* CrowningMomentOfAwesome/ CrowningMomentOfFunny: When Bree [[spoiler: kicks Alec off the Lutheran Cathedral]], now THAT takes some sheer gall.
-->Bree: I was optimistic, though. If I could outrun a werewolf, I could outrun a fourteen year old bloodsucking anesthesiologist, right?
* JerkassWoobie: Alec and Jane have a rather heavy TearJerker backstroy that makes you want to hug and cuddle them, [[ManipulativeBastard and then]] [[AgonyBeam you]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast meet them.]]
* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[DevelopingDoomedCharacters wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
** Also, watching Bree and Alec fight can be pretty entertaining in itself.
* StrangledByTheRedString : Though Bree is ''dead set'' on fighting it as long as she can it was kind sealed by this line from
--> Alec: She was one of my kind, yes, but one of a kind as well…which was peculiar since threads of my cold, empirical logic saw nothing remarkable about her in the least. She was a girl – my age or near to – with the enchanting beauty typical of all female vampires but not to the same memorizing extent as Heidi. Nonetheless, there was some ethereal quality to the girl that I couldn't place anymore than I could ignore.
** Kind of justified, in that Alec was bored out of his skull at the opening of his side of the story, [[spoiler: and actively contemplated turning one of the humans he was going to eat, just so he would have someone else his own age to talk to.]] Plus, it seems like all ''Twilight'' vampires are vulnerable to the same romantic whims of fate.