''Fanfic/PastSins'' is one of the most popular fanfics in the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanbase. Months after completing the story, its author Pen Stroke decided to give various writers from the /fic/ board on Website/{{Ponychan}} a chance to riff the original, previously unseen and unrevised version of the story. Readers from the Equestria Daily fansite were also recruited to add riffs of their own. The result is an {{MST}}, which can be found [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uJ8FqW1zBIzsYZoe4M1ILS9H8wgk2zjEEGQqmgNsfIg/edit?hl=en_US online.]]

Many years later, the people behind it(and the [[Fanfic/TheConversionBureauMST Conversion Bureau]] and [[FanFic/MyLittleUnicornBelivingIsMagicMST Magic is Believing]] {{MST}}s, of course) came together to revive the series as FanFic/FanficTheater3015, which has been going strong ever since.

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!!The ''Fanfic/PastSins'' {{MST}} provides examples of the following tropes:

* AffectionateParody: Despite all the jokes, at least some of the riffers are fans of ''Past Sins''. Pen Stroke [[SelfDeprecation even joins in]] [[WhoWritesThisCrap to point out obvious flaws.]]
* TheAlcoholic: A couple riffers end up like this thanks to the DrinkingGame.
* AlienGeometries: The library has too many corners!
%%* AndThatsTerrible: The fact the Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon stole Nyx's cookies.
%%* AscendedExtra
%%** Proper Etiquette.
%%** Bastion Yorsets as well, which is lampshaded when the riffers come across a link to his character page on the MLP wiki.
%%** There's also Exposition Man and Sound Guy.
* TheBadGuyWins: In a sense: once Nexus knock-outs Twilight and calls the guards on her, [=Crazy56U=] states that by doing this, [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Bowser]] [[LetsPlay/ElectricalBeast has]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext won]].
* BagOfSpilling: If there's some important item missing, it's because Stonewall forgot to bring it.
* BerserkButton
** For Alcoremortis, the word turquoise.
** For [=Crazy56U=], Celestia [[spoiler:[[WouldHurtAChild intending to kill Nyx if she turned out to be Nightmare Moon]]]].
** For Wild Trotter, a minor one in the form of "It was expected of her".
* BlatantLies: When Twilight reassures her friends that she's okay after being kidnapped.
-->'''Pen Stroke:''' Flimsy Excuses! Get your Flimsy Excuses here!
* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord:
-->'''Ezn:''' Surprise sex, that is. Rape is such a negative word.\\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' Prisoner is such a harsh word. I prefer mandatory guest.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: This little gem from Chapter 8:
-->'''Ezn:''' And also, like, 20% co-- (''is shot'')\\
'''[[spoiler:[=Crazy56U=]]]:''' (''hides gun, turns to you, the reader'') You owe me.
%%* ButtMonkey: [[JokeCharacter Nyx]], [[BagOfSpilling Stonewall]], and [[TheUnfavorite Scootaloo]].
%%* CardCarryingVillain: [[EpicFailure Spell Nexus]]
* CharacterCatchphrase: [=RLYoshi=] often says "Next time on [[Anime/DragonBallZ Ponyball Z!]]" after several questions have been asked in a row.
* CharacterShilling: Nyx's popularity is lampshaded repeatedly.
%%* ClarkKenting: Nyx's glasses and disguise.
* CreepyCrossdresser: [[EpicFailure Spell Nexus]] may be a pathetic villain, but he is ''fabulous.''
%%* DeadpanSnarker: Just about all of the riffers.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: The resurrection ceremony and Twilight's decision to hide Nyx.
* DisproportionateRetribution
** Celestia banishes ponies to the moon for mundane reasons.
** When Celestia crashes the resurrection ceremony, she uses her magic to brush the cloud cover away "like froth from a cup of hot cocoa."
-->'''Pemberton:''' A humorous analogy given the context of the story thus far.\\
'''Ezn:''' Celestia later banished the cultists to the moon, [[FelonyMisdemeanor for daring to serve her cocoa with froth]], as she much prefers it plain.\\
'''Alcoremortis:''' Mmm...chocolate... [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Wait. What were we talking about again?]]
* DrinkingGame: Take a shot every time "Nightmare Moon" shows up, and you'll be under the table in no time.
