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* Hook accidentally walks the plank and nearly falls into the crocodile's mouth. Then he defies physics by making jump in mid-air back onto the plank. The crocodile's disappointed expression sells it.
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* Hook accidentally walks the plank and nearly falls into the crocodile's mouth. Then he defies physics by making a jump in mid-air back onto the plank. The crocodile's disappointed expression sells it.
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** Once Tink’s back and buzzing, Peter sets off to find the Jolly Roger. Swearing ‘Hook or me, this time!’
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** Once Tink’s back and buzzing, Peter sets off to find the Jolly Roger. Swearing Roger, swearing ‘Hook or me, this time!’
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** To save the fairy, Peter calls on ''every child in the world'' to clap their hands and revove her, they do. You can’t help putting the book down, and clapping yourself!
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** To save the fairy, Peter calls on ''every child in the world'' to clap their hands and revove revive her, and they do. You can’t help putting the book down, and clapping yourself!
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* Not to forget, the AwesomeMusic.
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* Not to forget, the AwesomeMusic.SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic.
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* Tiger Lily, who must be no older than Wendy, goes to her death-by-drowning with a cold, aloof expression all the while. DefiantToTheEnd, indeed. (Of course, Peter rescues her, but she wasn't aware he was anywhere near her until the water was nearly over her head.) Worth noting that Tiger Lily’s tribe considers this a FateWorseThamDeath, because they believe that “there is no path through water to the Happy Hunting Ground.”
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* Tiger Lily, who must be no older than Wendy, goes to her death-by-drowning with a cold, aloof expression all the while. DefiantToTheEnd, indeed. (Of course, Peter rescues her, but she wasn't aware he was anywhere near her until the water was nearly over her head.) Worth noting that Tiger Lily’s tribe considers this a FateWorseThamDeath, FateWorseThanDeath, because they believe that “there is no path through water to the Happy Hunting Ground.”
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* Tiger Lily, who must be no older than Wendy, goes to her death-by-drowning with a cold, aloof expression all the while. DefiantToTheEnd, indeed. (Of course, Peter rescues her, but she wasn't aware he was anywhere near her until the water was nearly over her head.)
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* Tiger Lily, who must be no older than Wendy, goes to her death-by-drowning with a cold, aloof expression all the while. DefiantToTheEnd, indeed. (Of course, Peter rescues her, but she wasn't aware he was anywhere near her until the water was nearly over her head.)) Worth noting that Tiger Lily’s tribe considers this a FateWorseThamDeath, because they believe that “there is no path through water to the Happy Hunting Ground.”
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* Four words: [[DisneyVillainDeath "Old! Alone! Done for!"]]
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* Four words: [[DisneyVillainDeath [[DuelToTheDeath "Old! Alone! Done for!"]]
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* Four words: "Old! Alone! Done for!"
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* Four words: [[DisneyVillainDeath "Old! Alone! Done for!"for!"]]
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* Three words: "Old! Alone! Done for!"
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* Three Four words: "Old! Alone! Done for!"
