* AccidentalInnuendo:
** After it is remarked that it is [=StarGleam's=] second time out hunting, we get this gem: "she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and [=FireStar=] had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_." {{Squick}}.
** "Wll u be my mat" [[=GayStrip=]] [=ESked=].
* {{Anvilicious}}: Everything having to do with religion and homosexuality.
%%* AssPull:'
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment:
** You could make YourHeadAsplode [[MindScrew trying to figure]] out the significance of the newt in Chatter !1.
** The last few lines of the epilogue.
* BileFascination: It's as horribly mesmerizing as a natural disaster. A really amazingly badly-spelled natural disaster.
* CanonDefilement:
** Jayfeather is now lacking the "jerk" part of JerkWithAHeartOfGold, and seems to have mated with some random [=ShadowClan=] cat, despite him being disgusted with forbidden relationships.
*** Not to mention the fact that not a single cat in the Clan objects to his Warrior Code-shattering relationship, either.
** Sandstorm is perfectly fine with Stargleam stealing Firestar from her, and doesn't protest at all.
** Firestar, Graystripe and Blackstar are all suddenly prone to neglecting their existing mates and [[{{Squick}} falling in love with apprentices instead]].
*** Part of Blackstar's reasoning for falling in love with Stargleam is that she beat him in battle, something the real Blackstar would be far too proud to admit.
** Graystripe now hates Firestar, calls him an idiot, and says he's a mean cat.
** Hawkfrost betrays Tigerstar simply because Stargleam is [[GratuitousJapanese kawaii]].
** Daisy, now [=FoxDaisypaw=], has decided to become a warrior. She is also being trained by Cloudtail, practically setting her up for truckloads of DieForOurShip.
** The fic takes place after ''Sunset'', meaning it would be set in the lake territories, but the mention of the Highrock and Moonstone suggest that it is set in the Old Forest.
** Everyone apparently seems to be very happy that [=ThunderClan=] is being ruled by an apprentice six moons and three days old.
** Why exactly is Hollyleaf working with Tigerstar again? Canonically, she's a warrior code-obsessed KnightTemplar who went through extreme BreakTheCutie and SanitySlippage, so why is she suddenly working with one of the most coldhearted and cruel villains in the series, who broke her precious Warrior Code ''multiple'' times? And why does she try to kill Firestar if she only has a grudge against [[spoiler:Leafpool and Squirrelflight]]? And why is she [[spoiler:one of Three now]]?
** The actual books feature a lot of GrayAndGreyMorality, and the authors make a point out of avoiding {{Card Carrying Villain}}s and giving all villainous characters fleshed out motives. This fic?
--->"lol" lalueghed [=TigerStar=], "I dont care Im evillll!"
** All [=ShadowClan=] cats are on [=TigerStar's=] side.
** The author believes that [=StarClan=] can solve all problems and that nothing will go wrong if the Clans follow their path. She doesn't realise that, although [=StarClan=] is worshipped like God, their power is actually limited, they choose to play TheWatcher instead of God, and are, if anything, used to ''criticise'' fanatical religious bigots like her.
* CrackPairing: Hollyleaf×Tigerstar
%%* DesignatedHero: [=StarGleam=].
%%* EnsembleDarkhorse: [=FluffyKit=].
* GrowingTheBeard: The general opinion seems to be that it became more than your average bad fanfic somewhere between chapters ten and twelve.
* HilariousInHindsight: In Chaptr Three The Training Under The Star, it's mentioned that [=StarPaw=] loved [=JazzPaw=] (not in that way you sicko!). Now, [[spoiler: they're mates.]]
* MemeticMutation: It's becoming very popular on the fansite Warriors Wish to quote and/or reference the fic.
* {{Narm}}: '''All of it.''' There's even a ''literal'' Narm in one chapter: "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme."
* OneSceneWonder: [=BubbleFur=] (or "Bublesfor").
* OneTrueThreesome:
-->[=Firestar=] didn't leave insted he said i thought I herd you asking her to be '''our''' mate."
* RomanticPlotTumor: For a few chapters early on, the main focus of the "story" was on the LoveDodecahedron between [=StarGleam=] and... everyone else.
* RootingForTheEmpire: Basically, everyone reading the fic agrees that [=RedPaw=] and [=Lakepool=] are the ''real'' heroes of the story. It's not [=RedPaw=] and [=LakePool=] being heroes so much as their persecution by [[DesignatedHero StarGleam]] being the thing that makes her so unlikable.
%%* SoBadItsGood
* StrawmanHasAPoint: The characters opposing [=GleamStar=] generally have more valid points than she does.
* {{Wangst}}:
** [=StarGleam=]'s angst over her Clan "bevoming quare."
** The author's newfound plebian-ness.
** The fic takes a level in emo in Chapter 23 The Vist, wherein [[AuthorAvatar StarGleam]] angsts about how terrible it is that her best friend rejected her, probably because she declared her love via fanfic.
*** "WHY WAS HERE LEAF SO BADD?1!1?111/?12"

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