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1Yeah, yeah, I know. You're looking at this page title and thinking, "God, why does this exist? It's self-explanatory, nobody needs this!" Maybe it is, and maybe no one does, but decent romance is harder to write than you might think. The biggest problem is that you don't have any room for error: Love is a universal part of human life, and (especially in Western culture) is generally considered the epitome of positive experience; the standards are high, and audiences will nail you if you mess it up. Plus, if you can do it well, you might be able to make a killing off of it; according to Website/TheOtherWiki, romance novels account for ''more than 50% of all paperbacks sold.''
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3This article is focused on the creation and execution of a love story: two people meeting, discovering they really like each other, and deciding to stay together for the forseeable future. Since this can be a subplot in just about any genre, this article aims to be relatively generalized, as opposed to being specific a "Write A RomanceNovel" [[SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex So You Want To]]. (That's why it's named the way it is.)
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5!'''Necessary Tropes'''
6Hmm. LoveTropes, maybe? Check out RomanceNovelPlots, RomanceNovelTropes and the RomanceArc for more ideas. Or visit the RomanceNovel section of your bookstore. Or read Nicholas Sparks. But here's the heart of it, from a [[http://www.smartbitchestrashybooks.com/index.php/weblog/comments/unmasked_by_cj_barry/ review]] of a romance novel: "The characters should allow each other to evolve in such a way that, without the other, each one would be less than when the book started. There’s a satisfaction in seeing attraction and love heal, grow, and develop people into even better versions of themselves".
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8Generally, a love story is supposed to fall on the flowery, rainbow-hued end of the SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism. This doesn't ''have'' to be, but at the very least, The Reader expects a HappilyEverAfter. This is one of the places where writing a love subplot (as opposed to a RomanceNovel) gives the arc more leeway; The Reader will hate you for it, but since saving the world doesn't neccesarily involve getting the girl... (Even better, sometimes involves [[SadisticChoice sacrificing the girl]].)
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10A quick word on love itself, particularly the "[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Triangular_theory_of_love Triangular Theory of Love]]" developed by Robert Sternberg (link leads to Website/TheOtherWiki). Simply put, Sternberg believes that love can consist of any combination of the following three qualities: '''Intimacy''', '''Passion''' and '''Commitment'''. With your friends you have intimacy—emotional intimacy, by the way, not physical—so that you feel you can tell them anything, and they will still stand by you; a [[TheNotLoveInterest very close friendship can also involve commitment]] as well. Having a crush is passion only. [[FourthDateMarriage Commitment and Passion]] together result in fairly shallow relationships: yeah, you have great sex, and you're with them, but do you really ''know'' them? Get all three together, and you're in good shape... but, as any mother or father can tell you, then you have to work at maintaining it. Passion is generally the first to go in a marriage, resulting in DeadSparks.
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12!'''Choices, Choices'''
13Generally, a love story requires a bare minimum of two characters -- the ones who are going to fall in love. So you'll need your LoveInterests first.
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15While most romances have focused on a man and a woman, today those rules are bending, and guy-on-guy and girl-on-girl is becoming more acceptable. Heck, today it [[{{Polyamory}} doesn't even have to be only two people!]] Of course, there will be outcry from MoralGuardians if you choose to go in those directions; but there's NoSuchThingAsBadPublicity, so maybe this is something you'll want to invoke. Having said ''that'', remember that most readers treat the RomanceNovel as comfort food: they want something reassuring and inoffensive, as opposed to being challenged to their core. There's a time and a place for everything, and a love story may not be the right place to try and make people re-evaluate themselves. (Feel free to take that as a challenge.)
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17Anyhow, let's say you've got two leads, Alex and Bryce. And the thing is, ''that can be all you need''. {{Conflict}} in a romance typically comes in the flavor of Character vs. Character, and Alex and Bryce can totally be those characters. (More on this later.) In fairy tales, the OfficialCouple never fights after they get together; in RealLife, they absolutely do. While couples in romantic relationships (are expected to) approach life as a team, helping each other out and picking each other up, there will always be times when they are set at odds, and you can mine that as a source of drama.
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19But let's say you decide to add in other characters -- which is also realistic. Very few human beings live in total isolation; they have friends and/or family members. There may also be additional romantic attachments, because those can make for really juicy drama: the RomanticFalseLead, the HopelessSuitor, the {{Jerkass}}, the PsychoExGirlfriend, the StalkerWithACrush, the WrongGuyFirst or the other girl in a FirstGirlWins[=/=]LastGirlWins scenario. The LoveTriangle is OlderThanFeudalism. How about the BettyAndVeronica dichotomy? WorkingWithTheEx? LoveDodecahedron?
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21Anyhow, you've now got Alex, Bryce and Casey, plus whatever additional supporting cast you decide to put in (Dylan, Evan, Freddie, etc). Now comes the hard part: making sure all these characters have ''personality''. Who they are, after all, affects how they're going to relate to each other, and the romance (sub)plot is all ''about'' that relating. There are a gazillion different ways characters can relate to each other romantically, from SlapSlapKiss to SickeninglySweethearts to OppositesAttract, but you should pick one (or several) and make them your focus. This, of course, requires a fairly thorough understanding of who Alex, Bryce and Casey are ''before'' they meet and begin to variously fall in love with each other, so get cracking.
