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** During the big rescue in the finals, the mixed language levels of the following line can bring tears of laughter in the middle of what already includes ManlyTears and TenderTears [[note]][[IncrediblyLamePun (good thing the scene is already in a river)]][[/note]]:
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** During the big rescue in the finals, the mixed language levels of the following line can bring tears of laughter in the middle of what already includes ManlyTears and TenderTears [[note]][[IncrediblyLamePun [[note]][[{{Pun}} (good thing the scene is already in a river)]][[/note]]:
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-->''Isn't that the headmasters car?''
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* In Episode 3, Mako's reaction to learning that they need to be at a friendly match by 6AM... which means she needs to get up at ''5AM''. She nearly facefaults, before trying to quit TheTeam. To make sure she wakes up on time, said team drives the Panzer IV to her house and fires a blank shell from the main gun... which just barely wakes her up!
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* In Episode 3, Mako's reaction to learning that they need to be at a friendly match by 6AM... which means she needs to get up at ''5AM''. She nearly facefaults, before trying to quit TheTeam.the team. To make sure she wakes up on time, said team drives the Panzer IV to her house and fires a blank shell from the main gun... which just barely wakes her up!
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Homoerotic Dream has been renamed to Awkwardly Gay Dream and requires explicit statement of sexuality as per TRS.
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* Rin's HomoeroticDream in chapter 3 of Ribbon Warrior is a bizarre fantasy of her being ridden around like a horse by Shizuka in medieval Japan.
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* Rin's HomoeroticDream AwkwardlyGayDream in chapter 3 of Ribbon Warrior is a bizarre fantasy of her being ridden around like a horse by Shizuka in medieval Japan.
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Mention of rank around "Oddball"
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*** Additional points for [[ShownTheirWork getting Oddball's unit right.]]
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*** Additional points for [[ShownTheirWork getting Oddball's unit right.]]]] And possibly rank- "Sergeant Third Class" is a translation of "Santō rikusō", equivalent to Sergeant E5 in the US Army. It's muddied by the Army referring to every rank between ("Buck") Sergeant and Master Sergeant as simply "Sergeant" in casual conversation, which is unusual in most militaries.
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A Date With Rosie Palms is no longer a trope
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* [[RuleThirtyFour Nobody is surprised that adult video versions of the characters soon appeared]]. But fans ([[OrSoIHeard even those who haven't watched the vids themselves]]) found quite amusing than the ones depicting CasanovaWannabe, [[RunningGag never-gets-a-boyfriend]] [[UrbanLegendLoveLife Saori]] are... [[ADateWithRosiePalms solo]] [[NeverLiveItDown scenes]]
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* [[RuleThirtyFour Nobody is surprised that adult video versions of the characters soon appeared]]. But fans ([[OrSoIHeard even those who haven't watched the vids themselves]]) found quite amusing than the ones depicting CasanovaWannabe, [[RunningGag never-gets-a-boyfriend]] [[UrbanLegendLoveLife Saori]] are... [[ADateWithRosiePalms solo]] [[NeverLiveItDown scenes]][[MasturbationMeansSexualFrustration solo scenes]].
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*** Additional points for getting Oddball's unit right.
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*** Additional points for [[ShownTheirWork getting Oddball's unit right.]]
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'''Yukari''': Uh well, the 6th Armored Division, [[Film/KellysHeroes Odd Ball, Sergeant Third Class]]!\\
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'''Yukari''': Uh well, [[Film/KellysHeroes the 6th Armored Division, [[Film/KellysHeroes Odd Ball, Oddball, Sergeant Third Class]]!\\
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* A number of voice actresses have gone on record (ie. Creator/HitomiNabatame, Creator/AyanaTaketatsu, and Creator/AsamiSeto; who each provided voices for Erika, Alice, and Kinuyo, respectively) admitting that when they were first offered a role for this show they thought the show was going to be a {{Fanservice}}-heavy Anime [[PantyShot with panties]] [[PunBasedTitle based on the title]].
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* A number of voice actresses have gone on record (ie. Creator/HitomiNabatame, Creator/AyanaTaketatsu, and Creator/AsamiSeto; who each provided voices for Erika, Alice, and Kinuyo, respectively) admitting that when they were first offered a role for this show they thought the show was going to be a {{Fanservice}}-heavy Anime [[PantyShot with panties]] panties [[PunBasedTitle based on the title]].
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--> '''Anzu''': Shut up! The ankou will protect Ōarai FOREVER!!!
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* The second OVA's [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus *pam line]]. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xU4ofXAyXxM Complete with the bleeps]] AND the viking ship.
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* The second OVA's [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus *pam line]]. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xU4ofXAyXxM Complete with the bleeps]] AND the viking ship. The English dub doesn't even pretend to censor, AND gives some of the girls the required accents to boot.
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Unnecessary Pothole is unnecessary
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** In the manga, they mention that was done mainly with the smallish Japanese tanks. Cue [[RealityEnsues Saori's legs not reaching Hana's shoulders]] in their roomier German tank and Miho handing her a stick to poke Hanna's shoulders with.
