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11	''[[http://web.archive.org/web/20161001224455/https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4315906/1/Dumbledore-s-Army-and-the-Year-of-Darkness Dumbledore's Army and the Year of Darkness]]'' began as a one-shot, 4,000-word Literature/HarryPotter fanfic story entitled ''Dumbledore's Army: Still Recruiting''. According to the author, he soon found himself "up to [his] pointed hat in the most out-of-control one-shot in the history of the wizarding world."
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13	[=DAYD=], as it is known, is a POVSequel that happens at the same time as the story of ''Deathly Hallows''. It follows one of Harry's friends, Neville Longbottom, as he takes control of the underground group Dumbledore's Army, who soon begin a revolt and prepare for an all-or-nothing war against Lord Voldemort.
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15	The tale continues in ''[[https://www.reddit.com/r/HPfanfiction/comments/7kfxke/does_anyone_have_a_copy_of_dumbledores_army_and/dviiy0g?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3 Sluagh]]''.[[note]]Destructive, restless spirits of the dead in Irish mythology.[[/note]] It is now five years later, all the survivors have moved on to civilian life, each nursing their own trauma scars. Neville is senior Auror and Simon-Wiesenthal-in-residence (so to speak) for the rebuilt Ministry of Magic, tasked with rounding up the remnants of Voldemort's henchmen. For his final assignment, he is dispatched to track down a mysterious serial/vigilante killer in Ireland and ends up fighting an even more sinister and brutal dark lord than Voldemort.
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17	The concluding novel of the trilogy, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4914208/1/A_Peccatis A Peccatis]]'',[[note]]Translated as "Without Redemption" by the author, though it actually means "From Sins", as in the Catholic formula: "I absolve you ''from'' [your] ''sins'' in the name of..." ("''ego te absolvo '''a peccatis''' tuis in nomine Patris et filii et spiritus sancti''"). ArtisticLicense comes into play because "Sine Absolutione" (the correct Latin phrase) lacks the religious connotations, and both it and "From Sins" are terrible titles.[[/note]] picks up in 2008. Strapped for money (the recession rippled into the wizarding world too), Neville is finally talked into joining the Wizarding legislature just as a vote on officially breaking the masquerade is pending. All the while, Dumbledore's darkest secrets are coming to light. Though a word of warning: [[ScheduleSlip/FanFic the most recent chapter was posted on the 9th of October 2012]], [[DeadFic and the author has moved on through at least two or three more fandoms since then with no word on when he'll be returning]].
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19	[=DAYD=] exploded into a FanVerse, the [[http://community.livejournal.com/daydverse [=DAYDverse=]]], and now comprises more than half a million words by the original author in the form of the two complete novels (''Dumbledore's Army and the Year of Darkness'' and ''Sluagh'') with a third novel in progress (''A Peccatis''), along with numerous [[ADayInTheLimelight one-shots and short stories exploring various other characters]]. Other authors have come to play in that world as well, most notably [[http://ceirdwenfc.livejournal.com Ceirdwenfc]], who has written stories about Ernie and Susan and is currently working on a novel, ''Bittersweet'', which is yet another POVSequel and follows Ernie's experiences during [=DAYD=].
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21	As of December 2017, Thanfiction's [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1550595/Deletedaccountnolongeractive account has been deactivated]].
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24	!!Tropes:
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28	[[folder: In General]]
29	* AdaptationalWimp: Done to a ''plot element'' instead of a character. In the DAYD universe, healing magic is significantly weaker than in canon. It barely does anything to Neville and Ernie's whipping wounds, when it's used to regrow Colin's hand, it results in something barely a step up from a Muggle prosthetic, and in general, injuries are treated as a much, ''much'' bigger deal than they would be in canon.
30	%% * AdaptationExpansion: Of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''. Pretty much the whole point.
31	%% * AlternateUniverse: Implicit in the first novel, increasingly explicit in the second, and right up the reader's nose in the third.
32	* AnyoneCanDie: In the Battle of Hogwarts, the brutal deaths of [[spoiler: Dennis, Michael, Cho, Parvati and too many others]] come as shocks. Continued with alarming enthusiasm in the sequels. Basically, anyone who did not get an explicit name check '''as being alive and well''' in Rowling's epilogue can be presumed to be dead by the time the trilogy has run its course. And even '''that''' is no guarantee, because "Epilogue? What Epilogue?"
33	%% * BabiesEverAfter: A recurring theme in Neville and Hannah's relationship.
34	%% * [[BadassBookworm Badass Bookworms]]: Terry Boot and Michael Corner. For that matter, all of the [[MinoredInAsskicking D.A. Ravenclaws]]. Also Icarus Utterson, who worked as TheSmartGuy for Seamus' group in ''Sluagh'', and Anthony Goldstein in ''A Peccatis''.
35	* BigBad: As in the books, ultimately, Voldemort. Memories of the horror of his reign and the extremes required to end it echo through the sequels.
36	* BloodierAndGorier: This fic series has a LOT of very explicitly described violence, rape, gore, and torture. It's based on ''Literature/HarryPotter'', a ''Children's/Young Adult series''. It's also worth noting that, in nearly all Harry Potter material, the Death Eaters kill with instantaneous Killing Curses, while in DAYD, they generally opt for much more painful, prolonged, and bloody methods.