* EvilIsCool:InUniverse, as it's the explanation [=Crazy56U=] gives for why Nyx[[note]]playing Nightmare Moon[[/note]] got more applause than Diamond Tiara[[note]]playing Princess Celestia[[/note]] at the end of the school play.
-->'''Diamond Tiara:''' But Daddy, how could they cheer louder for ''her''? She was the bad mare, and ''I'' was Princess Celestia.\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' Easy, villains are cooler.
%%* EvilMinions: Night Wind, Gray Gale, and [[UsefulNotes/AmericanCivilWar Stonewall.]]
* EvilSmellsBad: When Twilight returns to the library with Nyx, then asks her to get off her back so she can take a bath:
-->'''Disco:''' I need to cleanse myself of your horrid, potentially evil stench.
* EvilPlan: Which is laughable at best.
* EyeScream: When it's mentioned how Twilight is going to apply the same illusion spell used on Nyx's glasses ''directly'' onto Rainbow Dash's eyes, the obvious is pointed out:
-->'''Vimbert:''' [[Advertising/HeadOn APPLY DIRECTLY TO THE EYE!]]\\
'''[=Crazy56U:=]''' Hmm... Unicorn horn... plus eyeballs... ...[[SarcasmMode I don't see anything wrong there!]]
* FailedASpotCheck: Spike, who somehow didn't see Twilight carrying Nyx when she returned from the Everfree Forest.
* FantasticRacism: Towards Earth ponies and Zebras.
* FelonyMisdemeanor: After Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon trick Nyx into exploring the Everfree Forest, they steal some cookies.
-->'''soFreeKey:''' Because nothing beats a stolen cookie after an attempted murder.\\
'''Disco:''' Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon stole cookies. [[AndThatsTerrible And that's terrible.]]\\
'''Vimbert:''' Those FIENDS.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The lack of subtlety is pointed out numerous times.
* FourOneNineScam: When Nyx's black coat is first described.
* GeniusBookClub: Any respectable library has the works of Horizontal Surface.
%%* GenreBlindness: All of the characters.
%%* GenreSavvy: All of the riffers. Several tropes are mentioned by name as well.
* GenreShift: [[ItMakesSenseInContext "Past Sins" turning into a]] LetsPlay.
* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Not in the fanfic itself, but when it's brought up how Nightmare Moon's armor feels uncomfortable in chapter 12, a comment [=RLYoshi=] makes ("At least she wasn't a stallion. Then it would just [[{{Squick}} start riding up in the crotch]].") apparently [[spoiler: causes [=Crazy56U=] to [[BlackComedy die]] ''[[BlackComedy of an aneurysm]]'' ("Image... can't... remove... eyes... brain... bleeding... [drops dead]")... only to [[Series/DoctorWho regenerate]] [[DeathIsCheap immediately after]].]]
%%* GrammarNazi: The riffers, but only to the point of making fun of the mistakes.
* ImStandingRightHere: During the scene where Nyx prepares to reveal her wings to the Cutie Mark Crusaders, [=Crazy56U=] begins counting how much more uncomfortable things are getting (starting with "Hmm... I can't tell, but I think things got 20% more uncomfortable."). When he misses one point:
--> '''[=RLYoshi=]:''' [=Crazy56U=] isn't around to say it, so... 70%...\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' ...I'M SITTING RIGHT HERE, MAN.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Wild Trotter's response to the end of Chapter 12.
-->'''Wild Trotter:''' And good God I need a stiff drink.
%%* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Spell Nexus
* ItSeemedLikeAGoodIdeaAtTheTime: Twilight knowingly witholds Nyx's identity from the authorities for no logical reason whatsoever.
* JustBetweenYouAndMe: Lampshaded when Nexus explains his scheme to Twilight.
* JustEatGilligan: The riffers point out how quickly and easily everything could have been resolved if Twilight wasn't constantly holding the IdiotBall.
%%* LargeHam: All of the riffers.
* LethalChef: When the resurrection bowl starts billowing black smoke, Spell Nexus is left without any [[AdjacentToThisCompleteBreakfast Cinnamon Toast Crunch]]. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E5SisterhoovesSocial Everyone blames Sweetie Belle.]]
