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* {{Cameo}} - The zombies from ''Franchise/ResidentEvil'' and ''Franchise/DeadSpace'' appear briefly.
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* {{Cameo}} - CrossoverCameo:
** The zombies from ''Franchise/ResidentEvil'' and ''Franchise/DeadSpace'' appear briefly.
** The zombies from ''Franchise/ResidentEvil'' and ''Franchise/DeadSpace'' appear briefly.
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Cloning Blues has been renamed to Clone Angst and redefined to only be about people angsting about discovering they're a clone. Removing for not fitting the definition.
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*** [[CloningBlues And of course]] [[spoiler:Cave cloned the good TEEN/TEAM FORTRESS 2 to make evil TEEN FORTRESS 2 and they (evil TEEN FORTRESS 2) cloned Marrissa Roberts to make Assirram Strebor.]]
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*** [[CloningBlues And of course]] [[spoiler:Cave cloned the good TEEN/TEAM FORTRESS 2 to make evil TEEN FORTRESS 2 and they (evil TEEN FORTRESS 2) 2; the evil version then cloned Marrissa Roberts to make Assirram Strebor.]]
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* TimeyWimeyBall - The later chapters feature heavy amounts of TimeTravel, and Marrissa (the author) frequently gets mixed up on whether or not they're still in the past leading to some incredibly big [[PlotHole plot holes]], such as Wheatley dying, so she goes back in time to before she met Wheatley and brings him to the present only to forget its the past Wheatley so he inexplicably remembers things that in his timeline have not happened yet.
** More beautifully explained with this quote: [[spoiler:For those not getting it, this thought in the past is impossible because, since Facebook isn't "invented" yet, no one in the past would know about it.]]
--->'''Evil Heavy:''' We shold right a mean things on her facebook page!
--->'''Evil Medic:''' No you idot this is the past facebook isnt invented yet!
*** They do, however, have a Website/MySpace.
---->(AN: THATS FASEBOOK FROM THE PAST BEFOUR FACEBOOK WAS INVENTED)
** Also, Marrissa and other characters are very careful not to mess up the "time streem", but do anyway: if Marrissa took Wheatley from the past she couldn't have met him in the future, because he simply wouldn't have been there.
** Even more weirdly, Wheatley is shown to have affection to Marrissa before even ''meeting her''.
** More beautifully explained with this quote: [[spoiler:For those not getting it, this thought in the past is impossible because, since Facebook isn't "invented" yet, no one in the past would know about it.]]
--->'''Evil Heavy:''' We shold right a mean things on her facebook page!
--->'''Evil Medic:''' No you idot this is the past facebook isnt invented yet!
*** They do, however, have a Website/MySpace.
---->(AN: THATS FASEBOOK FROM THE PAST BEFOUR FACEBOOK WAS INVENTED)
** Also, Marrissa and other characters are very careful not to mess up the "time streem", but do anyway: if Marrissa took Wheatley from the past she couldn't have met him in the future, because he simply wouldn't have been there.
** Even more weirdly, Wheatley is shown to have affection to Marrissa before even ''meeting her''.
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* TimeyWimeyBall - TimeyWimeyBall: The later chapters feature heavy amounts of TimeTravel, and TimeTravel. Several plot holes are subsequently created by the author losing track of when in time characters are, such as Marrissa (the author) frequently gets mixed up on whether or not they're still in the bringing a past leading to some incredibly big [[PlotHole plot holes]], such as version of Wheatley dying, so she goes back in time to before she met Wheatley and brings him to her present after the present Wheatley dies, only to forget its for the past Wheatley so to remember events he inexplicably remembers things that in his timeline have not happened yet.
** More beautifully explained with this quote: [[spoiler:For those not getting it, this thought in the past is impossible because, since Facebook isn't "invented" yet, no one in the past would know about it.]]
--->'''Evil Heavy:''' We shold right a mean things on her facebook page!
--->'''Evil Medic:''' No you idot this is the past facebook isnt invented yet!
*** They do, however, have a Website/MySpace.
---->(AN: THATS FASEBOOK FROM THE PAST BEFOUR FACEBOOK WAS INVENTED)
** Also, Marrissa and otherhasn't experienced yet. Additionally, various characters are very careful not to mess worry about messing up the "time streem", but do anyway: if Marrissa took Marissa bringing the past Wheatley from forward in time should have messed it up via that Wheatley not being present to meet her for the first time (from her perspective) later on. Further muddling things, the past she couldn't have met him in the future, because he simply wouldn't have been there.
