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** Averted with Albus, who [[spoiler:recieves some training from Fairhart in The Fortress Of Dread, this then becomes a TookALevelInBadass for Albus. However his father does call him out that for all the power he does obtain, they are only offensive spells. He still knows practically nothing of defensive or healing magic.]]
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** Averted with Albus, who [[spoiler:recieves [[spoiler:receives some training from Fairhart in The Fortress Of Dread, this then becomes a TookALevelInBadass for Albus. However his father does call him out that for all the power he does obtain, they are only offensive spells. He still knows practically nothing of defensive or healing magic.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Albus, who [[spoiler:recieves some training from Fairhart in The Fortress Of Dread]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: Albus, who [[spoiler:recieves [[spoiler:receives some training from Fairhart in The Fortress Of Dread]].
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''The Albus Potter Series'' is a series of Literature/HarryPotter fanfics by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1619871/Vekin87/ Vekin87]]. Taking place 19 years after the main series, it picks up where the 7th books epilogue begins as it follows the adventures of Albus Severus Potter after he is put into Slytherin House. What makes this fanfic particularly unique is the fact that the author has released full complete books for the 7 years at Hogwarts as well as the author's ability to emulate Rowling's style.
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''The Albus Potter Series'' is a series of Literature/HarryPotter fanfics by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1619871/Vekin87/ Vekin87]]. Taking place 19 years after the main series, it picks up where the 7th books epilogue begins as it follows the adventures of Albus Severus Potter after he is put into Slytherin House. What makes this fanfic particularly unique is the fact that the author has released full complete books for the 7 years at Hogwarts as well as the author's ability to emulate Rowling's [[Creator/JKRowling Rowling]]'s style.
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Misused of Five Man Band. Only has four members, The Hero isn't part of this trope, ZCE, and bad Example Indentation In Trope Lists.
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* FiveManBand: Somewhat, among Albus and his closest friends.
** TheHero: Albus Potter
** TheLancer: Scorpius Malfoy; doubles as TheSmartGuy
** TheBigGuy: Morrison Vincent
** TheChick: Mirra Tunnels
** TheHero: Albus Potter
** TheLancer: Scorpius Malfoy; doubles as TheSmartGuy
** TheBigGuy: Morrison Vincent
** TheChick: Mirra Tunnels
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* AmplifierArtifact: The Dragonfang Wand makes people stronger by unlocking one's full potential. [[spoiler:Also, it weilds the combined power of the remains of every soul it has devoured.]]
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* AmplifierArtifact: The Dragonfang Wand makes people stronger by unlocking one's full potential. [[spoiler:Also, it weilds wields the combined power of the remains of every soul it has devoured.]]
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* ReformedButRejected: Subverted with Darvy, who is both a brilliant and beloved Potions professor, but rejects his new life himself, thinking it not enough of an honor
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* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: Subverted with [[spoiler: Fairhart]], who went through a period of this in his backstory, but while his motives in the period that Albus knows him remain relatively consistent, Albus's opinion of him and his methods shifts multiple times.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Dragonfang Wand has some... interesting side effects on [[spoiler:Albus]], to put it lightly.]]
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Dragonfang Wand has some... interesting side effects on [[spoiler:Albus]], to put it lightly.]]
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* BigEater: Morrison, one of Albus's best friends.
* BusCrash: [[spoiler:The Hammer,]] who is PutOnABus during book sixth only to be killed offpage early in book seven.
* BusCrash: [[spoiler:The Hammer,]] who is PutOnABus during book sixth only to be killed offpage early in book seven.
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* BigEater: Morrison, Morrison Vincent, one of Albus's best friends.
* BusCrash: [[spoiler:The Hammer,]] who is PutOnABus during booksixth six only to be killed offpage off-page early in book seven.
