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* Noel wakes up Channing... only to find that he slept in nothing but his underwear.
* [[TheDitz Carmen]]. Just Carmen. She is an hyperactive otaku who often makes references to books she read during the adventure. Some moments include:
** When the party encounters the first boss... [[KillerRabbit A RABBIT]]!
* [[TheDitz Carmen]]. Just Carmen. She is an hyperactive otaku who often makes references to books she read during the adventure. Some moments include:
** When the party encounters the first boss... [[KillerRabbit A RABBIT]]!
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* Noel wakes up Channing... only to find that he slept in nothing but his underwear.
underwear. [[spoiler:Even funnier when it’s revealed [[StraightGay Noel likely enjoyed the view]].]]
* [[TheDitz Carmen]]. Just Carmen. She isan hyperactive otaku a [[GenkiGirl hyperactive]] {{otaku}} who often makes references to books she read during the adventure. Some moments include:
** When the party encounters the [[WarmupBoss firstboss...boss]]... [[KillerRabbit A RABBIT]]!
* [[TheDitz Carmen]]. Just Carmen. She is
** When the party encounters the [[WarmupBoss first
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--> '''Channing''' ''(about Carmen)'': "Even when she's quiet she's loud."
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how the battle system work, they can miss their attacks. Yes, '''they can miss a wall!''' Oh, and they can poison it too.
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how the battle system work, they can miss their attacks. Yes, '''they can miss a wall!''' Oh, and they can poison it too.
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--> '''Channing''' ''(about Carmen)'': [[GenkiGirl Carmen]])'': "Even when she's quiet she's loud."
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how the battle system work, they can miss their attacks. Yes,'''they '''[[EpicFail they can miss a wall!''' wall!]]''' Oh, and they can poison it too.
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how the battle system work, they can miss their attacks. Yes,
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* Zevahn can't go anywhere in the castle without one of his "allies" interrupting his walk to question him and say to him that he/she doesn't trust him. After a moment, it may look like a running gag.
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* Zevahn can't go anywhere in the castle without one of his "allies" interrupting his walk to question him and say to him that he/she [[ObviouslyEvil doesn't trust him. him]]. After a moment, it may look like a running gag.RunningGag.
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--> '''Zevahn''' ''(to the heroes)'': "I can read you all like books. Badly written ones, but books nevertheless."
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* Zevahn "mourns" the late Xanatos.
--> '''Zevahn''': "and Xanatos... Well he did know until you fools pounded him into hamburger."
--> '''Zevahn''': "and Xanatos... Well he did know until you fools pounded him into hamburger."
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Sinkholes. Superlatives. bad grammar. Misuse. Beyond The Impossible is incorrect because it is justified by the battle system.
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* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how the battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] '''[[EpicFail They can miss a wall!]]''' Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
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* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how the battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] '''[[EpicFail They Yes, '''they can miss a wall!]]''' wall!''' Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].too.
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* Zevahn can't go anywhere in the castle without one of his "allies" interrupting his walk to question him and say him he/she doesn't trust him. After a moment, it may look like a running gag.
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* Zevahn can't go anywhere in the castle without one of his "allies" interrupting his walk to question him and say to him that he/she doesn't trust him. After a moment, it may look like a running gag.
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** After the victoyr over the fearsome rabbit:
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** After the victoyr victory over the fearsome rabbit:
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--> '''Zevahn''' (to the three generals, who cornered him)'': "What is this? "Gang-Up-On-Zevahn" Day?"
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--> '''Zevahn''' (to ''(to the three generals, who cornered him)'': "What is this? "Gang-Up-On-Zevahn" Day?"
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--> '''Zevahn''' ''(to [[BlackNight Vaa]][[TinTyrant rn]])'': "This coming from the empty headed dult who can't so much as cough without worrying his head'll fall off."
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--> '''Zevahn''' ''(to [[BlackNight [[BlackKnight Vaa]][[TinTyrant rn]])'': "This coming from the empty headed dult who can't so much as cough without worrying his head'll fall off."
