A large part of the fic's humor comes from Shikako's running commentary on numerous situations. One such point is when the squad first encounters Zabuza as he scares them by... talking to them while hiding in the mist. While the effect is actually scary, Shikako can't help but remark on this and wonder why he's still talking.
Shikako(in her head): Hello, my name is Zabuza Momochi and I'll be your assassin this evening.
The entirety of the water fight scene. Especially when Haku pushed Zabuza into the water.
Come to the dark side, we have cookies.
The "fight" between Kiba and Shikako in chapter 32.
Chapter 61: "Everyone is making such dramatic entrances today."
The Land of Tea arc, where Aoi pulls out the Sword of the Thunder God and the first thought Shikako thinks is 'Thatů is a lightsaber'
During the same fight, she uses his own Trash Talk tactic against him. Seeing normally-civilShikakoannoyed enough by an opponent to go all out with the trash talk is hilarious enough, but she does it... by accusing him of sleeping his way into his rank.
"With hair like that, you look like a girl from the right angle."
Jiraiya: You kids do seem to land yourselves right in the middle of some serious messes.
Kakashi: You don't know half of it. I've been gone for a week and come back to find they've done an A-rank without me.
Sasuke:(smirking) Three. Technically, we did three A-ranks without you.
Sasuke: One of them started aboutů half an hour after you left.
Kakashi: Stop talking. Just... stop.
Chapter 91's three nation fist bump, in which the Chunin exam students from Konoha, Suna, and Kiri set up an alliance in a way their superiors could never understand.
When Shikako has her first fight of the second Chunin exam tournament, she defeats her opponent way too easily for her tastes. So she tries to monologue her way into a more interesting fight, to no avail. The best part is the reaction from the Kage's box.
Tsunade: Who the hell taught her to monologue in the middle of a fight like that?
Most of the chapter of Sunshine Sidestories could count as a CMOF.
In her third round match against Gaara there are several. Some are Shikako's internal commentary due to the adrenaline, such as singing "I felt like I could fly. Red Bull gives you wings~" to herself. Some are Gaara's reactions, as there are several points where his eyes go very wide in reaction to Shikako's actions, including her opening gambit of changing the entire field, but the crowning moment of the fight has to be after Shikako has lashed out with several strikes from the Sword of the Thunder God. She points it at him like a gun, braces herself, and lights up ten little lights wrapped around her arm.
"Lightning Style," I shouted, because volume meant something, "Super Beam Cannon."
I flicked the sword on, blade pointing straight at him.
By this point, there was no disbelief. Gaara didn't have the momentary pause of 'does she mean it'. Didn't stop to consider.
Which was good. Because I was so full of shit.
Then she uses a scroll to seal away his Shukaku Shield.