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** ''The Order of Things'' [[spoiler:is a pastiche of [[VideoGame/SilentHill2 Silent Hill 2's]] Dog Ending and TheWizardOfOz, in which the Harmony Table is revealed to be controlled by a tiny ([[MissionControlIsOffItsMeds and rather incompetent and crotchety]]) dog named Order]]

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** ''The Order of Things'' [[spoiler:is a pastiche of [[VideoGame/SilentHill2 Silent Hill 2's]] Dog Ending and TheWizardOfOz, Film/TheWizardOfOz, in which the Harmony Table is revealed to be controlled by a tiny ([[MissionControlIsOffItsMeds and rather incompetent and crotchety]]) dog named Order]]
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** Sunset's LeaningOnTheFourthWall moments where she points out various PlotHoles, Twilight's tendency of going MrExposition on the Mane 6, artistic inconsistencies, and Pinkie's defiance of continuity and physics.

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** Sunset's LeaningOnTheFourthWall moments where she points out various PlotHoles, plot holes, Twilight's tendency of going MrExposition on the Mane 6, artistic inconsistencies, and Pinkie's defiance of continuity and physics.

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“Friends threaten to deface each other in their sleep sometimes!”
* WeaponOfChoice: Expanding on a fillyhood noodle incident briefly noted in the story in which Sunset (accidentally blindsided and) knocked Celestia unconscious during a book-fight in the library (expanded into [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/371250/bibliopocalypse-war-of-the-two-suns Bibliopocalypse: War of the Two Suns]]), ''newspapers''. Develops into a RunningGag as with access to anime Sunset creates incredibly flashy and devastating newspaper-themed versions of other works' signature spells.
** There are two other reasonable explanations for the utility of Star Swirl's bell-bedecked wizard hat, but the author has chosen to focus mostly on its suitability for pimp-smacking as almost the only step in Star Swirl's vocabulary of retribution between "verbal berating" and "use of unimaginable magical power with no thought whatsoever to the consequences".

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“Friends threaten to deface each other in their sleep sometimes!”
* WeaponOfChoice: Expanding on a fillyhood noodle incident briefly noted in the story in which Sunset (accidentally blindsided and) knocked Celestia unconscious during a book-fight in the library (expanded into [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/371250/bibliopocalypse-war-of-the-two-suns Bibliopocalypse: War of the Two Suns]]), ''newspapers''. Develops into a RunningGag as with access to anime Sunset creates incredibly flashy and devastating newspaper-themed versions of other works' signature spells.
** There are two other reasonable explanations for the utility of Star Swirl's bell-bedecked wizard hat, but the author has chosen to focus mostly on its suitability for pimp-smacking as almost the only step in Star Swirl's vocabulary of retribution between "verbal berating" and "use of unimaginable magical power with no thought whatsoever to the consequences".
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* HairTriggerTemper: The premise of the story. Sunset has less of a BerserkButton and more of a [[UpToEleven Berserk Switchboard]]. She's slowly getting over it. Slowly.

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* HairTriggerTemper: The premise of the story. Sunset has less of a BerserkButton and more of a [[UpToEleven Berserk Switchboard]].Switchboard. She's slowly getting over it. Slowly.
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* CoincidentalBroadcast: The Harmony Table in ''Home Again, Home Again, Jiggety-jig'' [[spoiler: because of [[TheDogWasTheMastermind the tiny dog inside of the table]]]].
--> “Ugggh…” Sunset uttered. “Look, maybe the table just thinks Starlight could use some emotional support or something! I mean, Twilight can go!”\\
Suddenly, Twilight’s cutie mark appeared above Canterlot castle.\\
“Yes!” Twilight exclaimed enthusiastically.\\
A red circle with a slash through it appeared over Twilight’s cutie mark.\\
“No!” Twilight cried angrily.\\
Sunset peered at the table suspiciously. “You know… For a table, it’s really tracking our conversation pretty well.”
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* GoneHorriblyRight: ''Any'' problem as solved by Starlight without the input of anypony else. Her mind works in extremely straight lines and she's too focused to spot-check where she's going until she arrives. As an example, a typical Starlight solution to "I see a fire" is "1) Realize fires need air. 2) Spend as many years as it takes to work out a way to remove the entire planet's atmosphere to deny the fire its air. 3) Cast spell or fully implement solution. 4) Go back and see if the original fire's still there."

