Sturgeon's Law can be a cruel mistress. While popular series like Naruto and Harry Potter have tens of thousands of fanfics and dozens if not hundreds of entries worthy of a spot on the Fan Fic Recs pages, less-known franchises may never see more than a handful of sub-par stories rife with Rouge Angles of Satin and infested with Mary Sues.Luckily for Disgaea fans, however, the collected works of Nippon Ichi do not fall into the second category; we have Fail to the King!FttK is a Disgaea fanfic written by Varanus and based on the events of Disgaea 3. The plot’s big gimmick is that it’s set after the alternate “Super Hero Almaz” ending, which features Almaz being crowned Overlord and Dean of Nether Institute by Mao’s father and then being abandoned by the rest of the group for various reasons. While it’s largely considered a gag ending by the fandom (you need to jump through a few hoops to get it instead of the normal ending and several characters act very OOC by abandoning Almaz), FttK takes the notion of Almaz being Overlord and runs with it, turning Almaz’s Downer Ending into a Sequel Hook.The story picks up a week later when Aria, a kunoichi and former vassal of Mao, is assigned by a mysterious benefactor to check up on Almaz and finds that he’s been stuck in a Heroic BSOD since the end of the game. One hilariously brutal Bright Slap later, Almaz gets his shit together and decides to get to work on this whole “being Overlord” thing. Unfortunately, he’s got a lot to learn and no time to learn it in, because a mysterious and powerful new foe has just breezed into town with dark designs for the academy and ambitions that span the multiverse...With an intriguing plot, good fight scenes, interesting use of gameplay mechanics, numerous shoutouts and a sense of humor that’s close to Original Flavor, Fail to the King! stands out as one of the best Disgaea fics available on the internet.
Also, the idea of EmpathicWeapons is a favorite of the author, which fits in nicely with the magichange system.
Awesomeness by Analysis: Mao. In a flashback to the Almaz ending from his perspective, it's shown he actually calculates his attack patterns and enemy's predicted movements beforehand, right down to the angle his sword strokes make. Turns out, whenever he said 'My calculations were off a bit', he meant it.
Battle Aura: Monty seems perpetually surrounded by a bright yellow aura leaking out of his armor. Turns out his body is nothing but aura. Being The Faceless, it also served as an Expressive Hair of sorts.
Beat Them at Their Own Game: Almaz averts an early assassination attempt by Rasberyl by inviting them to breakfast and generally acting more polite than them, then calling them out and making them look rude for trying to kill such a gracious host.
During the battle against Monty, when they were dueling in the Up to ElevenInfinite Graves, Almaz wins by using Monty's own swords against him. Seeing as how Monty had previously described those swords as his soul, he basically saw it as a very brutal, humiliating 'Stop hitting yourself!' moment. No wonder Monty had to suppress a minor Villainous Breakdown when the attack ended.
Bright Slap: Almaz is on the recieving end of two (so far) - One from Aria to snap him out of his Heroic BSOD in Chapter 1, and another to prevent another one from surfacing. The second one is also a "Hey, You!" Haymaker, and the trope is even invoked by Mao:
"My extensive hero research has shown that no amount of mental turmoil can withstand a straight right hook."
Bottle Fairy: Tileyfa mentions that the humans of Holt Village see her as one.
Check Please: Tink, after realising the woman he's chatting up in the cafe is a spy hunting for Rozalin.
Gig: Hate to break it to ya, but I don't play chess.
Phoenix: Hate to break it to ya. Whips spear forward. Neither do I.
Chekhov's Gunman: Aurum vanishes several chapters in and goes on a quest to find his old heroic nature again. It’s a sure bet we’ll be seeing him again sooner or later.
A slightly more meta version with Aurum: during the Almaz ending, you never see him leave the throne room... because he didn't. Also, Champloo vanished during the Almaz Ending and hasn't been seen in the Netherworld since... because he was taking a holiday in Rhodonite Kingdom. His first appearance has him giving critical advice to, ironically, Almaz's mother.
Almaz remembers one point where a demon stole his pants while he was sleeping and set a Baciel on him during his early Academy days. Turns out Phoenix did it.
Adell kicking the side of his house.
Why Adell hates Monty Python.
The Chessmaster: Cinos is a villainous version of this. Interestingly, he’s clearly not a perfect Magnificent Bastard; he succeeds in isolating Sapphire and Aurum and trapping them in the human world and he lures Almaz and several of his vassals into a deathtrap, but he openly states later on that he didn’t count on them surviving and hooking up with the Disgaea 2 crowd.
Cosmic Plaything: No, not Almaz actually, all things considered things have been going pretty good for him. Axel, however, is still karma's personal Chew Toy.
Crossover: Word Of God says all the Disgaea characters will be appearing sooner or later. Adell, Rozalin and a good chunk of the cast of Disgaea 2 have already made appearances. Gig is referred to offhandedly several times before eventually making his own appearance as well and Etoile features prominently in the backstory of one of the antagonists At least, that's what we're led to believe.
