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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Upon realizing what position Azula is in at the end, many have posited that she doesn't actually have amnesia, as it's all a ploy to get in good with the Water Tribe royalty so she can dismantle the entire civilization from the inside.
** June, the girl who was introduced to us by breaking open a ship hull to capture a fugitive, wishes she could get dressed up more often, complains about her outfit, then giggles.
* AngstDissonance: The constant weeping, the gloomy dialogue that gets copy-and-pasted as much as the art, and the really stupid spelling mistakes tend to ruin the drama for most readers.
* BadassDecay[=/=]{{Chickification}}: Azula, we hardly knew ye.
** Toph gets this treatment as well, going from a devil-may-care fighter to a soft-spoken, nervous flower of a girl who willingly bottoms to a guy she calls "twinkle-toes".
** Katara, too. The things she does the most in this fic? Whining. Being self-centered. Making even her unborn child's death all about her. Only caring about being Zuko's love interest. Wearing pretty dresses (which isn't bad in and of itself, but considering the canon setting, they're very out of place). The only scene in which she's ever seen ''using'' the ActionGirl skills that she worked so far for in the series? When she [[spoiler:bloodbends Mai to death]].
** Actually lampshaded in [[http://s762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/HIBY%20Chapter%202/?action=viewĄt=056.jpg Chapter 2.]]
--->'''Toph''': Look Katara what happened to that fearless sugar queen I know? I know she's in there!
* BileFascination
* CanonDefilement: The names are misspelled, the mechanics of bending are all wrong, the characters are unrecognizable, and somehow we've translocated to the ThemeParkVersion of 18th century France if costume and architecture are anything to go by.
* ClicheStorm: It's essentially SoapOpera meets RomanceNovel meets LifetimeMovieOfTheWeek with magic kung fu.
* DesignatedHero: Katara. She's presented as vain ("I'm sure that Kuzon will come out quite charming, with me as his mom."), self-absorbed ("[Kuzon] died years ago, ''a day before my birthday...''" emphasis ''not'' added), and murderous (do we even really need to mention [[spoiler: Mai's horrifying death]] again?). Yet she's somehow always right and no one ever questions her.
** The same could be said for Zuko. Cheats on his wife, fathers a baby with the designated heroine mentioned above, smacks Mai when she confronts him, leaves his ''kingdom'' to go to Katara... and yet we're supposed to sympathize with ''him''?
* DesignatedVillain: Mai. She gets mad at the husband whom she's genuinely in love with for having an affair, whereupon he strikes her. We're supposed to hate her, why?
** Not only that, but the fact she hid the letters telling Zuko about his child is apparently hideous treason. It's not a nice thing to do, sure, but she had good reasons to do so and it's certainly not ''treason''. Particularly when Katara had every intention of hiding the child from Zuko anyway, and the only reason the letter came anywhere close to Mai or Zuko is a clerical error.
* DieForOurShip: The fandom is comprised almost entirely of Zutara fangirls/Mai bashers looking for a quick fix.
* DudeNotFunny: The aforementioned smacking of Mai by Zuko.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Sho, to an extent. Probably because (a) he's an original character, and therefore does not bastardize any Avatar characters simply by his presence, (b) his "evil" alignment means he's generally trying to kill off said bastardizations of Avatar characters, and (c) he's pretty much the only {{badass}} and good-looking character in the comic.
* EvilIsCool: Sho actually manages to pull this off. He comes in out of basically nowhere, nonchalantly tossing around a knife like Mai. Then, he fights Sokka singlehandedly, slyly [[DeadpanSnarker trash-talking]] with arguably the most cleverly-written dialogue in the entire comic (not that that's saying much). He almost manages to defeat him, too, until Toph steps in. And then he escapes with a [[DeusExMachina badass firebending move that nobody has seen before]].
* EvilIsSexy: Diaz tries to dial this down with Sho as much as possible because he's supposed to be [[DesignatedVillain evil]]. However, interested readers will notice that Sho is more muscular than Zuko, Sokka, and Aang.
* FetishRetardant: The sex scenes. Even militant Zutarians don't like it!
* FountainOfMemes
* FridgeHorror: Toph has sex with Aang, who starts glowing Avatar-state style. This is [[GlowingEyesOfDoom probably]] [[PhysicalGod not a]] [[SuperMode good]] [[PersonOfMassDestruction sign]] [[SphereOfPower in]] [[OneManArmy the]] [[OhCrap bedroom]]. That's right, folks. Toph is being subjected to a potential ManOfSteelWomanOfKleenex situation.