37	* BloodyHorror: Many of the deaths that happen in the Battle of Hogwarts are like this. [[spoiler:: Special mention goes to Romilda Vane, who is slashed apart into a pile of gore.]]
38	* BodyHorror: The curse that turns people inside out.
39	* BreatherEpisode: Multiple:
40	** The author does attempt to put a few comic episodes in between the doom and gloom. Like a FishOutOfWater scene where Neville and co. attempt (with more success than most wizards) to navigate the byzantine mazes that is British Rail and Marks & Spencer to get to a wedding. And a similar episode in 'Sluagh' where Neville and Utterson try to pump a ''muggle'' cultural anthropologist for information on magical sites in Ireland.
41	** Also during the run-up to the battle of Hogwarts, persecution by the Death Eaters has driven most of the student body into the safety of the Room of Requirement, which quickly assumed the atmosphere of a rather morbid slumber party. The students noted how ironic it is that the only time they got to relax in the whole year was the week before they will go into a suicidal battle.
42	* CallToAgriculture: Neville's potential for incredible badassery and his love of herbology are in even bigger contrast with each other than in {{Canon}}. He often declares how much he would prefer simple gardening over leading an army. He eventually gets it, with interruptions.
43	* CannonFodder: Were you in the original books? Did the epilogue not mention you? You're almost certainly going to die.
44	* TheCameo: Peripheral characters from previous books tend to drop by for a scene or two, and most likely, get killed in the process.
45	* CrapsackWorld: The wizarding world is becoming this. And ''Sluagh'' somehow managed to mesh the worst of the Troubles in Northern Ireland with the worst of Voldemort's reign of terror.
46	* CrazyPrepared: Hermione, whose method of dealing with PTSD involves carrying around enough supplies to stock half an army in her magic purse ''absolutely everywhere''.
47	%% * CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Neville, you ARE this trope.
48	* DarkerAndEdgier: DAYD itself compared to {{Canon}}; ''Sluagh'', goes even further with a few sections with very detailed descriptions of the rape and torture of [[spoiler:Hermione]]. And ''A Peccatis'' seems determined to examine all the warts and seams of the wizarding world in general.
49	* DarkFic: See the above.
50	* DeadGuyJunior: Thanfiction is especially prone to this. There are only three kids who ''aren't'' named after dead people, and two were adopted from another country. Of course, there are a lot of names to choose from...
51	* DidNotDoTheBloodyResearch: If you speak British or Irish English, be prepared to hit stuff a lot. Thanfiction's ignorance about European languages is painfully obvious, with use of words like "sweater" or "curb" instead of "jumper" and "kerb."
52	%% * DoorStopper: Longer than ''Order of the Phoenix'' by quite a bit. The 'verse taken together is already longer than the entire SERIES.
53	* ElsewhereFic: DAYD takes place during Neville's final year in Hogwarts, which was never depicted in canon because the protagonists left the school to focus on finding the Hallows.
54	* FanVerse: Starts with a parallel story to ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows'' and continues with the second of three books called "Sluagh," as well as numerous one-shots, missing scenes, and character profiles.
55	%% * FireForgedFriends: The D.A. through all three stories so far, although cracks have shown up from time to time.
56	* {{Gorn}}:
57	** Doesn't even begin to describe the [[WarIsHell Battle of Hogwarts]]. Gory descriptions include [[spoiler: a girl being slashed to bloody shreds by a curse, Lavender having her throat torn and mangled, a giant crushing a student like jelly, and Michael's head smashed open so his exposed brain gleams white]].
58	** ''Sluagh'' ups the ante, with [[spoiler:Seamus Finnigan ritually torturing and slowly eviscerating his targets while they are still alive, Bill getting his limbs ripped off and buried alive, Ginny being impaled and her heart ripped out by a sentient tree, and the less said about what happened to Ron and Hermione, the better.]]
59	** The author seems to be backpedalling from this, people are still dying left and right in ''A Peccatis'' but a lot more ''bloodlessly''.
60	* GotOverRapeInstantly: Immediately after the reveal that [[spoiler:Lavender Brown is being regularly raped by Crabbe and Goyle hard enough to leave bruises, Neville sees her and Seamus sleeping together, which all characters and the narrative treat as a fix for her trauma.]]
61	* HeroicBuild: Much attention is paid to the boys' rippling muscles and the girls' curvaceous fragility, [[SelfFanservice even where the original books had hitherto failed to mention fragile curves or a penchant for rippling]].
62	* HoldYourHippogriffs: The author (in imitation of Rowling) has an occasional tendency to make up "wizarding" idioms, like "witches' instinct" for "women's intuition".
63	* {{MST}}: The fic [[http://nevssporking.tumblr.com/tagged/sporking/chrono has]] [[http://uke-nagashi.livejournal.com/28565.html received]] [[http://freya-sacksen.livejournal.com/107932.html several]] [[http://www.projectafterforums.com/index.php?showtopic=4775 sporkings]].