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** In the manga, they mention that was done mainly with the smallish Japanese tanks. Cue [[RealityEnsues Saori's legs not reaching Hana's shoulders]] shoulders in their roomier German tank and Miho handing her a stick to poke Hanna's shoulders with.
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* In Chapter 63 ''Motto Love Love Sakusen'', when the tankery school heads visit Oarai, while Shiho goes and takes the tour seriously, Chiyo sneaks off to try to bribe the Anglerfish Teams parents (in Mako's case, grandparent) to get their kids to enroll in her university despite only being [[GradeSkipper 2nd years]]. All of them react in hilarious ways.
**Mako's grandmother dons a pair of shades and starts acting like her daughter's agent.
**Yukari's parents get dollar and yen signs for eyes and can't swooning over the money.
**Hana's mom is reluctant at first, saying that she won't do tankery in college, then Chiyo offers her access to a collection of rare ''ikebana'' vases causing her to change her mind.
**Chiyo also offers to mold the Anglerfish into commanders, forming a new Bermuda Trio. When trying to explain this to Saori, she ends up comparing them to Pravda's Nonna and Katyusha, with Mako riding on Saori shoulders. The latter, of course balks.
**This all ends when Shiho comes in and catches Chiyo, using the nickname that she hates. At first she gets mad, until she realizes that Shiho caught her in the act causing her to start sweating.
**That still doesn't stop her. When Shiho humbly asks the Oarai parents and the Anglerfish Team to look after Miho because she's never had friends before, Chiyo butts in saying that Arisu didn't have friends either while also offering them money.
**Mako's grandmother dons a pair of shades and starts acting like her daughter's agent.
**Yukari's parents get dollar and yen signs for eyes and can't swooning over the money.
**Hana's mom is reluctant at first, saying that she won't do tankery in college, then Chiyo offers her access to a collection of rare ''ikebana'' vases causing her to change her mind.
**Chiyo also offers to mold the Anglerfish into commanders, forming a new Bermuda Trio. When trying to explain this to Saori, she ends up comparing them to Pravda's Nonna and Katyusha, with Mako riding on Saori shoulders. The latter, of course balks.
**This all ends when Shiho comes in and catches Chiyo, using the nickname that she hates. At first she gets mad, until she realizes that Shiho caught her in the act causing her to start sweating.
**That still doesn't stop her. When Shiho humbly asks the Oarai parents and the Anglerfish Team to look after Miho because she's never had friends before, Chiyo butts in saying that Arisu didn't have friends either while also offering them money.
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** Team Hippo tries to hide from an oncoming enemy tank in the alley ways, reasoning that the lack of a turret on their StuG means that it would be harder to see. They forgot the ''massive banners'' they stuck on it extends far above the alley and the fact that the alley only has wooden fences. Cue the enemy tank one-shotting them through the fence mid-sentence.
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** Team Hippo tries to hide from an oncoming enemy tank in the alley ways, reasoning that the lack of a turret on their StuG [=StuG=] means that it would be harder to see. They forgot the ''massive banners'' they stuck on it extends far above the alley and the fact that the alley only has wooden fences. Cue the enemy tank one-shotting them through the fence mid-sentence.
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* Chapter 61 of ''Motto Love Love Sakusen'' shows that BC Frerdom's calm, cool, collected Marie is actually afraid of the dentist. When she does get a toothache (complete with germs represented by tiny versions of Darjeeling and Orange Pekoe), Rena and Ruka have to chase her all over. This gets to the point where they even come across the other schools' teams, including Ooarai's team practicing the Anko Dance (complete with Marie, Rena and Ruka wearing the Anko costume as well).
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* Chapter 61 of ''Motto Love Love Sakusen'' shows that BC Frerdom's Freedom's calm, cool, collected Marie is actually afraid of the dentist. When she does get a toothache (complete with germs represented by tiny versions of Darjeeling and Orange Pekoe), Rena and Ruka have to chase her all over. This gets to the point where they even come across the other schools' teams, including Ooarai's team practicing the Anko Dance (complete with Marie, Rena and Ruka wearing the Anko costume as well).
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* A number of voice actresses have gone on record (ie. Creator/HitomiNabatame, Creator/AyanaTaketatsu, and Creator/AsamiSeto; who each provided voices for Erika, Alice, and Kinuyo, respectively) admitting that when they were first offered a role for this show they thought the show was going to be a {{Fanservice}}-heavy Anime [[PantyShot with panties]] [[PunBasedTitle based on the title]].
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** And when Miho went back home.
pay her family a visit, Shiho threw an overglorified "welcome back" celebration for her. Cue Miho fleeing back to Oarai in panic. [[SarcasmMode Good job, Shiho.]]
pay her family a visit, Shiho threw an overglorified "welcome back" celebration for her. Cue Miho fleeing back to Oarai in panic. [[SarcasmMode Good job, Shiho.]]