** Ursa's reunion with Azula, though intended to be heartwarming, becomes downright depressing when you realize that Ursa basically confirms all of Azula's suspicions - she did favor Zuko and [[WhyCouldntYouBeDifferent couldn't accept and love Azula for who she was]]. It's almost a good thing Azula was [[EasyAmnesia mindwiped]] by then, because this would have [[DespairEventHorizon broken her completely]].
** From [[DesignatedVillain Mai's]] perspective, it's almost a horror story, as pointed out before: Her beloved husband cheats on her and fathers a love child, but she's willing to let it pass and destroys the evidence. When her husband finds out, he [[DomesticAbuse hits and shoves her]] and abandons her, and his babymama horrifically and painfully kills her.
** In a flashback to Katara's pregnancy, the characters determine that because Katara's stomach has been unusually warm, he must be a Firebender. Immediately after this conclusion has been reached, Toph says that she'll be sure to teach the baby things as his ''Earthbending'' teacher. The only reason a Firebender would ever need an Earthbending teacher is if he or she was the Avatar, but Aang's still alive. Why even ''consider'' the possibility that Katara's baby would be the next Avatar? Then, think about how selfish and murderous Katara ends up being...
*** She probably didn't mean it that way. She probably just meant that she would be teaching the child earthbending principals and techniques, since Toph finds great value in them. As the cartoon has shown, benders are able to learn and utilize the techniques and practices of other elements even if they can't bend the elements. That's how Lightning Redirection was created.
** And now, with the [[SerialEscalation recent development of daytime bloodbending]] in ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', think about Katara's bloodbending scene. She not only bloodbent Mai in broad daylight, but she used that technique to ''kill'' her in front of witnesses. Yes, daytime bloodbending is possible now, according to canon, but it's also ''highly illegal'' even when it ''isn't'' being used to kill. Sho has solid evidence to convict Katara, not only of his sister's murder, but also of a notable in-universe ''war crime'' - but he can't get that evidence into court. Because Katara is Princess of the Water Tribe and now a Fire Lady, with high-ranking friends in every other government on the planet, she is effectively safe from ''ever'' having to withstand a fair trial. In the eyes of the law, Katara can do no wrong - what's to stop her from being even more horrible to her subjects than Ozai and Azula ever were? Especially since her subjects are ''Fire Nation,'' her tribe's long-term ''enemies'' - and she obviously hasn't acquired the same forgiving nature she had toward the end of the series? [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen All hail Fire Lady Katara]], folks. And the main characters wonder why Sho's revolution is able to gain ground so fast in the sequel...
* FunnyAneurysmMoment[=/=]HarsherInHindsight: Toph, after hearing that Sokka revealed Kuzon's existence by sending a letter to Zuko, says "Katara is going to kill you... I can only imagine what Mai will do to Zuko...". A [[DieForOurShip demonized]], OutOfCharacter, {{Yandere}} Mai poisons Katara, causing her to miscarry [[note]]it had happened at the time, but Katara was unaware of Mai's involvement at this point in the story[[/note]], and later tries to kill her herself.
** It's astonishing how similar Zuko confronting Mai about hiding the existence of his love child with Katara by hiding her letters until a servant showed them to him is to Ozai confronting Ursa in a flashback in ''The Search'' over [[spoiler:Zuko being Ikem's son rather than Ozai's- he was wrong but didn't know it at the time]], something he learned by the servant Ursa entrusted to deliver her letters betraying her and giving them to Ozai. [[GenerationXerox Zuko may be turning out more like Ozai]] than he thought here.
* HilariousInHindsight: Bloodbending is performed without requiring the full moon, which became canon in ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra''.
** Sho's use of firebending to make a disappearing act is also highly similar to something [[spoiler: Zaheer]] did in season 3 of Korra, only he did it with ''air'', a far more transparent element, making Sho's move suddenly all the more plausible.
* HumorDissonance: Some might consider the following joke amusing; to others, it's fairly pointless or SnarkBait.
--> '''Aang:''' Guys, I have great news! I finally did it!
--> '''Zuko:''' What, you lost your virginity?
--> '''Sokka:''' MKKKFFF, good one.
