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-->“The ‘acid’ won’t be much of a problem either because it ''isn’t.'' If it were anything dangerous it would’ve burned right through the vat already, and I can smell from here that’s just green Kool-Aid. I doubt it’s even hot. The bubbles are probably coming from an air compressor.”

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-->“The ‘acid’ won’t -->''"The 'acid' won't be much of a problem either because it ''isn’t.'' ''isn't''. If it were anything dangerous it would’ve would've burned right through the vat already, and I can smell from here that’s that's just green Kool-Aid. I doubt it’s it's even hot. The bubbles are probably coming from an air compressor."''



* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie is saved--and the entire world, for that matter--but at the cost of Boulder's life.]]
-->It wasn’t quite “happily ever after”, but the world had been saved, not only by Daring Do, but by the stoic and amazing powerhouse, Maud Pie!

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie is saved--and saved -- and the entire world, for that matter--but matter -- but at the cost of Boulder's life.]]
-->It wasn’t -->''It wasn't quite “happily "happily ever after”, after", but the world had been saved, not only by Daring Do, but by the stoic and amazing powerhouse, Maud Pie!Pie!''



* CosmopolitanCouncil / EqualOpportunityEvil: The council of villains includes changelings, Diamond Dogs, dinosaurs, and even some villains from ''Franchise/DragonBall'' and ''Manga/JojosBizarreAdventure''.

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* CosmopolitanCouncil / EqualOpportunityEvil: CosmopolitanCouncil: The council of villains includes changelings, Diamond Dogs, dinosaurs, and even some villains from ''Franchise/DragonBall'' and ''Manga/JojosBizarreAdventure''.



-->“Now tell me how to stop that robot or I’ll stuff you so full of cupcakes your stomach will EXPLODE!!”

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-->“Now -->''"Now tell me how to stop that robot or I’ll I'll stuff you so full of cupcakes your stomach will EXPLODE!!”EXPLODE!!"''
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** Mistress Towa initially appears as an ordinary pink pony but is later depicted as a giant lava anklyosaur.

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* MuseumOfBoredom: The Temple of the Lost is a labyrinth deep underground, housing anything and everything that gets lost. Which means most of its contents are mundane junk, like loose change, rubber bands, and socks.



* SuperSargassoSea: The Temple of the Lost. The protagonists go there to find Pinkie Pie's missing body, and they have to sort through loose change, missing socks, and other assorted junk first.

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* SuperSargassoSea: SuperSargassoSea: The Temple of the Lost. The protagonists go there to find Pinkie Pie's missing body, Lost is a labyrinth deep underground, housing anything and they have to sort through everything that gets lost. Which means most of its contents are mundane junk, like loose change, rubber bands, and socks. Though there are a few important items, like Pinkie's missing socks, and other assorted junk first.body.
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* SuperSargassoSea: The Temple of the Lost. The protagonists go there to find Pinkie Pie's missing body, and they have to sort through loose change, missing socks, and other assorted junk first.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: As a result of different authors disagreeing over what species certain characters should be:

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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: As a result of different authors disagreeing misunderstanding/disagreeing over what species certain characters should be:
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* NestedStoryReveal: The whole story may or may not be an in-universe fanfic--since one of scene gets replaced by Quibble Pants' review of the fanfic.

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* NestedStoryReveal: The whole story may or may not be an in-universe fanfic--since one of scene gets replaced by Quibble Pants' review of the fanfic.



* RememberTheNewGuy: Several chapters in, Gummy appears out of nowhere, but everyone (including the narrator) act like he’s been with Daring and Maud all along.

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* RememberTheNewGuy: Several chapters in, Gummy appears out of nowhere, but everyone (including the narrator) act acts like he’s been with Daring and Maud all along.

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* PseudoCrisis: The chapter breaks fall in the middle of random sentences, rather than anywhere that makes sense, and the author's notes try to pass these off as cliffhangers.
-->“We’re looking for my sister’s soul.” Maud got straight to the point. There was a\\
''[Author's note: Tune into the next chapter for the thrilling conclusion of that sentence!]''\\
silence that lasted several minutes.