* MathematiciansAnswer: When posed with the question "How does a queen work?", [=Crazy56U=] decides to consult an expert. [[spoiler: The answer he gets from his (Russian) Magic 8-Ball is "Как мне кажется, да." Or, "As I see it, yes."]]
-->'''[=Crazy56U=]''': [[spoiler:...that’s the last time I buy a Magic 8-Ball from eBay.]]
* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Nyx's first day of school.
-->'''Vimbert:''' Giving implied permission for everypony to abuse and traumatize Nyx like good children.\\
'''Ezn:''' That's what school is for! Trauma builds character!
* MoodWhiplash: The riffers tend to be sarcastic and funny, but occasionally they'll get more serious [[BerserkButton for]] [[WhatTheHellHero whatever]] reason.
* MythologyGag: Lampshaded whenever a reference to an episode is shoehorned in. Also when Bastion Yorsets is introduced.
* MyFriendsAndZoidberg: The Cutie Mark Crusaders. And Nyx.
* NoEnding: Near the end of the riffing, [=Crazy56U=] [[LampshadeHanging points out]] that since they are only riffing the original draft of "Past Sins" (which ends at chapter 13), they will not see the resolution of the story.
* NonSequiturThud: After [=Crazy56U=] [[ItMakesSenseInContext runs into a wall after attempting to escape in Chapter 8]]:
-->'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' (''dazed'') What? I don't think I can hear anymore. The wall broke my space... (''falls over'') ...I'm alright...
* NoodleImplements: The ingredients for the resurrection spell.
-->'''Isphone:''' More data! Let's see... so [[BloodMagic hero blood]] + [[DeviousDaggers dagger]] + [[SpikesOfVillainy broken bits of evil armor]] + [[PlayingWithFire fire]] = [[SummoningRitual evil demon summoning]] divided by underwear stealing squared. [[ItRunsOnNonsensoleum Seems legit.]]\\
'''Distort:''' I'd say "[[AWizardDidIt It's magic, he doesn't have to explain it]]," but I don't think he's earned that liberty.
* NoodleIncident: Midnight's explanation of why Spell Nexus has only one sister.
-->'''Ezn:''' Good to know.\\
'''Midnight:''' Only the one sister. We don't like to talk about... the accident.\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' Didn't that sister use to be a brother?\\
'''Lightsideluc:''' You would have to ask Midnight about that.\\
'''Midnight:''' ...don't judge me!\\
'''intangiblepony:''' Well, damn, I feel awkward now...
* NoOSHACompliance: The Children of Nightmare used a ''fire-based'' resurrection spell in the middle of a ''forest.''
* NotSoOmniscientAfterAll: Despite being a [[PhysicalGod goddess]], Celestia still can't figure out what the cultists were doing... even though Nexus explained it to her prized student beforehand.
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: ''"Tonight we, the Children of Nightmare, shall see our queen given life, blood, and a form of her own."''
-->'''Midnight:''' I have many forms! Chief amongst them, form 14b, the requisition order for an [[BeardOfEvil evil moustache!]]\\
'''Lightsideluc:''' Bah! Everyone knows that form 12A, the requisition form for an [[GoodHairEvilHair evil goatee]], is far superior!
* OverlyLongGag: The riffers' responses to the intro.
* PaperThinDisguise: Nyx's glasses and vest, which also double for a [[Franchise/ScoobyDoo Velma]] cosplay costume.
* PerfectlyCromulentWord: For the riffers, it's ''Harrowing,'' despite it being an actual word.
-->'''Ezn:''' Rarity's word of the day: "harrowing".\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' Can everyone spell "Harrowing"? H... A... R... R... O... W... I... N... G!\\
'''[=Anon13=]:''' She couldn't wait to just harrow all over the place.\\
'''Ezn:''' Later that day, [[JapaneseRanguage she offended an Asian tourist with what she thought was a clever greeting pun.]]
%%* PlotCoupon: Twilight's bag of books.
* PlotSensitiveSnoopingSkills: Celestia and her security forces can't figure out what the cultists were doing...despite Spell Nexus having told Twilight ''exactly'' what they're planning.
-->'''Nelighan:''' If only we had a witness who was there when the villains attacked her with plot exposition!
* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Twilight's ridiculous devotion to Nyx outweighs her common sense.
* PurpleProse: Lampshaded when the bowl and armor in the resurrection spell are "wrapped in crimson flames."
-->'''Hellioning:''' What were they burning with before, burnt umber flames?\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' It was more of a burnt sienna.\\
'''Alcoremortis:''' Ah, crimson, another one of my old enemies. Overused in fanfictions everywhere. Protip: Just say "red". [[RedScare Nobody will think you're a Communist if you do.]] These are more enlightened times.
* PutOnABus: [[spoiler:Pen Stroke]], who riffed in Part 1, is absent during parts 2 and 3.
* TheQuietOne: Compared to parts 2 and 3, [=Crazy56U=] was practically ''silent'' in part 1.
* RememberTheNewGuy: Some riffers don't start making comments until later chapters, but nobody brings up their sudden arrival. Justified, as sometimes riffers don't show up until some of the earlier chapters have been closed from more comments, so they have to start at later chapters. For example, Wild Trotter showed up to riff on chapters 9 through 13, thinking that the first eight chapters were boring.
* RunningGag
** Spell Nexus's [[CreepyCrossdresser fashion sense]], particularly his love of hoof polish.
** Spell Nexus's real name is Epic Failure.
** Stonewall is routinely blamed for forgetting something.
** Luna's [[Fanfic/{{Progress}} obsession with her abacus.]]
** The [[ConvenientlyCommonKink Common Kinks]] of Equestria, including bondage and holding breaths.
** Anytime there's a ''FLASH'', the riffers start singing lyrics from Music/{{Queen|Band}}'s ''Film/{{Flash Gordon|1980}}'' theme.
** The overuse of the color turquoise.
** The constant, grating comparisons to Nightmare Moon.
** Ponies are either suffering from SkewedPriorities Syndrome or Common Sense Syndrome.
** Rarity ''really'' likes Nyx's coat... as material for her next dress.
** Zebras and Earth ponies are considered [[FantasticRacism second-class citizens.]]
** Anything involving Twilight, magic, and other ponies has something to do with cacti.
** Any [[GeniusBookClub respectable library]] includes the works of Horizontal Surface.
** Nyx really ''does'' have ticks.
** The responses to the ''Questions, Comments, Concerns?'' lines.
** Numerous attempts to end the story prematurely.
** [[TheUnfavorite Nobody likes Scootaloo.]]
** Getting annoyed at how often the fic references the original show.
** [=Crazy56U=] referencing ''WebVideo/AtopTheFourthWall''.
** Bringing up how Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon stole cookies, and [[AndThatsTerrible how terrible it was]].
* SarcasmMode: All of the riffers run on it.
** Especially when Twilight has to return to the Everfree Forest:
--->'''Distort:''' [[{{Sting}} DUN DUN DUN]]...\\
'''Vimbert:''' ORIGINALITY STRIKES AGAIN!\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' [[SarcasmBlind That's not original, everyone uses the Everfree Forest.]]\\
'''Anon13:''' Nuke, are you familiar with irony?\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint That's when something has a lot of iron, right?]]
** At the end of Chapter 10, [[spoiler:after Nyx has been turned into Nightmare Moon by the cult [[TooDumbToLive Celestia trusted]]]]:
--->'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' Well... I can safely say that Celestia's well-thought out plan of dealing with Nyx went over PERFECTLY!
* SchoolPlay: The ''Reunion of the Royal Pony Sisters'' is still around, and it gets thoroughly mocked for its unoriginality.
* SelfDeprecation: Pen Stroke, the author of ''Fanfic/PastSins'', not only volunteered his work to be riffed, but he joins in as well.
-->'''Pen Stroke:''' (''[[FacePalm facehoof]]'') Oh yes, [[EvilGloating let's have the villain]] [[JustBetweenYouAndMe explain exactly what's going on.]]
* SequelHook: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by [=Crazy56U=] in Chapter 13 (the last chapter of the original edit) by mentioning a ''Past Sins'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1919/Point-of-No-Return fan sequel]].
* SeriousBusiness
** Recess and Pinkie's parties.
** Song quoting:
--->'''Vimbert:''' TWIST AND SHOUT! Twist and shout. C'mon, c'mon, c'mon, baby now...\\
'''Alcoremortis:''' Please. If we're going to start quoting songs... "Let me in, get me out. Can't do more than twist and shout..."
