** In a later chapter, when Hayate and Fate are trapped in their Book of Darkness induced dreams they realize that something is wrong... [[SeriousBusiness they haven't made their Christmas Cards yet]]. Cue Reinforce trying to properly write kanji while Dream Linith and Precia try to make Japanese paper (first traditionally, and then with SCIENCE!)
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** In a later chapter, when Hayate and Fate are trapped in their Book of Darkness induced dreams dreams, they realize that something is wrong... [[SeriousBusiness they haven't made their Christmas Cards yet]]. Cue Reinforce trying to properly write kanji while Dream Linith and Precia try to make Japanese paper (first traditionally, and then with SCIENCE!)
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* Vita screwing up Nanoha's name in episode 5.
-->'''Vita:''' Takamachi Nantoka! ("Something-Or-Other")\\
-->'''Vita:''' Takamachi Nantoka! ("Something-Or-Other")\\
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* Episode 5 has several:
** Vita screwing up Nanoha'sname in episode 5.
-->'''Vita:'''name.
--->'''Vita:''' Takamachi Nantoka! ("Something-Or-Other")\\
** Vita screwing up Nanoha's
-->'''Vita:'''
--->'''Vita:''' Takamachi Nantoka! ("Something-Or-Other")\\
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* And another scene with Nanoha and Vita in episode 5. It's doubly funny because it's a ''Theatre/{{Lysistrata}}'' reference of all things.
--> '''Vita:''' "You know, we have a saying in Belka. 'If you're an emissary of peace, don't carry a spear.' Even though you say you want to talk, you come armed, ''idiot''!"
--> '''Nanoha:''' "[[HypocriticalHumor ... The girl who came at me fighting without even a warning is saying that to me?!]]"
--> '''Zafira:''' "And that's not a saying. [[OrphanedPunchline It's the punch line to a joke.]]"
** Also from episode 5, Zafira insisting he's not a familiar but rather a "guardian beast". Arf points out that the two terms basically mean the exact same thing.
--> '''Vita:''' "You know, we have a saying in Belka. 'If you're an emissary of peace, don't carry a spear.' Even though you say you want to talk, you come armed, ''idiot''!"
--> '''Nanoha:''' "[[HypocriticalHumor ... The girl who came at me fighting without even a warning is saying that to me?!]]"
--> '''Zafira:''' "And that's not a saying. [[OrphanedPunchline It's the punch line to a joke.]]"
** Also from episode 5, Zafira insisting he's not a familiar but rather a "guardian beast". Arf points out that the two terms basically mean the exact same thing.
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'''Nanoha:''' "[[HypocriticalHumor ... The girl who came at me fighting without even a warning is saying that to
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'''Zafira:''' "And that's not a saying. [[OrphanedPunchline It's the punch line to a joke.]]"
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--> '''Shamal:''' "Hello, I'm Shamal."
--> '''Signum:''' "I'm Signum''.
--> '''Vita:''' "And me, Vita and..."
--> '''Zafira:''' "...me."
--> '''Miura:''' "Well, master, your name."
--> '''Zafira:''' "[[GrumpyBear Hm...]] ''[[LargeHam I'm Zafira]]''."
--> '''Signum:''' "I'm Signum''.
--> '''Vita:''' "And me, Vita and..."
--> '''Zafira:''' "...me."
--> '''Miura:''' "Well, master, your name."
--> '''Zafira:''' "[[GrumpyBear Hm...]] ''[[LargeHam I'm Zafira]]''."
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--> '''Shamal:''' "Hello, I'm Shamal."
-->"\\
'''Signum:''' "I'mSignum''.
-->Signum''.\\
'''Vita:''' "And me, Vita and..."
-->"\\
'''Zafira:''' "...me."
-->"\\
'''Miura:''' "Well, master, your name."
-->"\\
'''Zafira:''' "[[GrumpyBear Hm...]] ''[[LargeHam I'm Zafira]]''."
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'''Signum:''' "I'm
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'''Vita:''' "And me, Vita and...
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'''Zafira:''' "...me.
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'''Miura:''' "Well, master, your name.
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'''Zafira:''' "[[GrumpyBear Hm...]] ''[[LargeHam I'm Zafira]]''."
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* Episode 1, Yuuno rightfully getting upset that Chrono just calls him a ferret instead of his own name.
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* Episode 1, Yuuno rightfully getting upset that Chrono just calls him a ferret [[EmbarrassingNickname ferret]] instead of referring to him by his own proper name.
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* Vita screwing up Nanoha's name.
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* Vita screwing up Nanoha's name.name in episode 5.
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* And another scene with Nanoha and Vita. It's doubly funny because it's a ''Theatre/{{Lysistrata}}'' reference of all things.
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* And another scene with Nanoha and Vita.Vita in episode 5. It's doubly funny because it's a ''Theatre/{{Lysistrata}}'' reference of all things.
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* Yuuno rightfully getting upset that Chrono just calls him a ferret instead of his own name.
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* Episode 1, Yuuno rightfully getting upset that Chrono just calls him a ferret instead of his own name.
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* [[http://www.citymanga.com/magical_girl_lyrical_nanoha_as/chapter-4/15/ From the manga,]] Suzuka defeats Fate by knockout... in a game of ''dodgeball.''
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* [[http://www.citymanga.com/magical_girl_lyrical_nanoha_as/chapter-4/15/ From the manga,]] Suzuka defeats Fate by knockout... in a game of ''dodgeball.''''[[DodgeballIsHell dodgeball.]]''
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* The re-entering {{Eyecatch}} in episode 6 was of Nanoha dreaming that she was eating steamed yams. And then we find out that she's just dreaming and [[MarshmallowDream what she's "munching" on]] is ''Yunno'' (ferret form, of course).
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* [[TheStoic Chrono]] [[NotSoStoic getting flustered and dropping things]] after Fate, who is considering being adopted by his mother, calls him "[[JapaneseSiblingTerminology onii-chan]]" (big brother) in the second sound stage.
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* [[TheStoic Chrono]] [[NotSoStoic getting flustered and dropping things]] after Fate, who is considering being adopted by his mother, calls him "[[JapaneseSiblingTerminology "[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseSiblingTerminology onii-chan]]" (big brother) in the second sound stage.