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23Here's a hint: if you're bad at characterization, you cannot write good romance. Period. Hell, one could make the argument that you can't write good ''anything''. It may be an oversimplification to divide stories this way, but we're gonna do it anyway: fiction usually comes in only two parts: CharacterizationTropes, and AcceptableBreaksFromReality. What precisely that break from reality is depends on your genre: in an action movie, it's explosions; in a science-fiction movie, it's AppliedPhlebotinum; in a mainstream comic book, it's anything in the StockSuperpowersIndex; in a love story, it's angst, WillTheyOrWontThey, SlapSlapKiss, etc. But the point is that these are just props, just disguises, just the particular language the story uses to tell itself. If you ''strip away'' these breaks from reality, you're left with characters standing naked and exposed, and they're either interesting or they're not. And if they aren't, no amount of gratuitous {{fanservice}} will make the story good. (Just ask [[Film/TransformersFilmSeries Michael Bay]].)
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25And here's the worst part: it's even ''more'' true for a love story. The AcceptableBreaksFromReality are, again, romantic content... but, both in RealLife and in fiction, you can't fall in love unless both you and your LoveInterest have personalities. (Falling in love is ''about'' personality.) As such, romance is an extension of character(ization). In other words, all your leads need to be strong enough, more or less, to hold down a story ''on their own'', without the assistance of their romantic partners and/or any chemistry resulting thereof. (One hopes some Hollywood screenwriter will see this paragraph some day and get the hint. Or Creator/StephenieMeyer.) Another way to think of it is that every romance is, at its heart, a BottleEpisode: Just your characters bouncing off each other, nothing else. So brush up on your CharacterizationTropes, because if you only have a SatelliteLoveInterest, instead of an actual character, you have no love story.
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27To prove it, let's keep looking at RomanceNovelPlots and the RomanceArc. In a typical ThreeActStructure, the RelationshipUpgrade occurs at the end of the first act, and the Inevitable SecondActBreakup or ThirdActMisunderstanding setting up the final resolution. (The two twists seem similar, but the first is, "Alex dumps Bryce for something Alex did" while the other is "Alex dumps Bryce because of something Alex ''thinks'' Bryce did, which is either totally false or only true FromACertainPointOfView.") What's the break-up about? What causes it? What is the Thing Bryce Did? To answer that, you need to look at... Bryce's personality and [[CharacterFlawIndex Character Flaws]]. Is Bryce a cheater? A compulsive liar? An inveterate gambler? A lazy layabout who can't keep a job? Secretly an axe murderer? Because Alex's reactions to any of these things will also depend on what ''Alex'' wants. A GoldDigger will treat an unemployed thumb-twiddler differently than someone who is SecretlyWealthy.
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29So: required reading. So You Want To...
30* SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters
31* SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality
32* SoYouWantTo/WriteACharacterOfTheOppositeGender (this one is less necessary, but a lot of romance novels switch back and forth between the [=POVs=] of the leads, so you may be expected to have facility with characters who are not your gender)
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34!'''Pitfalls'''
35!!'''Setting Up Romance'''
36It's possible to overdo a romance. The result, if it's a subplot, is a RomanticPlotTumor. If it's a RomanceNovel, the result is generally {{Glurge}}. Both outcomes are often delivered with a side of PurpleProse. Conversely, it's possible to underdo it. The result in ''that'' case is StrangledByTheRedString or DesignatedLoveInterest. Whatever relationship develops between the two characters, it needs to walk the line of believability between the two extremes.
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38You also, as mentioned, need to have characters with actual personalities. That may seem a lot of work, but the good news is, if you're writing or have ever written before, we'll be using a tool to set up these personalities which you are very familiar with: ChekhovsGun.
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40There are two basic layers in any fictional, on-page relationship. We often think of relationships as being rooted in physical attraction, but as a wise stranger from the internet once observed, "Relationships involve people, not bodies." Which is not to say that physical attraction does not factor in. So let us consider the two basic layers to any fictional, on-page relationship:
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42# '''Chemistry'''. This oft-used word deals with with your desired traits. Ask yourself right now: what do you look for in a potential mate or significant-other? TroubledButCute? EndearinglyDorky? CloudCuckooLander? [[SupernaturalGoldEyes Eyes of gold]], hair of blue? Well, those are your desired traits. If Alex wants to be swept up into the arms of someone TallDarkAndSnarky, then when such a person walks into "Alex's Books and Stationery" on the second page of the novel, The Reader expects them to end up together. Likewise, Bryce is looking for someone feisty and independent who won't just play the fainting violet. When Bryce walks into that bookstore and sees the fiery-haired proprietor chewing someone out, The Reader expects Bryce to be interested. Why? Because of desired traits; because of chemistry. Bryce's presence in Alex's life (and vice versa) is a ChekhovsGun. This is how LoveAtFirstSight justifies its existence, incidentally, and it's also where OppositesAttract comes into play; in general you don't want to date someone who's an exact clone of you. ([[ScrewYourself Unless you do]]. If you do, please keep it to yourself.)
43# '''Compatibility'''. This one doesn't get as much press, partially because it's harder to explore in the time frame of a love story, and partially because a lot of Americans (the predominant consumers and producers of the RomanceNovel) think "love" is some sort of magic black box which they have no hope of understanding. "Look! WhenThingsSpinScienceHappens!" So here's the inside of that black box: shared values. If "chemistry" is what you look for in a body, "compatibility" is what you look for in a ''person''. Ask yourself right now: now that you've met this person whom you have chemistry with, what are you going to do with them? Are you going to have mad hot sex? Are you going to recline upon a bosky dell and quote poetry to each other? Are you [[ImGoingToDisneyWorld Going To Disney World]]? ''What kind of life do you want to live'', and how is this potential mate going to help you live it? Because if we're talking about a relationship that's meant to go on indefinitely, then at some point they are going to have to become a ''part'' of this life you want to live, and that's easiest if they fit in.