64	* NationalStereotypes: Multiple:
65	** Seamus and the other Irish characters pretty much cover ''all'' of the major Irish stereotypes, and by ''Sluagh'', Thanfiction starts to resurrect some of the [[StockCharacters stock Irish characters]] from the Victorian era.
66	** The stereotyping covers the spectrum: starting with Cho, a Chinese girl who is indistinguishable from her English neighbour; to Parvati and Padma, who are attracted to some superficial trappings of their Indian heritage (e.g. the cooking and Yoga); to Ernie, who swings from "generic British" to "escapee from Theatre/{{Brigadoon}}" depending on the chapter; to Seamus, who looks like he wandered in from an Irish epic and the author spends '''every other chapter''' making sure you get that.
67	%% * NeverMessWithGranny:
68	%% ** Augusta Dorsett Longbottom (Neville's ill-tempered grandmother)
69	%% ** Minerva [=McGonagall=]....
70	* {{Oireland}}: Multiple:
71	** Seamus Finnegan gets turned into this, JK Rowling has said that naming the character "Seamus Finnegan" was pushing it a bit, but Thanfiction takes the Irish stereotype up a notch. Example:
72	--> "Tell you what. You say one word, and I'll make it worth your while. I've smuggled in a bit of the real good stuff – Muggle-made Irish pure – and I'll slip you a tot. Or if you'd rather, I'll work my charms and score you a kiss from that lovely Miss [=MacDonald=] you've been castin' eyes at all year. What say you?" ''DAYD'', (Chapter 11).
73	** Now consider that he didn't have anything resembling that thick an accent in canon. Oh, and he knows Druidic rituals, as well.
74	** Even worse, ''Slaugh'' has several sequences in an Ireland torn and devastated by the Troubles... even though it takes place three years after the end of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows''. For those who don't know the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' timeline, ''Deathly Hallows'' takes place in 1998, the year the Good Friday Agreement was signed; while it's ridiculous to say that brought an immediate end to ''all'' the fighting, the story doesn't seem to realize there was any sort of action at all.
75	* OneWordTitle: ''Slaugh'', named for destructive, restless spirits of the dead in Irish mythology.
76	* OutOfCharacter: Due to the DarkFic nature of the story, quite a few characters are this.
77	** Crabbe and Goyle are murderous rapists rather than dimwitted henchmen.
78	** Death Eaters as a whole are a lot more sadistic, favoring violent torture curses over simple killing curses.
79	** Neville Longbottom suddenly has the personality and authority of a military commander despite being a generally affable, pleasant student in canon.
80	** Every female character gets this to a degree; they all seem to communicate over some telepathic wavelength only women can access, and seem like much closer friends than they were in the Harry Potter books.
81	* POVSequel: To ''Deathly Hallows'', presenting the events of the book from Neville's [[=POV=]].
82	* PurelyAestheticGlasses: Terry Boot had these when he was younger, to appear intelligent so the Sorting Hat would put him in Ravenclaw.
83	%% * PurpleProse: Goes into this on occasion.
84	* ThereAreNoTherapists: Lampshaded, the students of Hogwarts survived a year of genocidal torture and war, and all they have at the end are each other for comfort. The only thing the wizarding world at large tossed them is a bunch of nosy reporters. Everyone ended up learning to deal with his or her PTSD themselves. Some retreated into domesticity, some became lawmen, one became a [[spoiler:vigilante serial killer]], another [[spoiler:became a drug addict]], and everyone had nightmares.
85	* TookALevelInJerkAss: Neville becomes more and more of a {{Jerkass}} as the fic goes on. Mostly this is due to the fact that he starts to see himself as a military leader and begins to expect military discipline from his underlings, while the said underlings still see him as their fellow classmate.
86	%% * TrueCompanions: The D.A. turns into one of these.
87	* UsefulNotes/TheTroubles: The fic handles the subject remarkably well considering it's ''a Franchise/HarryPotter fanfic''. DA partisan Seamus Finnigan, who in the [=DAYDverse=] is from Belfast, uses the Troubles as a counter-example to wizards' overly romanticized view of the {{Muggle}} world. The conflict plays a major role in the plot of ''Sluagh''. Of course, ''Sluagh'' also gets it wrong, being set in 2003, while The Provos broke apart in 1998. The "Real IRA" has a tendency to set itself apart from the Regular IRA, which many members consider 'quitters'.
88	* TheVerse
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92	* ADayInTheLimelight: Most of the supporting characters get a few stories about them. The original novels are also this.
93	** Terry Boot and Michael Corner (in various short stories)
94	** Ernie Macmillan and Susan Bones (in ''Bittersweet'' and other works by Ceirdwenfc)
95	** Colin Creevey and Demelza Robins (''Breaking Eggs'' and ''Snapshots'')
96	** The various ''20 Random Facts About...''
97	* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Ginny rattles off a list of equipment she's managed to smuggle into the castle, finishing with "and some Pygmy Puff treats for Arnold".
98	* ArtisticLicense:
99	** Recent rape victims are usually ''not'' receptive to male-initiated sexual acts as the [[HurtComfortFic post-Sluagh one-shot]] ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5475729/1/More_Realer More Realer]]'' and the end of the [[spoiler:Lavender]] scene in DAYD describe.