* ShoutOut: Enough for [[ShoutOut/PastSinsMST their own subpage]].
* ShowWithinAShow: The works of Horizontal Surface.
* SixthRanger
** All of the readers from Equestria Daily who joined up with the established /fic/ group.
** [[AndZoidberg And Wild Trotter]].
* SkewedPriorities: Many of the ponies suffer from Skewed Priorities Syndrome.
* SpaceWhaleAesop: "Remember kids, always get your rest. You may never know when you have to fight a resurrected evil in a death battle!"
* SquishyWizard: When Celestia interrupts the resurrection ceremony, [[EpicFailure Spell Nexus]] attempts to [[SuicidalOverconfidence take her down single-handedly]]... and gets knocked out and dragged to safety by his underlings.
* StreisandEffect: InUniverse. How the Children of Nightmare attempt to keep their summoning ritual a secret.
-->'''eycor0:''' Never mind the fact that a bunch of pegasi in cloaks pushing clouds around over the Everfree forest would probably draw more attention than just leaving it be.
%%* StupidEvil: [[EpicFailure Spell Nexus]]
%%* SuckySchool: Ponyville Elementary.
* TakeThat
** Whenever the plot is mentioned.
** ''"Rarity!" Twilight half shouted.''
--->'''Ezn:''' And half whispered, creating an interesting vocal effect.\\
'''intangiblepony:''' What's with all the half talking?\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' They're half-decided on what to say.\\
'''Anon13:''' It's a half-assed fic. Er, half-flanked.
** There's also a reference to ''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/conversion-bureau-compilation.html The Conversion Bureau]]'', a series of [[FanficRecs/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfics]] that the /fic/ {{MST}} group [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ERvIakzNX5y1zeIgLYZZKVtAYO8d6_YQNVHl9CK_WMM/edit?hl=en_US&pli=1 riffed]] [[FanFic/TheConversionBureauMST before]] ''Fanfic/PastSins''.
** Interestingly enough, there's one delivered to ''coffee''.
--->'''Disco:''' The smell was horrendous.\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' Ah. So it smelled like coffee.
** Lest we forget THIS gem from Chapter 12:
--->'''Svensvenderson:''' [[Series/CSIMiami That makes Pinkie Pie a]] (''[[GlassesPull slips glasses on]]'') [[Series/CSIMiami one-trick pony]].\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' (''takes glasses'') [[DefiedTrope NO!]] We're not doing that CSI meme! [[TakeThat This is a CLASSY riffing!]] (''throws them away'')\\
'''[=RLYoshi=]:''' [[SarcasmMode If what we're doing is classy, I'm the]] [[RunningGag Polish Nightmare Moon]].\\
'''Svensvenderson:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Aw, my glasses...]]
** Near the end of Chapter 10, [=Crazy56U=] has the following to say... ''about one of the riff's own running gags'':
--->'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' OK, I know Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are jerks, but singling them out as the main reason you're now Nightmare Moon? ...I'm shocked that I have to say this, but... [[SincerityMode that's a little... harsh.]]\\
'''[=RLYoshi=]:''' That's not the important part! The point is that they stole cookies! [[AndThatsTerrible AND. THAT'S. TERRIBLE.]]\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' OK, that joke is running thin. Knock it off.
** From chapter 13:
--->'''[=CTOONfan1=]:''' Especially that one people have been calling [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stop_Online_Piracy_Act SOPA]].\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' Sooooo... ''Spell Nexus'' wrote that in this universe... (''pulls out shot gun'') ...[[TranquilFury interestin’]]. (''pumps gun'')
* ThatCameOutWrong: All over the place, especially with Rarity.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck
** When Rarity gets an ''iiiiiddddddeeeaaaa~!''
--->'''Disco:''' This won't end well.
** In chapter twelve, the part where Twilight apologizes to Nightmare Moon.
--->'''Wild Trotter:''' This is gonna hurt, isn't it?\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' Ooooooh, yeah. (''pulls out tissues'')
* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: Lampshaded whenever the unedited tenses get mixed up.