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* GoneHorriblyRight: ''Any'' problem as solved by Starlight without the input of anypony else. Her mind works in extremely straight lines and she's too focused to spot-check where she's going until she arrives. As an example, a typical Starlight solution to "I see a fire" is "1) Realize fires need air. 2) Spend as many years as it takes to work out a way to remove the entire planet's atmosphere to deny the fire its air. 3) Cast spell or fully implement solution. 4) Go back and see if the original fire's still there.""[[note]]In fact, removing the planet's atmosphere is the exact solution she suggests for the storm in chapter 17 of ''SSIMAE''[[/note]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Rainbow Dash fails to understand collateral damage.
--> “Aw, man!” Rainbow Dash said in a disappointed tone. “I wanted to watch an epic alicorn smackdown!”\\
Applejack raised an eyebrow. “You do realize if that happens, we’re all in the same train car, right?”\\
“Well, yeah!” Rainbow Dash said. “Front row seats!”
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Discussed.
--> Sunset was suddenly next to Rainbow Dash staring the pegasus down with a glare as fiery as her mane. “I will bleach your mane and tail in your sleep...” she said in an icy tone.\\
Rainbow Dash leaned back a bit. “Whoa! I thought Twilight taught you about friendship and stuff!”\\
“Friends threaten to deface each other in their sleep sometimes!”
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** Also a timeline-wide one: Various magical effects causing IdiotBall, ExpositionBall, et cetera.

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** Also a timeline-wide one: Various magical effects causing IdiotBall, ExpositionBall, Exposition Ball, et cetera.
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** The primary story itself is a downplayed example. Pinkie Pie mentions "brain pills" at the beginning, and at the very end, their true nature is revealed:

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** The primary story itself is a downplayed example. Pinkie Pie mentions baking "brain pills" into everyone's food at the beginning, and at the very end, their true nature is revealed:
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** The primary story itself is a downplayed example. Pinkie Pie mentions "brain pills" at the beginning, and at the very end, their true nature is revealed:
--->“You said it, Flim!” replied another stallion’s voice. “Ponies just can’t get enough of these brain pills.”\\
“Right you are, Flam! Too bad they actually impede intelligence and merely being around them, much like we are right now, makes a pony uncontrollably exposition every little thing they’re doing!”
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** ''The Order of Things'' [[spoiler:is a pastiche of Silent Hill II's Dog Ending and TheWizardOfOz, in which the Harmony Table is revealed to be controlled by a tiny ([[MissionControlIsOffItsMeds and rather incompetent and crotchety]]) dog named Order]]

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** ''The Order of Things'' [[spoiler:is a pastiche of [[VideoGame/SilentHill2 Silent Hill II's 2's]] Dog Ending and TheWizardOfOz, in which the Harmony Table is revealed to be controlled by a tiny ([[MissionControlIsOffItsMeds and rather incompetent and crotchety]]) dog named Order]]



** Various magical effects causing IdiotBall, ExpositionBall, et cetera

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** Also a timeline-wide one: Various magical effects causing IdiotBall, ExpositionBall, et ceteracetera.
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** Various magical effects causing IdiotBall, ExpositionBall, et cetera
---> '''Starlight Glimmer:''' Say, when do you think that strange curse the fake Hay-Burger King hit us with to make us converse in bizarrely specific sentences will wear off?
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** ''The Order of Things'' [[Spoiler:is a pastiche of Silent Hill II's Dog Ending and TheWizardOfOz, in which the Harmony Table is revealed to be controlled by a tiny ([[MissionControlIsOffItsMeds and rather incompetent and crotchety]]) dog named Order]]
** It's strongly hinted in ''The Beard with a Jerk-Ass Hanging off of It'' that [[Spoiler:the BigBad is Star Swirl the Bearded's goat, [[HorribleJudgeOfCharacter who happens to be Grogar]]]].

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** ''The Order of Things'' [[Spoiler:is [[spoiler:is a pastiche of Silent Hill II's Dog Ending and TheWizardOfOz, in which the Harmony Table is revealed to be controlled by a tiny ([[MissionControlIsOffItsMeds and rather incompetent and crotchety]]) dog named Order]]
** It's strongly hinted in ''The Beard with a Jerk-Ass Hanging off of It'' that [[Spoiler:the [[spoiler:the BigBad is Star Swirl the Bearded's goat, [[HorribleJudgeOfCharacter who happens to be Grogar]]]].

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