** Even more weirdly,Wheatley is shown to have shows affection to for Marrissa before even ''meeting her''.
** More beautifully explained with this quote: [[spoiler:For those not getting it, this thought in the past is impossible because, since Facebook isn't "invented" yet, no one in the past would know about it.]]
--->'''Evil Heavy:''' We shold right a mean things on her facebook page!
--->'''Evil Medic:''' No you idot this is the past facebook isnt invented yet!
*** They do, however, have a Website/MySpace.
---->(AN: THATS FASEBOOK FROM THE PAST BEFOUR FACEBOOK WAS INVENTED)
** Also, Marrissa and other
** Even more weirdly,
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* TeleportationMisfire - The prototip portal gun, originally taking people strictly to [[FireAndBrimstoneHell Android Hell]], by Chapter 16 also took Marrissa and Assirram to the land of dinosaurs, [[StarWars The Death Star]] and Portal High School.
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* TeleportationMisfire - The prototip portal gun, originally taking people strictly to [[FireAndBrimstoneHell Android Hell]], by Chapter 16 also took Marrissa and Assirram to the land of dinosaurs, [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars The Death Star]] and Portal High School.
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* UnusualChapterNumbers - ''ITS MY LIFE!'' has two chapters threes, then goes to chapter five. [[FourIsDeath There is no]] [[EpicFail chapter four]].
** While ''TEEN FORTRESS 2'' actually does have a chapter four, chapter three is called "[[ThirteenIsUnlucky threen]]".
** While ''TEEN FORTRESS 2'' actually does have a chapter four, chapter three is called "[[ThirteenIsUnlucky threen]]".
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* UnusualChapterNumbers - ''ITS MY LIFE!'' has two chapters chapter threes, then goes to chapter five. [[FourIsDeath There is no]] [[EpicFail There is no chapter four]].
** While ''TEEN FORTRESS 2'' actually does have a chapter four, chapter three is called"[[ThirteenIsUnlucky threen]]"."threen".
** While ''TEEN FORTRESS 2'' actually does have a chapter four, chapter three is called
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Trope has been renamed to Boob Based Gag. Removing for not fitting the definiton.
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* GagBoobs - At one point, due to a typo, Marrissa's fall was broken not by her lung fall boots, but by her "long boobs".
** Also her "big squishy chest" is able to hold Wheatley, a fairly large metal ball, inside itself.
** Also her "big squishy chest" is able to hold Wheatley, a fairly large metal ball, inside itself.
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Names The Same is no longer a trope
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* SelfInsert - The author's PenName is "[[NamesTheSame Marissa]] the Writer" after all...
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* SelfInsert - The author's PenName is "[[NamesTheSame Marissa]] "Marissa the Writer" after all...
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* TeleportationMisfire - The prototip portal gun, originally taking people strictly to [[FireAndBrimstoneHell Android Hell]], by Chapter 16 also took Marrissa and Assirram to [[EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs the land of dinosaurs]], [[StarWars The Death Star]] and Portal High School.
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* TeleportationMisfire - The prototip portal gun, originally taking people strictly to [[FireAndBrimstoneHell Android Hell]], by Chapter 16 also took Marrissa and Assirram to [[EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs the land of dinosaurs]], dinosaurs, [[StarWars The Death Star]] and Portal High School.
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Critical Research Failure is a disambiguation page
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* {{Retcon}} - Whenever its pointed out that Marrissa got a character's name (or [[CriticalResearchFailure gender]]) wrong she makes up a story about how the character was originally named her misspelled name before they changed it to the canon version for some incredibly convoluted reason.
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* {{Retcon}} - Whenever its pointed out that Marrissa got a character's name (or [[CriticalResearchFailure gender]]) gender) wrong she makes up a story about how the character was originally named her misspelled name before they changed it to the canon version for some incredibly convoluted reason.
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-->I pot Chell Junor in her krib an me an Gale did a trainin monstashe. The song was [[CriticalResearchFailure “Eyes on the Tiger” by the guys]].
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-->I pot Chell Junor in her krib an me an Gale did a trainin monstashe. The song was [[CriticalResearchFailure “Eyes "Eyes on the Tiger” Tiger" by the guys]].guys.
