Line #84 FanFic/PuellaMagiYuukoMagica


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4	''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8574284/1/Puella-Magi-Yuuko-Magica Puella Magi Yuuko Magica]]'' is an ongoing ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' fanfic by Webidolchiu94 on Fanfiction.net. It follows an AlternateContinuity in which Madoka wishes for a world where the Puella Magi aren't bound by the rules of the old Puella Magi system. However, it's [[NotWhatItLooksLike not what you think.]] In other words, {{be careful what you wish for}}.
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6	Now, not only are there Puella Magi, but mages as well! [[{{BlatantLies}} No longer are there Witches that garner despair and sadness!]]
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8	And there's a spoiler warning from [[WordOfGod the goddess herself:]]
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10	''''' May contain heavy spoilers for not only the show, but my other story, "Eternal Flowers", seeing as this is a prequel! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.'''''
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12	Now has [[http://puella-magi-yuuko-magica.wikia.com/wiki/Puella_Magi_Yuuko_Magica_Wiki a Wiki.]]
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15	!!This Fanfic provide examples of:
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17	* ActionGirl: The Puella Magi in general. It's kinda required when you go around fighting Demons.
18	* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Kyoko and Sayaka. In the main series, while their relationship is a bit ambiguous, the two are neutral to friendly, and there are even subtle hints that there might be feelings to eachother. In ''this'' story, due to Kyoko [[spoiler: attacking/sucking Hitomi's blood so hard, she was sent to the hospital]], Sayaka hates Kyoko's guts, while due to her feral tendencies, Kyoko herself can't help but find Sayaka an interesting potential snack at best, an annoyance at worst, though she does admit that she "has guts" when Sayaka talks back at her.
19	* AllWitchesHaveCats: Madoka and Hitomi have white and black cats respectively. In a way, Kyuubey could count, if not for the weird things hanging from his ears.
20	* AlternateUniverse: Obviously the whole reason for the story. Subverted and deconstructed; Madoka and [[spoiler:Madokami]] reformatted the universe, and now Homura has no idea how to cope with it. Madoka's gotten the hang of it though...
21	* AlternateUniverseReedRichardsIsAwesome: As a {{Callback}} to the alternate timelines where Madoka was quite the LittleMissBadass.
22	* AlwaysInClassOne: Mami is still in Class 3-A, and the girls are in class 2-A.
23	* AnthropomorphicPersonification:
24	** Madokami is the goddess of Hope of course.
25	** Madoka is a goddess of Love.
26	* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Nagisa.]] After the entire fight between Madoka, [[spoiler:Charlotte, and Homura, the cancer-plagued]] cutie is shown rising from the dead in the morgue of Mahokari Medical Center. This is due to her being cured of her witchification.
27	* BadassBoast: Madoka in the past, revealed in chapter 6
28	-->'''Madoka:''' I am the Goddess of Love. I am supported by the Goddess of Hope. My friends and I shall save you from despair!
29	%%* BigEater: Kyouko.
30	* BlobMonster: Gregor, the first demon featured in the story, is a large sludge of ink with arms and two glowing white eyes.
31	%%* TheBluebeard: [[spoiler: Oriko's father.]]
32	* CallingYourAttacks:
33	** Mami does this in Italian, not to mention the rest of our cast.
34	** Mages in a way, do this, not only in Latin, but in Greek and even Hindi.
35	** Madoka's attacks as a Puella Magi are apparently in German.
36	* CataclysmBackstory: Apparently, 20 years ago, a beast simply known as "The Dawn of Hyades" attacked Mahokari City, and it was so powerful, most Mages and Magical Girls couldn't do anything against it. Then, [[spoiler: Madoka]] and [[spoiler: Madokami]] came in with a group of Magical Girls and attacked, defeating the beast.
37	* ClassicalAntiHero: Homura, who has self-esteem issues, which become especially acentuated in this new universe.
38	* ColorMotif: The colors in a Puella Magi's attire take on greater symbolism. The more white there is, the more innocent, naive and pure the wearer. As they become more cynical and battle-weary, the white fades to grey, and can eventually turn coal black.
39	* CombinationAttack: So far, only one combo has been executed, "Sparkling Railgun", and it's between Homura and Madoka.
40	* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: [[spoiler:Oriko's father]], after being convicted, is punished by turning into a grey dog Familiar spirit, with no chance of ever becoming human again.
41	%%* CosmicRetcon: Happens in the very first chapter.
42	%%* CovertPervert: [[spoiler:Kyuubey.]] And he [[{{Squick}} does not enjoy]] being called a DirtyOldMan.
43	* CuteLittleFangs: Kyouko has these, although when she first meets the duo, they border on FangsAreEvil.
44	* DeclarationOfProtection: Originally, this was Homura's shtick, but once the universe was rewritten this became Madoka's trope all in all. Though Homura still invokes this for Madoka at times.
45	%%* DefeatEqualsFriendship: Madoka plans to invoke this on [[spoiler:Kyouko]].
46	%%* DeityOfHumanOrigin: Madokami, and arguably, Madoka herself.%%Examples aren't arguable.
