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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' / ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on Website/FanFictionDotNet.

The story follows the basic plot of ''Evangelion'': fifteen years after the world was devastated by Second Impact, the secret organization NERV tries to defend Tokyo-3 from attacking Angels. However, most of the characters come from the ''Nanoha'' series. Nanoha and Fate work for NERV, using their MagicalGirl powers to fight the Angels. The fic follows their battles against the Angels, their developing relationshp, and the conflict between NERV and SEELE.

You can read the story [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6142721/1/Nanoha_Genesis_Evangelion here]]. It is now complete.

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''Nanoha ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6142721/1/Nanoha_Genesis_Evangelion Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' Evangelion]]'' is a completed ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' / ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on Website/FanFictionDotNet.

The story follows the basic plot of ''Evangelion'': fifteen years after the world was devastated by Second Impact, the secret organization NERV tries to defend Tokyo-3 from attacking Angels. However, most of the characters come from the ''Nanoha'' series. Nanoha and Fate work for NERV, using their MagicalGirl powers to fight the Angels. The fic follows their battles against the Angels, their developing relationshp, relationship, and the conflict between NERV and SEELE.

You can read the story [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6142721/1/Nanoha_Genesis_Evangelion here]]. It is now complete.
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** [[spoiler: It is also very strongly implied during the epilogue that Vivio is in fact Adonai the biproduct of the forbidden union between Adam and Lilith when both were in their embryonic states]].

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** [[spoiler: It is also very strongly implied during the epilogue that Vivio is in fact Adonai the biproduct byproduct of the forbidden union between Adam and Lilith when both were in their embryonic states]].
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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' / ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on Website/FanFictionDotNet.

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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' / ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on Website/FanFictionDotNet.
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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' / ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on FanfictionDotNet.

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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' / ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on FanfictionDotNet.
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* CripplingOverspecialisation: The Mass Produced Magical Girls from SELLE, when working as a team, are virtually unstoppable being able to produce barriers that the NERV Magical Girls can't penetrate and {{Combination Attack}}s powerful enough to level the Geo Front. However their strength lies in their ability to combine their powers together and, when [[spoiler: Hayate]] knocks one of their members out, their ultimately to inflexible to find other ways to help one another and decide to fight one on one battles instead which gives NERV the advantage.

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* CripplingOverspecialisation: The Mass Produced Magical Girls from SELLE, when working as a team, are virtually unstoppable being able to produce barriers that the NERV Magical Girls can't penetrate and {{Combination Attack}}s powerful enough to level the Geo Front. However their strength lies in their ability to combine their powers together and, when [[spoiler: Hayate]] knocks one of their members out, their they're ultimately to too inflexible to find other ways to help one another and decide to fight one on one one-on-one battles instead instead, which gives NERV the advantage.



* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: The few members of SELLE's upper echelon that managed to evade capture by the TSAB post TimeSkip committed suicide after realising [[NiceJobFixingItVillain they inadvertently helped the magical girls reduce the power of the forbidden union.]]]]
* DysfunctionJunction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] since unlike the Neon Genesis universe Nanoha and company are significantly more well adjusted and are also willing to talk to each other about their problems rather then let each other stew in it. It actually helps make the fic LighterAndSofter then Neon Genesis.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: After all the chaos caused by SELLE, Precia and the Angels [[spoiler: humanity ultimately survives the war and Magical Girls act as guardians to ensure the worlds new found peace. Not only that but Lindy and Clyde get married and raise a family together, Ritsuko is able, with Maya's help, to finally let go off her addiction to the blood of Lilith and Fate lets go of the pain of her past and becomes a well adjusted adult with a family of her own in Nanoha and Vivio]].

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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: The few members of SELLE's upper echelon that managed to evade capture by the TSAB post TimeSkip committed suicide after realising [[NiceJobFixingItVillain they inadvertently helped the magical girls reduce the power of the forbidden union.]]]]
union]].]]
* DysfunctionJunction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] since unlike the Neon Genesis universe ''NGE'' universe, Nanoha and company are significantly more well adjusted well-adjusted and are also willing to talk to each other about their problems rather then let each other stew in it. It actually helps make the fic LighterAndSofter then Neon Genesis.
than ''NGE''.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: After all the chaos caused by SELLE, Precia and the Angels [[spoiler: humanity Angels, [[spoiler:humanity ultimately survives the war and Magical Girls act as guardians to ensure the worlds new found world's newfound peace. Not only that that, but Lindy and Clyde [[HappilyMarried get married married]] and raise a family together, together; Ritsuko is able, with Maya's help, to finally let go off her addiction to the blood of Lilith Lilith; and Fate lets go of the pain of her past and becomes a well adjusted well-adjusted adult with a family of her own in Nanoha and Vivio]].



