* AssPull: [[spoiler:The mayor appears all of twice before being revealed as the ManBehindTheMan.]]
* AuthorsSavingThrow: After Trish's final duel with her brother, she smiles and gloats as the Seal of Orichalcos takes him. A large fan outcry ensued as numerous readers argued this was ''far'' from heroic. A couple of chapters later, Critias lambasts Trish for taking pride in doing something like that to her own family and warns her that doing anything like that again will cost her his support - a scene ''not'' in the original outline, according to Occam Razor, but added only after he'd realized he was turning his heroine into a sociopath.
* BrokenBase: ''Many'' readers were angered when [[spoiler:Sin declared that she was responsible for Kaiser Ryo's FaceHeelTurn]], which amounted to Occam Razor shoving his created villain into the only non-outside-influenced heel turn in the series.
** Trish ''smiling'' as her brother was absorbed by the Seal of Orichalcos led to another case, as while some fans viewed Patrick as irredeemable, others declared Trish a DesignatedHero. Occam Razor himself decided he'd gone too far (see AuthorsSavingThrow).