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* Czernobog amiably reminds Shadow, by tapping him in the forehead, that when the war will be over he'll bean him with a hammer. Shadow, in the same tone, responds "Yes, but if you do that again, I'll break that finger".
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* Czernobog amiably reminds Shadow, by tapping him in the forehead, that when the war will be over over, he'll bean him with a hammer. Shadow, in the same tone, responds "Yes, but if you do that again, I'll break that finger".
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* The IncrediblyLamePun that is Loki's alias is pretty funny.
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* The IncrediblyLamePun {{punny name}} that is Loki's alias is pretty funny.
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-->''Oh for the mermaids of Weeki Wachee!"
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* Wednesday is not amused by Nancy's stories and says Anansi promised to leave the talking to him.
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* Wednesday is not amused by Nancy's stories (the aforementioned Tiger balls story, which is funny in itself) and says Anansi promised to leave the talking to him.
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'''Shadow:''' Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
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'''Shadow:''' [[TakeThat Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls balls]] and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
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* The IncrediblyLamePun that is Loki's alias is pretty funny.
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* The IncrediblyLamePun that is Loki's alias is pretty funny.funny.
* When discussing holy places, Shadow tries to mock Wednesday's explanations by pointing out Wednesday could have easily described Orlando's Disney World.
** Wednesday ''almost'' agrees with Shadow's assessment, but notes that whatever it is powering Disney World is "bent and twisted" into something darker, and as a God he'd much rather find worship and power in more innocent theme parks.
-->''Oh for the mermaids of Weeki Wachee!"
* When discussing holy places, Shadow tries to mock Wednesday's explanations by pointing out Wednesday could have easily described Orlando's Disney World.
** Wednesday ''almost'' agrees with Shadow's assessment, but notes that whatever it is powering Disney World is "bent and twisted" into something darker, and as a God he'd much rather find worship and power in more innocent theme parks.
-->''Oh for the mermaids of Weeki Wachee!"
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-->'''Mr. Town''': Now, Miz Black Crow--
-->'''Sam:''' It's Miz ''Crow''. Not Miz ''Black'' Crow. My friends call me Sam, though.
-->'''Sam:''' It's Miz ''Crow''. Not Miz ''Black'' Crow. My friends call me Sam, though.
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-->'''Mr. Town''': Now, Miz Black Crow--
-->'''Sam:''' It's Miz''Crow''. ''Black Crow''. Not Miz ''Black'' Crow.''Crow''. My friends call me Sam, though.
-->'''Sam:''' It's Miz
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-->'''Sam:''' [[{{Troll}} But not you. You can call me Miz Crow.]]
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-->'''Sam:''' [[{{Troll}} But not you. You can call me Miz Black Crow.]]
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%%* Most of Horus' spacey lines.
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%%* Most of Horus' spacey lines.lines.
* The IncrediblyLamePun that is Loki's alias is pretty funny.
* The IncrediblyLamePun that is Loki's alias is pretty funny.
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* Just two words: Tiger balls.
** A follow up:
--> '''Anansi:''' Where ''were'' you the day God was handin' out brains, boy?
--> '''Shadow:''' Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
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** A follow up:
--> '''Anansi:''' Where ''were'' you the day God was handin' out brains, boy?
--> '''Shadow:''' Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
** Another follow up: Wednesday is not amused by the story and says Anansi promised to leave the talking to him.
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* Just two words: Tiger balls.
** A follow up:
When Shadow meets Anansi:
--> '''Anansi:''' Where ''were'' you the day God was handin' out brains,boy?
-->boy?\\
'''Shadow:''' Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
** Another follow up: * Wednesday is not amused by the story Nancy's stories and says Anansi promised to leave the talking to him.
** A follow up:
--> '''Anansi:''' Where ''were'' you the day God was handin' out brains,
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'''Shadow:''' Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
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* Most of Horus' spacey lines.
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-->'''Sam:''' [[{{Troll}} But not you. You can call me Miz Crow.]]
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-->'''Sam:''' [[{{Troll}} But not you. You can call me Miz Crow.]]]]
%%* Most of Horus' spacey lines.
%%* Most of Horus' spacey lines.
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--> '''Raven:''' Fuck you.
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--> '''Raven:''' [[NeverHeardThatOneBefore Fuck you.you]].
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, and Zelda Williams (Creator/RobinWilliams' daughter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, Creator/NeilGaiman, Creator/PattonOswalt, and Zelda Williams Creator/ZeldaWilliams (Creator/RobinWilliams' daughter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]
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* Shadow answers his ringing phone with a simple "Yeah?", prompting Wednesday to reprimand him over his manners. Shadow replies that once he actually gets the phone ''connected'', he'll make sure be more polite.
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* Shadow answers his ringing phone with a simple "Yeah?", prompting Wednesday to reprimand him over his manners. Shadow replies that once he actually gets the phone ''connected'', he'll make sure to be more polite.
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* Sam Crow telling Mr Town and Mr Road to get into Mister Car and drive off.