* ExpositionBeam: LCL injection
* FantasticDrug: The Blood of Lilith, which grants incredible knowledge and insight. Ritsuko is addicted, and withdrawal is not pleasant.
* FusionFic: Nanoha + Evangelion
* GambitPileup: SEELE, Precia, Scagliette, and Ritsuko are all running their own gambits against each other and its headed for a massive collision.
* GroinAttack: Signum to Evangel Lucifer

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* ExpositionBeam: LCL injection
injection.
* FantasticDrug: The Blood of Lilith, which grants incredible knowledge and insight. Ritsuko is addicted, and withdrawal is not pleasant.
a pleasant experience.
* FusionFic: Nanoha ''Nanoha'' + Evangelion
''Evangelion''.
* GambitPileup: SEELE, Precia, Scagliette, and Ritsuko are all running their own gambits against each other and its other, all headed for in a massive collision.
collision course.
* GroinAttack: Signum to Evangel LuciferLucifer.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: At the start of the series, due to Precia's [[AbusiveParent abuse]], Fate has a very low opinion of herself and her combat abilities (especially since she only bonded with Bardiche accidentally due to a compatibility enhancer and therefore can't use her powers as naturally as Nanoha). As such she sees herself as less valuable then Nanoha initially and, during their tag team battle with Shamshel, seems confused that Nanoha would risk her life for hers. Nanoha then spends a long time convincing Fate she is special and unique and shouldn't think less of herself. [[spoiler: After Fate suffers a brutal MindRape by Arael which shower her origins and a brutal beating by Precia soon after Nanoha reaffirms that Fate is sill special to her and that she lover her for who she is rather then as a clone of Alicia]].

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: At the start of the series, due to Precia's [[AbusiveParent abuse]], Fate has a very low opinion of herself and her combat abilities (especially since she only bonded with Bardiche accidentally due to a compatibility enhancer and therefore can't use her powers as naturally as Nanoha). As such she sees herself as less valuable then Nanoha initially and, during their tag team battle with Shamshel, seems confused that Nanoha would risk her life for hers. Nanoha then spends a long time convincing Fate she is special and unique and shouldn't think less of herself. [[spoiler: After Fate suffers a brutal MindRape by Arael which shower show her origins and a brutal beating by Precia soon after Nanoha reaffirms that Fate is sill special to her and that she lover loves her for who she is rather then as a clone of Alicia]].
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* DysfunctionJunction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] since unlike the Neon Genesis universe Nanoha and company are significantly more well adjusted and are also willigng to talk to each other about their problems rather then let each other stew in it. It actually helps make the fic LighterAndSofter then Neon Genesis.

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* DysfunctionJunction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] since unlike the Neon Genesis universe Nanoha and company are significantly more well adjusted and are also willigng willing to talk to each other about their problems rather then let each other stew in it. It actually helps make the fic LighterAndSofter then Neon Genesis.

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* GodInHumanForm: Much like in EVA Tabris is this although he describes himself as still being made of magic not flesh. [[spoiler: It is also more or less spelled out to the audience that Vivio is the biproduct of the forbidden union between

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Much like in EVA Tabris is this although he describes himself as still being made of magic not flesh. flesh.
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[[spoiler: It is also more or less spelled out to very strongly implied during the audience epilogue that Vivio is in fact Adonai the biproduct of the forbidden union betweenbetween Adam and Lilith when both were in their embryonic states]].


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* LoveEpiphany:
** While Nanoha struggles through little over the first half of the fic with her growing attraction to Fate it's not until she is trapped and slowly dying inside Leliel's PocketDimension that she realises that she was in love with Fate all along.
** Likewise for Fate it's not until Zeruel's attack on NERV headquarters which almost kills the girls that Fate realises she was in love with Nanoha too and confesses to her.


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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: At the start of the series, due to Precia's [[AbusiveParent abuse]], Fate has a very low opinion of herself and her combat abilities (especially since she only bonded with Bardiche accidentally due to a compatibility enhancer and therefore can't use her powers as naturally as Nanoha). As such she sees herself as less valuable then Nanoha initially and, during their tag team battle with Shamshel, seems confused that Nanoha would risk her life for hers. Nanoha then spends a long time convincing Fate she is special and unique and shouldn't think less of herself. [[spoiler: After Fate suffers a brutal MindRape by Arael which shower her origins and a brutal beating by Precia soon after Nanoha reaffirms that Fate is sill special to her and that she lover her for who she is rather then as a clone of Alicia]].

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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler: While Precia's death [[AssholeVictim was a long time coming]] her final moments, after Adam bursts out of her chest leaving her to bleed out while Precia calls out for Alicia in vain, is extremely pitiable. In the end Fate decides to comfort Precia and pretend to be Alicia [[LetThemDieHappy so she can die happy]]]].
* AgeLift: [[spoiler: Due to Lindy and Clyde not getting married until after the Angel War Chrono is only 9/10 years old when we are introduced to him at the end of the series and is now Fate's younger brother (who by this point is about 20)]].



