Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Per TRS.
Bishonen is a Definition-Only fan-speak term used only for Japanese/East-Asian media. Examples or audience reactions are not allowed. Moving In Universe acknowledgements/relevance to Pretty Boy. Removing any ZCE or misuse.
Bishonen is a Definition-Only fan-speak term used only for Japanese/East-Asian media. Examples or audience reactions are not allowed. Moving In Universe acknowledgements/relevance to Pretty Boy. Removing any ZCE or misuse.Deleted line(s) 40 (click to see context) :
* {{Bishounen}}: Sigma is described as one in Tattletale's internal monologue.
Added DiffLines:
* PrettyBoy: Sigma is described as a {{bishonen}} in Tattletale's internal monologue.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 128 (click to see context) from:
* PerceptionFilter: Leet's [[Franchise/MetalGear cardboard box]] works this way.
to:
* PerceptionFilter: Leet's [[Franchise/MetalGear [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] works this way.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Super OCD is no longer a trope. Moving examples to other tropes when applicable.
Changed line(s) 84 (click to see context) from:
* GoneHorriblyRight: Dire took the advice to use the proper dress and mannerisms to approach Accord with in order to appease his SuperOCD. Unfortunately, she did so a little too well, with the end result that [[spoiler:he seems to be attracted to her in the most creepy way.]]
to:
* GoneHorriblyRight: Dire took the advice to use the proper dress and mannerisms to approach Accord with in order to appease his SuperOCD.OCD. Unfortunately, she did so a little too well, with the end result that [[spoiler:he seems to be attracted to her in the most creepy way.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 12,15 (click to see context) from:
'''Beware spoilers for Worm canon.'''
!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
to:
'''Beware spoilers for Worm ''Worm'' canon.'''
!This'''
----
!!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
!This
----
!!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
Deleted line(s) 179 (click to see context) :
* UncannyValley: Rachel has this reaction InUniverse in 5.2 to Dire's Doom... uhh, Direbots.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
removed Foe Yay and Up To Eleven wicks
Changed line(s) 86 (click to see context) from:
* HadToBeSharp: The reason Dire is so badass is because her home reality is filled with opposition that regularly matches if not exceeds Earth Bet's worst. For example, just one of her original foes' powers more-or-less is, to paraphrase a reader ([[AscendedFanon and later acknowledged]] InUniverse), an unholy combination of two already potent Wormverse powers[[labelnote:as in]]Coil's and Dinah's[[/labelnote]] taken UpToEleven.
to:
* HadToBeSharp: The reason Dire is so badass is because her home reality is filled with opposition that regularly matches if not exceeds Earth Bet's worst. For example, just one of her original foes' powers more-or-less is, to paraphrase a reader ([[AscendedFanon and later acknowledged]] InUniverse), an unholy combination of two already potent Wormverse powers[[labelnote:as in]]Coil's and Dinah's[[/labelnote]] taken UpToEleven.to extremes.
Changed line(s) 171 (click to see context) from:
* StylisticSuck: In PRELUDE 8A we get to see someone's horrible FoeYay fanfic about Dire.
to:
* StylisticSuck: In PRELUDE 8A we get to see someone's horrible FoeYay romantic fanfic about Dire.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 187,188 (click to see context) :
* WorldOfCardBoardSpeech: Dire of all people gives one.
--> "Killing is easy. Those who do it too much are weak, taking the easy way out. But Dire has chosen never to be weak, so she restricts its usage. She is strong, so she takes the harder way, and she is a genius, so she manages it without sloppy collateral. After all, that's how the worst tyrants start... Killing a few people here, a few there, and eventually it becomes the first option they reach for."
--> "Killing is easy. Those who do it too much are weak, taking the easy way out. But Dire has chosen never to be weak, so she restricts its usage. She is strong, so she takes the harder way, and she is a genius, so she manages it without sloppy collateral. After all, that's how the worst tyrants start... Killing a few people here, a few there, and eventually it becomes the first option they reach for."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Disambiguating; deleting and renaming wicks as appropriate. Moved to discussion
Deleted line(s) 96 (click to see context) :
* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: In 7.3 [[spoiler: Dire has those formerly known as Uber and L33t unleash a hardlight Bahamut on Leviathan.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** The Siberian [[spoiler: can teleport.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 63 (click to see context) from:
** [[spoiler: How she deals with Slaughterhouse 9. She has access to tech that cancels the Time Dilation effects of Bakuda's bomb. When she teleports the 9 (and herself) into Outer Space, she quickly realises that Crawler, Mannequin and Bonesaw won't be stopped for long (and Siberian never made the trip in the first place), so drops the time field, [[ItsTheOnlyWayToBeSure loosing several more Bakuda bombs to completely disintegrate them]] while she teleports back out to reletive safety (re.ative because she knows The Siberian's still about, and SHE MAD).]]