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--> '''Channing''': ''(about Carmen)'' "Even when she's quiet she's loud."
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] '''[[EpicFail They can miss a wall!]]''' Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] '''[[EpicFail They can miss a wall!]]''' Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
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--> '''Channing''': '''Channing''' ''(about Carmen)'' Carmen)'': "Even when she's quiet she's loud."
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to howth the battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] '''[[EpicFail They can miss a wall!]]''' Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].too]].
* Zevahn's trollish antics can sometimes be a delight to watch, especially when it's not your characters who are trolled.
--> '''Zevahn''' ''(to [[BlackNight Vaa]][[TinTyrant rn]])'': "This coming from the empty headed dult who can't so much as cough without worrying his head'll fall off."
--> '''Zevahn''' ''(to Noita, after evading her questions during several minutes)'': "You really want to know? In that case, I'm not telling~!"
* Zevahn can't go anywhere in the castle without one of his "allies" interrupting his walk to question him and say him he/she doesn't trust him. After a moment, it may look like a running gag.
--> '''Zevahn''' (to the three generals, who cornered him)'': "What is this? "Gang-Up-On-Zevahn" Day?"
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how
* Zevahn's trollish antics can sometimes be a delight to watch, especially when it's not your characters who are trolled.
--> '''Zevahn''' ''(to [[BlackNight Vaa]][[TinTyrant rn]])'': "This coming from the empty headed dult who can't so much as cough without worrying his head'll fall off."
--> '''Zevahn''' ''(to Noita, after evading her questions during several minutes)'': "You really want to know? In that case, I'm not telling~!"
* Zevahn can't go anywhere in the castle without one of his "allies" interrupting his walk to question him and say him he/she doesn't trust him. After a moment, it may look like a running gag.
--> '''Zevahn''' (to the three generals, who cornered him)'': "What is this? "Gang-Up-On-Zevahn" Day?"
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* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] [[EpicFail '''They can miss a wall!''' ]] Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
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* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] [[EpicFail '''They '''[[EpicFail They can miss a wall!''' ]] wall!]]''' Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
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* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] [[EpicFail '''They can miss a wall!''']] Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
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* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] [[EpicFail '''They can miss a wall!''']] wall!''' ]] Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
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* Whenever Channing is in a DeadpanSnarker mood.
--> '''Channing''': ''(about Carmen)'' "Even when she's quiet she's loud."
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] [[EpicFail '''They can miss a wall!''']] Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
--> '''Channing''': ''(about Carmen)'' "Even when she's quiet she's loud."
* During the fight in the sewers against the swarm of rats summoned by Zevahn, the heroes have to destroy a wall in order to escape. However, due to how th battle system work, they can actually miss their attacks. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Yes.]] [[EpicFail '''They can miss a wall!''']] Oh, and [[BeyondTheImpossible they can poison it too]].
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** Her reaction when she meets Milo and Elijah.
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** Her reaction when she meets [[CatFolk Milo and Elijah.Elijah]].
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** Her mother being an [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents Amazingly Embarrassing Parent]].
--> '''Carmen''': "I said I'll be careful, Mom. I never break my promises to you."
--> '''Valencia''': "Except when it comes to cleaning your room..."
--> '''Carmen''': "[=MOOOM=]!"
** When Channing asks a question that has an obvious answer.
--> '''Carmen''': "Abraca-duh, Chan!"
--> '''Carmen''': "I said I'll be careful, Mom. I never break my promises to you."
--> '''Valencia''': "Except when it comes to cleaning your room..."
--> '''Carmen''': "[=MOOOM=]!"
** When Channing asks a question that has an obvious answer.
--> '''Carmen''': "Abraca-duh, Chan!"
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* Marina's HoistByHerOwnPetard and subsequent HumiliationConga after the incident with the Cheshires.