* CripplingOverspecialisation: The Mass Produced Magical Girls from SELLE, when working as a team, are virtually unstoppable being able to produce barriers that the NERV Magical Girls can't penetrate and CombinationAttacks powerful enough to level the Geo Front. However their strength lies in their ability to combine their powers together and, when [[spoiler: Hayate]] knocks one of their members out, their ultimately to inflexible to find other ways to help one another and decide to fight one on one battles instead which gives NERV the advantage.

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* CripplingOverspecialisation: The Mass Produced Magical Girls from SELLE, when working as a team, are virtually unstoppable being able to produce barriers that the NERV Magical Girls can't penetrate and CombinationAttacks {{Combination Attack}}s powerful enough to level the Geo Front. However their strength lies in their ability to combine their powers together and, when [[spoiler: Hayate]] knocks one of their members out, their ultimately to inflexible to find other ways to help one another and decide to fight one on one battles instead which gives NERV the advantage.



* DysfunctionalJunction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] since unlike the Neon Genesis universe Nanoha and company are significantly more well adjusted and are also willigng to talk to each other about their problems rather then let each other stew in it. It actually helps make the fic LighterAndSofter then Neon Genesis.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: After all the chaos caused by SELLE, Precia and the Angels [[spoiler: humanity ultimately survives the war and Magical Girls act as guardians to ensure the worlds new found peace. Not only that but Lindy and Clyde get married and raise a family together, Ritsuko is able, with Maya's help, to finally let go off her addiction to the blood of Lilith and Fate lets go of the pain of her past and becomes a well adjusted adult.

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* DysfunctionalJunction: DysfunctionJunction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] since unlike the Neon Genesis universe Nanoha and company are significantly more well adjusted and are also willigng to talk to each other about their problems rather then let each other stew in it. It actually helps make the fic LighterAndSofter then Neon Genesis.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: After all the chaos caused by SELLE, Precia and the Angels [[spoiler: humanity ultimately survives the war and Magical Girls act as guardians to ensure the worlds new found peace. Not only that but Lindy and Clyde get married and raise a family together, Ritsuko is able, with Maya's help, to finally let go off her addiction to the blood of Lilith and Fate lets go of the pain of her past and becomes a well adjusted adult.adult with a family of her own in Nanoha and Vivio]].



* GodInHumanForm: Much like in EVA Tabris is this although he describes himself as still being made of magic not flesh. [[spoiler: It is also more or less spelled out to the audience that Vivio is the biproduct of the forbidden union between



* LighterAndSofter: Weirdly enough despite the fact that the angels are still as monstrous as ever and there are plenty of behind the scenes drama this fanfic is significantly less dark then ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''. As pointed out, not only are the main characters more well adjusted, but plenty of angel battles are taken care off much easier thanks to magic and lots more people survive the fic. Finally the ending is significantly more uplifting and hopeful then Eva's infamous GanixEnding.

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* LighterAndSofter: Weirdly enough despite the fact that the angels are still as monstrous as ever and there are plenty of behind the scenes drama this fanfic is significantly less dark then ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''. As pointed out, not only are the main characters more well adjusted, but plenty of angel battles are taken care off much easier thanks to magic and lots more people survive the fic. Finally the ending is significantly more uplifting and hopeful then Eva's infamous GanixEnding.GainaxEnding.



* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Near the end of the series SELLE becomes worried [[spoiler: once Adam is revived and attempts to start the Forbidden Union between herself and Lilith early]] so they decide to placate her by [[spoiler: [[ColonyDrop dropping the Asura]]]] on her reasoning that [[spoiler: once Adam is reduced to an embryonic state they can capture both of the progenitors and begin the Union when their at maximum potential]]. Their gambit works, allowing the Magical Girls to [[spoiler: reduce Adam to her embryonic state]] however in order to deprive SELLE victory [[spoiler: the girls allow Adam and Lilith to fuse in their reduced state since, once the union begins, it can't be undone. This reduces the power of their union and makes the fusion useless for SELLE's plans]].



* OfficalCouple: By the end of the series we have three confirmed couples, [[spoiler: Nanoha and Fate, Lindy and Clyde and Ritsuko and Maya. It's unknown if Hayate and Vita became (or at the very least stayed) a couple by the epilogue but it is possible.]]