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* CausticCritic: Quibble Pants, in his review of the fanfic. His excerpt starts by calling the story a farce and a self-parody, and he stays that negative all the way through.


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* NestedStoryReveal: The whole story may or may not be an in-universe fanfic--since one of scene gets replaced by Quibble Pants' review of the fanfic.


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* TropeName: The third chapter is subtitled, "Something Something Rock Pun".

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* NoKillLikeOverkill

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* LemonyNarrator: Pops up while the protagonists are in the desert. The narrator directly addresses the reader to explain the evidence of Baron Zeppeli’s involvement.

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* LemonyNarrator: Pops up while A few authors dip into this.
-->It was a slow crash, almost casual; The Stephanie Meyers of crashes. Like all Stephanie Meyers of Things, however, for all its slowness it hit Daring Do like a slingstone to
the protagonists are in kidney.\\
''[Much later...]''\\
Dear reader, I will make
the desert. assumption that you know some things about our intrepid explorers. The narrator directly addresses thing in particular that will be most relevant to the reader to explain the evidence next part of Baron Zeppeli’s involvement.this story...

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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: When Daring, Maud, and Pinkie pull off their {{Paper Thin Disguise}}s, the other henchponies realizes there's something fishy about those three. But they're too apathetic to think too hard about it or raise any alarms.

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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: When Daring, Maud, and Pinkie pull off use their {{Paper Thin Disguise}}s, the other henchponies realizes there's something fishy about those three. But they're too apathetic to think too hard about it or raise any alarms.

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* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: Joey, allegedly a minion of David (who himself is TheStarscream towards the impostor Baron), is actually loyal directly to the impostor Baron and working to undermine David. Except he also has his own scheme that hinges on becoming the Baron's vessel. And he's still willing to do David's errands for enough money.

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* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: Joey, allegedly a minion of David (who himself is TheStarscream towards the impostor Baron), is actually loyal directly loyal to the impostor Baron and working to undermine David. Except he also has his own scheme that hinges on becoming the Baron's vessel. And he's still willing to do David's errands for enough money.

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie is saved--and the entire world, for that matter--but at the cost of Boulder's life.]]
-->It wasn’t quite “happily ever after”, but the world had been saved, not only by Daring Do, but by the stoic and amazing powerhouse, Maud Pie!


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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: Pinkie Pie goes a bit dark when she threatens David for some information:
-->“Now tell me how to stop that robot or I’ll stuff you so full of cupcakes your stomach will EXPLODE!!”


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* DestinationDefenestration: David disposes of Baron-Bot 2000X by asking Joey to throw him out the airship window.


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* NoKillLikeOverkill


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* PutThemAllOutOfMyMisery: After the heroes foil his scheme to conquer the world, David decides to destroy the planet in retaliation.
-->“YES! If I can’t have [the world], no one can! AHAHAHAAAAAAAH!”


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* RoboSpeak: Baron-Bot 2000X is overly verbose, [[ThirdPersonPerson only ever refers to himself in third person]], and [[NoIndoorVoice constantly speaks in bold text]].
-->'''“Baron-Bot 2000X observes the summoning ritual has produced a suboptimal end state.”'''
* RobotMe: Baron-Bot 2000X, who's crudely modeled after David--and, like David, claims he's the perfect vessel for The Baron.


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* SaveTheWorldClimax: It starts with Daring and Maud trying to retrieve Pinkie's soul. By the time they rescue Pinkie, they've stumbled across David's plot to TakeOverTheWorld--and when they foil that, David instead tries to cause TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt.


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* SelfDestructMechanism: Baron-Bot 2000X has one of these, which he activates upon deciding he no longer has a reason to live. Because there's NoKillLikeOverkill, this mechanism is a nuclear bomb.


