You didn't nitpick what annoyed me. Susan's stereotypical 'this techno-babble infested novel will serve me well' line. You see, all sci fi is full of techno-babble, and that is the type of sci-fi novel people actually desire to read. Every other type of science fiction is a myth. A myth I tell you.
Oh crap. I forgot the technobabble line! I was going to comment on that. More on the aspect of it being "Hey look. Susan has a personality trait. STAR TREEEEEEEEK."
Even at the time, I thought these weren't his best work. Seriously, for years I thought that the NP stood for No Plot, instead of Newspaper.
So, do they sell gender bending drinks at the mall? If so, why did they guy/girl act so surprised? Why did he/she buy it in the first place? Blah. AHR, Cakman, you have shown me the crap world of EGS. I don't know whether I should be thanking you or strangling you.
I think it's shrink soda. And he prolly lifted it from the mumbo jumbo mystery magic store where the goonmanji game came from.
AHR STOP IT YOU'RE RUINING IT FOR ME I DIDN'T READ IT YET