Cruel Mercy: Aurum gets this treatment from Almaz, who refuses to grant his death wish and tells him to go find himself and rediscover the reason he became a hero in the first place.
Defeat Means Friendship: After being defeated by Almaz, Monty is willing to let him wield him.
Subverted. Whatever Monty really is, he is NOT Almaz's friend as shown in Chapter 23. At best it views Almaz as just another thing to corrupt and tarnish. Subverted AGAIN when the real soul of the weapon is shown to actually rather like the kid.
Did You See That Too?: Between Adell and Yukimaru after Aria intercepts them and gives Almaz a piece of her mind.
Dramatic Irony: Any reader who finished Disgaea 2 is well aware that Rozalin is both Zenon, the Overlord that Tav is hunting for revenge... and the little girl from the Snow Village that he almost gave up his quest to become a father for. He isn't.
Evil Counterpart: As confirmed by Word Of God, Tav is basically what Adell could become if he ever lost Rozalin.
Evil Sorcerer: Cinos fits the description quite well.
Evil Weapon: Sienna's cursed axe fits the description perfectly, and has displayed a disturbing habit of forcing its wielder to relive their memories. Mao seems to be able to suppress it to a degree.
Mao even lampshades it when he sees it, because it "positively screamed evil". It's been revealed that it is in fact the Grand Madness, the ultimate axe weapon in Disgaea 3, and is slowly driving Mao (more) insane.
The Faceless: Monty's helmet covers his face, and once that helmet gets knocked off, he's promptly killed and transforms into a sword.
Gameplay and Story Segregation: Averted! Many of the gameplay elements Disgaea is best known for have actual effects in the story. Leveling, transmigration, mana and weapon skills have all seen use so far.
The changes of personality generic units undergo when they transmigrate into a different class is explained as a sort of mental condition called Transmigrative Compulsive Disorder. Basically, the demons get so gung-ho about their new forms that they tend to only focus on what those forms do and lose their sense of self.
Turns out, all you have to do to read someone's title is just look at them closely.
The fic's best example of this trope? The villains of the story are not demons, but Item Gods.
Genre Savvy: Well, it is a Disgaea fic after all. That said, no-one's realised they're in a fanfic yet.
Homage: Infinite Graves is already noted on the Disgaea page to be an Unlimited Blade Works reference but Almaz’s battle with Monty takes it Up to Eleven and more directly references the Shirou vs Gilgamesh battle in UBW, with swords flying every which way and Almaz’s copied blades breaking with every use.
Monty himself deliberately invokes the Black Knight skit from Monty Python and the Holy Grail during his fight with Almaz. Hilariously, Almaz actually calls him on it and makes a few references of his own before the fight ends.
Almaz later on uses summoned swords like Nero from Devil May Cry 4.
Pandora is a reference to both the Pandora's Box weapon from Devil May Cry 4 and to Black★Rock Shooter, the inspiration for her human form.
Hannibal Lecture: Tav and Zenon play freaking ping-pong with these things during their battle in chapter 21; first with Zenon mocking Tav for thinking his despair could ever match hers, then Tav countering with a Kirk Summation...
"Can you really claim to be so lonely with Adell by your side?"
...and immediately launching into his own "The Reason You Suck" Speech. Which is then turned right around and thrown back at him after Adell performs his own Dynamic Entry and Zenon admits that he's right.
"Feel this, Etem. Feel the depth of my despair and solitude. May your knees buckle under the weight and let the black tide of sorrow drown you as you fall into oblivion. Take all of my anger, all of my pain, all of my sadness – I have no more need of it. I am free of it!"
Hard Work Hardly Works: Played with. Jericho has spent his long lifetime transmigrating over and over to perfect his skill with the sword, the side-effect being a huge number of useful skill such as healing, sensing mana, Stealth Hi/Bye and the ability to create and manipulate Dimension Gates. These skills come in handy a lot in the story, but on the other hand, despite centuries of training every canon main character is still stronger than him despite the fact they've only been fighting for a few months, tops.
Hot Blooded: Adell, literally during one battle. After coughing up blood, it hits the ground and begins to steam.
Incredibly Lame Pun: In Chapter 13: "About the phone call… even with the best telephone service, there's a problem with calling other planets. A big problem. Huge. It's the rates. They're astronomical."
I Surrender, Suckers: Phoenix, when caught in an ambush, tosses her spear away and unconditionally surrenders. Cinos catches it after it cut through several stories of the castle and throws it back to her while the heroes' guard is down.
Manipulative Bastard: Cinos has moments of this, especially when he lures Almaz into an ambush by baiting his love for Sapphire. Phoenix, on the other hand, seems to be a master of this, delivering a harsh "The Reason You Suck" Speech to an ally in order to nip a potential Heel Face Turn in the bud.
It's explictedly stated by The Emcompasser later that part of the reason he didn't want to work with Cinos was he enjoys deliberately withholding information until it suits his purposes to reveal it. And Cinos does exactly that after figuring out Rozalin is the reborn Zenon.
