The Great Nitpicky Live Blog of El Goonish Shive
Susan doesn't even look like a jock. S/he looks like an unusually fit goth kid.
I was playing around with whether I should mention that or not, probably should have.
People don't trace back their memories to explain why they think things.I do. :/
Yes. So do I. But in a narrative sense, it's lazy. For example, there are people with extremely good memories, able to remember extreme details, but unless someone exhibits that trait previously it's a weak character trait. Susan was never the analyzing type until now.
Oi! Susan is my favorite character! Don't insult her... it...