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The Last Of These Is Not Like The Others is now Odd Item Index. Removing for not fitting any other tropes.
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The second chapter has Index leap out of a moving car, jump off a highway bridge, [[ItMakesSenseInContext jury-rig a portable church]], and sneak into Academy City just by using her [[GuileHero wits]], [[AwesomenessByAnalysis analytical skills]], [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers and two magical spells]].
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The second chapter has Index leap out of a moving car, jump off a highway bridge, [[ItMakesSenseInContext jury-rig a portable church]], and sneak into Academy City just by using her [[GuileHero wits]], [[AwesomenessByAnalysis analytical skills]], [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers and two magical spells]].
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* TheCameo: Sadao and Emi from ''LightNovel/TheDevilIsAPartTimer'' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial definitely do not]] appear in the second chapter while Index is at UsefulNotes/McDonalds. (After all, Sadao works at ''[[BlandNameProduct MgRonalds]]''.)
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* TheCameo: Sadao and Emi from ''LightNovel/TheDevilIsAPartTimer'' ''Literature/TheDevilIsAPartTimer'' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial definitely do not]] appear in the second chapter while Index is at UsefulNotes/McDonalds. (After all, Sadao works at ''[[BlandNameProduct MgRonalds]]''.)
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A Date With Rosie Palms is no longer a trope
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* BaitAndSwitch: At first readers were led to believe Maika won't let Index sleep on her brother's bunk bed due to ADateWithRosiePalms only to reveal that her brother farts a lot in bed.
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* BaitAndSwitch: At first readers were led to believe Maika won't let Index sleep on her brother's bunk bed due to ADateWithRosiePalms his masturbation habit, only to reveal that her brother farts a lot in bed.
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Page is now an index.
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* AdaptationNameChange: The author has made a point of replacing any {{Engrish}} terms with better English. For example, "An Involuntary Movement", the full canon name for AIM, has been changed to "Involuntary Physical Distortion", or IPD. Other changes include Level Upper becoming Level Plus, Meltdowner becoming just Meltdown, Big Spider becoming the Tarantulas and Skill Out becoming Zero-Sum.
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* AdaptationNameChange: The author has made a point of replacing any {{Engrish}} questionably translated terms with better English. For example, "An Involuntary Movement", the full canon name for AIM, has been changed to "Involuntary Physical Distortion", or IPD. Other changes include Level Upper becoming Level Plus, Meltdowner becoming just Meltdown, Big Spider becoming the Tarantulas and Skill Out becoming Zero-Sum.
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The [=ToAruverse=] Rewrite Project is a planned series of {{Fix Fic}}s for ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex/[[Manga/ACertainScientificRailgun Railgun]]'' [[TheRemake that rebuilds the story and setting from the ground up]].
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The [=ToAruverse=] Rewrite Project is a planned series of {{Fix Fic}}s for ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex/[[Manga/ACertainScientificRailgun ''Literature/ACertainMagicalIndex/[[Manga/ACertainScientificRailgun Railgun]]'' [[TheRemake that rebuilds the story and setting from the ground up]].
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Names The Same is no longer a trope
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-->''"And [[NamesTheSame Akemi]], what did you do there?" I ask. "Did you teleport or something?" I frown. "Wait, don't tell me you [[TimeStandsStill time]][[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica -st—]]"''
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-->''"And [[NamesTheSame Akemi]], Akemi, what did you do there?" I ask. "Did you teleport or something?" I frown. "Wait, don't tell me you [[TimeStandsStill time]][[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica -st—]]"''
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** [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/page-7#post-11240429 A Malaysian poster]] commented that Index's [[MacGyvering MacGuyvered]] church [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/page-7#post-11241492 reminded him]] [[AluminumChristmasTrees of the traveling kit]] his father used as a roaming Anglican priest. In chapter 9, Index offhandedly mentions hearing about a priest in Malaysia who had something much like a mobile church...
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** [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/page-7#post-11240429 A Malaysian poster]] commented that Index's [[MacGyvering MacGuyvered]] church [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/page-7#post-11241492 reminded him]] [[AluminumChristmasTrees of the traveling kit]] kit his father used as a roaming Anglican priest. In chapter 9, Index offhandedly mentions hearing about a priest in Malaysia who had something much like a mobile church...
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* AluminiumChristmasTrees: Index's mobile church...kind of. See ShoutOut.
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Removed Unfortunate Implications potholes
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-->''I may have had a minor freakout when it suddenly hit me that Kuroko--[[LovableSexManiac freaking Kuroko]]--may be as young as ''[[UnfortunateImplications 12]]'' in canon.''
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-->''I may have had a minor freakout when it suddenly hit me that Kuroko--[[LovableSexManiac freaking Kuroko]]--may be as young as ''[[UnfortunateImplications 12]]'' ''12'' in canon.''
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* {{Fanservice}}: Averted, as the author has taken a hatchet (or maybe Illusion Breaker) to any instances of this from the original series. There are no AntiMagic {{Wardrobe Malfunction}}s, no [[TokenMiniMoe little girls]] [[{{Meido}} in maid-outfits]] that [[BrotherSisterIncest crush on their brothers]], no PsychoLesbian {{Lovable Sex Maniac}}s that might be [[UnfortunateImplications prepubescent]], etc. etc. etc.
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* {{Fanservice}}: Averted, as the author has taken a hatchet (or maybe Illusion Breaker) to any instances of this from the original series. There are no AntiMagic {{Wardrobe Malfunction}}s, no [[TokenMiniMoe little girls]] [[{{Meido}} in maid-outfits]] that [[BrotherSisterIncest crush on their brothers]], no PsychoLesbian {{Lovable Sex Maniac}}s that might be [[UnfortunateImplications prepubescent]], prepubescent, etc. etc. etc.
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** Chapter 11 is named "[[Music/TheRollingStones Gimme Shelter]]".
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** Chapter 11 is named "[[Music/TheRollingStones "[[Music/TheRollingStonesBand Gimme Shelter]]".
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
** [[spoiler:In chapter thirteen, Komoe wisely takes Index and Touma to the police due to the fact she can't protect them, unlike in canon.]]
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
** [[spoiler:In chapter thirteen, Komoe wisely takes Index and Touma to the police due to the fact she can't protect them, unlike in canon.]]
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C) Trick question; she just starts making out with him.\\\
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C) Trick question; she just starts making out with him.\\\
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* RealityEnsues:
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
** [[spoiler:In chapter thirteen, Komoe wisely takes Index and Touma to the police due to the fact she can't protect them, unlike in canon.]]
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
** [[spoiler:In chapter thirteen, Komoe wisely takes Index and Touma to the police due to the fact she can't protect them, unlike in canon.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
** [[spoiler:In chapter thirteen, Komoe wisely takes Index and Touma to the police due to the fact she can't protect them, unlike in canon.]]
** In chapter twelve, Konori reveals that Judgement is mostly a glorified neighborhood watch with esper abilities and that Kouroko and Uiharu are actually the exception in that they take it as seriously as they do.
** [[spoiler:In chapter thirteen, Komoe wisely takes Index and Touma to the police due to the fact she can't protect them, unlike in canon.]]