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45One of the easiest ways a WrongGuyFirst plot or BettyAndVeronica situation can get resolved is by just handing someone the VillainBall, but a much more authentic way is something we've already hinted at: a DifferingPrioritiesBreakup. The trope's page quote provides a perfect example: Ted and Robin, two of the leads in ''Series/HowIMetYourMother'', are dating, but it becomes clear just how different they want their lives to be. Robin wants to travel the world, while Ted wants to settle down and have BabiesEverAfter (with her), and fundamentally there is no relationship that could make them both happy ''at the same time''. With this in mind, do OppositesAttract anymore? Do you ''really'' want to spend your life with someone who's going to be at cross-purposes to you, all the time?—whose happiness ''requires'' your misery, and vice versa? Or do you want BirdsOfAFeather, someone who dreams your dreams? But this can ''only'' happen if your characters have (or don't have) Compatibility, which is why it happens so infrequently in mass media and so frequently in real life.
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47In order for you to write this romance well, your characters need a fair bit of CharacterDepth: personality, BackStory, hopes and dreams, etc. You need to know each character's Chemistry ''and'' Compatibility desires. And you, The Writer, need to set ''all'' of them up as {{Chekhovs Gun}}s, where the firing / pay-off / [[SexualEuphemism bang]] ([ha-ha) is the blossoming of love. If you want to go even further, you'll need to start coming out with facets to each character. Remember, each of us acts differently depending on context: when you are in private with your spouse or significant other, you act differently than you do when alone with your parents ([[ParentalIncest unless you don't]]. If you don't, please keep it to yourself). Likewise you act differently around your children, your friends, your coworkers, etc. News flash: well-realized characters have the same level of complexity.
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49(Pro tip: You know you've really achieved a RoundedCharacter when you can't decide how s/he should react to a situation because s/he gave you multiple options, and they're ''all'' in-character.)
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51!!'''Romance Misfires'''
52Mass-media romances, as mentioned, often establish Chemistry but ignore Compatibility. This can lead to unrealistic romances where lust is the only reason two characters are together, and the two ''stay'' together even though, through the lens of Compatibility, they are not and could not be happy together. (Believe it or not, ''Film/TheNotebook'' lives deep in this dysfunction.) It can lead to overstated {{Love Triangle}}s where Alexis can't decide between Bryce and Chris because ''there's simply no difference between them'' -- a thing that is not and has never been true of two different, non-genetically-related people. (''The Notebook'' kind of plays in this area as well.) And it can lead to overstated Love Triangles where the RomanticFalseLead ''has'' no Compatibility and is a contender solely because The Writer says they are. Or, even worse, where the Romantic False Lead is ''empirically the better choice'' and still gets turned down. ''The Notebook'' did ''that'' too. A lot of people think it's one of the most romantic films of all time, which speaks to how desperately uninformed most people are about how romance works.
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54Make sure the two characters bring out good things in each other. This was a major criticism leveled against the OfficialCouple in ''Literature/HarryPotter'': that Ron and Hermione encourage each other to be flawed instead of virtuous. Well, maybe not Ron so much; but whenever Hermione goes around doing bad things, like punching idiots or breaking school rules, this raises Ron's opinion of her. (Add in the [[FanPreferredCouple Harmonian]] faction and things get really heated.) Similar irritations have been leveled against the immortal [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella Swan]]: she's {{wangst}}y and self-absorbed before Edward comes along, and ''even more'' wangsty and self-absorbed after. He's not encouraging growth, he's [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enabling enabling]] her dysfunctional behavior (to use the shrink terminology). Of course, that's a tricky line to walk; while there's clearly such thing as being too positive and supportive (and not calling someone on their baggage), there's such thing as being too negative as well. Besides, loving relationships aren't based on yelling at each other to improve; they're based on loving a person for who they are. But, conversely, a person who loves you no matter what is the only person it's worth improving yourself for. (This, incidentally, is where Ted and Robin got off the love train; they are such different people that they ''can't'' encourage each other to become better.)
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56Speaking of WishFulfillment, it's quite easy to fall into a situation where just one of the two romantic leads is saddled with all the CharacterDevelopment. He or she was BeautifulAllAlong, but they end up needing an external agent--the other romantic lead--to draw that out of them. The other lead, though? InvincibleHero. StaticCharacter. UnequalPairing, though a bit downplayed. And, by [[BlatantLies strange coincidence]], often of the same gender as the author. Aside from how thoroughly The Reader can psychoanalyze you from such a character, it's good policy in general for ''both'' leads to have problems they must overcome. Not only does it make a better story, not only does it avoid creepy allegations of WifeHusbandry (or DistaffCounterpart of same), but the whole point of ''any'' social relationship is that it improves both parties somehow. That's difficult if one of those parties is in no need of improvement.
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58It's been iterated already, but let's continue to re-iterate: ''you must have characterization.'' Romance is incredibly vulnerable to the EightDeadlyWords ("I don't care what happens to these characters") because a romance arc is nothing ''but'' Things Happening To These Characters, with almost no chance for a DeusExMachina like ChandlersLaw. There must be characters and they must be likeable. What does it matter if two people you don't know, and don't care about, fall in love with each other? Because that's happening ''now'', right this very minute, somewhere out in the wide world. Strangers are falling in love! Are you excited? No, of course not; you don't know them, they don't matter to you personally. There's no reason for you to be excited about this, beyond a vague sense of altruism. The same applies to fictional characters. If The Reader doesn't know them, care about them, empathize with them, and root for them, your story has already died.
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60!!'''The Heroic Model -- Oysters Versus Niners'''
61(And if you keep reading, the IceCreamKoan chapter heading will make a ton of sense.)