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* OfficalCouple: OfficialCouple: By the end of the series we have three confirmed couples, [[spoiler: Nanoha and Fate, Lindy and Clyde and Ritsuko and Maya. It's unknown if Hayate and Vita became (or at the very least stayed) a couple by the epilogue but it is possible.]]
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* DysfunctionalJunction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] since unlike the Neon Genesis universe Nanoha and company are significantly more well adjusted and are also willigng to talk to each other about their problems rather then let each other stew in it. It actually helps make the fic LighterAndSofter then Neon Genesis.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: After all the chaos caused by SELLE, Precia and the Angels [[spoiler: humanity ultimately survives the war and Magical Girls act as guardians to ensure the worlds new found peace. Not only that but Lindy and Clyde get married and raise a family together, Ritsuko is able, with Maya's help, to finally let go off her addiction to the blood of Lilith and Fate lets go of the pain of her past and becomes a well adjusted adult.


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* LighterAndSofter: Weirdly enough despite the fact that the angels are still as monstrous as ever and there are plenty of behind the scenes drama this fanfic is significantly less dark then ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''. As pointed out, not only are the main characters more well adjusted, but plenty of angel battles are taken care off much easier thanks to magic and lots more people survive the fic. Finally the ending is significantly more uplifting and hopeful then Eva's infamous GanixEnding.


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* OfficalCouple: By the end of the series we have three confirmed couples, [[spoiler: Nanoha and Fate, Lindy and Clyde and Ritsuko and Maya. It's unknown if Hayate and Vita became (or at the very least stayed) a couple by the epilogue but it is possible.]]


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* ShipTease: There is plenty of teasing for various couples in the fic. Besides Nanoha/Fate we have Lindy/Clyde, Ritsuko/Maya and even a little bit of Hayate/Vita near the end.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Plenty of people that died in either Nanoha or Eva actually survive in this fic. Clyde for instance was a PosthumousCharacter in Nanoha while his Eva counterpart Kaji was assassinated during the second half of the series [[spoiler: neither of which happens here and he actually stays alive to the very end and marries Lindy. Likewise since Third Impact doesn't happen in this fic ''humanity itself'' is spared as well.]]
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* CripplingOverspecialisation: The Mass Produced Magical Girls from SELLE, when working as a team, are virtually unstoppable being able to produce barriers that the NERV Magical Girls can't penetrate and CombinationAttacks powerful enough to level the Geo Front. However their strength lies in their ability to combine their powers together and, when [[spoiler: Hayate]] knocks one of their members out, their ultimately to inflexible to find other ways to help one another and decide to fight one on one battles instead which gives NERV the advantage.


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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: The few members of SELLE's upper echelon that managed to evade capture by the TSAB post TimeSkip committed suicide after realising [[NiceJobFixingItVillain they inadvertently helped the magical girls reduce the power of the forbidden union.]]]]

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This is my first full-length fanfic, so any feedback in the form of reviews here or on fanfiction.net would be greatly appreciated.

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: SEELE can't imagine that the heroes will destroy Lilith and Adam, because their power is too tempting.


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* FantasticDrug: The Blood of Lilith, which grants incredible knowledge and insight. Ritsuko is addicted, and withdrawal is not pleasant.


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* NoMacGuffinNoWinner: How the heroes deal with [[spoiler:Lilith and Adam]], eventually.
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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' / ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on FanfictionDotNet.

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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' / ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on FanfictionDotNet.

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You can read the story [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6142721/1/Nanoha_Genesis_Evangelion here]]. New chapters come out once, maybe twice, a month.

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You can read the story [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6142721/1/Nanoha_Genesis_Evangelion here]]. New chapters come out once, maybe twice, a month.
It is now complete.


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* CapturedSuperEntity: Adam, Lilith, Tabris
* ColonyDrop: [[spoiler:The ''Asura'']]
* DistantFinale: The final chapter.
* ExpositionBeam: LCL injection
* FusionFic: Nanoha + Evangelion


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* GroinAttack: Signum to Evangel Lucifer
* KillSat: The ''Asura'', with the Arc-En-Ciel
* LetThemDieHappy: [[spoiler:Fate pretends to be Alicia for Precia as she dies]].


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* PainfulTransformation: Hayate to Reinforce/Bardiel
* PortalCut: An application of Shamal's magic


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* RestrainingBolt: Used by SEELE on Tabris
* SevenDeadlySins: The seven SEELE members each roughly correspond to one of the sins, in order from Pride (SEELE 01/Lorenz Keel) to Lust (SEELE 07).
* WhiteVoidRoom: Inside Leliel
* WoundedGazelleGambit: Signum to Evangel Lucifer.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Fuyutsuki delivers an absolutely epic one to Precia.
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* GambitPileup: SEELE, Precia, Scagliette, and Ritsuko are all running their own gambits against each other and its headed for a massive collision.

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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' / ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on [[{{ptitle2ugbrwb8sjn4}} Fanfiction.net]].

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''Nanoha Genesis Evangelion'' is a ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'' / ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' {{Crossover}} FanFic (of the FusionFic type) written by troper [[{{Tropers/Xelloss08}} Xelloss08]] and published on [[{{ptitle2ugbrwb8sjn4}} Fanfiction.net]].
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