Fan Fic: Mass Foundations
Mass Foundations is a fanfiction series set in the Mass Effect universe
, written by Nord Ronnoc
. The second installment of the series (but was the first one to be published), Redemption in the Stars, is out. There are also four other installments planned that are currently TBA. The series is strongly inspired from Mass Vexations
by Herr Wozzeck
, given that both him and Nord shared some ideas together.
Redemption in the Stars is centered on Ethan Sunderland, the Courier. In the years after the events of his adventures in the Mojave
, a teleportation experiment has gone wrong, transporting him to the pre-ME2 Omega space station
. He soon meets Shepard's former squadmate Liara T’Soni
and information broker Feron
, and gets involved in their hunt to recover Commander Shepard’s body before it falls into the hands of the Collectors
. Redemption in the Stars was originally called Mass Vexations: Redemption and had a degree of involvement from Herr Wozzeck prior to a falling out between the two. It can be viewed here
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Redemption in the Stars
- Absurdly-Spacious Sewer: Ethan, Liara and Feron sneak into the abandoned mining facility to capture Shepard’s body through the wastewater pipe. Downplayed, as mining always produces large quantities of wastewater and the pipes of the size shown (they’re implied to be just large enough to move through) are quite likely to be used. Because the facility processes eezo, the water is radioactive as well; they could only get through because of Ethan’s Rad-X.
- Action Girl: While Liara seems obvious at first glance, the unnamed Blue Suns Commander fits this trope much better.
- After-Action Patch-Up: Much of the epilogue is summed up as this.
- Alien Arts Are Appreciated: Batarian Pyro Jath’Kar taunts the Courier with a reference to the Apocalypse Now.
- Aliens Speaking English: Averted. The Courier cannot understand any of the alien languages until he purchases a translator from a human-run shop.
- Anti-Hero: Ethan is depicted as such, specifically a Pragmatic Hero. To start, he killed a batarian thug stop him from mugging him and looted the corpse for anything of value to use, he agreed to work with Cerberus on a project to repair his Transportalponder, abandoned Liara and Feron at the mercy of Tazzik when things turned for the worse during their pursuit of Shepard and took a Blue Suns Centurion hostage to extract information on Liara's and Feron's coordinates from her comrades, only to kill her when his demands were not met and saw through the distraction the Blue Suns were attempting to make. Given where he came from, it's justified.
- Ascetic Aesthetic: The Shadow Broker’s base at Alingon is described as being absolutely grey and utilitarian and with good reason. The building was spliced out of several pre-made hubs so that the dedicated architect wouldn’t have to be employed.
- Batman Gambit: Ethan and others only manage to escape from the Alingon base because he counted on the asari guard he spared earlier to delay the rest of the attackers out of gratitude.
- Captain Ersatz: The turian scoundrel Hando Due and batarian Greedro are obvious stand-ins for Han Solo and Greedo. The encounter itself was due to the Courier’s Wild Wasteland trait.
- Combat Medic: Lynch personally healing Alan after he got hit by the shrapnel from the guard’s grenade. Ethan is surprised at the previously emotionless operative revealed to be a medic.
- Gunship Rescue: Downplayed. The Cerberus corvette turns the tide at the Alingon base and keeps the attackers at bay for a while, but then Tazzik’s engineers manage to disable its guns, forcing the squad to negotiate.
- Dead Man Switch: At Alingon, the squad cannot just destroy the missile turrets at the entrance because doing so would instantly alert the base security. The alert doesn't activate when the turret is simply temporarily disabled, however, which leads to the Race Against the Clock below.
- Deadpan Snarker: Ethan Sunderland, natch.
- Forgot About His Powers: Strongly averted—the Courier uses VATS, the Jury Rigging perk, Pip Boy map, and the Geiger counter functions, as well as various stims. Liara frequently employs various biotic talents during combat and Feron can fix equipment with omni-gel, like the ME1 Infiltrator class he belongs to. Even the Blue Suns’ members use the full spectrum of their equipment from ME2, with missile launcher soldiers, flamethrower troops and Legionnaires with anti-shield Disruptor ammo all present and accounted for.
- Groin Attack: A Blue Suns Centurion attempts this on the Courier, but he dodges it due to his close-combat experience in the Mojave. This mistake lets Ethan capture her.
- Gory Discretion Shot: Ethan saw Lynch engaging an asari vanguard at the Shadow Broker base before being forced to turn around. The next time he looks at him, purple blood is dripping off his armor.
- Hostage Situation: This time it is the protagonist who takes a Blue Suns Centurion hostage, when cornered and needing to get information on Liara and Feron’s coordinates. His demands are rejected, however, as the other Suns call his bluff and attempt to distract him long enough for the back-up to arrive. He ultimately sees through it and kills the hostage.