47	* DespairEventHorizon: The Incubators appear to those in the middle of a crisis and offer them the chance to become a Puella Magi and make a wish. [[spoiler:There's also the Despair Cubes.]]
48	* DimensionalTraveler: Not only our Madoka, but [[spoiler:Madokami]] and Homura.
49	* DrivenByEnvy: Sayaka isn't too impressed by the new girl or how easily she's gotten close to Madoka. Nor is she too thrilled by [[spoiler:being excluded from their new school club]].
50	* ElementalPowers: There are at least four, each with their specific incantations: [[PlayingWithFire Incendio]], [[MakingASplash Aquos]], [[BlowYouAway Flans]], and [[DishingOutDirt Terranus]].
51	* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Water (Aquos) beats fire (Incendio), and earth (Terranus) beats wind (Flans).
52	* EyeColorChange: Madoka's eyes can occasionally change color. When she's about to dish out a buttkicking? {{Red\|EyesTakeWarning}}. When Madokami is controlling her physical body? [[SupernaturalGoldEyes Gold]]. Who knows what will come next?
53	* {{Familiar}}:
54	** Kyuubey in this setting is now a familiar.
55	** Homura also has one: [[spoiler:a black butterfly]].
56	** It seems that being turned into one can work as some sort of punishment, as [[spoiler: Oriko's father]] can attest.
57	* FlyingBroomstick: It's mentioned that [[spoiler: Junko]] has one of these.
58	* ForcedTransformation: [[spoiler: Oriko's father]] gets turned into a grey dog as part of his CoolAndUnusualPunishment.
59	* AGodIAmNot: Madoka has to contend with everyone calling her "Kami-sama", but begins to correct them with extreme irritation after the charm wears off.
60	* GratuitousGerman: Certain phrases, like the one at the beginning of chapter 3, are written in German.
61	* GratuitousJapanese: [[spoiler: Kyubey]]'s greeting to Homura in chapter 5.
62	* HealingFactor:
63	** Gregor, the first Demon seen, possesses one that allows him to regenerate his body as Mami quickly dissolves it bit by bit.
64	** [[spoiler: Kyouko]] also has a factor like this, due to being a vampire.
65	%%* HearingVoices: [[spoiler:Homura is.]]
66	* HolyBurnsEvil: [[spoiler: Kyouko]], as a vampire, is affected by a cross Sayaka picks up during their fight in "Strawberry Leech Part 1." [[spoiler: Actually, she's faking it.]]
67	* HumanityIsInfectious: Something that the Incubators discovered when they reached Earth, to their horror.
68	* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mami at the start of chapter 5, also revealing her wish.
69	* ImpoverishedPatrician: Kamijou comes from an aristrocratic family with very old magic; unfortunately, their money and influence have dwindled, making it difficult for them to cope with his accident.
70	* InsistentTerminology: When Homura calls Madoka by her surname, she requests to simply be called Madoka.
71	* InnocentBlueEyes: The Kyuubi of the remade world have blue eyes instead of red, appear to have emotions, and seem to sympathize with those they contract. This doesn't stop them from [[IcyBlueEyes being creepy]], and [[spoiler:at least one of them is out to get revenge on Madoka for "making a fool of him".]]
72	* LiteralGenie: One of the things Homura remembers from Kyubey in the rewritten universe is how, when you made him a wish, he would grant it in the most literal way possible.
73	* LoveGoddess: Madoka proclaims she's one during her BadassBoast in chapter 6's flashback.
74	* LovePotion: These are among the items used by [[spoiler:Oriko's father]] while describing how he controlled women.
75	* MadeOfEvil: Demons, the rewritten universe's answer to Witches, are made of death and despair.
76	* MagicStaff: Madoka, Homura and Kauko all have one.
77	* MagicWand: Everyone has one, save for those with particularly large amounts of {{Mana}}.
78	* MakeAWish: In addition to making a wish when contracting, Puella Magi can also collect Wish Coins by defeating Demons and Wraiths. Gathering enough of these enables them to effectively buy another wish.
79	* TheMeaningOfLife: This is [[spoiler:Oriko]]'s wish after the tragedy that befell her family.
80	%%* {{Multiverse}}: Hinted at.
81	* MultiPartEpisode: "Strawberry Leech" and "Sunshine and Water," chapters 8-9 and 18-19.
82	* NaiveNewcomer: Homura to the new universe. Not because it's the first time she's been there (she remarks while walking to school that the atmosphere is familiar to her), but because the new universe is so vastly different compared to the previous time loops.
83	* OhCrap: Madoka, Homura, and even Kyuubey's reaction after the fight with the Demon at the hospital.
84	* OnlySaneMan: Sayaka, apparently, at least in ''her'' eyes.
85	* {{Ojou}}: Mami, it turns out, has turned out better in this new world due to [[spoiler:her parents still being alive]]. She lives in a mansion, has a (very expensive) time sphere, like in ''Manga/NegimaMagisterNegiMagi'', and there's even a tower in the city christened with her surname.
86	* OurDemonsAreDifferent: They're the replacement for Witches in the rewritten universe, basically. They can be tracked using a Soul Gem, they use "Subordinates," essentially the Witch's familiars by another name, and judging by chapter 7's introduction, they're [[MadeOfEvil made of death and despair]].
