The Great Nitpicky Live Blog of El Goonish Shive

Mr AHR
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Okay, one line in here is still good. "That crazed look could have meant any number of things!" Slightly clunky, but good.

BobCat 2nd Mar 11
Yeah. Shive has lines that are not bad. They increase as time goes on. My theory is, he thinks of an amusing line, then tries to figure a way to insert it into the story.
MrAHR 2nd Mar 11
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