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* TrainEscape: At the very end, as Daring, Maud, and Pinkie flee from David on hoof, a stampeding buffalo herd separates them from him, allowing the heroes to make their escape.

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** Maud can deadlift a boulder, and she offers to demonstrate this for the Great One. When the Great One expresses interest, Maud instead pulls out a small rock ''named'' Boulder, and lifts him. The Great One isn't amused.

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** Maud can deadlift a boulder, and she offers to demonstrate this for the Great One.demonstrate. When the Great One expresses interest, Maud instead pulls out a small rock ''named'' Boulder, and lifts him. The Great One isn't amused.

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* DeathCourse: An underground corridor with numerous holes in the walls. When Daring triggers a pressure plate in the floor, frog-like slime monsters swarm out of the holes to attack her and Maud.



* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: Joey, allegedly a minion of David (who himself is TheStarscream towards the impostor Baron), is actually loyal directly to the impostor Baron and working to undermine David. Except he also has his own scheme that hinges on becoming the Baron's vessel. And he's still willing to do David's errands for enough money.
* DeathCourse: An underground corridor with numerous holes in the walls. When Daring triggers a pressure plate in the floor, frog-like slime monsters swarm out of the holes to attack her and Maud.


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* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: Joey, allegedly a minion of David (who himself is TheStarscream towards the impostor Baron), is actually loyal directly to the impostor Baron and working to undermine David. Except he also has his own scheme that hinges on becoming the Baron's vessel. And he's still willing to do David's errands for enough money.
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* TotemPoleTrench: The Cutie Mark Crusaders show up in a large trench coat and a face-concealing fedora.

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* TrapDoor: One of these drops Maud and Gummy into a pool of water. Daring has to dive after and save them.

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* TrapDoor: One of these drops Maud and Gummy into a pool of water.an underground lake. Daring has to dive after and save them.



* WalkDontSwim: After Maud and Daring crash in an underwater ocean and swim to shore, Maud says it would have been quicker if she had sank to the bottom and walked ashore.

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* WalkDontSwim: After Maud and Daring crash in an underwater ocean and swim to shore, Maud says it would have been quicker if she had sank sunk to the bottom and walked ashore.

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When the ritual to summon The Baron devolves into an embarrassing GambitPileup, [[spoiler:the Baron responds by ''unsummoning'' himself.]]
-->“That’s it. I’m done. This is all just too stupid for me. Next time you chuckleheads want to summon me, get your nonsense sorted out before I get here. Understood?”



* SssssnakeTalk: Captain Bob the lizard pony talks this way. None of the other lizard ponies do.

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* SssssnakeTalk: SnakeTalk: Captain Bob the lizard pony talks this way. None of the other lizard ponies do.

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** To the ''Comicbook/Doom'' comic: Daring finds a pedestal with the words "Rip and tear" engraved on it. Atop the pedestal is a chainsaw.

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** To the ''Comicbook/Doom'' ''{{Comicbook/Doom}}'' comic: Daring finds a pedestal with the words "Rip and tear" engraved on it. Atop the pedestal is a chainsaw.

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* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: Joey, allegedly a minion of David (who himself is TheStarscream towards the impostor Baron), is actually loyal directly to the impostor Baron and working to undermine David.

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* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: Joey, allegedly a minion of David (who himself is TheStarscream towards the impostor Baron), is actually loyal directly to the impostor Baron and working to undermine David. Except he also has his own scheme that hinges on becoming the Baron's vessel. And he's still willing to do David's errands for enough money.


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* GambitPileup: David's grand scheme depends on becoming the vessel for The Baron's mind. As does Joey's scheme. And Baron-Bot 2000X. And the Cutie Mark Crusaders. And at that point, Discord shows up just to troll everyone, and Eventide Zeppeli shows up just to insult the Baron, and then ''everyone's'' schemes just collapse under the weight.


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** Discord shows up, garbed as a Romane centurion, and proclaims that he's Film/{{Spartacus}}.

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