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--> '''Radar operator''': Japanese air force report sightings of the aircraft above Tokyo, sir.
--> '''Faraday''': Tokyo?
--> '''Radar operator 2''': Japanese air force reports the aircraft has left Japanese airspace.
--> '''Dr. Faraday''': Where's it going now?
--> '''Faraday''': Tokyo?
--> '''Radar operator 2''': Japanese air force reports the aircraft has left Japanese airspace.
--> '''Dr. Faraday''': Where's it going now?
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'''Faraday''':
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'''Radar operator 2''': Japanese air force reports the aircraft has left Japanese
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'''Dr. Faraday''': Where's it going now?
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** The Japanese seemed to like the ship enough, taking all those pictures when it came down.
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** The Japanese seemed to like the ship enough, taking all those pictures when it came down.down and flew across the skyline.
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** In a meta sense, the transformation scenes of the ship were bleeding-edge CGI of the time. Even 30+ years later, they still hold up fairly well.
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** Jeff himself gets an awesome moment. When he's able to get the fireworks working so David will spot them and find his way home.
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** The Japanese seemed to like the ship enough to take all those pictures when it came down.
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** The Japanese seemed to like the ship enough to take enough, taking all those pictures when it came down.
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** Jeff himself gets an awesome moment when he's able to get the fireworks working so David will spot them and find his way home.
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** Jeff himself gets an awesome moment when moment. When he's able to get the fireworks working so David will spot them and find his way home.
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* David's mom gets a minor one when David calls the house (under NASA surveillance) from a payphone. Thinking quickly on her feet, she loudly tells Jeff ''not to hog the phone in case David calls,'' buying him a few suspicion-free minutes to arrange things with David.
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* David's mom gets a minor one when David calls the house (under NASA surveillance) from a payphone. Thinking quickly on her feet, she loudly tells Jeff ''not to hog the phone in case David calls,'' buying him a few suspicion-free minutes to arrange things with David.David.
** Jeff himself gets an awesome moment when he's able to get the fireworks working so David will spot them and find his way home.
** Jeff himself gets an awesome moment when he's able to get the fireworks working so David will spot them and find his way home.
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** In a meta sense, the transformation scenes of the ship were bleeding edge CGI of the time.
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** In a meta sense, the transformation scenes of the ship were bleeding edge bleeding-edge CGI of the time.time. Even 30+ years later, they still hold up fairly well.
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* The scene where David enters the NASA hangar and first encounters the alien ship. From the moment he first sees it, to the first time the ship morphs its hatch into the levitating steps is totally awesome.
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* The scene where David enters the NASA hangar and first encounters the alien ship. From the moment he first sees it, to the first time the ship morphs its hatch into the levitating steps is totally awesome.awesome.
* David's mom gets a minor one when David calls the house (under NASA surveillance) from a payphone. Thinking quickly on her feet, she loudly tells Jeff ''not to hog the phone in case David calls,'' buying him a few suspicion-free minutes to arrange things with David.
* David's mom gets a minor one when David calls the house (under NASA surveillance) from a payphone. Thinking quickly on her feet, she loudly tells Jeff ''not to hog the phone in case David calls,'' buying him a few suspicion-free minutes to arrange things with David.
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** In a meta sense, the transformation scenes of the ship were bleeding edge CGI of the time.
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--> '''Radar operator''': Japanese air force report sightings of the aircraft above Tokyo sir.
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--> '''Radar operator''': Japanese air force report sightings of the aircraft above Tokyo Tokyo, sir.
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** The look on Faraday's face right after saying this, as he watches the ship moving away from Japan at a ''ridiculously'' high speed.
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* Every time the ship goes into Hyper Mode is a moment of awesome really.
* The Japanese seemed to like it enough to take all those pictures when it came down.
* The Japanese seemed to like it enough to take all those pictures when it came down.
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* Every time the ship goes into [[CoolStarship Hyper Mode Mode]] is a moment of awesome really.
* ** The Japanese seemed to like it the ship enough to take all those pictures when it came down.
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NASA is an acronym; it is rendered in all capitals. Also, \"hangar\" as in \"aircraft hangar\" is spelled with an A, not an E as in \"coat hanger\".
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* The scene where David enters the Nasa hanger and first encounters the alien ship. From the moment he first sees it, to the first time the ship morphs its hatch into the levitating steps is totally awesome.
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* The scene where David enters the Nasa hanger NASA hangar and first encounters the alien ship. From the moment he first sees it, to the first time the ship morphs its hatch into the levitating steps is totally awesome.
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--> '''Dr. Faraday''': Where's it going now?
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--> '''Dr. Faraday''': Where's it going now?now?
* The scene where David enters the Nasa hanger and first encounters the alien ship. From the moment he first sees it, to the first time the ship morphs its hatch into the levitating steps is totally awesome.
* The scene where David enters the Nasa hanger and first encounters the alien ship. From the moment he first sees it, to the first time the ship morphs its hatch into the levitating steps is totally awesome.