Mental World: Phoenix enters her own heart at one point, the inside of which is a Phantom filled white-hot iron city built atop a sun, floating in a starless abyss. This is directly contrasted to Mao's crystal wasteland in Disgaea3. Apparently the trick to traversing these worlds is an Alternate Character Interpretation of whoever's heart you're in.
Almaz's heart takes the form of an enormous city made of copper with a diamond replica of Rhodonite Castle at its center.
Moment Killer: Phoenix in chapter 16-17. Emphasis on the killer.
Noodle Incident: At one point, waking up in an unfamiliar room, Almaz idly remembers all the other times in the past that he's woken up in a strange room, wandering around in the middle of the night after somebody had stolen his pants, trying to avoid demons, only one time a Baciel spotted him and— At which point he re-suppresses the memory.
Adell refuses to comment on what made him hate Monty Python, but it's somehow Axel's fault.
OC Stand In: Several. Aria and several other vassals from Mao’s army are all based on the generic player units, and Cyprus is the Cu Sith that Sapphire summons for her Shunpo Moondance technique. The rest are all run-of-the-mill Original Characters.
Same goes for the antagonists, only with slight adjustments. Cinos himself is a Heretic (male healer) wearing a cape/robe, Phoenix is a Valkyrie with gauntlets as well as greaves, Sienna was a Heavy Knight/Berserker and Tav is a mix between a Sinner from Disgaea 2 and a Brawler from Disgaea 3.
Oh Crap: Plenty, but of particular note is Adell's after learning his new friend Tav is seeking revenge on Overlord Zenon.
Omake: An extra scene at the end of Chapter 10 explaining why Adell got the Monty Python references.
One of Us: Varanus isn’t just a troper, he’s a contributor known hereabouts as Arc Varanus.
Cinos: It's just that I promised his Princess that I'd make him suffer. It was really more of an idle, 'because I can' kind of threat, but... you know how I am with promises.
It was a routine plan – Step One, crash in, kill everything inside. Step Two, steal everything that wasn't nailed down. Step Three, steal the nails. He was a little sketchy about Step Four, but Step Five was supposed to be pure profit.
Taking You with Me: Tink attempts this in Chapter 15. Later, Phoenix apparently succeeds with Almaz.
This Is Gonna Suck: Phoenix, realizing Adell's about to use a special move on her, says this word for word.
Wham Episode: Chapters 19-21. Lots of big reveals. Mainly that the Big Bads are all Item Gods, and Cinos plans to force Zenon's hand by anniliating Holt Village.
Then in 20, Phoenix can use Chartreuse Gale. And summons the dead from Rhodonite.
And 21... Rozalin awakens both Zenon and Etolie's power. And Cinos reveals he was the one who sent Aria. Oh, and Monty is Kobayashi, and Phoenix kills Almaz.
Villains Never Lie: Happens with Cinos. A lot. Such as commenting that he left Sapphire stranded in the hands of several demons. That is, in the Human World accompanied by Aurum and her demon wolf.
As well as in Chapter 21, revealing he sent Aria to help Almaz at the start of the story, framing it as a "The Reason You Suck" Speech while neatly sidestepping the issue of her clear Undying Loyalty towards Almaz.
The Worf Effect: According to Word Of God, Chapter 15 deliberately invokes this to fully establish Phoenix as a threat, given the author's disappointment at how easily she was dealt with during her debut.
Another case with a different character, Jericho's injury , a burnt hole where his left lung should be, should relegate him to bed rest. Instead, he 'appeals' a petition in the Dark Assembly and, more seriously, charges off to distract a giant lava serpent from destroying Holt, all while only being held together by his own mana and resolve.
FttK is a Disgaea fanfic written by Varanus and based on the events of Disgaea 3. The plot’s big gimmick is that it’s set after the alternate “Super Hero Almaz” ending, which features Almaz being crowned Overlord and Dean of Nether Institute by Mao’s father and then being abandoned by the rest of the group for various reasons. While it’s largely considered a gag ending by the fandom (you need to jump through a few hoops to get it instead of the normal ending and several characters act very OOC by abandoning Almaz), FttK takes the notion of Almaz being Overlord and runs with it, turning Almaz’s Downer Ending into a Sequel Hook.The story picks up a week later when Aria, a kunoichi and former vassal of Mao, is assigned by a mysterious benefactor to check up on Almaz and finds that he’s been stuck in a Heroic BSOD since the end of the game. One hilariously brutal Bright Slap later, Almaz gets his shit together and decides to get to work on this whole “being Overlord” thing. Unfortunately, he’s got a lot to learn and no time to learn it in, because a mysterious and powerful new foe has just breezed into town with dark designs for the academy and ambitions that span the multiverse...With an intriguing plot, good fight scenes, interesting use of gameplay mechanics, numerous shoutouts and a sense of humor that’s close to Original Flavor, Fail to the King! stands out as one of the best Disgaea fics available on the internet.
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