to:
** [[spoiler: How she deals with Slaughterhouse 9. She has access to tech that cancels the Time Dilation effects of Bakuda's bomb. When she teleports the 9 (and herself) into Outer Space, Space a) she had the teleporter set up in the first place for the occasion, b) her throne was shielded to stop the 9 getting to her and to maintain an atmosphere, and c) when she quickly realises that Crawler, Mannequin and Bonesaw won't be stopped for long and the latter can potentially save the rest (and Siberian never made the trip in the first place), so she drops the time field, [[ItsTheOnlyWayToBeSure loosing several more Bakuda bombs to completely disintegrate them]] while she teleports back out to reletive relative safety (re.ative (relative because she knows The Siberian's still about, and SHE MAD).]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** [[spoiler: How she deals with Slaughterhouse 9. She has access to tech that cancels the Time Dilation effects of Bakuda's bomb. When she teleports the 9 (and herself) into Outer Space, she quickly realises that Crawler, Mannequin and Bonesaw won't be stopped for long (and Siberian never made the trip in the first place), so drops the time field, [[ItsTheOnlyWayToBeSure loosing several more Bakuda bombs to completely disintegrate them]] while she teleports back out to reletive safety (re.ative because she knows The Siberian's still about, and SHE MAD).]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 52,55 (click to see context) from:
-->''' [[spoiler:Mouse Protector]] '''"Uh. What was that?"
-->''' Dr Dire '''"SIBERIAN."
-->''' [[spoiler:Mouse Protector]] '''"She mad?"
-->''' Dr Dire '''"SHE MAD."
-->''' Dr Dire '''"SIBERIAN."
-->''' [[spoiler:Mouse Protector]] '''"She mad?"
-->''' Dr Dire '''"SHE MAD."
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dire-worm-worm-au-oc.300816/ Dire Worm!]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Andrew "Lost Demiurge" Seiple, crossing over with the author's original fiction, the [[Literature/TheDireSaga Teslaverse]].
to:
''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dire-worm-worm-au-oc.300816/ Dire Worm!]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Andrew "Lost Demiurge" Seiple, crossing over with the author's original fiction, the [[Literature/TheDireSaga Teslaverse]].
Teslaverse]] about the character's origins.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EarlyBirdCameo: This fic technically counts as one for Dire and other Teslaverse characters, since it predates ''The Dire Saga''.
Added DiffLines:
* MarthDebutedInSmashBros: In this case, ''Dire Worm'' is the metaphorical Smash Bros., and Dire is the metaphorical Marth.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* LoopholeExcuse: Leet's ability allows him to create a perfect working piece of Thinker-tech once and any attempt to recreate it only leads to catastrophic failure. Dire gets around this limitation by having build something and then give it to her, and with a little research and her smarts she can recreate them herself.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ButForMeItWasTuesday:
--> I needed my full wits about me for what was to come.
--> A Dragon drone roared past me, and I followed it in, as a thick, heavy stormcloud loomed on the horizon. [[spoiler:Apex]] would have to pilot the freighter in through THAT, while [[spoiler:Prototype]] worked faster than he ever had before to finish a project, or else we could kiss the workshop, half our plans, and possibly all of my henchmen and minions goodbye.
--> I checked the calendar. Huh, for once it wasn't Tuesday.
--> I needed my full wits about me for what was to come.
--> A Dragon drone roared past me, and I followed it in, as a thick, heavy stormcloud loomed on the horizon. [[spoiler:Apex]] would have to pilot the freighter in through THAT, while [[spoiler:Prototype]] worked faster than he ever had before to finish a project, or else we could kiss the workshop, half our plans, and possibly all of my henchmen and minions goodbye.
--> I checked the calendar. Huh, for once it wasn't Tuesday.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 43 (click to see context) from:
* BondOneLiner: After teleporting [[spoiler:all of the Slaughterhouse Nine except Siberian]] into space, DIRE says, ""Welcome to Lagrange point five, [[spoiler:Jack]]. Mind the gap."
to:
* BondOneLiner: After teleporting [[spoiler:all of the Slaughterhouse Nine except Siberian]] into space, DIRE says, ""Welcome "Welcome to Lagrange point five, [[spoiler:Jack]]. Mind the gap."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BondOneLiner: After teleporting [[spoiler:all of the Slaughterhouse Nine except Siberian]] into space, DIRE says, ""Welcome to Lagrange point five, [[spoiler:Jack]]. Mind the gap."