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63Hollywood and other mass-media depictions of love like to focus on the Heroic model of love. It focuses on a guy (it's almost always a guy) who meets a girl, but the girl isn't super into him for whatever reasons. So he embarks on a campaign to win her over -- flowers, poems, standing outside her window with a boombox -- and inevitably does. The hero's journey involves of convincing her to give him a chance.
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65This journey has an implicit assumption that the proper role of a suitor is similar to that of an oyster, which is famous for taking little clods of dirt and turning them into pearls. The male lead's job is to PygmalionPlot their way into a LoveInterest. This also results in a gender-flipped "MenAreGenericWomenAreSpecial" situation: the male lead doesn't have to find his OneTrueLove, he has to ''make'' her... and therefore, ''women'' are generic because any girl whatsoever can serve the pre-makeover caterpillar, no matter who she is or what she's like.
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67This is nothing like RealLife. A person out in the dating world is less an oyster and more a FortyNiner. "49ers" are fortune-seekers who came to California during the Gold Rush of 1849. At the time, finding gold was accomplished by "panning" -- scooping up pans of dirt from Sutter's Creek, the body of water where gold was found, and sifting through the pan to find whatever gold was in it. The gold, in this analogy, is one's OneTrueLove, and the panning is dating. Once you find your OneTrueLove, you live HappilyEverAfter -- because you have the chemistry and the compatibility, and off you go.
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69So why does Hollywood like the Heroic model? Simple: It plays to the RuleOfDrama. TrueLoveIsBoring, and boring things are hard to dramatize. That being said, the end result is that shows like ''How I Met Your Mother'' -- which dramatize the 49er model -- are exceedingly rare, even though the 49er model is much more similar to what real people actually experience. And that means there's a lot of space to play around with this.
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71!!'''Multiclassing into NotSafeForWork'''
72Romance and relationships are intrinsically linked to sex; in fact, as Sternberg's Triangular Theory points out, you can have Commitment and (Emotional) Intimacy with friends and family, but typically only have Passion with your spouse, which would make sex (and its attendants) the '''defining''' element of a romantic relationship. With that in mind, it should not surprise you that romance novels typically focus on Passion, up to and including the decision to include ExplicitContent. This doesn't help the romance genre escape its trashy reputation, but hey: SexSells. Whatever the case, you are ''not'' required to include sex in your story; you can go SexyDiscretionShot, or have the characters stay chaste until the back cover has closed, or even just avoid the topic entirely, as Disney films do. But if you ''do'' want to include it, you can.
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74As a caveat: do ''not'' throw in a sex scene just because you can. Needless, gratuitous sex depiction is called {{Fanservice}}, PanderingToTheBase, or--let's be frank--pornography. If you are going to include a sex scene, it should ''provide CharacterDevelopment.'' Believe it or not, that's possible. In Literature/TheBible, the phrase "[[GetTheeToANunnery to know someone]]" is sometimes a euphemism for getting it on... and when you have sex with someone, you certainly do learn things about them that very few other human beings will ever learn. ''Voila'', character development--particularly if the revelations are sexual in nature. But if you're not going to go for character development--if the only important fact is that your characters are ''having'' sex--don't rub The Reader's face in it. Use the discretion shot, or a SexyShirtSwitch, or whatever. (Or ''do'' go for it, embrace the smutdom, and aim for the sex sites. [[TheInternetIsForPorn There's a market for that too!]])
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76If you ''have'' decided to go for it, you now skirt a whole new set of pitfalls: FetishRetardant, IKEAErotica, PurpleProse and so forth. We do somehow have a [[SoYouWantTo/WriteASexScene So You Want To Write A Sex Scene?]] page that we slipped past Administrivia/TheContentPolicy, and it's going to have most of your help; if you need more, actual NSFW sites like Literotica, and ''their'' So You Want To departments, will be your best bet.
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78!'''Potential Subversions'''
79!! The Happy Ending
80As mentioned, most love stories have happy endings, or at least a BittersweetEnding (''Film/{{Titanic|1997}}'' and ''Film/AWalkToRemember'', for instance). Also, almost ''all'' love stories end with the romantic leads in a love relationship with each other, even if one or more of them does not necessarily remain ''alive'' much longer. Can you subvert this ''without'' The Reader hating your guts? Can you create a HappilyEverAfter that ''doesn't'' involve the two main leads together?
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82!! The Genders of the Leads
83As mentioned, a lot of love stories concern a guy and a girl. Can you subvert ''this'' in a way that sidesteps MoralGuardians? (Have you noticed that Alex, Bryce and Casey each has a GenderBlenderName? That was deliberate.) Hint: treat the characters as though they were normal human beings. [[TruthInTelevision They are]]. Besides, people don't generally think of themselves as being depraved or screwed-up. ...Okay, sometimes they do—because the ''culture'' around them ''tells'' them that [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer Different Is Bad]]. But, as you, Dear Reader, probably know from personal experience, [[TheStoic one learns to make peace with that]] (since the alternative is to GoMadFromTheRevelation). There's no reason being a member of an alternative sexuality would be any different. So a gay/lesbian/bisexual/transgender/transsexual person isn't going to think of themselves as weird because of such. As different, sure... But that's okay. Different ''isn't'' bad.
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85!! The Attractiveness of the Leads
86A lot of romance stories, particularly movies, involve young unwed characters who are HollywoodHomely at worst, attractive fit types most of the time. Divorcees who MarriedTooYoung or had a StarterMarriage, widow/ers, the honestly unattractive and desperate OldMaid types don't get a whole lot of attention. And yet, with about one in four marriages in America ending in divorce, a significant portion of the dating pool is going to be "previously owned" or "past their sell-by dates". Want to tackle this? Because there is an obvious market for it. For that matter, how about a story about husband and wife putting the spark back into their marriage? This may sound boring, but you could end up with a ''huge'' readership: for all that romance novels offer escapism, there are readers who like to be able to take something useful out of their fiction, something they can actually apply to their own lives. If there weren't, we wouldn't need an "UnfortunateImplications" index.