100	** If Thanfiction knew enough about Demiguises to include them in DAYD, he should have known enough about them to not portray them as invisible ''goats'' when they're invisible ''apes''.
101	* ArtisticLicenseGeography:
102	** Scotland does not have a Himalayas-like climate, despite the assertion while explaining a hidden Demiguise farm. Also, [[OurMonstersAreDifferent demiguises are described as wild and ape-like in ''Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them''; the fic treats them as some sort of invisible domestic sheep.]]
103	** In one scene, Neville and several characters use a National Express East Coast train as part of a journey to Gretna Green. In 1997/98, the route from King's Cross to the North was controlled by Great North Eastern Railway...and the far more convenient way to get to Gretna Green by train is via the line from Euston to Carlisle.
104	* ArtisticLicenseHistory: A meta-example - in one of his posts on the story, while decrying the idea of shipping Terry Boot and Michael Corner, Thanfiction referred to them as having a "bond between men that forms in wartime" and compared it to the Sacred Band of Thebes. The Sacred Band of Thebes was legendarily formed up entirely of ''men in homosexual relationships'', on the grounds that a man would fight all the harder to protect his lover.
105	* ArtisticLicenseMedicine: The blood transfusion in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4315906/10/Dumbledores_Army_and_the_Year_of_Darkness Chapter 10 of DAYD]], done without any attempt at cross-matching bloodtypes, and with two people donating blood, was quite risky, with about a 35% chance Colin would '''die''' from bloodtype incompatibility [[note]] The commonest blood type in the British Isles is O, which can donate to anybody, followed closely in England by A (not so closely in Scotland, which averages 51% O to England's 47%). Ernie is Scots and Neville, as a Yorkshireman, is from the north of England, meaning that there's a good chance one or both of them are Type O. (There's also a 3% chance that Colin is Type AB, which can receive from anybody.) The Rh factor seldom causes problems unless an Rh- recipient has been previously sensitized by an incorrectly cross-matched transfusion or by an Rh+ pregnancy (neither of which applies to Colin). These odds help explain why early blood transfusion experiments were successful up to about half the time, with very primitive techniques and no real knowledge of what they were doing. We should note by this point that none of these characters have any medical (or indeed, biological) training[[/note]].
106	* AscendedFanboy:
107	** Colin, an out-and-out PopCulturedBadass who loves ''Franchise/StarWars'', plays ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'', and even says he's "living the fantasy." It also explains his hero-worship of Harry and general hyperactivity throughout canon.
108	** It's clearest when Neville meets Colin's childhood friend Brad, who is under the impression that Neville is "Lawful Good", and in [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/753597/chapters/1407644 this companion oneshot.]]
109	* BecomingTheMask: From the perspective of Hogwarts students in 1997-8, there's no real difference between Severus Snape pretending to be evil so as not to make Voldemort suspicious, and Snape ''actually'' being evil.
110	* BewareTheNiceOnes: Dennis Creevey is one of the sweetest, nicest boys you could ask for... until the Death Eaters finally push him too far. "AVADA KEDAVRA YOU SON OF A BITCH!]]"
111	%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Colin and the younger students]] have one of these, though it [[KilledOffForReal doesn't end well]].
112	* BrokenPedestal:
113	** Harry is... confusing, when viewed through Neville's eyes. While Neville and the D.A. had spent the whole year planning, drilling, accepting the likelihood of their wholesale slaughter against the Death Eaters, they've also been relying on each other for friendship, love and support. Harry, on the other hand, has experienced isolation, panic and dread with barely any respite, so when he finally stumbles back into Hogwarts, he has all the disconnect and [=PTSD=] you'd expect. But from the D.A.'s perspective, Harry has none of the spark of revolution or excitement they'd expected. It's strongly implied that Neville's summoning of the entire D.A. and allies from the wizarding world for the final battle is less a function of his gee-whiz enthusiasm (as presented in the official canon) and more a tactic to keep the D.A. from imploding out of disappointment.
114	** Also, a different pedestal breaks in Seamus and Neville's horrified reactions when they find out that Dumbledore's "plan" was a lot more of GambitRoulette than BatmanGambit:
115	--->"Din't you know ol' Dumbledore din't tell them anythin'? They were out there, tryin' not ta get killed, wanderin' around for better part o' a year on a little breadcrumb scavenger hunt, no bleedin' idea o' what they were doin', or what they'd do when they were done."\
116	'There has to be a reason, Seamus.' He fought to keep his voice calm, reasonable, but he could hear the tremble of fury and newly-awakened pain at the edges. 'I'm sure he had a reason.'
117	*** It is of course lost to them, that Dumbledore, genuinely speaking did not have a plan. What he did, was preparing Harry for the actual mission. And that he counted on Harry pulling it off, which in the end happened.
118	* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[EpicFail They failed and not only that, the sword was fake]]
119	* TheCasanova:
120	** Apparently, [[CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass Colin Creevey]] of all people.
121	-->''"I did just fine with the Muggle girls on holidays, thank you very much, because they think I'm cute and mysterious and know I go to some kind of exclusive and super-secret private boarding school.”''