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* Marina's HoistByHerOwnPetard and subsequent HumiliationConga after the incident with the Cheshires.Cheshires.
* Some of the character's fates from the WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue.
-->[[spoiler:Isabelle was last seen fleeing the police screaming "You'll never take me alive!" She hasn't been seen since.]]
-->[[spoiler:Jacque thought his talents as a chef were great; he tried to get signed on at a five-star restaurant. He only made it to three-star.]]
* Some of the character's fates from the WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue.
-->[[spoiler:Isabelle was last seen fleeing the police screaming "You'll never take me alive!" She hasn't been seen since.]]
-->[[spoiler:Jacque thought his talents as a chef were great; he tried to get signed on at a five-star restaurant. He only made it to three-star.]]
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--> '''Carmen''': "[[{{Squee}}SQUEEEEEEEEE!]] Oh my God, they're so adorable! I just wanna take them home with me!"
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--> '''Carmen''': "[[{{Squee}}SQUEEEEEEEEE!]] "SQUEEEEEEEEE! Oh my God, they're so adorable! I just wanna take them home with me!"
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--> '''Carmen''': [[Anime/SailorMoon "I feel like a magic moon princess who fights evil with her four girlfriends."]]
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--> '''Carmen''': [[Anime/SailorMoon "I feel like a magic moon princess who fights evil with her four girlfriends."]]"]]
** Her reaction when she meets Milo and Elijah.
--> '''Carmen''': "[[{{Squee}}SQUEEEEEEEEE!]] Oh my God, they're so adorable! I just wanna take them home with me!"
* Marina's HoistByHerOwnPetard and subsequent HumiliationConga after the incident with the Cheshires.
** Her reaction when she meets Milo and Elijah.
--> '''Carmen''': "[[{{Squee}}SQUEEEEEEEEE!]] Oh my God, they're so adorable! I just wanna take them home with me!"
* Marina's HoistByHerOwnPetard and subsequent HumiliationConga after the incident with the Cheshires.
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* Noel wakes up Channing... only to find that he slept in nothing but his underwear.
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* Noel wakes up Channing... only to find that he slept in nothing but his underwear.underwear.
* [[TheDitz Carmen]]. Just Carmen. She is an hyperactive otaku who often makes references to books she read during the adventure. Some moments include:
** When the party encounters the first boss... [[KillerRabbit A RABBIT]]!
--> '''Carmen''': [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail "Anyone got a hand grenade?"]]
** After the victoyr over the fearsome rabbit:
--> '''Carmen''': [[Anime/SailorMoon "I feel like a magic moon princess who fights evil with her four girlfriends."]]
* [[TheDitz Carmen]]. Just Carmen. She is an hyperactive otaku who often makes references to books she read during the adventure. Some moments include:
** When the party encounters the first boss... [[KillerRabbit A RABBIT]]!
--> '''Carmen''': [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail "Anyone got a hand grenade?"]]
** After the victoyr over the fearsome rabbit:
--> '''Carmen''': [[Anime/SailorMoon "I feel like a magic moon princess who fights evil with her four girlfriends."]]
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The funny moments of the game Lunarosse.
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* The prince comments on Rani's poor choice in clothes.
--> "And really? You're going to wear pink on a stealth mission?"
* [[{{Troll}} Zevhan]] being SophisticatedAsHell in a medieval setting.
--> '''Zevhan''': "You know what they say about assuming. It makes an [=ASS=] out of [=YOU=] and [=ME=]."
* Noel wakes up Channing... only to find that he slept in nothing but his underwear.
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* The prince comments on Rani's poor choice in clothes.
--> "And really? You're going to wear pink on a stealth mission?"
* [[{{Troll}} Zevhan]] being SophisticatedAsHell in a medieval setting.
--> '''Zevhan''': "You know what they say about assuming. It makes an [=ASS=] out of [=YOU=] and [=ME=]."
* Noel wakes up Channing... only to find that he slept in nothing but his underwear.