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88!! Chronology
89There is room for a sort of "inside-out love story." Romances typically focus on BoyMeetsGirl and what happens next. But for most people, meeting the [=wo/man=] of your dreams isn't the first act of the story, it's the ''last''; and there's a great deal of set-up, CharacterDevelopment and {{Foreshadowing}} leading up to it. So how about a story where the LastGirlWins? How about, for that matter, a story that focuses on what happens ''before'' they meet, and on what makes the two characters compatible? If you think it's impossible, go back and look at ''How I Met Your Mother''. Ted doesn't meet The Mother until the series finale, and the prior nine seasons are spent setting up, in detail, his Chemistry and Compatibility needs. The story isn't about how Ted fell in love with her, but ''why''. And it works, because--again--romance is all about personality. Since we've spent nine years learning why Ted and The Mother are perfect for each other, the HappilyEverAfter is a ForegoneConclusion. (Also, the title of the show is a WalkingSpoiler). Additionally, while Ted spends a lot of time dating [[WrongGirlFirst Wrong Girls First]], the thing is that this is ''very'' much TruthInTelevision. When you get down to it, dating is all ''about'' dating the wrong people first, and figuring out ''why'' they are wrong for you, so that you can find your OneTrueLove and/or recognize them ''as'' your One True Love when you find them. (Unless you live in a fairy tale where you can expect your soulmate to drop into your lap. Most people don't.) In fiction, the romantic leads meet at the beginning of the first chapter; in real life, they meet at the beginning of the ''last'' chapter.
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91For that matter, how about AnachronicOrder? The story does not need to be told in the normal manner. Music/ViennaTeng has a song called "[[https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=vienna+teng+recessional Recessional]]" which tells the love story backwards. An insane composer of musical theater named Jason Robert Brown decided to do both orders at once, and penned ''Theatre/TheLastFiveYears''. It's about a man and a woman who fall in love, get married and eventually divorce, but the difference between them is that all of Cathy's scenes take place BackToFront, whereas Jamie's happen in the normal order. (Brown elaborated on this structure by making every single song a monologue, with the other character not present, or at least not allowed to respond. The only time their timelines cross is on their wedding day.) And finally there's ''Film/FiveHundredDaysOfSummer'', which is roughly front-to-back but does a great deal of skipping around, its narrative sequence more shaken up than a salad.
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93!! Courtship
94Because most {{Romance Novel}}s are written by Americans, the ArrangedMarriage doesn't get touched upon much, and when it does it's inevitably a PerfectlyArrangedMarriage. Why does this have to be so? A love story is about two characters discovering that they love each other, regardless of when (or if!) they get married. Western sensibilities declare this must happen ''before'' the wedding bells ring; MarriageBeforeRomance is basically unknown in those cultures. Simply put, this is ValuesDissonance. It is ''entirely'' possible for a person in an arranged marriage to develop love for their spouse as time passes, and, in RealLife, the majority do. Besides, if networking can find you jobs and new friends, why not try it for finding a spouse? It might be more successful than doing it yourself (as some of those divorcees might remind you).
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96This also seems a decent time to touch on the function of marriage historically, especially since the ArrangedMarriage is OlderThanDirt. Today, the emphasis is that you should MarryForLove, but this is NewerThanTheyThink; it's OlderThanSteam, but not by much, and as recently as 1813 [[Literature/PrideAndPrejudice Elizabeth Bennet]] was debating between whether she should marry for love as opposed to entering a MarriageOfConvenience. While today we see marriage as a form of self-expression and self-fulfillment, it served different purposes throughout most of history:
97# AltarDiplomacy. This wasn't just done on a national level, it was done between families which were seeking advantageous alliances. A marriage was symbolically about a man and a woman, but it was more honestly about their parents making and formalizing friendships. You wanted your child to be provided for, didn't you?
98# ObnoxiousInLaws. This was to be avoided at all costs. Completely aside from the above about how marriages were alliances between ''families'', it also goes without saying that said alliance would be more successful if both families ''liked'' their new members.
99# BabiesEverAfter. What better way to seal a pact than with grandchildren? Besides, most people want to see their line continue -- especially if they were BlueBlood and had titles and property to pass down. This flies in the face of belief that nobody talked about sex back in the day. Not only was this not true, it ''could not'' have been true, because sex -- or at least one of sex's byproducts, children -- was literally one of the reasons you were getting married. They just didn't necessarily do it as ''publicly'' as we do it today. ("Hi, r/sex on Website/{{reddit}}, I'd like to ask complete strangers some questions about my genitals.")
100** (This also raises the question of homosexuality, which -- as far as modern science can tell -- occurs in about 10% of the human population, and predates the human race in the sense that animals have been observed exhibiting homosexual behavior. If the point of marriage was heterosexual procreation, how was homosexuality received? The answer it was allowed to be an OpenSecret. As long as you provided your spouse with babies, you might have the freedom to do whatever you wanted -- or ''whoever'' you wanted -- on the side. Relatedly, homosexuality was not considered to be a 'life choice' back then the way it is now.)
