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* {{Anvilicious}}: RAPE IS NOT GOOD. The anti-rape message isn't a terrible one, especially in light of recent headlines. The way the author conveys the message, however, leaves a lot to be desired.
* DontShootTheMessage: The author wants to show us that [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape is bad]] and it shouldn't be glorified in fanfic. He isn't wrong, it's just that the story itself does not really help his cause.
* HilariousInHindsight: At one point, Simon is said to be fighting aliens in ''VideoGame/CallOfDuty''. At the time of this fanfic's release (2010), the concept of fighting aliens in ''Call of Duty'' (which is a realistic modern military shooter) was seen as absurd. Fast forward three years to ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDutyGhosts Ghosts]]'', and there ''is'' a game mode (named "Extinction") that involves fighting aliens.
* {{Narm}}: Even if one gets past the basic concept of an anti-rape ''Film/AlvinAndTheChipmunks'' fanfiction guest-starring Music/SnoopDogg, it's still impossible to take seriously. The most notable example is the rape scene: Not only does the author describe Brittany's eyes popping out of her skull in shock, but a particularly gruesome bit [[MoodWhiplash abruptly cuts to "Theodor" waking up and saying that he has to "take a shit".]]
* NauseaFuel: Particularly the part where the bathroom floor is "covered in a mix of blood and semen from Ian's cock".
%%* {{Squick}}: A lot of it.
* TheWoobie: As ridiculous as the story is, it's hard not to feel sorry for Brittany.

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