87	* OurVampiresAreDifferent: They have a HealingFactor, possess fangs, drink blood, and going by implications in dialogue, they're basically immortal. [[spoiler:Kyouko's a practical proof of this.]]
88	* PhysicalGod: Madoka is regarded as such by the Incubators, who insistantly call her 'Kami-sama'.
89	* PrettyButterflies: [[spoiler: Homura]]'s {{Familiar}} takes the shape of one.
90	* ThePromise: Between Madoka and Homura in chapter 5. [[spoiler: The promise is to not kill Kyubey.]]
91	* RageAgainstTheReflection: Homura does this in chapter 2, when looking at her reflection causes her self-loathing tendencies to act up. She's promptly called out by her nurse soon after.
92	* RedBaron: Homura's deceased mother, according to Mr.Chamomile, was called "The Black Rose".
93	* RedEyesTakeWarning: Madoka has to be the most relevant example. Aside from her there also happens to be [[spoiler:{Kyuubey}, who seems to have escaped the rewrite of the universe somehow.]]
94	* RefusalOfTheCall: In chapter 4, it's said that Kyubey visited [[spoiler: Oriko]]'s house twice before the chapter, but she had vehemently refused him. [[InnocenceLost And then the start of the chapter happened]]...
95	* ResetButton: Basically chapter one.
96	* SayingTooMuch: Madoka stops herself from doing this in chapter 4.
97	* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler:Mr. Chamomile knows about the Puella Magi, and serves as an ally among the school staff]].
98	* SelflessWish: [[spoiler:A dying Mami]]'s wish in the remade world was for [[spoiler:Kyuubi to save her parents rather than herself]].
99	* SensorCharacter: Kyubey seems to be able to sense not only Demons, but other Incubators and Puella Magi. Mami and Kyoko were across town, and thus 'out of range' for his telepathy at one point.
100	* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong- What Madoka's wish set out to do in the first place.
101	* ShoutOut: Several, in fact.
102	** Doppeliners from ''Manga/{{Kurokami}}''
103	** The "Closed Spaces" that the Demons reside in are a reference to Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya.
104	** There are several big shout-outs to ''Manga/NegimaMagisterNegiMagi'':
105	*** Mami's Time Sphere is one, and doubles as a CameoProp
106	*** Madoka saves her cat in a scene that resembles the chapter in an early volume involving wind magic.
107	*** The name of the book Homura finds at her house is "Diarium Ejus"
108	*** The guidance counselor is a man named Albireo Chamomile who insists on being called "Chamo-kun"
109	*** There is an Ala Alba tournament coming up, as the announcements over the P.A. have said.
110	** Tirol is the name of the restaurant that Chii works at in ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''. They go there after school to have tea.
111	** "Welcome," said Mami to the band of four behind her, "to our 'Little Garden'."
112	* ShrineMaiden: Kyouko used to be one, as was her sister.
113	* SpellBook: Textbooks double as these.
114	* SpinOff: To ''[[FanFic/EternalFlowers Eternal Flowers]]''.
115	* SpontaneousWeaponCreation: The Puella Magi can do this, like usual, but of particular notice is Madoka, who's capable of summoning her weapon ''without transforming''.
116	%%* StarfishAlien: The Incubators.
117	* StepfordSmiler: Madoka even more so than in canon. Homura was this at first, but her smile seems to gradually become more and more real.
118	* SupernaturalGoldEyes: Madokami, always, and Madoka at times.
119	* TechnicolorEyes: [[spoiler:Inkyuu, Kyouko's Incubator, has purple eyes.]]
120	* TechnicolorFire: Homura's fire is blue from what we've seen so far.
121	* ThatManIsDead: In this 'verse, [[spoiler:Kyouko]] renounced her name following [[spoiler:her little sister Momo's death]] and [[MeaningfulName renamed herself]] after [[spoiler:the cherry blossoms Momo'd given her before the incident]].
122	* TheseHandsHaveKilled: [[spoiler: Oriko]]'s, to be exact, at the start of chapter 4.
123	* ThisIsReality: Sayaka's reaction upon [[spoiler:seeing Madoka as a Puella Magi]].
124	* WakingUpAtTheMorgue: [[spoiler:Nagisa Momoe]], complete with a complete color change of her hair and eye color form earlier.
125	* WhamLine:
126	** From the nurse to Homura, in chapter 2:
127	---> '''Nurse Austero:''' It's the least I could do for a fellow Magistra Magi now, isn't it?
128	** And then, one chapter later, to show that Madoka knows more than she lets on:
129	---> '''Madoka:''' Homura-chan... I can remember everything.
130	** Then, at the start of chapter 4, proving that there are other Magical Girls besides the main quintet:
131	---> '''Kyubey:''' As you wish, [[spoiler: Oriko.]]
132	** Kyouko, after showing her backstory to the team in chapter 9:
133	---> '''Kyouko:''' [[spoiler: That was over 50 years ago.]]
134	* WizardingSchool: Mahokari Academy. It has Middle through High School students as well.

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