* IKnewIt: [[spoiler:Daytime bloodbending]] is canon now. [[spoiler:Yakone, Amon, and Tarrlok]] pulled it off in ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'' [[spoiler:not only without a full moon, but Yakone did it at every point in time without a full moon]]. ''[[TheCuckoolanderWasRight Jackie Diaz]]'' [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight managed to make a halfway correct guess about Avatar metaphysics]].
** Except for the fact that most bloodbenders still ''cannot'' bloodbend during the day (which is why [[spoiler:Yakone]] only did it during the day, so that people would not suspect that bloodbending was taking place). [[spoiler:Yakone's family]] had a unique special bending ability, much like Combustion Man.
* JerkassDissonance: Mai gets a lot of sympathy, probably because [[StrawmanHasAPoint she tends to be right when it comes to the important details of the comic.]]
* LesYay: There's only [[http://sarajaye.superbusnet.com/Icons/Humor/HIBY%20mocks/azutara2.gif so many cuddly, affectionate scenes Azula and Katara can share]] before you start to wonder what the real OTP of this comic is.
** There's a bit of Toph/Katara LesYay early on.
* MarySue: Let's count 'em, shall we?
** FixerSue: Pretty much all the female characters take it in turns to get their friends to hook up amongst each other.
** GodModeSue: A possible interpretation of Katara's infamous daytime bloodbending, as well as the several times when her HealingHands are ''vastly'' more powerful than in the show. It's either this or CriticalResearchFailure.
** JerkSue: Zuko gets away with DomesticAbuse, abandoning the realm to run away with Katara, ''impregnating Katara (thrice) despite all the drama it would bring''.
** PossessionSue: Katara, who looks more and more like the artist as the comic goes on.
** PuritySue: Azula. Also Toph, whose tomboyish personality seems to have degenerated into the occasional matchmaking mischief and one curse when she's fighting Sho.
** RelationshipSue: Zuko and Katara are this for each other, since a good part of the damn plot is centered on how their personalities are changed for the worse so they can hook up.
** VillainSue: Sho displays some shades of this, especially in his [[DeusExMachina exit.]] [[{{Badass}} Though considering Sho is arguably the best character in this comic,]] [[TropesAreNotBad this may actually be a good thing.]]
* MemeticMutation: '''''CHARD MONSTER!!!'''''
** '''Mai:''' [[RemixComic Oh bitch best believe it is Hammertime]]. [[SpeedEchoes Wanananana]]
* MoralEventHorizon: Mai killing Katara's unborn baby via poisoned fruit is meant to be this. For more objective readers, it's [[spoiler:Katara bloodbending Mai to death, when she was perfectly capable of merely incapacitating her so she would be taken to trial for attempted murder.]]
* {{Narm}}: Some of the "romantic" or "sad" scenes are absolutely ''hysterical''. Such as Aang glowing avatar-style when having sex with Toph, Azula asking the badly photoshopped duckturtle to be her friend, the photoshop talking panda, etc.
* NightmareFuel: Those half-headed spirit monsters looked ''freaky''.
** Mai's TearsOfBlood [[spoiler:as Katara murders her.]]
** The bedroom scene with Toph and Aang, already described under FridgeHorror. On top of that, Aang's very young face is pasted on to a character from ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' with a long, slender body, making him look creepily [[OffModel very disproportionate]], not to mention that his face seems to be stuck in a permanent UncannyValley SlasherSmile.
* RonTheDeathEater: Mai, who poisons Katara to cause her to have a miscarriage and later tries to kill her. Then again, this might be a subversion, as she's arguably more sympathetic than Zuko or Katara.
* RootingForTheEmpire: Given how our "heroes" are more or less [[DesignatedHero complete assholes]], it's no surprise that most of the comics detractors root for Mai and Sho due to Mai being a lot more sympathetic than Katara and Sho being a {{Badass}}.
* SignatureScene
** Zuko confronting Mai about her actions regarding his love child with Katara. It's memorable partly because it's a good indicator of the comic's sense of morality (the guy who had a child out of wedlock is the sympathetic character), and writing (two words: "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin chard]] [[MemeticMutation monster]]").
** Katara [[spoiler:bloodbending Mai to death]], is fairly well remembered, given that it's not only highly morally questionable, but also a blatant violation of canon.
* SnarkBait: There have already been dramatic readings!
* SoBadItsGood: The art is blatantly traced, and often seems completely unbelievable for the situation. The characters are ludicrously OutOfCharacter, and the dialogue is terribly written, but there's quite a few unintentionally funny moments and lines.