* BusCrash: [[spoiler:The Hammer,]] who is PutOnABus during book
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* ArtifactOfDoom: The Dragon Fang Wand
** AmplifierArtifact: Powers include: [[spoiler:unlock a one's full potential, summoning an army of the dead, and picking a master whom it will not allow to kill.]]
** AmplifierArtifact: Powers include: [[spoiler:unlock a one's full potential, summoning an army of the dead, and picking a master whom it will not allow to kill.]]
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* AmplifierArtifact: The Dragonfang Wand makes people stronger by unlocking one's full potential. [[spoiler:Also, it weilds the combined power of the remains of every soul it has devoured.]]
* ArtifactOfDoom: TheDragon Fang Wand
** AmplifierArtifact: Powers include: [[spoiler:unlock a one's full potential, summoning an army ofDragonfang Wand gradually consumes the dead, and picking a master whom it will not allow to kill.]]mind of all who use it.
* ArtifactOfDoom: The
** AmplifierArtifact: Powers include: [[spoiler:unlock a one's full potential, summoning an army of
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* CallBack: To many of Harry's adventures from the series, which Albus almost never realizes the significance of.
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* CallBack: To many of Harry's adventures from ContinuityNod: Many passing references are made to the series, which events of the canon series. Albus almost never realizes the significance of.of them.
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* CowardlyLion: Albus, at least in the first book.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder:[[spoiler: Sebastian Darvy screws over Albus so that he can join his half-brother, only to screw him over two years later.]] Also [[spoiler: Fango Wilde who basically switches sides whenever it's advantageous for him]]
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Albus, [[spoiler:to the point that his enemies notice and take advantage.]]
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder:[[spoiler: Sebastian Darvy screws over Albus so that he can join his half-brother, only to screw him over two years later.]] Also [[spoiler: Fango Wilde who basically switches sides whenever it's advantageous for him]]
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Albus, [[spoiler:to the point that his enemies notice and take advantage.]]
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* CowardlyLion: Albus, Albus is one, at least in the first book.
*ChronicBackstabbingDisorder:[[spoiler: Sebastian Darvy ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: [[spoiler:Sebastian Darvy]] screws over Albus so that he can join his half-brother, [[spoiler:his half-brother]], only to screw him over two [[spoiler:two years later.]] Also [[spoiler: Fango Wilde later]]. Also, [[spoiler:Fango Wilde]], who basically switches sides whenever it's advantageous for him]]
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Albus,[[spoiler:to to the point that his enemies notice and take advantage.]]
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* DeathEqualsRedemption: [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy, Warren Waddelesworth]]
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* DeathEqualsRedemption: [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy, Warren Waddelesworth]][[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy]] and [[spoiler:Warren Waddelesworth]] die the first time they fight against the [[spoiler:Dark Alliance]].
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** TheHero: Albus
** TheLancer: Scorpius, doubles as TheSmartGuy
** TheBigGuy: Morrison
** TheLancer: Scorpius, doubles as TheSmartGuy
** TheBigGuy: Morrison
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** TheHero: Albus
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** TheLancer:Scorpius, Scorpius Malfoy; doubles as TheSmartGuy
** TheBigGuy:MorrisonMorrison Vincent
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* GoldenSuperMode: Whenever Albus uses the power of the Dragonfang Wand, his eyes turn gold (tinting his vision that color as well), and golden light surrounds him.
* GrayAndGreyMorality: More so than the original Literature/HarryPotter novels.
* HeelFaceTurn [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy]], for all his past flaws, dies protecting his family and the Potters and Weasleys
** [[spoiler: Warren Waddlesworth]] may not have been a true villain to start with (this is VERY debatable), but it can't be denied that he died to help both Albus and the Wizarding World
* GrayAndGreyMorality: More so than the original Literature/HarryPotter novels.
