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* Bateman revealing off-hand that he hates mimes when he briefly considers killing a clown, but decides against it because he's too dorky to kill.
-->"Though if he'd been a mime, odds are he'd already be dead."
-->"Though if he'd been a mime, odds are he'd already be dead."
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* Chapter 20, A Glimpse of a Thursday Afternoon, starts in media res (and in the middle of a sentence) with Patrick at a phone booth having some sort of mental breakdown. The entire chapter is him stumbling around Downtown New York, delirious and panicking. His ways of trying to calm himself include buying rats to torture later (which he forgets at another store), shoplifting a can of ham to eat out of the tin and.puking it back up, and finally wandering into a Jewosh deli (that he mistakes for a high-class restaurant that he has a reservation for) and trying to order a burger with cheese and a milkshake, only to be told repeatedly that they only serve kosher dishes. He finally gets angry and leaves, with the chapter ending mid-sentence as he continues his delirious journey.
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* Chapter 20, A Glimpse of a Thursday Afternoon, starts in media res (and in the middle of a sentence) with Patrick at a phone booth having some sort of mental breakdown. The entire chapter is him stumbling around Downtown New York, delirious and panicking. His ways of trying to calm himself include buying rats to torture later (which he forgets at another store), shoplifting a can of ham to eat out of the tin and.and puking it back up, and finally wandering into a Jewosh Jewish deli (that he mistakes for a high-class restaurant that he has a reservation for) and trying to order a burger with cheese and a milkshake, only to be told repeatedly that they only serve kosher dishes. He finally gets angry and leaves, with the chapter ending mid-sentence as he continues his delirious journey.
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* Chapter 20, A Glimpse of a Thursday Afternoon, starts in media res (and in the middle of a sentence) with Patrick at a phone booth having some sort of mental breakdown. The entire chapter is him stumbling around Downtown New York, delirious and panicking. His ways of trying to calm himself include buying rats to torture later (which he forgets at another store), shoplifting a can of ham to eat out of the tin and.puking it back up, and finally wandering into a Jewosh deli (that he mistakes for a high-class restaurant that he has a reservation for) and trying to order a burger with cheese and a milkshake, only to be told repeatedly that they only serve kosher dishes. He finally gets angry and leaves, with the chapter ending mid-sentence as he continues his delirious journey.
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!! In both the book and movie:
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[[caption-width-right:350:Rule [[LOL69 #69]] of Patrick Bateman: if you're not having sex in front of a wall-to-wall mirror, you're doing it wrong.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Rule [[LOL69 #69]] of Patrick Bateman: if you're not having sex in front of a wall-to-wall mirror, you're doing it wrong.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Rule [[LOL69 #69]] of Patrick Bateman: if you're not having sex in front of a wall-to-wall mirror, you're doing it wrong.]]
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---> "Marcus and I even go to the same barber, though I have a slightly better haircut."
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* A scene in the book (filmed but omitted from the movie) features Patrick painfully [[TotallyRadical trying to be hip]] and familiar with a UsefulNotes/{{Rastafarian|ism}}, calling him "Marley" and saying "...yeah, we be jammin'..." to himself after being brushed off.
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* A scene in the book (filmed but omitted from the movie) features Patrick painfully [[TotallyRadical trying to be hip]] and familiar with a UsefulNotes/{{Rastafarian|ism}}, Rastafarian, calling him "Marley" and saying "...yeah, we be jammin'..." to himself after being brushed off.
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---> I stick out my hand at a crooked angle, trying to mimic a rapper. "Hey," I say. "I'm fresh. The freshest, y'know-- like, uh, def-- the deffest." I take a sip of champagne. "You know-- def."\\
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*** Paul’s total obliviousness to the red flags that he’s about to be murdered and Patrick’s enthusiastic admissions to them really sell the absurdity of the entire scene. In particular, when Paul asks if Patrick is wearing a rain coat (so Paul’s gore doesn’t splash on Patrick’s pristine suit), Patrick gives a giddy “Yes, it IS!”
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*** Paul’s Paul's total obliviousness to the red flags that he’s he's about to be murdered and Patrick’s Patrick's enthusiastic admissions to them really sell the absurdity of the entire scene. In particular, when Paul asks if Patrick is wearing a rain coat (so Paul’s Paul's gore doesn’t doesn't splash on Patrick’s Patrick's pristine suit), Patrick gives a giddy “Yes, "Yes, it IS!” IS!"
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-->'''Luis''': Patrick!\\
'''Patrick''': '''WHAT IS IT?!'''\\
'''Luis''': Where are you going?\\
'''Patrick''': [[CharacterCatchphrase I have to return some video tapes]].
'''Patrick''': '''WHAT IS IT?!'''\\
'''Luis''': Where are you going?\\
'''Patrick''': [[CharacterCatchphrase I have to return some video tapes]].
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'''Patrick''': [[{{Catchphrase}} I have to return some video tapes]].
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'''Patrick''': [[{{Catchphrase}} [[CharacterCatchphrase I have to return some video tapes]].
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** Not to mention, [[FailedASpotCheck none of them notice that "Acquisitions" is spelled wrong on every business card we see]].
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** Not to mention, [[FailedASpotCheck none of them notice that "Acquisitions" is spelled wrong on every business card we see]]. And every single one of them shows each member of the board is apparently Vice President.
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** Not to mention, [[FailedASpotCheck none of them notice that "Acquisitions" is spelled wrong on every business card we see]].
