* EndingFatigue: Pepper Potts goes up against Christian Grey, awesome, right? [[spoiler:He gets his ass kicked]], bonus!
** ...Then he decides to [[spoiler: sue Clint and Natasha for their ass-kicking]], and goes after Jennifer Walters in the process. Okay, cool! Reading about him get [[spoiler: beat up by She-Hulk]]? Totally worth it.
** ''Then'' he ends up [[spoiler: Amora's champion, going after Jane]].
** ''And then'' he [[spoiler: organizes a prison riot, and escapes, during which Rogue absorbs his personality and ends up gong after Clint]]. And that's not even the end of the fic yet, with it running at 68 chapters. Tell me, why haven't they [[KillHimAlready killed him already]], again?
** Interestingly, the ending fatigue basically is the reason the fanfiction becomes a full-fledged story. While the subsequent sections drag out the initial point of the fanfiction, they're treated more like subsequent episodes.
* HarsherInHindsight: Widow's worries [[spoiler: over her prior miscarriage, and worry over whether she should have Hawkeye's kid]] are this in light of ''Age of Ultron'' revealing that [[spoiler: her Red Room training made it so she can never have children.]]
* HilariousInHindsight: Black Widow in this fanfic [[spoiler:becomes pregnant with Hawkeye's child]]. Two years later as the cast prepped for filming ''Film/AvengersAgeOfUltron'', [[spoiler:Scarlett Johansson became pregnant (from her fiance), causing some HideYourPregnancy snafus]] to be needed for the film.
** The fic not only predicted the appearance of the Winter Soldier in the MCU, but gives him the name Film/AmericanSniper.
** In the fic, Hawkeye has such a low sperm count that he's thrilled to have been able to father even one child. [[spoiler:In ''Age of Ultron'', he has two children and his wife is pregnant with a third.]]
* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: How do you make Christian Grey the perfect ButtMonkey? Have each women he stalks kick his ass each time.
** Pepper Potts hold her own against him and practically has control of the situation by the time Hawkeye and Black Widow show up.
*** Earlier, she consistently refused his advances and proved that she didn't always need Tony to protect her. In the frequent emails that Christian keeps sending, Pepper snaps at him in a message and responds that he's not the center of the universe before calling him out on his idea of what women were supposed to be like.
*** Her fight with Christian itself is impressive. Pepper references to the lessons she learned from Happy regarding fighting and [[CombatPragmatist uses her surroundings (and heels) to her advantage.]] It really is awesome to see your typical DamselInDistress become a DamselOutOfDistress.
** Jennifer Walters goes Hulk on him when he threatens her assistant just to have dinner with her.
** Jane proves her [[HiddenDepths intelligence in music]], baffling Grey, who [[CondescendingCompassion expected her not to know anything about classical music]]. She also refuses to let him grope her later, stabbing him with a fork.
** Tony gets one too. How does he get [[spoiler: Ana]] to shut up and stop SlutShaming Christian's victims? [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure He threatens to take it out on Christian.]] She finally shuts up.
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