* HeelFaceTurn [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy]], for all his past flaws, dies protecting his family and the Potters and Weasleys
** [[spoiler: Warren Waddlesworth]] may not have been a true villain to start with (this is VERY debatable), but it can't be denied that he died to help both Albus and the Wizarding World
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* GoldenSuperMode: Whenever Albus uses the power of the Dragonfang Wand, his eyes turn gold (tinting his vision that color as well), well) and golden light surrounds him.
* GrayAndGreyMorality: More so than the originalLiterature/HarryPotter novels.
''Literature/HarryPotter'' novels. Who's right and who's wrong is a complex issue, as Harry, Ron, and Hermione [[MisterExposition explain]] whenever a new major character is introduced.
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** [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy]], for all his past flaws, dies protecting his family and the Potters and
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* InstantAllegianceArtifact: The Dragon Fang Wand causes a shift in morality, making the wielder more likely to kill and fall into the DarkSide, at least according to Harry. It does make its wielder much more willing to do amoral things at the very least.
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* InstantAllegianceArtifact: The Dragon Fang Dragonfang Wand causes a shift in morality, making the wielder more likely to kill and fall into the DarkSide, at least according to Harry. It does make its wielder much more willing to do amoral things at the very least.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: The Renegades, a group of wizard vigilantes who killed Death Eaters after Second Wizard War. They wound up killing almost as many as the Death Eaters themselves.
* KnightTemplar: The Renegades, big time.
* KnightTemplar: The Renegades, big time.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: The Renegades, a group of wizard vigilantes who killed Death Eaters after Second Wizard War. the second war with Voldemort. They wound up killing almost as many people as the Death Eaters themselves.
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* [[spoiler:NotQuiteDead: Fairhart, even though his body was not found, every character in the story (except Albus) thinks he is dead, but it turns out that he really wasn't, as he is the titular Silver Wizard in the fifth story of the series, he then sort of kidnaps Albus, trains him to be a better wizard, only to die at the end of the sixth story, making him a character who was BackForTheDead]]
* SuperpoweredEvilSide:[[spoiler: The Dragonfang Wand has some... interesting side effects on Albus, to put it lightly.]]
* TheMentor: Harry serves as this a lot obviously, Fairhart later takes this role.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide:[[spoiler: The Dragonfang Wand has some... interesting side effects on Albus, to put it lightly.]]
* TheMentor: Harry serves as this a lot obviously, Fairhart later takes this role.
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* [[spoiler:NotQuiteDead: Fairhart, even NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Fairhart. Even though his body was not found, every character in the story (except Albus) thinks he is dead, but it turns out that he really wasn't, as he is the titular Silver Wizard in the fifth story of the series, he then sort of kidnaps Albus, trains him to be a better wizard, only to die series. He dies for real at the end of the sixth story, making him a character who was BackForTheDead]]
*SuperpoweredEvilSide:[[spoiler: SanitySlippage: The Dragonfang Wand causes this in its chosen masters as it gradually consumes their minds.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Dragonfang Wand has some... interesting side effects onAlbus, [[spoiler:Albus]], to put it lightly.]]
* TheMentor: Harry serves as this alot obviously, lot, obviously. Fairhart later takes this role.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Albus and bacon. Morrison and fudge.
* TwoFaced: Half of Fairhart's face is horribly disfigured thanks to [[spoiler: Fango Wilde.]]
* TwoFaced: Half of Fairhart's face is horribly disfigured thanks to [[spoiler: Fango Wilde.]]
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Albus and Albus's is bacon. Morrison and Morrison's is fudge.
* TwoFaced: Half of Fairhart's face is horribly disfigured thanks to[[spoiler: Fango [[spoiler:Fango Wilde.]]
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* WretchedHive: KakosKakos, known colloquially as the Toxic Quarry, is an impoverished town rife with crime and corruption, a haven for criminals that has horrendous living conditions and essentially functions apart from civilization and is most known for its illegal potion trade.
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* BusCrash: [[spoiler:The Hammer,]] who is PutOnABus during book sixth only to be killed offpage early in book seven.