101# HappilyMarried. If an alliance is formalized by a marriage, it will be stronger if the husband and wife, y'know, actually like each other. Likewise, grandchildren will survive better if both of their parents are around. (Keep in mind that history was quite HarmfulToMinors: before 1800, you only had a ''50% chance'' of living past your 5th birthday.) Consequently, the PerfectlyArrangedMarriage was the goal when at all achievable. (Keep in mind that "PerfectlyArrangedMarriage" is ''also'' OlderThanDirt.) Having said that, if you weren't happy in your marriage, you were expected to keep up the HappyMarriageCharade; TheNeedsOfTheMany -- your family and your children at the very least -- outweigh your personal happiness.
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103Also, remember when this article said that marriages served "different purposes" in historical contexts? That was LiesToChildren. These priorities have been applied to ''every marriage throughout history''. They just weren't necessarily applied {{In That Order}}, and in fact the order in which you apply them is arguably what differentiates a Love Marriage from an ArrangedMarriage from even more esoteric things like a CitizenshipMarriage.
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105!! Pre-Existing Entanglements
106Infidelity is another issue you could approach. Obviously, you need to be ''very'' careful with this one, because it could easily devolve into a poor message. But the simple fact is that people become unhappy in their relationships sometimes, and begin to look outside that relationship for emotional and/or sexual satisfaction... and, perhaps more worryingly, sometimes this can be a reasonable response. Consider what happened just before the camera started rolling on the SitCom ''Series/{{Friends}}''. Ross Geller learns that Carol (née Wittick), his spouse of several years, has just had her ClosetKey turned, and is now a confirmed lesbian. They divorce, and Ross's introduction in the pilot episode is moping over the end of his marriage. What did Ross do wrong? ''Nothing''--aside from marry a lesbian; but, in both his and Carol's defense, neither of them ''knew'' she was a lesbian at the time, and you can't really avoid something you don't know about. The thing about long-term relationships is that ''people have CharacterDevelopment''. They change job, change wardrobe, pick up new hobbies, start drinking like a fish (or stop), discover a new angle on their sexuality, etc. (It doesn't even have to be sexual orientation; maybe, in another version of the story, Carol gets ''really'' into a particular kink, while Ross doesn't.) Suddenly, Carol wants to live a completely new life... and, through no fault of their own, Ross and Carol are married to the wrong people.
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108Now, the traditional marriage vows address this: when you say, "For better or for worse," what you're saying is, "I promise to not only love the person you are today, but [[UndyingLoyalty the stranger you will be tomorrow]]." And generally, [[ThePromise one should keep one's promises]]. But the fact is that a spouse ''can'' become a stranger... and, like it or not, love is completely voluntary. It's something you choose to do. Push comes to shove, you can probably learn to love ''anyone''... but should you ''have'' to? But then what about your vow? You could write some ''very'' interesting stories about the GrayAndGreyMorality of this situation: the need to balance HonorBeforeReason, the HappyMarriageCharade, and the very human and normal desires to participate in love and sex.
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110And notice that all of this fascinating emotional content occurred before the camera even started ''rolling''. We didn't even ''need'' Rachel (and her decade-long WillTheyOrWontThey with Ross) to get an interesting story going!
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112!! Gender Roles
113Finally, there are a ''vast'' number of tropes that are AlwaysMale, AlwaysFemale, or related to the {{Double Standard}}s we use to judge both men and women. Many of those tropes relate to this genre. How many of them can you invert, subvert, GenderFlip or flat-out avert? (Have you noticed that Alex, Bryce and Casey have never once been referred to by a gendered pronoun? Again, that was deliberate. What if you were to read them again, but this time reversing all the sex assumptions you made? Which read was more interesting?)
114
115!'''Writers' Lounge'''
116!!'''Suggested Themes and Aesops'''
117
118LoveRedeems. LoveMakesYouEvil. LoveHurts. LoveMakesYouDumb. LoveMakesYouCrazy. We could go on about ThePowerOfLove. Alternately, you could eschew all forms of {{Anvilicious}} and just write about ThePowerOfLove. It's good stuff. It can change a life. (Heck, according to [[Literature/TheBible one prominent book]], it changed the world.)
119
120!!'''Potential Motifs'''
121
122The RedStringOfFate is a visual motif that has long been associated with love in Asian cultures. The heart symbol is a good one. There's flower motifs, for there is a language of flowers. Supposedly, giving a woman daisies means something else than giving her roses. You could play with WesternZodiac or EasternZodiac themes. And there's always The RuleOfSymbolism, which works on ''anything''. You could make a peach mean sex. You could also make it mean "[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Invisible_Pink_Unicorn Invisible Pink Unicorn]]." ItsUpToYou.
123
124!!'''Suggested Plots'''
125
126RomanceNovelPlots. The RomanceArc.
127
128Having said that, it was mentioned earlier but can be mentioned again: a romance arc is ''very'' easy to thatch into just about any other plot, genre or ouevre. People have mated it to epic fantasy, science-fiction, mystery, comedy, drama, tragedy, Westerns, historicals... Hell, [[Creator/JamesCameron one madman]] put it on a sinking boat. And, in that movie, the romance arc ''shared'' top billing with the whole sinking-boat part. You can make a romance arc ''equal partners'' with any other genre, not just a subplot.
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130A lot of love stories end up resorting to things like the IdiotBall, {{Love Triangle}}s and other forms of {{melodrama}} because they can't figure out how else to make the story interesting. This is partially due to the belief that once the romantic leads get together, there must be a HappilyEverAfter: Drama is ''over''. No more {{conflict}}! And since stories run entirely on conflict, a pair of people who don't have any will make for a boring story.
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132The good news is, this belief is wrong. When two people get their RelationshipUpgrade, it doesn't ''cancel'' conflict, it just ''changes'' conflict. ''LoveHurts'', and just because the relationship works well the majority of the time, that doesn't mean the minority of conflict doesn't exist.