122	%% ** Jack Sloper.
123	* ChildSoldiers: At least half of the members of the Dumbledore's Army die horribly, and a good amount are crippled or killed in the sequel. However, the fic tends to glorify the hardened child soldiers in comparison to Harry, who hasn't embraced the military mindset. What's more, it gets taken to utterly ludicrous levels. Somehow, they manage to form a complete mock-military structure despite being from a culture with ''no'' armed forces, develop a martyrdom mindset that in real life requires indoctrination from toddlerhood, and in general make an absolute mockery out of the subject. And the injuries they suffer are only terrible because the author's forgotten the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' universe has extremely powerful magical healing.
124	* ColdBloodedTorture: The Cruciatus Curse is used as routine punishment, [[spoiler: to the point where the students get ''used to it'']] and that doesn't even begin to compare with what [[spoiler: Doctor Belsen does to Mike Corner (his best friend tries to euthanize him half-way through the torture session)]].
125	* CollateralAngst: One of the many things people take offense to in the fic is its treatment of [[spoiler:Lavender's]] rape. After it's revealed, the victim is only referred to by name perhaps twice in the following scenes. Instead, Neville gathers an (exclusively male) revenge squad, humiliates the attackers (something that in real life would more likely drive them to repeat their crimes, as their egos are now damaged), and calls it paid.
126	* DeathSeeker: Most of the D.A. slips into this. At the beginning of the story they decide that they will all go on a suicide attack as a protest/revenge/hopeless last stand at the end of the year rather than continuing to live under the current regime. Some of them were also [[GallowsHumor talking, even joking, quite detachedly about their upcoming deaths]].
127	* DeconstructionFic:
128	** What would the events of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows'' look like if you think about them in the context of our world? (torture in school, child soldiers, etc.)
129	** Most notably, the same Battle of Hogwarts is portrayed as an actual battle, with lots of {{gorn}}, as opposed to Rowling's lighter portrayal of the house elves, ghosts, Sybill Trelawney, and Neville throwing stuff at the Death Eaters' heads.
130	* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Ernie Macmillan has the stones to ''punch out a Dementor.'' Yeah, he goes down... but he ''tried.'' And he gave his [[spoiler: secret wife, Susan Bones Macmillan]] time to whip out her wand and summon her Patronus.
131	* DisproportionateRetribution:
132	** When [[spoiler:Renny, a young Slytherin]], gets caught with a copy of the Quibbler in his bag, he [[spoiler:gets his arms broken by Crabbe and Goyle for being a "blood traitor." Then his dad pulls him out of the school. Then Voldemort murders him along with his whole family. Renny]]'s story was one of the greatest TearJerker moments in the fic.
133	** The Death Eaters respond to the students rebelling by inviting Hans Belsen (a cross between Mengele and Tomás de Torquemada) to make an example out of a few students.
134	* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale/ {{Yandere}}: Hannah Abbot (Neville's future wife) tries to set him on fire and then throws several potted plants at him (one of which suffocates him to unconsciousness, while she does nothing to stop it). All this because of a bad case of PoorCommunicationKills leading her to believe he was making out with Ginny--even though Hannah and Neville aren't even ''dating''. Either [[ValuesDissonance this is supposed to be justified by the "fact" that]] girls are just crazy like that or [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness a bit of comic SlapStick horribly clashing with the deadly seriousness that violence is portrayed in the rest of the fic]]. It is possible that this is a {{continuity nod}} of sorts to the scene where Hermione sets a flock of conjured birds on Ron, albeit a ridiculously over the top one.
135	* EvilTeacher: Snape and the Carrow siblings, who gleefully torture students (to a greater extent than canon, and in some cases contradicting canon).
136	* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Dennis Creevey]] kills the Death Eater who killed his brother by [[spoiler: jamming his wand into the Death Eater's eye and screaming "AVADA KEDAVRA, YOU SON OF A BITCH!"]] Unfortunately, it's a [[TakingYouWithMe mutual kill]].
137	%% * FakeOutMakeOut: An extremely touching example in the short story ''The Perils of Studying Outdoors''.
138	* {{Flanderisation}}: Snape goes from a morally grey AntiVillain who, it's implied, used his post as headmaster to control the Carrow's sadism, to an out-and-out Death Eater who gleefully tortures children.
139	* FunnySpoon: Luna Lovegood can do magic with a spoon replacing her wand. Which she uses to make a picture made from food permanent, instead of [[SkewedPriorities using it to escape and break her friends out]].
140	%% * GlamourFailure: At the worst possible moment, leading to Neville and Hannah being dragged before a KangarooCourt then sentenced to death by beheading.
141	* HeelFaceTurn: Renny, son of a Death Eater who joined the D.A. after Voldemort tortured his father for a minor failure.
142	%% * HeroicBSOD and HeroicRROD: Neville goes through both of these when [[spoiler: one of the D.A. is killed by the Death Eaters, and Neville's subsequent removal from command of the D.A. in his pursuit to make sure that it never happens again]].
