* Many of the RatedMForManly moments of the story are so incredibly over the top that is very hard to take them seriously.
* In the seventh part of the story, [[InterspeciesRomance a wizard names Clawdorf marries a pony.]] MaKesJustAsMuchSenseInContext.
* In the third part of the story, there is a chapter names "[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Hulk Loses His Pants"]], which contains this gem:
->''[[LargeHam “AAAAAAARRRRRRGGHHHHHGGGGGG!!! HULKS HAS NO PANTS NOW! HULK FEELS SO FREE!”]]''