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134But what kind of conflict can we expect? Well:
135* '''NeverMyFault''': A lot of people believe this about themselves. So if Alex's actions cause Bryce pain or problem -- gambling addiction, maybe -- Alex may have difficulty accepting their responsibility and altering their behavior.
136* '''TheStoic:''' A lot of people have trouble expressing their emotions, believing that doing so makes them weak. A lot of people have trouble ''letting other people'' express their emotions for the same reason. The problem comes when Bryce hits some sort of TearJerker for which emotional expression is a completely appropriate response, and Alex is all, "No way, not gonna help you deal with it." (Or, worse, when ''Alex'' hits the TearJerker but still refuses to air the issue, and thus cope with it.)
137* '''ActualPacifist:''' Fighting with anyone ''sucks'', and in general, we don't want to do it. But if Alex and Bryce are having a serious problem, and Bryce would rather ''keep'' running from the problem, and thus allow it to continue occurring... Well, when's the problem gonna stop?
138* '''ItsAllAboutMe:''' A lot of people believe this about themselves. They make good talkers but bad listeners. At which point Bryce has a problem because Alex is in a relationship with them and it is, at least in theory, Alex's ''job'' to listen to Bryce's problems, and yet Alex refuses to.
139* '''IWorkAlone:''' Fundamentally, a relationship is about sharing. Some people have trouble doing this (see "The Stoic" above). If Bryce isn't ready to be honest -- and, more importantly, ''[[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway vulnerable]]'' -- with Alex, the relationship isn't going to last long.
140* '''FairWeatherFriend:''' In general, relationships are fun. But what happens when it stops being fun?, as it inevitably does. Does Alex tough it out by Bryce's side? Or just back off and let Bryce try to fight their way out alone?
141* '''ThickerThanWater:''' ...Well, what kind of person ''doesn't'' rush home if their mother is on her deathbed? Not Alex, that's who. But where does that leave Alex's co-workers? Where does that leave Alex? Where does that leave ''the children'' they have together?
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143In general, if one of these issues crop up, then there are two basic options. One is, the couple can break up, if the person with the problem refuses to change. The other is, that person can experience ''CharacterDevelopment''. Which is another secret about relationships: once you get into one, your personality doesn't enter stasis and stay the same forever. You ''still'' have flaws, you ''still'' have insecurities, and those flaws and insecurities will ''still'' impact your life and the lives of those around you. The question is, are you going to overcome them?
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145(And, to be clear: we still haven't added Casey into the equation yet. As mentioned, earlier, all you really need if you want drama in a love story is to have two people who are attracted to each other.)
146
147!'''Departments'''
148!!'''Set Designer''' / '''Location Scout'''
149
150You can set a love story anywhere. A TokenRomance is not defined by setting, but rather by the tone and focus of the story. Does your romance integrate smoothly into the rest of the story? If it doesn't, can you ''change'' the story to make it fit? If you decide to do this, make sure you get it right; The Reader will call foul if you don't. A romance novel revolves around a love story but the Reader can tell if you have too much hand in moving events.
151
152!!'''Props Department'''
153The gifts people give, and how they are received, can say a lot. Whether it's a fancy diamond necklace, a pretty shell, or a tool for the mechanic, things are expressed—and, furthermore, things are perceived.
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155This might be a good time to mention another bit of RealLife techology: the "[[http://www.5lovelanguages.com/learn-the-languages/the-five-love-languages/ Five Love Languages]]" developed by marriage counselor Dr. Gary Chapman. Simply put, Chapman asserts that there are five main ways a person can express love or affection: Words of Praise (saying nice things), Receiving Gifts, spending Quality Time together, Physical Touch, and "Acts Of Service" (the only of the five that doesn't have its own article on Website/TheOtherWiki, but basically starts with the words, "Here, let me do that for you"). While all human beings are fluent in all five languages, people tend to specialize in one or two. For instance, AllMenArePerverts, so Physical Touch would be a big deal for just about any male character (or male actual-person). Vice versa, a HollywoodHomely woman (or ''actual''-homely woman) might put a lot of importance being told she's beautiful, because so few people ever say that to her, and even fewer mean it. But what if your characters [[PoorCommunicationKills don't speak the same language]]? Bryce loves giving gifts, but to Alex gift-giving is the least important of the five languages; Alex's very touchy-feely, but that just gets Bryce's back up because the [[DefrostingIceQueen Ice Monarch isn't Defrosted yet]].
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157Because here's the thing: When you do something, it's not what you intended that matters; it's how it's ''perceived'' that matters. Bryce could spend five hours hand-crafting something for Alex... and if Alex just doesn't care, then Bryce wasted all that time. Alex (on the other hand) loves to give back-rubs and massages, which Bryce maybe could use because of the amount of stress Bryce picks up over the course of life, job and etc... and which Bryce nonetheless doesn't care about, because "physical comfort" is way low down on their list of priorities. "Why are you offering me this worthless thing?" Well, it's ''not'' worthless to the giver... But it's not the giver's opinion that matters. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. (Which is where you learn to ''share'' the giver's opinion; this is called Empathy. But that's another "So You Want To" article.)
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159!'''Costume Designer'''
160!!'''Casting Director'''
161In general, romance stories star attractive people, for the same reason porn movies tend to star attractive people: it's escapism, and we all want to think of ourselves as attractive. The good news is, in stories, you can make anyone attractive.