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** And when Miho went back home.
home to pay her family a visit, Shiho threw an overglorified "welcome back" celebration for her. Cue Miho fleeing back to Oarai in panic. [[SarcasmMode Good job, Shiho.]]
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** And when Miho went back home to pay her family a visit, Shiho threw an overglorified "welcome back" celebration for her. Cue Miho fleeing back to Oarai in panic. [[SarcasmMode Good job, Shiho.]]
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** And when Miho went back home to home.
pay her family a visit, Shiho threw an overglorified "welcome back" celebration for her. Cue Miho fleeing back to Oarai in panic. [[SarcasmMode Good job, Shiho.]]]]
* Chapter 61 of ''Motto Love Love Sakusen'' shows that BC Frerdom's calm, cool, collected Marie is actually afraid of the dentist. When she does get a toothache (complete with germs represented by tiny versions of Darjeeling and Orange Pekoe), Rena and Ruka have to chase her all over. This gets to the point where they even come across the other schools' teams, including Ooarai's team practicing the Anko Dance (complete with Marie, Rena and Ruka wearing the Anko costume as well).
pay her family a visit, Shiho threw an overglorified "welcome back" celebration for her. Cue Miho fleeing back to Oarai in panic. [[SarcasmMode Good job, Shiho.
* Chapter 61 of ''Motto Love Love Sakusen'' shows that BC Frerdom's calm, cool, collected Marie is actually afraid of the dentist. When she does get a toothache (complete with germs represented by tiny versions of Darjeeling and Orange Pekoe), Rena and Ruka have to chase her all over. This gets to the point where they even come across the other schools' teams, including Ooarai's team practicing the Anko Dance (complete with Marie, Rena and Ruka wearing the Anko costume as well).
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** Also when she and Darjeeling start the episode having tea, after St Gloriana's has been knocked out by Kuoromorimine in the semi-finals Darjeeling warns them to practice for the semi-finals, whilst Katyusha says that Oarai are just a no-name school. Darjeeling points out that they are led by a Nishizumi:
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** Also when she and Darjeeling start the episode having tea, after St Gloriana's has been knocked out by Kuoromorimine Kuromorimine in the semi-finals Darjeeling warns them to practice for the semi-finals, whilst Katyusha says that Oarai are just a no-name school. Darjeeling points out that they are led by a Nishizumi:
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** Then, when Erika came to the Nishizumi household to check up on Maho (who passed out from a team tank battle with Shiho), she ends up recieving Shiho's hospitality and ''passed out from eating too much''.
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** Then, when Erika came to the Nishizumi household to check up on Maho (who passed out from a team tank battle with Shiho), she ends up recieving receiving Shiho's hospitality and ''passed out from eating too much''.
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-->'''Hana''': At least they have personality?
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-->'''Hana''': At least they have personality?personality, wouldn't you say?
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-->'''Hana''': At least they have character?
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-->'''Hana''': At least they have character?personality?
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'''Hana''': At least they have character?
'''Saori''': I believe the word you're looking for is "[[TheAllegedCar rust]]."
'''Saori''': I believe the word you're looking for is "[[TheAllegedCar rust]]."
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* In Episode 1, after the tanker class gathers for the first time, the door to the garage where the school's tanks have been stored for the last 20 years gets opened. The reveal of the condition of the tanks is not what anyone was expecting, to say the least.
'''Hana''': At least they have character?
'''Saori''': I believe the word you're looking for is "[[TheAllegedCar rust]]."
'''Hana''': At least they have character?
'''Saori''': I believe the word you're looking for is "[[TheAllegedCar rust]]."
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* Rukuriri's EpicFail entrance into the Cauldron Tournament.
--> '''Rukuriri''' Here I am! For I the [[LargeHam Great Rukuriri]], [[TemptingFate have taken upon myself to give Bonple a swift kick to the ass]]!
--> '''Rukuriri''' Here I am! For I the [[LargeHam Great Rukuriri]], [[TemptingFate have taken upon myself to give Bonple a swift kick to the ass]]!
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** The girls look at some old pictures of Yukari in her room, including one where she has a terrible haircut instead of her signature style. Yukari mentions that she didn't have a lot of friends then because of her tank obsession. Saori immediately suggests that it may have instead been because of that haircut.
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* The over the top facial expressions made by some of the characters in ''Ribbon Warrior'' are both [[NightmareFace unsettling]] and hilarious in how they subvert the Moe art style the main series is known for.
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* The While the over the top facial expressions made by some of the characters in ''Ribbon Warrior'' are both can be quite [[NightmareFace unsettling]] and unsettling]], but at the same time they are also kind of hilarious in due to how they subvert the Moe art style the main series is known for.
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* The over the top facial expressions made by some of the characters in Ribbon Warrior are hilarious in how they subvert the Moe art style the main series is known for.
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* The over the top facial expressions made by some of the characters in Ribbon Warrior ''Ribbon Warrior'' are both [[NightmareFace unsettling]] and hilarious in how they subvert the Moe art style the main series is known for.
