* EnsembleDarkHorse - Viggo Schmatz, the '[[MagnificentBastard cheese master]]' who uses orphan labourers to do his bidding in the first book, before being, unfortunately, PutOnABus. Made doubly unfortunate by the fact that his character was developed a ''lot'' while he was there.
* {{Narm}} - A few scenes that are assumedly serious become narmish due to lack of punctuation. Since when does a ''yell of excruciating pain'' not warrant an exclamation point? Fortunately, this is one of the only errors of this type for the duration of the entire series.
* NightmareFuel -
** Everything the ODA does. It's not so bad for the reader, though.
** The illustration of Teddy was pretty effed-up.