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163Here's another bit of advice, proved perfectly by Creator/PatrickRothfuss' debut novel ''Literature/TheNameOfTheWind'': don't make the character ''attractive'', make the character ''lovable''. A lot of beginning writers (especially in NSFW and/or {{Lemon}} fics) fall into this trap: they go into excruciating detail about Jennifer's blonde hair that flows in a shining river to just past her 16th vertebra, blue eyes that stretch precisely 4/5ths of the way towards her temples, perfect 34DD breasts, and so on and so forth. They are trying to create a "perfect woman," someone The Reader will inevitably find attractive. Well, they've already failed, because any reader who prefers PetitePride and RavenHairIvorySkin may--well, they may not be ''turned off'' by Heather, they're not exactly panting like a dog either. (Plus, all this detail about Jennifer's looks is often boring... which is the last thing you want, especially in the opening paragraphs of your story, which is where it's most likely to appear.) We have a trope on this very phenomenon, called "InformedAttractiveness," but no real sense of how to avert it. At least, before Patrick Rothfuss.
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165Rothfuss avoids this whole mess with Denna, his female lead. Instead of spending any amount of time on her appearance, Rothfuss makes it clear that his narrator is absolutely smitten. He {{lampshades}} the whole process via a wonderful interlude where the FirstPersonSmartass is reduced to spluttering incoherence when he ''tries'' to describe Denna's appearance, knowing there is no way he can do it correctly. In the end, he just admits straight out that he never saw her with eyes of flesh; he always looked upon her with eyes of love. "She was beautiful, to Kvothe at least. At least? To Kvothe, she was most beautiful." Even better, Rothfuss makes Denna interesting as a character, one that The Reader respects and cares about, even if they aren't necessarily head-over-heels with her the way our poor besotted narrator is. And now we're solidly on Denna's side, so that we (to quote [[Literature/TheGreatGatsby Nick Carraway]]) "concentrate[d] on [her] with an irresistible prejudice in [her] favor." Now it doesn't matter what she looks like, because our regard for her is based on something far deeper than the shallow accidents of appearance. She is not the WorldsMostBeautifulWoman, she is the LauncherOfAThousandShips.
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167How does this relate to casting? Simple: by using this technique—by getting The Reader to empathize with your lead you can then make them look like ''anything you damn well please'', and still have The Reader love them. Your male lead could be the ugliest man on Earth. His love interest could have features all out of proportion, saggy wide flap-boobs and a nose that's too large. Heck, you don't ''have'' to describe them at all! Just give glimpses, flashes, capsule images. A tall lean man with an arrogant bearing, all cropped dark hair and brooding eyes—even if that's all you give, that's enough. Because that leaves The Reader's imagination free to fill in their own personal details about your hero... And answer this question: who's going to be better at inventing The Reader's perfect man? The Reader? Or you?
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169Invoke this. Exploit this. Give The Reader just enough of a coat-hanger that they can create ''their version'' of your character, and then leave it at that. Stories are always better when The Reader ''is'' the Casting Director.
170
171!!'''Stunt Department'''
172In love, there are no stunt doubles. (As many a man ExiledToTheCouch has learned.)
173
174!'''Extra Credit'''
175!!'''The Greats'''
176Well, there's ''Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet'', but take it with a grain of salt: the AlternativeCharacterInterpretation, that the title characters were naive children who rushed into an infatuation (or just morons), is starting to become the ''Standard'' Character Interpretation. The epic of the early 20th century is probably ''Film/{{Titanic 1997}}'', or perhaps ''Film/BrokebackMountain''. In between is a wide variety of authors and stories, some of which are good, some of which are {{Romance Novel}}s, some of which is hidden at the porn sites and at least one of which got somewhat derailed because [[Film/SpiderManTrilogy the male lead was bitten by a radioactive spider]].
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178Two honorable mentions:
179* The film ''Film/ParisJeTAime,'' a collection of 20 short films about love set in the most romanticized city of all time, Paris. This superb collection runs the gamut, from LoveAtFirstSight, to [[ILoveYouVampireSon Love At First Bite]], to [[SlapSlapKiss Love At First Punch,]] Unrequited Love, to relationship retrospectives, to falling out of love, falling back ''in'' love, keeping yourself in love, and the eulogy to a dead love affair - as well as a woman's brief love story with Paris itself.
180* The films ''Film/TronLegacy'' and ''Film/PacificRim'', which handle the love story via the almost-unseen ImpliedLoveInterest trope. You could do worse than study these films' handling of romance as a ''subplot'', one that (realistically) takes a back seat to the Action Movie foreplot of people fighting for their lives.
181
182!!'''The Epic Fails'''
183There are far too many to list here. Basically, this is anything that gets listed under TokenRomance, StrangledByTheRedString, ShippingBedDeath or similar tropes. Avoid anything you see on those pages like the plague, unless you're really eager to find out how ''not'' to do it.
184
185!!'''Directed Reading'''
186One of your first stops is [[http://www.smartbitchestrashybooks.com/index.php Smart Bitches, Trashy Books]], the WebAnimation/ZeroPunctuation or Website/{{Cracked}} Dot Com of the romance genre. A small cadre of smart bitches review trashy books, pointing out not just what works and what doesn't, but ''why'' the work or not-work happened. As a writer, that's worth its weight in gold to you (or it should be). And hey: [[http://smartbitchestrashybooks.com/blog/seduced-by-virginia-henley-a-guest-review-by-redheadedgirl at least one review]] was written by a troper!
187
188Another good place to look is ''Blog/LimyaaelsFantasyRants'', particularly the [[http://limyaael.livejournal.com/tag/rants%20on%20romance Rants on Romance]]. Limyaael specializes in fantasy, but she has branched out enough that you'll find critiques that are applicable to just about any genre or topic. Romance is only one of them. There isn't necessarily much on What to Do, but there's a ''lot'' on What ''Not'' to Do, and hey, that ought to help narrow it down some.
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