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sanityisoverrated2011-06-17 06:57:07

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MY ABILITY TO COUNT IS GONE. No, seriously, I managed to mess up the remaining chapters twice. NOW, AFTER THIS, there are only 10 chapters remaining. Sorry, but, I blame this story entirely.

Chapter 20:

LOVE, BULLETS AND IMMORTALITY

Only one of the above is ever truly relevant! Guess which one and win a prize!
Sonadow, Sonamy, Sonaze there will be lemons All rights to Sega and Sonic team and Nintendo while Conor is my creation Chapter 20 Job Well Done

Bunnie woke up Sally beside her still sleeping she had made it in but she still had to find where Sonic was and how many troops Conor had. Bunnie grabbed her new clothes pink shoes purple trousers and shirt. She looked out the door and left she began to look around the castle she eventually found the path down to the dungeon. She moved from cell to cell checking each one until she found Sonics.

“Oh mah”—sorry, no accent in this fic “Oh my stars, more than one Sonic!” Maybe the stars was too in-character…hmm…
Sonic is that you Bunnie whispered. B-Bunnie what are you going here he said slowly.
I’ll let that pass since g is close to the d on a keyboard.
You look like crap what have they done to you Bunnie said.
Take a wild guess.
Conor did this said Sonic. Only himself dear god she said. I'm here to find you and let you know tomorrow we'll invade I'm supposed to be spying tonight Silver will be outside and I'll leave and then we'll set you free and take down Conor.
You’re here to find him? Well you found him. Mission complete! WRITE. BETTER. AUTHOR.
We'll need everyone he's changed from the man I once called friend and brother said Sonic staring at the floor.
Far enough fr—BROTHER, WHAT?! WHAT?! NO. NONONONONONO—
You two must have been close friends for you to think of him as your brother Bunnie said. I knew him before this and no matter what I could count on him but now he's more dangerous than ever said Sonic.
OH THANK GOD. It’s only in a figurative sense. They aren’t actually meant to be brothers…I can rest easy now…
Do you know why he has the emeralds? Bunnie asked. Why does he need those he could never turn super the emeralds refused? Sonic said confused. Everyone's trying to figure that out Bunnie said.
Maybe he’ll turn into some ultra-powered giant monster like every final boss in the games.
In the distance footsteps could be heard. Ok I have to leave but tomorrow we'll set you free ok said Bunnie. The steps were closer Sonic could hear voices Conor and Fiona talking about the army.
But we can’t be told what they’re saying. That’d just be silly!
Goodbye and good luck Sonic said giving a smile. Bunnie left the dungeon through the other passage just as she reached the top of the stair she heard a cry of pain. Hang in there sugahog she thought to herself. Where were you! Shouted Sally.
OH SNAP.
Sally girl you could have given me a heart attack Bunnie said. Who said you could just walk through the castle huh Sally asked annoyed
You know, if this was me, I would have gone for a cheesy but logical route of Sally being easy on Bunnie, since they were close friends and all.
Sorry I didn't mean t... Bunnie began but Sally interrupted her Just don't do it again She said.
But that might just mean I’m going insane, your call, readers!
Later that Afternoon Conor sat in the throne room his hand supporting his head. Then Bunnie entered. Hey did you hear the freedom fighters might invade we would need a big army. We had an army of 1000 men but they didn't work out only 100 remain and they would kill anyone I tell them to without a second thought Conor said. Well that's reassuring Bunnie said.
You have 900 less men because they were either unwilling (reasonable) slightly hesitant (not so much). THIS IS NOT REASSURING.
I take it you wish to leave Conor said not looking at her. Not what I thought it would be Bunnie said. I'll get Sally to get your things.
That was easy.
Bunnie left the room and stood against the door. That was easy she thought to herself.
Hey, hey. Don’t repeat me, please.
An hour later she was at the gate her bag packed. A guard opened the gate and let her out. She saw the bush that Silver was supposed to be hiding inshe was half way there when she heard Conor call her. Bunnie wait Conor called. Bunnie stopped and slowly turned around a little scared. She Conor slowly walking towards her his arm shining in the moon light something about the way he moved scared her. W-What is it Bunnie said trying to keep it together. Your leaving and I didn't get a good bye hug He said smiling.
WHAT. NO, NO, WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!
This unnerved her but she leaned in to hug him he held her for a sometime. She began to relax she felt oddly safe in his arms. I think I should go Bunnie said. Conor pulled her close and whispered in her ear calmly. Did you think it would fool me you came to find Sonic and learn about my army I just made it very easy.
Wait.
Bunnies' pupils shrunk Conor pulled his gun out and shot her in the stomach she fell back clutching the wound.
OH MY GOD. WHAT. YES! THAT WAS ACTUALLY KIND OF AWESOME. Albeit only because I expected the author to let her slide. Seriously, with the way this fanfic has been going, I expected her to convert then and there.
Tell Shadow I'll be waiting try to make a good attempt Silver you can come out of the bush now Conor said he turned and left. Bunnie talk to me hang on Silver said running over to her. Silver teleported them back to knothole.
Silver can’t teleport…not without a Warp Ring.
Conor jumped up onto the the wall Fiona ran out to him.
And that that sentence almost made me facepalm.
Are you all right I heard gunshots She said. He embraced her I'm fine I did the shooting. You shot Bunnie? Fiona said looking up at him. She'll survive I got her perfectly she's in a serious amount of pain but she'll survive Conor said.
Yes, don’t try to kill your enemy who will now probably relay info that you are aware of their plan and get them to rethink their tactics. THAT’D JUST BE SILLY.
Tomorrows the invasion up for one more night of fun baby Conor said smiling. I know i can't say no its to good Fiona said smilling seductively. He turned to leave linking arms with Fiona and headed for their bedroom. Oh I just remembered Blaze still needs a little fun time with Sonic Conor siad. Fiona looked at Conor and smiled wouldn't want to disapoint now would we Fiona said. Conor laughed and headed for Sonics cell.
This chapter, and the last, are two of the worst chapters for me…to me, it kind of shows just how bad Conor (and, by extension, the author since he’s clearly meant to be clever) is at planning and execution.

Well I'm back from my holiday fresh and revived if i didn't have to redo every chapter i would be on the second story i've been thinking it over a lot it will be short maybe 10 chapter leading to the third being a long new chapter soon and still surprizes to discover so till then. PAZ! (Spanish 4 peace)

Wait. This is revised? What? Oh, I am so glad I got to this now and not earlier, I almost certainly wouldn’t have survived. Readers, what does PAZ mean? Let me know! See you next time!

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GIG Since: Dec, 1969
Jun 17th 2011 at 5:08:26 PM
This story is the clusterest of fucks. No matter how bad it gets, at least you can rest easy knowing that when this ends, you never have to read this again.
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