- Insecurity Camera: Played with; the cameras themselves are quite well placed throughout the building and on the outside, but they’re absent at the rear entrance since there are already guards and turrets present. Inside, they’re brought down by the terminal located too close to the entrance, allowing the group to hack into it.
- Instant Sedation: More realistic than usual; a manual syringe is used instead of a Tranquilizer Dart, the target is restrained, and the hitman, Tazzik, checks the dosage before using the sedative.
- Improbable Aiming Skills: Averted. In the first chapter, Ethan has only a decent chance of hitting the flamethrower gas tank at medium range with VATS.
- Last Breath Bullet: Christina is shot as the corvette’s door is about to close by the Broker's guards who hid out on a sidewalk. She doesn’t die, but ends up with Cotard’s Syndrome instead.
- Let's Split Up, Gang: When the Courier first engages the Blue Suns, a Centurion splits away from the remaining group to deal with him. Justified, as they don’t know his skills yet and Centurions are Elite Mooks in the game.
- Justified again in the third chapter, where only one Blue Suns hovercar out of five is sent to investigate the car left behind by the team and where Ethan is lurking: they don’t expect him to stick around near the facility and so the rest are searching for him on the outskirts.
- Mauve Shirt: Alan and Christina, though it's heavily implied that, despite her being diagnosed with Contard's Syndrome, she'll survive.
- Mugging the Monster: A batarian thug tries to rob the Courier soon after his arrival. Doesn’t work out too well for him.
- Mythology Gag: Plenty of examples from both series are presented in this fic.
- Not So Invincible After All: The Collector-General is a hulking figure of solid and lava, able to unleash biotic barrages and with inhumanly durable barriers. When Ethan ends up fighting it alone, the Broker’s guards consider him doomed and see no reason to intervene. When the creature finally gets brought to his knees, they fire at him, but it was too late.
- One Size Fits All: Averted. Ethan cannot use a translator looted from the batarian thug, because his ears are shaped differently and the earphones simply wouldn’t fit in for him.
- Post-Victory Collapse: After the Courier and the crew escaped Alingon with Shepard's body, he collapsed, promoting Liara to help him move to the medical bay and take his armor off.
- Race Against the Clock: The Cerberus commandos and the Courier manages to overheat the missile turrets guarding Shadow Broker's Alingon base. However, the effect only lasts 30 seconds, after which the turrets go back to normal. The resultant race to get to the compound before they activate is punctuated by the automatic countdown.
- Rock Beats Laser: Ethan kills a heavily shielded turian Centurion by stabbing him in the throat with his Bowie knife. Justified in-universe as kinetic shielding is only meant to work against high-speed objects, either being very ineffective or completely useless against melee attacks.
- Sadistic Choice: When Lynch received the coordinates for the location of Shepard's body and the comm link in the base on Alingon, he informed the Courier of the opportunity to rescue either Liara or Feron. However, they're unable to save both and they're well aware of it. Ultimately, Ethan chose to rescue Liara.
- Shoot The Fuel Tank: The Courier did that to the Blue Suns’ Pyro in the first chapter.
- Again in the third chapter, to a batarian pyro Jath’Kar. It doesn’t work as well this time, because he got caught in the blast radius as well, barely surviving as a result.
- Shout-Out: Several examples.
- Shown Their Work: Cotard’s Syndrome is a real condition with the symptoms much like ones described. It can in fact be caused by brain injury.
- The base infiltration scene on Alingon doesn’t arbitrarily choose the 30 second number to add more drama. That is the maximum duration of the Sabotage ability you can unlock in the game.
- Taking You with Me: The batarian pyro, Jath’Kar, jumps at Ethan after he shot out the flamethrower fuel tank, knowing that he was doomed either way. This only fails because Courier had his speed enhanced by stims, allowing him to escape the worst of the blast.
- The Cavalry: The Courier, Liara and Feron are saved from their first engagement with the Blue Suns by a sudden intervention of an unseen sniper. In canon, it is speculated to be Garrus, also known as the Archangel during his time on Omega.
- Weirdness Magnet: Ethan Sunderland, thanks to his Wild Wasteland trait.
- What the Hell, Hero?: Ethan gets one from Cerberus agent Lynch when he appears at the scene to find what is essentially a failed mission, with Liara and Feron captured and Shepard’s body still with Tazzik.
- And earlier on, when Ethan attempts to bargain for information by taking a Centurion hostage, the other Blue Suns call him out on the unprovoked killing he has done before.
- Basically Liara's reaction to Ethan's suggestion of handing Shepard over to Cerberus. He managed to convince her to see from his viewpoint, but it's clear that she was still upset about the whole ordeal.
- Your Head A Splode: The Courier finishes off the Harbinger-possessed Collector by discharging the entire clip of his M-6 Carnifex into his head, with predictable results.