* StrangledByTheRedString: All three of the couples, though Aang and Toph suffer slightly less than the other two (likely due to a lack of face time and over the top drama).
* StrawmanHasAPoint: Mai hides letters from Katara to Zuko telling him that she's pregnant. When confronted by Zuko, she gives a reason that [[http://i762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/HIBY%20Chapter%201/028.jpg does make sense]]: She wants to prevent a possible civil war coming from all the succession problems that the existence of a bastard child of the Fire Lord would bring. (And, well, Zuko impregnated Katara ''[[YourCheatingHeart when he already was married to Mai]]''). However, since this is [[RonTheDeathEater Mai]] and she is [[PossessionSue Katara's]] [[DieForOurShip love rival for Zuko]], she's [[DerailingLoveInterests presented as a]] [[ClingyJealousGirl petty and clingy]] DesignatedVillain who does this only out of bitterness and jealousy... and we're supposed to side with ''Zuko'' [[DomesticAbuser when, in response to her rant, he humiliates and beats her]] before abandoning his war-torn nation to run away with his babymama. Interestingly enough, Katara herself, who is not a strawman, has similar reasons for not telling Zuko.
* TheyJustDidntCare: "Chard monster" was probably supposed to be ''charred'' monster, years after Zuko's scar has stopped being such a sore point for him.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: [[{{Badass}} Sho]] is far and away the best thing about this story. Unfortunately, he barely appears in it.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Just about everything that goes on in the background could have made a more interesting story than the actual story. Aang finding a [[HiddenElfVillage underground temple of surviving Air Nomads]]? Glossed over in the prologue. Azula's adventures, which somehow involved her blackmailing Mai to get a seat in the new Fire Senate while simultaneously dressing like a ninja? Never elaborated upon. Sho's ''[[RememberTheNewGuy existence]]''? Nope. We get to focus on a convoluted and increasingly stupid romance story between six fatally brain-dead people.
* ThirtySuePileup: [[PossessionSue Katara]], [[PuritySue Azula, Toph]], [[RelationshipSue Zu]][[JerkSue ko]]... Sokka stops just short of Studom and Aang doesn't do enough to qualify.
* UnfortunateImplications: As [[http://www.projectafterforums.com/index.php?s=88ce4a7f1f107ccd2593676b5fa0d833&showtopic=2711&pid=124372&st=0&#entry124372 this]] review states, this story is written by a [[FemaleMisogynist woman]] who portrays the women she writes as completely useless without men. Either that, or said women pull all kinds of crap on others either just to get the men to look at them, or to punish other women for taking away "their" men's attentions.
** Not to mention that Diaz completely removes Suki from the plot, instead giving Sokka a "happy" ending with the ''extremely'' {{Chickifi|cation}}ed Azula... but then steals Suki's design to create Mai's maid.
* UnintentionallySympathetic: Mai is supposed to be the straight villain, and does some pretty nasty things, but the comic makes it very clear that everything Mai did is because she is in love with Zuko. Despite everybody else's love being so important to the series, the series itself never treats Mai's feelings as important.
* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Katara is supposed to be seen as the [[StarCrossedLovers torn heroine who has to fight to be with the man she loves even with the stigma]]. However, the story portrays her as being very shallow and self-centered. Her miscarriage was supposed to give her sympathy, but all it showed that she would make even her dead child all about her.
** [[JerkSue Zuko]] is supposed to be the romantic, male lead that is torn between duty and the love of his life. However, his actions could be seen as a philanderer who puts his heart before his country and his [[DomesticAbuse hitting Mai when he found she hid the letters about his child with Katara]] showed that he doesn't give a damn about his wife, who he cheated on.
** The fact that the "stigma" and "duties" are taken care of by a few choice words by Zuko, also detracts from this as it renders all points that were supposed to garner sympathy meaningless.
* {{Wangst}}: Most of the couples - particularly Aang and Toph, wangst over how they can't be with the one they love, despite having no real reason why they can't. While Katara's angst over losing her unborn son is understandable, mourning for three years and building a giant tombstone for him is a bit extreme.
** It's not just about Katara's extreme mourning, it's about how she makes it [[ItsAllAboutMe all about her]]. "Kuzon" died ''a day before her birthday'', after all. The dead child is treated as just an extension of Katara's derailed personality and a plot device to have her [[spoiler:''murdering'' Mai in the worst way possible]].
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