143	%% * HeterosexualLifePartners: Terry Boot and Michael Corner, since there are more fics written about their relationship by both the original author and others it's almost gotten to the point of IfItsYouItsOkay with the two of them.
144	* HiveMind: The female characters, who are capable of communicating on a 'frequency only other girls could understand'. [[MundaneUtility This is mostly used for facilitating the rapid spread of gossip.]]
145	* InMediasRes: In canon, Neville's a bumbling, timid boy with a hidden core of steel that comes out when the shit hits the fan. During his 7th year, the challenges force him to grow up, and the awesome qualities hinted at before come to the forefront. However, DAYD skips over this CharacterDevelopment completely: The fanfic starts with him having already grown up, and he then gains everyone's respect over the course of a single speech in the first chapter. Presumably, Thanfiction just wasn't interested in that part of the story, but it produces rather a disconnect from canon. Luckily, the fic's main story starts immediately after that {{Handwave}}.
146	%% * LaResistance: Dumbledore's Army.
147	* TheLadette: It was hinted at in HP canon, and this fic makes it explicit -- Ginny Weasley:
148	-->”I’m the only girl in a family of seven! I could belch the entire Chudley Cannons fight song by the time I was four, but Katie Bell had to tell me when I needed a bra and show me how to put the effing thing on, so don’t act like I’m supposed to be some sheltered little flower about how boys are put together.”
149	%% * LesCollaborateurs: Sometimes, but not always, Slytherin House. Most of them hate the Carrows.
150	%% * LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: The Carrows.
151	%% * MaleGaze: Just about ALL the time.
152	* MenActWomenAre: The leadership of the DA, and for that matter the viewpoint characters, are exclusively male. When seeking revenge for [[spoiler:Lavender's rape]], Neville completely ignores the girls in the DA and drafts an all-male squad. Ginny and Luna are barely in the story, despite canonically being Neville's co-leaders. Even when female characters ''die'' in the final battle, the focus is exclusively on male reactions to it.
153	* NationalStereotypes: Marks & Spencer is not the stuffy and upper-class department store presented in the fic; in reality M&S is closer to J.C. Penney. (The author might have confused it with Harrod's, which ''is'' that stuffy and upper-class, and more.)
154	* NobleBigot: Various DA members who happen to believe in pureblood supremacy. Rather oddly handled, though - in many cases, their only noble quality is being willing to fight Voldemort, and they still seem to hate all the mudbloods and non-bigots they're fighting with.
155	* OohMeAccentsSlipping: The first fic itself commits a variant. It [[OriginalFlavour makes a credible effort at imitate Rowling's own style,]] but American spellings such as "mom" and "curb" and words such as "sweater" spoil the effect.
156	* PrecisionFStrike:
157	** Dennis: ''"Avada Kedavra, you SON OF A BITCH!"''
158	** Ernie: ''"That’s my wife, you BITCH!"''
159	** Neville: ''I know my BLOODY plants!''
160	%% * PsychicLink: Terry Boot and Michael Corner have one of these. It's expanded on in their short stories, though by the final battle the DA is aware of it.
161	* RapeAsDrama: [[spoiler:Lavender's rape by Crabbe and Goyle]] is primarily used as a KickTheDog moment to further motivate Neville and company. [[spoiler:Lavender]] has very little agency in the RoaringRampageOfRevenge that follows. The reader is left with the feeling that it wasn't as much about the rape victim's feelings, as much as Neville's male honor being sullied. The revenge squad consists only of men, and after their vengeance is over, the rape is barely mentioned at all. Addressed in a later fic, from Lavender's POV - "Underpinnings."
162	* RealPersonCameo: Natalie [=McDonald=], a real girl that Rowling cameo'd in ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire Goblet of Fire]]''. So, basically, she is here as a cameo of a cameo. It's worth noting that she's basically there to die during the final battle... while her namesake died of cancer in real life before ''Goblet'' came out.
163	* {{Sadist}}: The Death Eaters in general come across as this. They love to torture innocent children, dish out incredibly over-the-top punishments for every little infraction, and kill people in complicated and violent ways that seem deliberately designed to prolong their suffering as much as humanly possible (all this despite the fact that quick, bloodless killing curses exist.)
164	* SceneryGorn: Hogwarts at the end. The whole castle is covered in blood and corpses, and Neville makes special mention of the wood post Romilda Vane was murdered on.
165	* ShaggyDogStory: Chapter 18. Hans Belsen, basically an Expy of Josef Mengele, shows up to the school because he wants to torture children. When Neville and Jack Sloper insult him ''later that chapter,'' he immediately leaves the school instead of, you know, torturing them.
166	-->"BAM! Other side of his face goes, and Alecto was so furious, she kicked him out of the class. Said he had lost the privilege of learning from Belsen. So that's when I raised my hand and asked if I could lose the privilege too, and Belsen just gave the whole class this long look, looked back at Alecto, and told her that he had been under the impression the teachers controlled Hogwarts, not the students, and he left." -- Jack Sloper describing the surprisingly quick defeat of Nazi torturers.
167	* SickeninglySweet: When Hannah tells Neville that her Aunt has some sickeningly cute collectible china witch figurines. Apparently, "It's like trying to eat half of Honeydukes in one sitting. You can feel your teeth start to rot the second you cross the front door."