-->'''Nuke.Equestria:''' Twilight's time travel spell malfunctioned. [[Series/QuantumLeap And so, Twilight Sparkle finds herself leaping from life to life; trying to put right what once went wrong, and hoping that her next leap will be the leap home.]]\\
'''Ezn:''' And suddenly I started liking this fic a whole lot more!
* TooDumbToLive: Spell Nexus attempts to take on [[PhysicalGod Princess Celestia]] after the botched resurrection.
-->'''Vimbert:''' I don't think deicide is quite as easy as Nexus thinks it is.
* TookALevelInDumbass: Nearly all the characters, but Twilight especially.
* TradeSnark: When Nyx is first mentioned by name, she's given a ™ symbol afterward.
* TraumaInducedAmnesia: PlayedForLaughs when Twilight insists that she's okay despite having been kidnapped.
-->'''eycor0:''' I'm lying of course, I'm in denial.\\
'''Nuke.Equestria:''' Repression is a healthy thing.\\
'''Anon13:''' I'll probably have a breakdown later. Screaming and everything.
* ViewersAreGeniuses
** While the riffers are instructed to stay away from anything too obscure, there are a few good ones regarding UsefulNotes/TheAmericanCivilWar and the [[QueerAsTropes Stonewall Riots.]]
** In Chapter 10: "They've obviously never heard of [[http://www.infoplease.com/spot/jonestown1.html Jonestown]]."
** Don't forget MediaNotes/{{programming|Language}}.
* ViolationOfCommonSense: It's so frequent that any character who ''does'' show a hint of logic is proclaimed a victim of Common Sense Syndrome.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: ''All over the place.'' Given that the version of the story being riffed is unedited, it's expected.
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Lampshaded when Twilight heads back into the Everfree Forest, stating that she knows how to keep herself out of trouble.
-->'''Disco!''' Yet it happens in nearly every episode.\\
'''intangiblepony:''' Saying a phrase like that is the same as saying "What could possibly go wrong".\\
'''Pemberton:''' Which is proven by how she was kidnapped less than 24 hours ago.\\
'''Alcoremortis:''' Personally, I'm a fan of, "There's no turning back now" and talking about the wife and kids in a war movie.
* WhatTheHellHero
** Pretty much any time Twilight does something foolish.
** And when Spike is bribed into not revealing Nyx to Celestia.
** When it's revealed that [[spoiler:Celestia planned on ''killing'' Nyx if it turned out she's Nightmare Moon]].
--->'''Celestia:''' She is a product of a spell, and well be dealt with as such. [[spoiler:She will be dispelled and the lingering energy purified.]]\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' So... in other words, you're going to [[spoiler:kill a filly to confirm your paranoid suspicions]]... yeah, um, lady? [[BerserkButton WHAT IN HOLY HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?]]
** Not to mention this bit (albeit played for laughs):
--->'''Ezn:''' I can do that in ten seconds fl-- (''[[RunningGag is shot]]'')\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' (''turns to the reader'') What? ...[[NotMeThisTime It wasn't me this time,]] [[SincerityMode swear to Luna]]!\\
'''[[spoiler:[=RLYoshi=]]]:''' (''turns to reader'') He's telling the truth. (''cocks gun'') [[FaceHeelTurn It was]] ''[[FaceHeelTurn me]]''. (''[[FaceHeelTurn shoots Crazy56U]]'')\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' (''[[BulletDodge dodges bullet]]'') ... ...dude, what the hell?!
* WorthIt: [=Vimbert=] feels this way concerning [[spoiler:Celestia's plan to kill Nyx if it turns out she's Nightmare Moon]]. [=Crazy56U=] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech begs to differ]].
* WrittenSoundEffect: ''KRAC-CROOO-OOOM!'' is either lightning or the Polish Nightmare Moon.
* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: When Celestia's labored breath is brought up:
-->'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' So... [[LiteralMinded she's about to give... birth to breath babies]]?\\
'''Disco:''' Epic Failure must be so proud.\\
'''[=Crazy56U=]:''' His approval fills me with shame.
* YourHeadAsplode: Happens to Svensvenderson when he gets confused.
-->'''Sven:''' Wait, so [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext her eyes are adjusting to the light of her eyes?]] How does that-- (''head asplodes'')

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