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* Sam Crow telling Mr Town and Mr Road to get into Mister Car and drive off.off.
** Not to mention her toying with them through the entire conversation. Given that most Americans are intimidated by the very idea of the Spookshow, it's pretty telling of her overall character that she ''isn't'':
-->'''Mr. Town''': Now, Miz Black Crow--
-->'''Sam:''' It's Miz ''Crow''. Not Miz ''Black'' Crow. My friends call me Sam, though.
-->'''Mr. Town''': Okay, Sam.
-->'''Sam:''' [[{{Troll}} But not you. You can call me Miz Crow.]]
** Not to mention her toying with them through the entire conversation. Given that most Americans are intimidated by the very idea of the Spookshow, it's pretty telling of her overall character that she ''isn't'':
-->'''Mr. Town''': Now, Miz Black Crow--
-->'''Sam:''' It's Miz ''Crow''. Not Miz ''Black'' Crow. My friends call me Sam, though.
-->'''Mr. Town''': Okay, Sam.
-->'''Sam:''' [[{{Troll}} But not you. You can call me Miz Crow.]]
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*** Another follow up: Wednesday is not amused by the story and says Anansi promised to leave the talking to him.
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*** Another follow up: Wednesday is not amused by the story and says Anansi promised to leave the talking to him.
--> '''Anansi:''' You call that a story? That was nothing. I haven't even cleared my throat!
--> '''Anansi:''' You call that a story? That was nothing. I haven't even cleared my throat!
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, and Zelda Williams (Creator/RobinWilliams' daughter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, and Zelda Williams (Creator/RobinWilliams' daughter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]One]]
* Sam Crow telling Mr Town and Mr Road to get into Mister Car and drive off.
* Sam Crow telling Mr Town and Mr Road to get into Mister Car and drive off.
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* Czernobog amiably reminds Shadow, by tapping him in the forehead, that when the war will be over he'll bean him with a hammer. Shadow's answer, in the same exact tone, responds "Yes, but if you do that again, I'll break that finger".
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* Czernobog amiably reminds Shadow, by tapping him in the forehead, that when the war will be over he'll bean him with a hammer. Shadow's answer, Shadow, in the same exact tone, responds "Yes, but if you do that again, I'll break that finger".
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* '''Shadow:''' Hey, Huginn or Muninn, or whoever you are. Say 'Nevermore'.
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* '''Shadow:''' Hey, "Hey, Huginn or Muninn, or whoever you are. Say 'Nevermore'."
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* Hinzelmann advises Shadow to get a video rental card, to which Shadow declines.
--> It would make things awkward between then were Shadow to admit that television had made him uncomfortable ever since it had started to talk to him.
--> It would make things awkward between then were Shadow to admit that television had made him uncomfortable ever since it had started to talk to him.
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* Most of Horus' spacey lines.
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* Shadow answers his ringing phone with a simple "Yeah?", prompting Wednesday to reprimand him over his manners. Shadow replies that once he actually gets the phone ''connected'', he'll be more polite.
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, and Zelda Williams (Creator/RobinWilliams' dauaghter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, and Zelda Williams (Creator/RobinWilliams' dauaghter) daughter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]
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* Czernobog amiably reminds Shadow, by tapping him in the forehead, that when the war will be over he'll bean him with a hammer. Shadow's answer, in the same exact tone, responds "Yes, but if you do that again, I'll break that finger".
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, and Zelda Williams (RobinWilliams' (Creator/RobinWilliams' dauaghter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]
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* Mad Sweeney, while in Cairo, challenging Shadow to guess how he can pick the golden coins out of seemingly thin air. At a certain point he laments how the "Great and famous Mad Sweeney" is left around "a dog, a bird and a moron".
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* Neil Gaiman, Patton Oswalt, and Zelda Williams (RobinWilliam's (RobinWilliams' dauaghter) do a dramatic reading of the part with Bilquis in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIpdqwszQOg Chapter One]]
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* '''Shadow:''' Hey, Huginn or Munin, or whoever you are. Say 'Nevermore'.
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* '''Shadow:''' Hey, Huginn or Munin, Muninn, or whoever you are. Say 'Nevermore'.
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* Just two words: Tiger balls.
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* Just two words: Tiger balls.balls.
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--> '''Anansi:''' Where ''were'' you the day God was handin' out brains, boy?
--> '''Shadow:''' Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
* A follow up:
--> '''Anansi:''' Where ''were'' you the day God was handin' out brains, boy?
--> '''Shadow:''' Someone was telling a story about tigers' balls and I had to stop and hear how it ended.
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* Just two words: [[{{RefugeInAudacity}} Tiger balls]].
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* Just two words: [[{{RefugeInAudacity}} Tiger balls]].balls.
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--> '''Raven:''' Fuck you.
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--> '''Raven:''' Fuck you.you.
* Just two words: [[{{RefugeInAudacity}} Tiger balls]].
* Just two words: [[{{RefugeInAudacity}} Tiger balls]].
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--> '''Raven:''' Fuck you.