168	* SlutShaming: One of the most uncomfortable moments comes after [[spoiler:Lavender]] is raped. Neville sits her down and tells her that he knows all the rumors about her sexuality are false, even if she is a flirt, because he knows she doesn't sleep around. The end result is that he sounds very, very much like he's saying she would ''deserve'' to be raped if she did sleep around.
169	* TakeThatKiss: Neville [[HoYay kisses Draco]] to humiliate him.
170	%% * TokenEvilTeammate: Malcolm Braddock, Renny's Slytherin friend; his only reason for joining Neville was that he is a student of history and understands that Voldemort can't win in the long run.
171	* TookALevelInBadass: The fic is all about Neville Longbottom, and the DA, levelling up in Badass to the point where they're able to stand up to, and fight, Death Eaters on a nearly-equal-to-equal basis.
172	* TortureTechnician:
173	** The Carrows regularly try new torture methods on rebellious students.
174	** Never mind Professor Hans [[MeaningfulName Belsen]], brought in (if briefly) to demonstrate his research on unruly students. Given that he is plainly based on real Nazi scientists.... * shudder*
175	* TorturePorn: Many of the death scenes come across as this. Instead of using painless and instant killing curses like they did in the original Harry Potter series, the Death Eaters in DAYD tend to use violent curses that prolong their victims' suffering as much as possible.
176	%% * {{Understatement}}: "Nah, [the Carrows] make Umbridge look tame." Specifically, it's a line from the original Literature/HarryPotter books which, since this fic is a BloodierAndGorier version turned up to eleven...
177	* WarIsGlorious: The fic has a strange relationship with this trope and WarIsHell. On the one hand, Thanfiction bangs the drum of how horrible the final battle will be... but on the other hand, most of the DA are quite excited by the prospect of fighting Voldemort. The story plays them up and contrasts them to Harry and company, who try to avoid the war entirely... in the favor of the children about to be slaughtered. All in all, the story's schizophrenic.
178	* WarIsHell: The fic is a prime example, depicting the horrific ordeal the members of the eponymous insurgency go through to keep the darkness at bay as best they could, culminating in a final battle (the Battle of Hogwarts from [[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows the book]], retold from their perspective) in which [[spoiler:almost everyone dies.]] Unfortunately, it fumbles that ball badly, as the vast majority of the DA ''want'' to fight, have embraced the fact most of them will die, and when someone tries to convince them ''not'' to fight, he's portrayed as being in the wrong. The themes clash so badly that the entire story is tainted.
179	* WartimeWedding: Susan Bones and Ernie Macmillan. Professor [=McGonagall=] also told a backstory about herself marrying a wizard who joined the Muggle RAF in WWII and died shortly afterward.
180	[[/folder]]
181
182	[[folder:''Sluagh'']]
183	* AntiHero: [[spoiler:Seamus Finnigan]], whose method to defeat the BigBad in ''Sluagh'' is [[spoiler:by [[PayEvilUntoEvil ritually torturing and murdering his recruits both current and potential]]]].
184	%% * TheAlcoholic: Seamus, due to untreated PTSD.
185	* BilingualBonus / MeaningfulName: The BigBad in Sluagh is The Diabhal Dubh, explained In-Story to mean 'The Black Devil' in Gaelic. What isn't explained is that Dubh can also mean several other things, including 'Hidden'. Given [[ShroudedInMyth his nature]], this is very appropriate.
186	%% * Myth/CelticMythology: It influences ''Sluagh'' '''enormously'''.
187	* EnemyMine: Apparently a Wizard BigBad is exactly what's needed to get the Real IRA and the Unionist militia to work together.
188	* FantasyGunControl: Averted, as Seamus is equally adept with a firearm as with a wand, and the muggle militiamen stand their own against the onslaught of magicians during the battle of Druim Cett. As Seamus noted, waving around a machine pistol in wartorn Belfast attracts far less attention than brandishing a wooden stick that shoots red thunderbolts.
189	* FlashedBadgeHijack: Neville attempted to do this to a Muggle with his ''wizard'' Auror badge. It worked the first time as it was too dark to see the badge properly. The second time the Muggle assumed it was a joke until Neville transfigured a teacup into a gerbil in front of her.
190	* FunetikAksent: The Irish, in a ridiculously exaggerated way.
191	* GenreRoulette: The first half of ''Sluagh'' reads like a hard-boiled detective story, morphs into a war epic, then into eldritch horror around the Battle of Druim Cett, and then turns into high fantasy (complete with mythic landscapes and Gods), all of which clashed quite a bit with Rowling's brand of UrbanFantasy. Also, there are shifts within the shifts and they occur with little to no warning.
192	* GoingNative: Neville, working undercover as an enforcer for the Real IRA, starts to accept their tactics and goals.
193	%% * HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler:With Ron and Hermione as the victims.]]
194	%% * HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:The Diabhal Dubh, who is FAR worse than Voldemort could ever possibly be.]]
195	%% * MindScrew: ''Sluagh''.
196	%% * TheMole: [[spoiler: Kennedy]].
