The Great Nitpicky Live Blog of El Goonish Shive
Wait, why were the fairies even in their underwear to begin with?
To sleep, I assume.
Aren't they on, like, an important mission, though? Marines don't change into feetie pajamas when the sun goes down.
Shive does comedy, and I start wishing he'd go back to the plot. And then he does plot, and I wish he'd go back to the comedy. Wash, rinse, repeat.
I like your interpretation of the EGS sidemouth.