The Slob YKTTW Discussion
Examples:Live-Action Television Theatre
- The slovenly Oscar Madison in Neil Simon's play The Odd Couple.
- Bill on King of the Hill--aside from letting his physique go, he has chronically bad breath (according to the officers whose hair he cuts on the army base), he's a messy eater, and his house is usually cluttered or trashed when we see the inside of it.
- Harvey Bullock from Batman comics and Batman: The Animated Series.
- Michael Mauser from E-Man.
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