197	* UsefulNotes/NorthernIreland: Large parts of ''Sluagh'' takes place in and around grimy Belfast, where the rabid remnants of the Unionist and Nationalist militias are still fighting a bloody gang war [[AnachronismStew - in 2003, despite the fact that The Troubles basically ended in 1998.]] All things considered, the setting is more reminiscent of the desperately poor 1970s-1980s Ireland at the height of UsefulNotes/TheTroubles than the modern Celtic Tiger Ireland.
198	* OhCrap: After suffering heavy losses breaching the outer defenses at the Battle of Druim Cett, Neville and company realizes that the BigBad is surrounded by a magical army of ''hundreds'' (not to mention a homicidal sentient forest), not the seventy men as previously reported, cue trope.
199	* ResetButton: [[spoiler:Battle of Druim Cett, every good wizard character that died comes back to life due to the intervention of the Celtic Gods (considering Rowling's canonical epilogue is set in 2017 and ''Sluagh'' is set in 2003, there is really not much of a choice for the author)]].
200	* {{Retirony}}: Played with, as [[spoiler:Neville]] is on his last case with the Aurors. Needless to say, He dies [[spoiler: then comes back to life]].
201	%% * SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler:Utterson]], the nicest member of Seamus' group of [[spoiler:vigilante killers]].
202	%% * SequelHook: Epilogue of ''Sluagh''. [[spoiler:It leads directly into the opening chapter of ''A Peccatis.'']]
203	%% * ShellShockedVeteran: Absolutely ''everyone'', as noted in ''Slaugh''; some had it worse than others.
204	* ToUnmasqueTheWorld: [[spoiler:The Masquerade is already seriously cracking in Ireland, where wizards are openly working for the militias. And this is the ultimate goal of Diabhal Dubh, who wants to take over Ireland by building up a united muggle and magical army]].
205	[[/folder]]
206
207	[[folder:''A Peccatis'' (unfinished)]]
208	* BrokenMasquerade: Wizarding England has realized that muggle technology is [[MedievalStasis rapidly catching up]] and that the War killed or exiled too many of the wizards who are needed to maintain the magical infrastructure, and they are going to call a vote on breaking the masquerade, ''True Blood''-style.
209	* DaChief: Harry Potter, as the head of the Auror Office.
210	* DeadFic: Has not been updated since 9th of October 2012, and with the moving on through at least two or three more fandoms and their account deactivated in December of 2017, it doesn't seem likely to.
211	* GenreShift: ''A Peccatis'' keeps switching unpredictably between police procedural and political conspiracy thriller.
212	* GratuitousLatin: ''A Peccatis'', where all the chapter titles are in Latin.
213	* ItsTheOnlyWayToBeSure: The Assurance faction, which has arisen in the decade since the end of the Second Wizarding War. According to Draco, they want to see everyone who was associated with Voldemort -- along with their families -- killed. They feel it's the only way to stamp out the lineage of Dark Wizards for good.
214	* KingIncognito: Justin Finch-Fletchley brings "a friend from the RAF" to the Leaky Cauldron to meet Neville and Hannah. The "friend" turns out to be [[spoiler: Prince William]].
215	%% * NeverOneMurder: The body count is starting to get ridiculous (again).
216	* ReadingYourRights: Aurors are saddled with a wonderfully [[WallOfText verbose]] version of the [[YouDoNotHAveToSayAnything British police caution]] in order to plug in the extra legal loopholes that being magical might present. Legal buffs might care to notice that in the Wizarding version, the right to remain silent (which is front and center in the Caution and Miranda) is the ''second-to-last'' thing mentioned. Also please note that unlike the caution, this one is to be recited upon arrest (or when the suspect wakes up from all the stunning spells), not interrogation. It reads as follows:
217	--> It is my duty that you be made aware of your standing under the Provision of Magical Rights and Liberties. You have been apprehended by officers of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement while engaging in activities reasonably believed to be criminal in nature, and there is intent to hold you in violation of the law. Your wand has been confiscated and may not be returned to you unless you are exonerated of charges by the Wizengamot or equivalent legal due process. Officers of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement may use physical or magical force against you, including such as may cause permanent harm, injury, illness, incapacitation, or death if and only to the degree as is necessary to retain you in custody and to safeguard their own welfare as well as that of others. Any statement or incantation you may say or perform, including via non-verbal means may be used as evidence in a criminal proceeding. You are considered to be innocent until such time as guilt is reasonably proven, however your apprehension in situ is considered temporary grounds upon which you have waived your right to liberty at this time. You have the right to refuse to answer questions, however any false or misleading answers given will result in additional criminal charges. If you believe yourself to be operating under a curse, hex, jinx, or otherwise engaging in your current activities under magical coercion, you may indicate as such at any time. Additional rights and exclusions under wizarding law will be explained to you fully and completely as relevant. Do you understand these rights and exclusions?
218	* SecretDiary: ''A Peccatis'' starts with Neville and Harry receiving, and having to figure out the meaning of, isolated pages from Dumbledore's diary.
219	[[/folder]]

Context FanFic / DumbledoresArmyAndTheYearOfDarkness