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-->I GOT A REVIEW SAYIN I WAS [[JumpingTheShark JUMPIN THE SHARK]] ([[CriticalResearchFailure ITS A TV WORD]]) AN I AM KINNA RUNNIN OUT OF IDEAS SO I THINK ONSE MARRISSA FIGHTS ASSIRRAM [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools ILL END THE STORY]] BUT IT WILL BE THE MOST EPIC AN ENTENSE END YET SO MAYBE THE LAST ONE WILL BE CHAPTER 20? FIND OUT!
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-->I GOT A REVIEW SAYIN I WAS [[JumpingTheShark JUMPIN THE SHARK]] ([[CriticalResearchFailure ITS (ITS A TV WORD]]) WORD) AN I AM KINNA RUNNIN OUT OF IDEAS SO I THINK ONSE MARRISSA FIGHTS ASSIRRAM [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools ILL END THE STORY]] BUT IT WILL BE THE MOST EPIC AN ENTENSE END YET SO MAYBE THE LAST ONE WILL BE CHAPTER 20? FIND OUT!
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* StockDinosaurs - '' T. rex'', spelled as... "trex".
-->Assirram made the first portal it was the land of dinosaurs so we fot over a big volcano but a trex eated Assirram so I was happy but Assirram explodd out of the trexs tummy gettin blood an branes every where.
-->Assirram made the first portal it was the land of dinosaurs so we fot over a big volcano but a trex eated Assirram so I was happy but Assirram explodd out of the trexs tummy gettin blood an branes every where.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Gale's last name has been changed to Thunderpants.
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Loads And Loads Of Characters is no longer a trope
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters - While the story doesn't have too many characters, compared to Portal, which had only two (three if you count [[TheUnseen Doug Rattmann]]) this trope applies.
** Even in comparison to VideoGame/{{Portal 2}}, Marissa's story had a good deal more characters than canon.
** Even in comparison to VideoGame/{{Portal 2}}, Marissa's story had a good deal more characters than canon.
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*** Scot's family is an entirely different story: [[spoiler:Scot's [[HumanMomNonhumanDad father is a dog and mother is a human]]. His eight brothers are mad dogs (only one has been given a name, Wulf (deceased)), and Scot himself is a dog-human hybrid. Scot and Pyro are involved in a romantic relationship, as (unsucessfully) are Spy and Caroline.]]
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*** Scot's family is an entirely different story: [[spoiler:Scot's [[HumanMomNonhumanDad [[HalfHumanHybrid father is a dog and mother is a human]]. His eight brothers are mad dogs (only one has been given a name, Wulf (deceased)), and Scot himself is a dog-human hybrid. Scot and Pyro are involved in a romantic relationship, as (unsucessfully) are Spy and Caroline.]]
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* OverlyLongName - Averted for the heroine, which is quite surprising given what [[Fanfic/MyImmortal the story is an homage to]].
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* TVTropesWillRuinYourLife - The fact is that Marrissa knows of TV Tropes:
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* TVTropesWillRuinYourLife - JustForFun/TVTropesWillRuinYourLife- {{Invoked}} (by the real creator). The fact is that Marrissa knows of TV Tropes:
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Compare ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'', ''Fanfic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami'', ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences'', ''[[FanFic/QuarterLifeHalfwayToDestruction Quarter-Life: Halfway to Destruction]]'', Fanfic/MarissaPicard. [[JustForFun/IReadThatAs Not to be confused with a certain]] Music/BonJovi [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jC67JzPqDG4&hd=1 song]]. [[SimilarlyNamedWorks Or any other song]] [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/It%27s_My_Life named "It's My Life".]]
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Compare ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife'', ''Fanfic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami'', ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences'', ''[[FanFic/QuarterLifeHalfwayToDestruction Quarter-Life: Halfway to Destruction]]'', Fanfic/MarissaPicard. [[JustForFun/IReadThatAs Not to be confused with a certain]] Music/BonJovi [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jC67JzPqDG4&hd=1 song]]. [[SimilarlyNamedWorks Or any other song]] [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/It%27s_My_Life named "It's My Life".]]]] Nor is it related to [[Website/ItsMyLifePBS the PBS Kids website]].
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* OverlyLongName - Averted for the MarySue, which is quite surprising given what [[Fanfic/MyImmortal the story is an homage to]].
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* OverlyLongName - Averted for the MarySue, heroine, which is quite surprising given what [[Fanfic/MyImmortal the story is an homage to]].
